十句话搞定读后续写11 课件-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

十句话搞定读后续写11 十句五定法 第二节　(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2026 八省T8联考) On a cold, damp evening in mid-November, a sharp wind cut through the streets, but Jack paid little attention to the chill. As a delivery rider, he had just finished a few smooth orders, his hands warm from the hot milk tea cups he'd been carrying, and his spirits fairly good. Stepping out of a milk tea shop, he found the spot where his second-hand electric bike had been parked now empty. In an instant, his heart sank, and a wave of hopelessness swept over him, turning his calm evening into a nightmare. That bike was far more than just a vehicle; it was his lifeline, the only way for him to earn daily income and cover his living expenses. Panic set in as he remembered the undelivered orders—especially a cup of hot milk tea for Ms. White, a regular customer. His hand trembled as he pressed the voice button, his words laced with sorrow and anxiety as he apologized repeatedly, offering to pay for the undelivered drink. To his great surprise, Ms. White did not respond with anger or complaint, but with gentle kindness. Ms. White told him not to worry and to take his time finding his bike. Her understanding words calmed him but also deepened his sense of responsibility. "She is so kind. I cannot let her down," he thought. For nearly two hours, he searched every nearby street, but there was no sign of his bike. As night grew darker and the wind bit harder, Jack clenched his fists and made a firm decision. He took out his poor savings, bought a bag of fresh apples and a new cup of hot milk tea, then set off on foot to Ms. White's apartment, several kilometers away. The wind bit into his thin jacket, and his old shoes grew heavy with mud, but the thought of keeping his promise and maintaining his integrity（正直） kept him moving forward through the dimly lit urban landscape. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White's doorstep and rang the bell. Deeply moved by Jack's action, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. [前文大意]　11月一个寒冷潮湿的傍晚，外卖骑手杰克送完几单后，发现自己的电动车被盗。这辆车是他唯一的谋生工具，失去它意味着无法继续工作。他顿时陷入恐慌，尤其想到还有一杯要送给老顾客白女士的热奶茶没送到。他颤抖着发语音道歉并主动提出赔偿。没想到白女士非但没有生气，反而温柔地安慰他，让他先别着急，慢慢找车。她的善良让杰克更加坚定了不能辜负她的决心。杰克握紧拳头做出决定：拿出仅有的积蓄，买了一袋新鲜苹果和一杯新奶茶，然后徒步几公里，踩着泥泞、顶着冷风，艰难地向白女士的公寓走去。 [ 简要分析 ]　这篇读后续写延续了高考对“个人成长”与“道德坚守”类话题的关注，主题为“困境中不失诚信，善意终有回响”。故事核心在于外卖骑手Jack在电动车被盗、失去谋生工具的情况下，没有选择逃避或放弃，而是自掏腰包、徒步几公里为理解他的顾客白女士送上奶茶和苹果。续写需要展现两个层次：一是当面送达时双方的情感互动（第一段），二是事件被分享到网络后带来的积极影响或Jack命运的转机（第二段）。提供的两个续写段落开头明确指向了“送达致谢→感人故事传播→收获帮助或希望”这一叙事路径。 读 一、读什么：读材料（一般是记叙文）＋读提示句（读关键词）。 时间不够读首尾段 二、怎么读： 1.找信息——who/where/when/what/why/how 2.思考—— read for characters人物/plot情节/conflict冲突/ emotional change情感变化/theme主题 3.读的过程中圈画关键信息，重要细节内容（用以细节呼应），好的句式（用以仿写） 三、读完之后要明白：文章主人公是谁，文章主要情节，待解决的问题，人物情绪变化与文章主题。 情节阶段 内容描述 开端 外卖员 Jack 电动车被盗，失去谋生工具，心情崩溃 发展 担心未完成订单，向顾客 White 女士道歉，对方十分宽容 转折 Jack 不愿辜负善意，步行数公里送奶茶与苹果赔礼 续写第一段 Jack 抵达门口，说明情况，送上礼物，真诚致歉 续写第二段 White 女士深受感动，分享故事，引发共鸣，温暖结局 1. 读情节 2. 读人物 人物 人物特点 Jack 勤劳朴实、诚信负责、有担当、懂得感恩、坚韧不拔 Ms. White 善良宽容、善解人意、温暖体贴、尊重底层劳动者 3. 读冲突 冲突类型 冲突内容 外在冲突 电动车被盗 → 无法送餐 → 生计受威胁 内在冲突 Jack 的愧疚自责 vs 不想辜负顾客信任；绝望 vs 坚守诚信 4. 读情绪发展 原文：轻松→崩溃→恐慌→愧疚→坚定 续写：疲惫窘迫→温暖感动→善意传递→治愈圆满 5. 读主题 核心主题：诚信与担当最可贵，善意会被温柔回应 延伸主题：底层劳动者的坚守、人与人之间的理解与温暖、 平凡中的善良光芒 十 句 五 定 法 paragraph1 1 衔接para1提示句（接着para1首句往下写） 2 3 4 5 衔接para2提示句（根据para2首句倒推写） paragraph2 6 衔接para2提示句（接着para2首句往下写） 7 8 9 结尾（正能量） 10 升华主题 写 剩余五句 补齐细节 情绪 动作 心理 语言 环境 描写 [续写思路] 1．段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“终于，气喘吁吁的杰克来到白女士家门口，按响了门铃。”可知，第一段可描写____________________________ __________________________________________________________ _ ②由第二段首句内容“被杰克的行为深深打动，白女士决定当晚把这件事分享到网上。”可知，第二段可描写___________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 杰克向白女士道歉并说明事情经过，白女士由惊讶转为感动，安慰并感谢杰克，拒绝接受赔偿。 白女士发帖后引发网友关注，很多人被杰克的诚信正直打动，杰克最终得到社会的温暖回报，并从中获得成长与信念。 2．续写线索：杰克抵达门口——敲门见面——道歉并讲述经过——白女士感动并安慰——拒绝赔偿——发帖分享——帖子引发热议——网友筹款帮助杰克——杰克感到温暖——主题升华：诚信与善良终有回报。 3. 原文伏笔与回扣   原文伏笔 回扣伏笔 bike was his lifeline 突出被盗后的绝望，反衬步行送餐的不易 Ms. White was kind 续写中她继续温柔体谅，不责备、反心疼 Jack kept his promise 步行数公里、自掏腰包买礼物，兑现诚信 cold wind / thin jacket 续写中描写冻得发抖，强化人物品质 第一句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 承接段首句“来到白女士家门口”，杰克递上奶茶和苹果。 基础版：Shivering with cold and tiredness after walking for nearly two hours, Jack handed her the milk tea and the fresh apples. 进阶版：His jacket was soaked with sweat and drizzle, and his mud-caked shoes left faint marks on the doormat. When Ms. White opened the door, he lowered his head and handed her the slightly cooled milk tea and the bag of fresh apples. 十句五定法： 第二句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 杰克讲述事情经过。 基础版：With tears in his eyes, he told her what had happened in a trembling voice. 进阶版：”I’m so sorry I couldn’t deliver it on time. My bike was stolen. But I had to keep my promise.” His voice trembled, yet his eyes held a quiet firmness. 第三句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 杰克反复道歉。 基础版：He apologized again and again for failing to deliver the order on time. 进阶版：He apologized repeatedly, his words humble and sincere , never once making an excuse for himself. 第四句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 白女士同情、感动。 基础版：Seeing Jack’s muddy shoes and frozen face, Ms. White felt great sympathy instead of anger, her eyes glistening. 进阶版：Ms. White stared at the humble gifts , then at his exhausted face, and her own eyes glistening. Something warm and painful rose in her chest --- she had never seen such honesty. 第五句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 白女士轻声询问。 基础版：“You walked all this way?” she whispered, in disbelief. 进阶版：“You walked all this way?” she whispered, her voice cracking with emotion. For a moment, she could not say another word. 第六句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 发帖内容。 基础版：She wrote about Jack’s honesty and strong sense of responsibility, with photos of the milk tea and the bag of apples. 进阶版：She wrote not about a delayed cup of milk tea, but about a young man who walked kilometers in the biting wind, carrying nothing but a promise . 第七句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 帖子的反响。 基础版：The post soon received thousands of likes and warm comments from strangers. 进阶版：Within hours, the post exploded with comments and shares. 第八句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 网友感动并帮助。 基础版： Many people were deeply touched by his spirit of keeping his word despite hardship. 进阶版：Strangers praised Jack’s integrity, and someone even started a fundraiser to help him buy a new bike. 第九句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 杰克看到消息之后的反应。 基础版：Jack read the comments and his eyes were filled with tears. He was moved by the warmth of strangers. 进阶版：When Jack saw the messages, tears welled up in his eyes---not from hardship, but from the warmth of strangers. 第十句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题升华。 基础版：It was Jack’s integrity that warmed everyone’s heart on that cold night, proving that kindness always comes full circle. 进阶版：He had only tried to keep his word, yet he reminded everyone: integrity is never a small thing. It shines brightest in the darkest hours. step1 认真剖析首句，构思段落内容 step2 十句五定法 展开剧情 para1 para2 考虑与上下文的融洽衔接 和续写第二段开头语的呼应和衔接 关注与文章开头的遥相呼应 根据具体语境弘扬感情的真、人性的善或拼搏的美 第1句：接着para1首句(心理/动作链） 第5句：根据para2首句 第6句：接着para2首句(心理/动作链） 第9句：结局 第10句：升华 总结： step1 读原文，梳理信息，3-5分钟 step2 构思、初稿（十句五定法），10-15分钟 step3 补充细节，写剩下五句，润色，定稿，10-15分钟 step4 誊写到答题卡上，5分钟 Practice makes perfect! $