Unit 5 Nature's Temper 作文素材 2025-2026学年人教版八年级英语下册

该初中英语单元学案以“自然的脾气”为主题，围绕自然灾害描述、经历讲述及应急避险方法的写作目标，通过“审题立意-谋篇布局-积句成篇”三阶段递进设计，关联话题背景、例题解析与范文示范，构建从要素认知到篇章表达的完整学习路径。 亮点在于情境化写作任务设计，如“给澳大利亚网友回复邮件”例题，引导学生整合灾害介绍、避险方法与个人经历，培养语言能力（情境表达）和思维品质（逻辑构建）。提供“积句成篇”句式库与范文，助力学生掌握写作策略，提升学习能力，为教师实施单元复习提供系统性教学支持。

Unit 5 Nature's Temper 作文素材 一、单元话题背景 本单元的话题是“自然的脾气”，与此相关的写作一般是描述常见的自然灾害（台风、地震、洪水、暴风雪等）、讲述自然灾害中的经历，或介绍自然灾害来临时的应急避险方法与自救技巧。 写作时，可以先引出自然灾害的突发性与影响，然后描述具体灾害的场景、应对方法，最后表达对自然灾害的认识、面对灾害的态度及学会自救的重要性。 二、经典例题 一阶段审题立意 你的澳大利亚网友Jason对自然灾害很关注，他给你发来邮件，询问中国常见的自然灾害以及灾害来临时的应急避险方法。请你用英语回复一封邮件，向他介绍相关内容，并分享一次你或身边人经历自然灾害的简短经历。 要求：1.邮件必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.不少于100词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Jason, I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked about common natural disasters in China and how to keep safe when they happen. Now I’d like to tell you something about them. ___________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Ming 审题： 1. 要点：介绍中国常见自然灾害、灾害来临时的应急避险方法、分享一次自然灾害经历 2. 人称：介绍方法时用第二人称，讲述经历时用第一人称，描述灾害时用第三人称 3. 时态：介绍灾害特点、避险方法用一般现在时，讲述过往经历用一般过去时 4. 文体：应用文（邮件） 二阶段谋篇布局 一、开篇点题：I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked about common natural disasters in China and how to keep safe when they happen. Now I’d like to tell you something about them. 二、具体介绍自然灾害、避险方法及经历： 1. 中国常见自然灾害：Firstly, common natural disasters in China include...They often happen in...and can bring... 2. 应急避险方法：Secondly, it’s important to know how to keep safe when disasters come. When there is a..., you’d better...You shouldn’t...Besides, remember to...before the disaster starts. 3. 分享经历：Thirdly, I once experienced a...When it happened, I was...Luckily, we...and we all stayed safe. 三、表达感受： I hope...Please feel free to... / Learning how to keep safe in natural disasters is very important. It can help us protect ourselves and our families. 三阶段积句成篇 开头句 1. Natural disasters can happen suddenly and bring great trouble, so it’s necessary to learn how to keep safe when they come. 2. I’m so glad to hear from you and I’m happy to tell you about common natural disasters in China and safety tips. 3. Many kinds of natural disasters may happen in our life, such as typhoons, earthquakes and floods. We should know how to protect ourselves. 4. It’s important to learn about natural disasters and emergency measures. I’d like to share some with you. 中间句 1. Typhoons and floods are common in some parts of China. They can break windows, damage houses and even cause traffic problems. 2. When an earthquake happens, you shouldn’t run out of the building quickly. You’d better hide under a desk or table to keep safe. 3. Before a typhoon comes, we should cover our windows, move things off the floor and store enough food and water. 4. When there is a snowstorm, it’s dangerous to travel outside. You’d better stay at home and keep warm. 5. I once experienced a small typhoon. When it hit, my family and I were staying at home and we closed all the windows tightly. 6. Firstly, pay attention to weather reports to know about natural disasters in advance; secondly, learn some self-rescue skills to protect yourself. 7. When a flood comes, you should move to higher places quickly and don’t walk through deep water. 结尾句 1. Learning self-rescue skills in natural disasters is very important. It can help us stay safe when danger comes. 2. I hope you can learn these safety tips and know how to protect yourself when natural disasters happen. 3. Although natural disasters are terrible, we can keep safe if we take the right measures. Let’s learn more about them together. 4. I’m looking forward to hearing your opinions about natural disasters and sharing more safety tips with you. 名言警句 1. Knowledge can mean the difference between life and death. 知识可能意味着生死之别。 2. It’s better to be prepared than sorry. 有备无患。 3. Quick thinking and calmness can save lives. 敏捷的思维和冷静的态度能拯救生命。 三、范文欣赏 Dear Jason, I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked about common natural disasters in China and how to keep safe when they happen. Now I’d like to tell you something about them. Firstly, common natural disasters in China include typhoons, floods and earthquakes. Typhoons often happen in summer and autumn, and they can break windows and damage houses. Secondly, it’s important to know safety tips. Before a typhoon comes, you’d better cover windows, store food and water and stay inside. When an earthquake starts, hide under a desk and don’t run out. Thirdly, I once experienced a typhoon. When it hit, my family and I were having dinner at home. We closed all windows tightly and didn’t go out. Luckily, we were all safe after the typhoon. I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Ming 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $