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选必3 Unit2 Healthy Lifestyle: Reading for Writing 课堂学案(学生版)
一、学习目标(Learning Objectives)
二、情境导入(Lead-in)
Guessing Game:what’s his problem?不良生活习惯
写作情境:假设你是李华,参加健康生活夏令营后决心改变不良习惯,给校刊投稿分享经历。What structure should we follow?
三、范文阅读与结构梳理(check pre-class assignments)
阅读 Wang Lu 与 George Fielding 的信件,完成信息梳理。
文章结构总结:Problem → Decision → Action → Result
4、 写作技巧与句式提炼(Writing Skills)
Task 1: Introduce the problem effectively
Find out the useful expression of introducing problems
原文
写作手法标注
写法提炼:After I attended/experienced ______, I realised ______ which made me feel ______
拓展句式:The problem of doing sth, if left unchecked, could lead to________.
Step2: List more problems and their harms
维度
问题(Problems)
危害(Harms)
生活健康
eat junk food, lack exercise, stay up late, irregular meals
feel tired/weak, sleep poorly, get sick easily, damage eyesight
学习习惯
phone addiction, improper learning methods
feel distracted, fall behind, lose self-control, negative mood
小练笔:选择一个坏习惯,仿写1-2句,描述问题及危害。
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Writing Tip 1(说问题):
Use "After an experience + realise the problem" to introduce personal unhealthy lifestyle problems with specific details.
Task 2. 表决心(Express Decision & Motivation)
Step1:Find out the useful expression of expressing decision and motivation:
写法提炼:______ (触发动力的事物 / 经历) stimulated my motivation, making me make up my mind to ______ (具体改变 )
Task3 描述行动(Describe Actions)
Step1:Check the answers of the action expression in the textbook
原文
写作手法标注
写法提炼:Sometimes..., I ______ (具体动词) .Other times ______ (具体行为 2)
Step2:小组头脑风暴:针对问题找对策
问题
解决办法(Solutions)
eat junk food
lack of exercise
feel stressed
phone addiction
写法提炼:Sometimes..., I ______ (具体动词) .Other times ______ (具体行为 2)
拓展:1.When sb do/ feel sth, sb do sth1 (positive) rather than do sth2 (negative)
2. To get rid of my unhealthy habits, I ______ (具体动词) ______ (具体行为
小练笔:用2-3个话题词块描写一个解决问题的行动(使用上面的句式)
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Writing Tip 3(做行动):
Use specific action verbs and parallel structure making the content concrete.
Task 4: 呈现结果(Express Results)
Step 1: Find the expression of the result
原文
写作手法标注
Step2:词块拓展
维度
英文词块
身体状态
have more energy, sleep soundly, rarely get sick
心态成长
be in control of my own life, feel more confident
学习效果
improve efficiency, better concentration
写法提炼:The results have been fantastic. I feel more ______ (用比较级) than before. I feel like I'm in control of my own life, and I believe I can ______ (表期待) forever.
拓展句式:I no longer do/ feel sth1 and do/ feel sth2 in sth/ doing sth.
小练笔 :选择一到两个维度描述自己的积极变化
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Writing Tip 4(呈现结果):
End the article with better health, life control and hope, showing the good effects
五、时态要点(Tense Tips)
描述过去习惯 / 问题:一般过去时 描述现在状态 / 结果:一般现在时
六、Writing Task(Write a new letter about your own lifestyle)
假设你是李华,参加了健康生活讲座后,决心改掉不良生活习惯并付诸行动。请给某英文报社编辑写一封信分享你的经历,内容包括:1.过去的不健康生活习惯 2.你采取的具体改变措施 3.改变后的效果与个人感受
要求:词数 100 左右,可适当增加细节使行文连贯,使用本课学案的话题词块和 writing tips。
Dear Editor,
After I attended your lecture about healthy lifestyles, I realised I seldom exercised and spent too much time on my mobile phone, which made me feel weak and absent-minded.(Tip 1: After an experience + realise the problem + specific performance)
The lecture’s inspiration stimulated my motivation, making me make up my mind to quit the bad habits and keep a healthy lifestyle.(Tip 2: express motivation and decision)To get rid of my unhealthy habits, I arranged regular exercise every day and limited my screen time. Besides, I kept a balanced diet and developed a good habit of going to bed early.(Tip 3: specific action verbs + parallel structure)
The results have been fantastic. I feel more energetic and sleep soundly at night now. I feel like I'm in control of my own life and I will keep these good habits in the future.(Tip 4: positive state + sense of control + expectation)
Yours,
Li Hua
七、Please evaluate your partner's composition based on this checklist. Score 1-5 for each dimension (5 points per item, total 20 points).
Dimension
Scoring Criteria (5 points each)
Score
Content
(problem+actions+results)
1/2/3/4/5
Skills
Master Tip1-Tip4 + key words
1/2/3/4/5
Coherence
Smooth with transitions
1/2/3/4/5
Word Count
Around 100 words
1/2/3/4/5
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选必3 Unit2 Healthy Lifestyle: Reading for Writing 课堂学案(教师版)
一、学习目标(Learning Objectives)
二、情境导入(Lead-in)
Guessing Game:what’s his problem?不良生活习惯
写作情境:假设你是李华,参加健康生活夏令营后决心改变不良习惯,给校刊投稿分享经历。What structure should we follow?
三、范文阅读与结构梳理(Reading for Structure)
阅读 Wang Lu 与 George Fielding 的信件,完成信息梳理。
文章结构总结:Problem → Decision → Action → Result
4、 写作技巧与句式提炼(Writing Skills)
Task 1: Introduce the problem effectively
原文
写作手法标注
After I attended your summer camp about healthy and lifestyle choices, I realised I hardly ever felt well, either physically or mentally.
用“经历某件事 + 意识到问题”来说问题
写法提炼:After I attended/experienced ______, I realised ______ which made me feel ______
拓展句式:The problem of doing sth, if left unchecked, could lead to________.
Step2:List more problems and their harms
维度
问题(Problems)
危害(Harms)
生活健康
eat junk food, lack exercise, stay up late, irregular meals
feel tired/weak, sleep poorly, get sick easily, damage eyesight
学习习惯
phone addiction,improper learning methods
feel distracted, fall behind, lose self-control, negative mood
小练笔:选择一个坏习惯,仿写1-2句,描述问题及危害。
After I attended your summer camp about healthy lifestyles, I realised I liked eating junk food and lacked exercise, which made me feel tired and weak.
Writing Tip 1(说问题):
Use "After an experience + realise the problem" to introduce personal unhealthy lifestyle problems with specific details.
Task 2. 表决心(Express Decision & Motivation)
Step1:Find out the useful expression of expressing decision and motivation:
原文
写作手法标注
This stimulated my motivation.
表达改变的动力
I made up my mind to change two things in my life: to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly.
表决心
明确具体改变内容
I decided to take control of my life and find other ways to relax.
写法提炼:______ (触发动力的事物 / 经历) stimulated my motivation, making me make up my mind to ______ (具体改变 )
Writing Tip 2(表决定):
Use motivational fixed phrases to link realizing problems and taking action, strengthening the article’s logic.
Task3 描述行动(Describe Actions)
Step1:Check the answers of the action expression in the textbook
原文
写作手法标注
I stopped buying all the sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks that I used to have every day. P20
用具体行动动词
Sometimes I played table tennis or badminton with my cousins. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood.P20
用并列结构分场景描述
写法提炼:Sometimes..., I ______ (具体动词) .Other times ______ (具体行为 2)
Step2:小组头脑风暴:针对问题找对策
问题
解决办法(Solutions)
eat junk food
quit eating, keep a balanced diet, replace with fruits/vegetables
lack of exercise
take daily jogging, join a sports group, take the stairs
feel stressed
talk to others, do breathing exercises
phone addiction
limit screen time, replace with reading, set clear goals
写法提炼:Sometimes..., I ______ (具体动词) .Other times ______ (具体行为 2)
拓展:1.When sb do/ feel sth, sb do sth1 (positive) rather than do sth2 (negative)
2. To get rid of my unhealthy habits, I ______ (具体动词) ______ (具体行为
小练笔:用2-3个话题词块描写一个解决问题的行动(使用上面的句式)
To get rid of my unhealthy habits, I quit eating junk food and keep a balanced diet with more fruits and vegetables.
Writing Tip 3(做行动):
Use specific action verbs and parallel structure making the content concrete.
Task 4: 呈现结果(Express Results)
Step 1: Find the expression of the result
原文
写作手法标注
The results have been fantastic.
总述良好结果
I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind.
使用比较级
I feel like I'm in control of my own life, and I believe I can keep this healthy lifestyle forever.
表达期待
Step2:词块拓展
维度
英文词块
身体状态
have more energy, sleep soundly, rarely get sick
心态成长
be in control of my own life, feel more confident
学习效果
improve efficiency, better concentration
写法提炼:The results have been fantastic. I feel more ______ (用比较级) than before. I feel like I'm in control of my own life, and I believe I can ______ (表期待) forever.
拓展句式:I no longer do/ feel sth1 and do/ feel sth2 in sth/ doing sth.
小练笔 :选择一到两个维度描述自己的积极变化
The results have been fantastic. I feel more energetic and sleep soundly at night now. I feel like I'm in control of my own life and I will stick to this healthy lifestyle forever.
Writing Tip 4(呈现结果):
End the article with better health, life control and hope, showing the good effects
五、时态要点(Tense Tips)
描述过去习惯 / 问题:一般过去时 描述现在状态 / 结果:一般现在时
六、Writing Task(Write a new letter about your own lifestyle)
假设你是李华,参加了健康生活讲座后,决心改掉不良生活习惯并付诸行动。请给某英文报社编辑写一封信分享你的经历,内容包括:1.过去的不健康生活习惯 2.你采取的具体改变措施 3.改变后的效果与个人感受
要求:词数 100 左右,可适当增加细节使行文连贯,使用本课学案的话题词块和 writing tips。
Dear Editor,
After I attended your lecture about healthy lifestyles, I realised I seldom exercised and spent too much time on my mobile phone, which made me feel weak and absent-minded.(Tip 1: After an experience + realise the problem + specific performance)
The lecture’s inspiration stimulated my motivation, making me make up my mind to quit the bad habits and keep a healthy lifestyle.(Tip 2: express motivation and decision)To get rid of my unhealthy habits, I arranged regular exercise every day and limited my screen time. Besides, I kept a balanced diet and developed a good habit of going to bed early.(Tip 3: specific action verbs + parallel structure)
The results have been fantastic. I feel more energetic and sleep soundly at night now. I feel like I'm in control of my own life and I will keep these good habits in the future.(Tip 4: positive state + sense of control + expectation)
Yours,
Li Hua
七、Please evaluate your partner's composition based on this checklist. Score 1-5 for each dimension (5 points per item, total 20 points).
Dimension
Scoring Criteria (5 points each)
Score
Content
(problem+actions+results)
1/2/3/4/5
Skills
Master Tip1-Tip4 + key words
1/2/3/4/5
Coherence
Smooth with transitions
1/2/3/4/5
Word Count
Around 100 words
1/2/3/4/5
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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