摘要:
**基本信息**
聚焦初中英语书信类应用文写作,通过“文体核心+结构拆解+语言模板”三阶训练体系,系统培养学生规范表达与逻辑构建能力,提升语言能力与思维品质。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|推荐信(体育之星)|1篇高分范文|以“成就事实+品质例证+影响具体化”构建推荐逻辑,强调正式语气与礼貌表达|从文体特征(有理有据)到内容分层(介绍-品质-影响),形成“概念认知-要点拆解-语言输出”链条|
|邀请函(观赛)|1篇高分范文|以“信息精准+团队特质+情感共鸣”设计邀请框架,注重热情语气与信息完整|从文体要求(信息清晰)到内容组织(比赛信息-球队特点-期望),实现“格式规范-内容充实-表达得体”递进|
内容正文:
8下冀教版unit 3作文专练
An Athlete or a Sports Team
题目一:推荐信(申请成为校园体育之星)
题目:
假设你叫李华,学校正在评选“校园体育之星”(Campus Sports Star)。请你给评选委员会写一封推荐信,推荐你最喜欢的运动员(如姚明、苏炳添、谷爱凌或你身边的运动达人)。内容包括:
1. 介绍你推荐的运动员是谁以及他/她的基本成就;
2. 描述他/她的优秀品质(至少2点,如刻苦训练、永不放弃、团队精神等);
3. 说明他/她对你或同学们的影响。
教师思路精讲
一、题目整体分析
本题为推荐信,属于应用文中的书信类。推荐信的核心是:有理有据、真诚可信。学生需要选择一个自己真正了解或敬佩的运动员,从成就、品质、影响三个维度进行推荐。注意题目要求“申请/推荐”类应用文,因此语气要正式、积极,体现出对被推荐人的尊重和对评选委员会的礼貌。
二、写作要点分析
第一段介绍运动员及其成就:需要明确写出运动员的姓名、从事的运动项目、以及1-2个代表成就(如“获得奥运金牌”“打破亚洲纪录”“成为CBA得分王”等)。成就要用具体事实说话,避免空泛地说“他很厉害”。
第二段描述优秀品质:至少写出两个品质,每个品质配上一个小例子或表现。例如:“他每天凌晨四点就开始训练”体现刻苦;“他在落后时从不放弃,最终逆转比赛”体现坚持;“他总是把球传给位置更好的队友”体现团队精神。品质+例子的组合最有说服力。
第三段说明影响:要写出这位运动员对你或同学们的具体影响。例如:“因为他,我加入了篮球队”“每当我学习累的时候,就会想起他的坚持”“同学们学会了互相鼓励,不互相埋怨”。影响要真实、具体,让评委感受到推荐的价值。
三、语言与格式提醒
推荐信格式包括:称呼(Dear Sir or Madam,)、正文、结束语(Yours sincerely)、签名。正文中多用“I strongly recommend...”“He is not only...but also...”“Thanks to him...”等句式增强表达力。
重要句型与词组
· I am writing to recommend... as...
· He/She is one of the greatest athletes I have ever known.
· He/She has won many prizes, such as...
· What I admire most is his/her...
· He/She never gives up, even when facing difficulties.
· He/She always works hard and trains every day.
· Thanks to him/her, I have learned that...
· He/She sets a good example for all of us.
· break the record, team spirit, perseverance, role model, be proud of
高分范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to recommend Yao Ming as the Campus Sports Star. Yao Ming is a famous Chinese basketball player. He played in the NBA for eight years and was chosen for the All-Star team many times. He is also known for his charity work to help children in need.
What I admire most about Yao Ming are his hard work and team spirit. He never gave up, even when he had serious foot injuries. He always trained harder than others. More importantly, he always thought of the team first. He would pass the ball to teammates instead of trying to score by himself.
Thanks to Yao Ming, I have learned that success comes from hard work and putting the team before yourself. Many of my classmates have also started to play basketball and help each other on the court. He is truly a great role model for us all.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目二:邀请函(邀请观看体育比赛)
题目:
假设你是学校篮球队队长李华,你们队进入了全市中学生篮球比赛的决赛。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封邀请函,邀请他来观看比赛。内容包括:
1. 说明比赛的基本信息(时间、地点、对手);
2. 介绍你们球队的特点或优势(至少2点,如团队合作、刻苦训练等);
3. 表达希望他前来助威并给出鼓励的愿望。
教师思路精讲
一、题目整体分析
本题为邀请函,属于应用文中的书信类。邀请函的核心是:热情、真诚、信息清晰。学生需要以球队队长的身份,向外教发出正式邀请。语气要既礼貌又充满热情,让对方感受到被重视和期待。
二、写作要点分析
第一段说明比赛信息:需要写清楚时间(具体日期和时刻)、地点(学校体育馆或某体育中心)、对手(哪个学校的球队)。信息要完整、准确,方便对方安排时间。可以用“I am excited to invite you to...”或“We would be honored if you could come to...”等句式开头。
第二段介绍球队特点:至少写出两个特点或优势,要体现球队的精神面貌。例如:“我们每天放学后都坚持训练两个小时”体现刻苦;“队员们互相鼓励,从不互相埋怨”体现团结;“我们在落后时从不放弃”体现顽强。这些描述能让外教对球队产生好感,更愿意来观看。
第三段表达期望:要真诚地表达希望外教来的愿望,并说明他的到来对球队的意义。例如:“您的鼓励会让我们更有信心”“我们非常需要您的加油声”。同时要礼貌地表示期待回复。可以用“We are looking forward to seeing you there”“Your presence will mean a lot to us”等句式。
三、语言与格式提醒
邀请函格式同书信。语气要热情但不失礼貌。可以用感叹句表达兴奋之情(“We can’t wait to see you there!”)。结尾要再次表达期待,体现诚意。
重要句型与词组
· I am excited to invite you to...
· We would be honored if you could come to...
· The game will be held at... on...
· Our team has been working very hard for this game.
· We always help each other and never give up.
· Your encouragement will mean a lot to us.
· We really need your support and cheers.
· We are looking forward to seeing you there.
· final match, come and cheer for us, with your help, full of confidence
高分范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am excited to invite you to watch our basketball final match. The game will be held at our school gymnasium at 3:00 p.m. this Friday. Our opponent is No.1 Middle School, the strongest team in the city. This is the most important game of the year for us.
Our team has been working very hard for this match. We practice for two hours every day after school, no matter how tired we are. More importantly, we always help each other and never give up, even when we are losing. We trust every teammate and play as one. That is our greatest strength.
Your encouragement will mean a lot to us. We really need your support and cheers. With you there, we will have more confidence to win. We are looking forward to seeing you this Friday. Please come and cheer for us!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua, Team Captain
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