2026届高三英语读后续写专项火车脱轨惊魂导学案

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My best friend, Helen, and I were on our way to Blackburn to catch up with an old university friend who had recently moved there for work. Thrilled to see each other, and basking in the prospect of the party weekend ahead, we chatted nonstop as we made our way by train from York. We placed our bags — full of essentials such as bottles of wine and my new pair of black clogs — above our heads and settled down in a cosy two-seater. About 50 minutes into our journey, I was faintly aware of a bang. Then came another, this time impossible to ignore. A woman screamed as our carriage (车厢) was thrown up into the air in what felt like slow motion. Suddenly, Helen and I were somehow on our feet in the middle of the passage, hugging each other. Head down, eyes tightly shut, I waited for the carriage to roll over and burst into flames, as I’d seen in films. I remember thinking about our families and friends getting the news. After what seemed like ages, I opened my eyes. The carriage was in a mess. Helen and I escaped with injuries and aches from the impact of being thrown forward in the carriage. A fellow passenger sat down heavily on Helen’s case, causing it to burst open. “Don’t look round,” Helen shouted suddenly. But it was too late. I saw a man with his face bleeding. A metal object had crashed through the window behind us. Soon, we learned a runaway digger had rolled down the hill and into the side of the train, causing us to derail (脱轨). Our carriage was stuck with its front end in the air. Seeing the chaos and terrified faces all around, I was shocked and couldn’t help shaking. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then I heard a little girl crying. _____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ When I finally handed the girl over to her mother, I let out a long sigh of relief. ___________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Helen and I took a train to visit an old university friend--- _________________ --- A sudden crash hit the train and the carriage was thrown up--- _________________ --- The train derailed due to a runaway digger--- _________________ --- Passengers got injured and trapped in chaotic, terrifying surroundings 4. 细节问答 Why did the author and Helen take the train? ___________________________________ What caused the train to derail? _________________________________ What was the carriage like after the accident? ________________________________________________ What injuries did passengers suffer? __________________________________________ How did the author feel after the accident? _____________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者与好友乘火车赴约、满心期待周末聚会→______________________________→事故过后车厢一片狼藉，多名乘客受伤→得知失控挖掘机撞击导致火车脱轨，现场混乱不堪，作者惊恐颤抖→（续写）作者听到小女孩哭泣，克服恐惧安抚、救助女孩→（续写）_______________________________________________________ 6．情感线 I: thrilled and expectant→___________→scared and shocked→___________→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 找出原文宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、独立主格：________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 人性成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: 衔接句1——What did the author do after hearing the girl crying? How did she help the girl? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: 衔接句2——How did people react? What insight did the author gain? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：就在这时，我听到一个小女孩在哭泣。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：当我终于把小女孩交到她母亲手中时，我长长地松了一口气。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 （第一段留白作答） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （第二段留白作答） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（经历灾难、恐惧胆怯但内心善良、敢于挺身而出、治愈他人也自我成长）；Helen（作者好友、冷静谨慎）；a little girl（受惊吓、无助脆弱）；passengers（遭遇事故、受伤恐慌的乘客） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 Helen and I took a train to visit an old university friend--- They enjoyed the pleasant journey and expected a wonderful weekend --- A sudden crash hit the train and the carriage was thrown up--- They experienced extreme fear and anticipated worse consequences --- The train derailed due to a runaway digger--- The whole carriage fell into chaos with injured and terrified passengers --- Passengers got injured and trapped in chaotic, terrifying surroundings 4. 细节问答 Why did the author and Helen take the train?：They planned to visit their old university friend and spend a party weekend together. What caused the train to derail?：A digger rolled down the hill and crashed into the side of the train. What was the carriage like after the accident?：It was in total chaos, stuck with its front end in the air, full of terrified passengers. What injuries did passengers suffer?：Some passengers suffered body aches, and one man’s face was badly bleeding. How did the author feel after the accident?：She was extremely shocked, frightened and trembling. 5．情节线 作者与好友乘火车赴约、满心期待周末聚会→火车突发撞击、车厢剧烈颠簸，二人极度恐惧、担忧安危→事故过后车厢狼藉，多名乘客受伤、现场混乱→查明是失控挖掘机撞击导致脱轨，作者深陷恐慌→（续写）作者听见小女孩哭泣，克服内心恐惧，温柔安抚、保护受惊女孩→（续写）成功将女孩交还焦急的母亲，内心释然，体悟灾难面前人性善意的珍贵，完成自我成长 6．情感线 I: thrilled and expectant→panicked and frightened→scared and shocked→sympathetic and determined→relieved and enlightened（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者和好友乘坐的火车意外脱轨，车厢混乱人心惶惶，作者克服灾难带来的恐惧，安抚救助受惊的小女孩，在危难中传递善意，收获独特的成长与感悟。 英文：Caught in an unexpected train derailment, the author overcame great fear, comforted a terrified little girl and helped her reunite with her mother, realizing kindness shines brightest in disasters. 8. 句式 状语从句：As we made our way by train from York, we chatted nonstop. 宾语从句：I remember thinking about our families and friends getting the news. 定语从句：I was on my way to Blackburn to catch up with an old university friend who had recently moved there. 非谓语：A fellow passenger sat down heavily on Helen’s case, causing it to burst open. 独立主格：Head down, eyes tightly shut, I waited for the carriage to roll over. 9. 本文主题 人性成长类：灾难无情，人间有爱；危难之中挺身而出的善意，能够温暖他人，也淬炼自我、成就成长。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: 衔接句1——What did the author do after hearing the girl crying? How did she help the girl? Despite lingering fear, the author approached the weeping girl gently, comforted her softly and looked for her anxious mother everywhere. Paragraph 2: 衔接句2——How did people react? What insight did the author gain? The grateful mother thanked the author repeatedly. The author learned that kindness and bravery could bring warmth and hope even in darkest disasters. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：就在这时，我听到一个小女孩在哭泣。 →①不顾自身恐惧与轻微伤痛，循声找到孤立无助的小女孩→②温柔安抚、轻声劝慰，帮女孩平复情绪→③四处搜寻，寻找失散的女孩母亲； 第二段：当我终于把小女孩交到她母亲手中时，我长长地松了一口气。 →①女孩母亲万分感激，连连道谢→②目睹团聚的温暖画面，内心充满慰藉→③领悟灾难残酷但善意永恒，微小善举可点亮绝境希望。 四.段落续写（高分范文 149词） Then I heard a little girl crying. The fragile crying stood out among people’s anxious sighs and screams. Despite my lingering fear and aching body, I followed the sound and spotted a lonely little girl sitting in the corner, trembling helplessly. I approached her slowly, knelt down and patted her back gently. Softly, I comforted her and wiped away her tears. After calming her down, I began searching for her mother anxiously amid the chaotic crowd. When I finally handed the girl over to her mother, I let out a long sigh of relief. The worried mother hugged her daughter tightly and thanked me repeatedly with tears in her eyes. Witnessing the warm reunion, I felt a surge of warmth welling up inside me. Though the unexpected accident brought chaos and fear, kindness never faded. I realized that even in desperate disasters, every tiny act of kindness could spread warmth and hope to those trapped in darkness. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $