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Unit 8 Making a Difference 作文素材 一、单元话题背景 本单元的话题是“志愿服务、创造改变”,与此相关的写作一般是介绍自己的志愿经历、描述身边的志愿故事,或号召他人参与志愿服务、为社会贡献力量。 写作时,可以先引出志愿服务的意义,然后描述具体的志愿工作内容、经历或身边的志愿故事,最后表达自己的感受、收获,或发出参与志愿服务的号召。 二、经典例题 一阶段审题立意 学校正在开展“志愿同行,创造改变”主题征文活动,要求每位同学结合自身经历或身边的故事,写一篇短文,谈谈对志愿服务的理解,分享自己的志愿感受。 要求:1. 短文必须包含志愿服务的内容、经历及个人感受;2. 不少于100词;3. 语句通顺,语法正确,条理清晰,情感真挚。 审题: 1. 要点:介绍志愿服务的内容、具体经历、个人收获或感悟 2. 人称:以第一人称为主,描述他人志愿故事时可用第三人称 3. 时态:介绍志愿工作常态用一般现在时,描述具体经历用现在完成时或一般过去时 4. 文体:说明文(或记叙文) 二阶段谋篇布局 一、开篇点题:I think volunteering is a great way to make a difference. / I have been a volunteer for... and it has brought me a lot. 二、具体介绍志愿相关内容: 1. 志愿选择:Firstly, I became a volunteer at... because I wanted to help others. 2. 工作内容:Secondly, my main tasks are... / Every time I volunteer, I help to... or... 3. 具体经历:Thirdly, once I... / I still remember one day when I... , which made me... 三、表达感受/发出号召: Volunteering teaches me that... / It makes me realize that... / I hope more people can join us to volunteer and make a difference together. 三阶段积句成篇 开头句 1. Volunteering is a meaningful activity that can help others and make our world a better place. 2. I have been a volunteer at an animal shelter for two years, and I really enjoy the feeling of helping others. 3. Have you ever tried volunteering? It not only helps those in need but also brings us happiness. 4. I think everyone can make a difference by doing small volunteer work in daily life. 中间句 1. I became a volunteer at a nursing home because I want to care for the elderly and make them less lonely. 2. My main tasks are to exercise with the elderly, play Chinese chess with them and teach them how to use a mobile phone. 3. When I volunteer at the beach clean-up, I pick up bottles and cans to keep the beach clean and beautiful. 4. As a volunteer at the art museum, I guide visitors and provide information about the paintings. 5. I have been a volunteer for seven years, and I have learned a lot from this valuable experience. 6. Firstly, I clean the cages and feed the animals at the shelter; secondly, I collect donations for them. 7. Volunteering helps me understand the power of teamwork and the value of every life. 结尾句 1. This volunteer experience has taught me a lot, and I will keep doing volunteer work in the future. 2. Even small acts of kindness can make a big difference. Let’s join hands to be volunteers. 3. Volunteering brings me happiness and growth, and I hope more people can take part in it. 4. Being a volunteer makes me feel proud, because I can help others and make our society warmer. 名言警句 1. No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. 善行无论多么微小,都不会被浪费。 2. We can make a difference by helping others. 我们可以通过帮助他人来创造改变。 3. It’s everyone’s duty to care for others and protect our home. 关心他人、守护家园是每个人的责任。 三、范文欣赏 My Volunteer Experience I think volunteering is one of the most meaningful things we can do. It not only helps people in need but also brings us joy and growth. I have been a volunteer at a nursing home with my youth group since last year. My main tasks there are very simple but important. I exercise with the elderly every week to help them stay active. Sometimes I play Chinese chess with them, and I even teach some of them how to use a mobile phone. Many elderly people are lonely, so I often listen to their interesting life stories and talk with them. Every time I see their smiles, I feel very happy. This volunteer experience has taught me a lot. It makes me realize that caring for the elderly is our duty, and small acts of kindness can make a big difference. I hope more people can join us to be volunteers, so that we can bring warmth to more people and make our world a better place. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $