内容正文:
英 语
八年级下册 YL
1
2
3
Unit 5 Good manners
4
A
课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) &Assessment &Further
study
5
刷写作
6
写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.礼貌 ____________
2.表现 ________
3.称赞;赞美 ________
4.排队等候 ______________
5.互相 _____________
6.信守诺言 __________________
politeness
behave
praise
wait in line
one another
keep one’s word
刷写作
返回目录
7
二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】In many countries, people are patient enough to wait in line in
banks and shops.(enough to)
→仿写:她足够有礼貌,会对老师说“谢谢”。
___________________________________________________________
She is polite enough to say “thank you” to the teacher.
8.【教材原句】When you are about to leave, say“thank you”.(be about to do
sth)
→仿写:我们正要带一些水果去我们奶奶家。
____________________________________________________________
We are about to bring some fruits to our grandma’s house.
刷写作
返回目录
8
第2阶 经典范文模板
Dear ×××,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is
a country with a long history, so there are many customs there.Let me tell you
some of them.(点明主题,引出下文)
Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the
first time.(见面礼仪) Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited
to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier.(拜访礼仪)
Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it is impolite to point at others with
刷写作
返回目录
9
your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup.(用餐礼仪) I
hope the above is helpful.(分点列举中国的社交礼仪,文章层次清晰)
In a word, that’s part of Chinese social manners.(结尾总结) Please feel
free to ask for more information.(展示友好态度)
Yours,
×××#1.5
刷写作
返回目录
第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025江苏宿迁期末]假如你是阳光中学的杨琪,请你根据表格内容描述一
些不文明行为,并倡议在校内外遵守公共秩序(obey public rules)。
不良行为 到处乱扔垃圾;嘲笑(laugh at)穷人;……(发挥一点)
文明行为 校内 ·图书馆:保持安静;及时(in time)归还图书
·食堂(dining hall):排队等候;不浪费食物
·教室:不追逐他人……
校外 ·马路上:遵守交通规则
·公园里:不要摘花;保持公园干净
·……(发挥一点)
刷写作
返回目录
11
要求:(1)所写内容必须包括表格中的信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文章100词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,条理清楚,字迹工整;
(4)文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My dear friends,
Each of us must obey public rules. Let’s say no to the bad behaviour.
___________
Yang Qi
刷写作
返回目录
12
第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:呼吁大家遵守公共秩序,抵制不良行为,践行校内外文明行为;需要
遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节
写作结构:总—分—总
刷写作
返回目录
13
第二步 列#4
刷写作
返回目录
14
__________________________________
My dear friends,
Each of us must obey public rules. Let’s say no
to the bad behaviour.
Some students drop litter everywhere.They laugh
at the poor and even speak rudely to others. ②
________________________________
①情态动词的正确使
用:文中多次使用
should、shouldn’t、can’t
等,清晰表达“应该
做”“禁止做”等语气;
②并列句增强逻辑:使
用and、or 连接并列成
分,丰富句子内容;
刷写作
返回目录
15
As good middle school students, in our school,
we should ① keep quiet in the library. We should ①
return the books to the library in time. In the dining
hall, we should ① wait in line for our turn and
we shouldn’t ① waste food.In the classroom, we
shouldn’t paint on our desks or run after others. ②
Outside our school, we should ① also obey traffic
rules.If we bump into someone, we should say “sorry”.
③We can’t ① pick flowers in the park. We should
keep parks clean. We should not step on the grass. ③运用If引导的条件
句,补充具体情境下的
行为规范,使内容更
具体。
续表
刷写作
返回目录
16
Finally, I’d like to say, the more efforts we make,
the better public places we will have.
Yang Qi ③运用If引导的条件
句,补充具体情境下的
行为规范,使内容更
具体。
这篇习作运用了“总—分—总”的写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,通过合理使用
连接词和过渡性短语,将“提出观点——列举问题——具体倡议——总结升华”的
逻辑串联得非常清晰;通过As good middle school students、in our school、In
the dining hall、In the classroom、Outside our school 等短语,清晰划分“校内”
和“校外”两个场景,让倡议内容更有条理;结尾用Finally引出总结句,再通过
“the more…, the better…”句式升华主题,使全文结构完整。
续表
刷写作
返回目录
17
第4阶 实战演练
【2025江苏南通期末】“勤俭节约”自古以来一
直是中华民族的价值取向和道德风尚。请你从以下
几个方面谈谈作为一名中学生,你在日常生活中如
何节约、杜绝浪费。
要求:(1)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名、地名等;
(3)词数:100词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
刷写作
返回目录
18
Our country always practises strict economy and combats waste. As middle
school students, we should start with the things around us.
_________
刷写作
返回目录
19
【参考范文】
Our country always practises strict economy and combats waste. As
middle school students, we should start with the things around us.
First of all, it’s a good idea to develop healthy eating habits
and value food. I won’t order too much food unless I can eat up all
the food I have ordered at restaurants. Second, it’s important to save
water because we cannot live without it. I often save water by taking
shorter showers. Third, saving energy matters a lot. When I leave the
room, I always remember to turn off all the lights. Last but not least,
I also pay attention to saving money. I don’t spend money on what I
don’t need.
Everyone can try his best to play a role in creating a better world.
刷写作
返回目录
20
【解析】链接狂K
unless 的详细讲解见狂K重点P29。
刷写作
返回目录
21
$