摘要:
**基本信息**
聚焦写作能力分层培养,通过句型转换、仿写、填空到分层写作的渐进设计,强化语言能力从基础到综合应用的进阶,适配新授课写作技能巩固需求。
**分层设计**
|层次|知识覆盖|设计特色|
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|基础铺垫层|单一句型(all of a sudden/so…that…等)、核心短语(as a result/out of breath等)|通过句型转换、仿写、填空强化基础表达,如用too…to…合并句子|
|基础写作层|简单句、基础句型综合运用|以提示词补全短文降低写作门槛,如每空一词完成基础版短文|
|提升写作层|升格句型(过去进行时+when/as soon as等)、复合句|要求完整短文创作,融合多种句型,如用thanks to体现结果与感受|
内容正文:
Unit 5 Nature’s Temper
写作专项课时练习
一、句型转换(句子升格)
按要求改写句子,保持句意不变。
1. Suddenly, the rain started to fall heavily.(用 all of a sudden 改写句子)
2. We were very surprised and couldn’t move.(用 so…that… 改写句子)
3. He acted right away and ran out of the room to call for help.(用 jump into action 仿写句子)
4. I was late and I also felt upset.(用 as a result 改写句子)
5. The wind was very strong. I couldn’t hold my umbrella.(用 too…to… 合并句子)
二、核心句型仿写
根据中文提示,用本单元重点句型完成句子。
开头句仿写
1. 翻译:昨晚,一场强烈的暴风雨袭击了我们的城市。
2. 仿写:我正在散步,这时天开始下起大雨。(was/were doing…when…)
中间句仿写
3. 仿写:就在那一刻,我立刻行动起来,冲向了安全地带。(jump into action right away)
4. 仿写:我们一到达山顶,就上气不接下气地看到洪水淹没了村庄。(as soon as / out of breath)
结尾句仿写
5. 仿写:我们很害怕,但幸运的是,在洪水来临前我们成功逃生了。(make it to safety)
6. 仿写:多亏了老师教的防灾知识,我才能在这次灾难中保护好自己。(thanks to)
三、短语与句型填空
用括号内提示词或固定短语完成句子。
1. ________ (结果), he missed the early bus and was late for school.
2. ________ (突然), a big dog ran towards me, which made me scared.
3. My phone ________ (出故障) because of the heavy rain yesterday.
4. ________ (一……就) I got home, it began to rain heavily.
5. ________ (到……的时候) I arrived at the station, the last train had left.
6. After running for 10 minutes, I was ________ (上气不接下气).
四、写作审题与提纲
写作任务
以 A Terrible Rainstorm 为题,写一篇英语短文,讲述你经历的一场暴风雨。
审题填空
1. 文体:________
2. 人称:________
3. 主要时态:________ 和 ________
写作提纲(补全关键信息)
• 开头:交代背景(天气、时间、正在做的事)
Last Saturday, ________. While I ________, the sky ________.
• 中间:描述暴风雨过程、遇到的麻烦、采取的行动
When ________, it ________. Later, ________. All of a sudden, ________.
• 结尾:描述结果、表达感受
As a result, ________. But luckily, ________. Thanks to ________.
五、分层写作练习
【基础版】(使用简单句、基础句型)
根据提示完成短文,每空一词。
A Terrible Rainstorm
Last Saturday, a heavy rainstorm came to our city. I ______ (be) at home alone.
I ______ (do) my homework ______ (当……时候) the sky turned dark. ______ (突然), it rained heavily. The wind blew hard, and my window ______ (go) wrong. I felt very afraid. ______ (然后), I called my parents and waited for them.
______ (结果), I was scared but safe. It was a terrible day I would never forget.
【提升版】(使用升格句型、复合句)
根据中文提示,用所学句型完成完整短文。
A Terrible Rainstorm
Last Saturday, a heavy rainstorm hit our city, and I experienced a terrible day.
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(参考要点:过去进行时铺垫、all of a sudden、so…that…、too…to…、as soon as、as a result、thanks to 等句型
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