内容正文:
Unit5 Here and Now作文讲解与练习
写作话题
本单元以“日常活动”为话题,介绍了世界各地的人们在同一时刻正在做的事情。与之相关的话题作文主要为谈论某个时间、某个地点人们正在做的事情。文体通常为记叙文,时态般为现在进行时,人称一般为第一人称和第三人称,通常先描述正在做什么,最后加一个评价性的结尾。行文时可以从时间、地点、人物正在做的事情等方面进行介绍。
本单元相关话题写作句型有:
(1)What is/are... doing at the moment?······现在在做什么?
(2)...am/is/are working on something important now.·····现在正在做重要的事
(3)...am/is/are having holiday in... ·····正在·····度假
(4)It is...o'clock in the morning in Chongqing/New York/Nairobi...
这是早上·····点钟的重庆/纽约/内罗毕/····
(5)Now it’s...o'clock.Let’s see what everyone is doing!
现在是···点钟。让我们来看看大家都在做什么吧!
(6) They look like they are having fun/a great time.
他们看起来好像玩得很开心
(7)I hope it is all going well!我希望一切都很顺利!
写作佳句
1.现在是晚上九点。
It's _________ _________in the evening
2.朱莉的妈妈正忙着擦地板。
Julie's mother_________ _________ _________ the floor.
3.她正在打电话。
She_________ _________ _________ the phone.
4.朱莉的弟弟呢?
_________ _________ Julie's younger brother?
5.他们度过了一个忙碌但快乐的夜晚。
They have a _________ _________ _________evening.
典例1
在英语课上,老师要求同学们描述照片中人物的活动情况。下面的图片是朱莉(Julie) 一家的生活照,请根据图片内容,用现在进行时描述一下朱莉一家的生活片段(其中第三幅图中的女孩是朱莉)。
要求:70字左右,内容可根据提示适当增添。
Here are some photos of Julie's family._______________________________________
思路导引
1.定人称; 2.定时态;3.定体裁;
4.列提纲
Julie's family
*引入话题 Here are some photos of Julie’s family. It’s...in the evening.
*分述活动 Julie's father is...
Julie's mother is...
Julie is..
Julie's sister is...
Julie's younger brother is...
*总述 They have a busy but happy evening.
根据提纲成文:
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
典例2
假如现在是重庆时间晚上八点,美国纽约时间早上七点,在重庆的交换生珍妮正在给在美国的家人打视频电话,他们在谈论彼此正在做的事情。请根据表格内容,写一篇短文描述一下珍妮和家人在同一时间、不同的地方正在做的事情。
家庭成员
珍妮
爸爸
妈妈
妹妹
祖父母
活动
欣赏着重庆夜景,和郝丽一起吃火锅;给家人打视频电话
看报
浇花
弹钢琴
慢跑
地点
餐馆
客厅
花园
房间
中央公园
思路导引
1.定人称; 2.定时态;3.定体裁;
4.列提纲
珍妮和家人正在做的事情
*开篇点出时间、地点和人物It is 8 o’clock in the evening Chongqing,China
Jenny is talking with her father...
*具体介绍每个人此刻在做的事情Jenny's father is reading a newspaper
Jenny's mother is..
Jenny's sister is... Jenny's grandparents are...
*总结感受They 1ook like they are having fun.
根据提纲成文:
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作佳句】
1.nine o'clock
2.is busy cleaning
3.is talking on
4.What about/How about
5.busy but happy
典例1
Here are some photos of Julie's family.It's nine o'clock in the evening.Julie's father is
reading the newspaper and Julie's mother is busy cleaning the floor. Julie is doing her
homework in her room.What is Julie's sister doing? She is talking on the phone. What
about Julie's younger brother? Oh,he is playing with a toy car.They have a busy but
happy evening.
典例2
It is 8 o'clock in the evening in Chongqing,China. Jenny is eating hot pot with her friend Hao Li in a restaurant in Chongqing right now.And they are also enjoying the beautiful city view at night.But it's 7 o'clock in the morning in New York at the same moment.Jenny is talking with her father about what everyone is doing now on the phone.
Jenny's father is reading a newspaper in the living room.Jenny's mother is watering the flowers in the garden.Jenny's sister is playing the piano in her room. Where are Jenny's grandparents? What are they doing? Oh, they are jogging in Central Park!
They look like they are having fun. Jenny is looking forward to seeing her family soon!
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