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全国中考英语热点作文赏析
话题一:旅行
现代社会,出门旅游日益流行,作为学生,研学旅行活动(the study trip)成为另类旅游和学习的新形式。请以“My field trip “为题,根据提示写⼀ 篇 80---100 词左右作文。
1. 叙述自己一次研学旅⾏的经历。(包括时间、地点、活动和过程。) 2.你从中获得的认识或感受。(不少于两点)
Last month, our school took us to visit Nanjing. We had a wonderful time there.
There were lots of things to see and to do in Nanjing. We visited the Confucius Temple (夫子庙). We learned a lot about Chinese history and culture there. We tasted some delicious food, too. Besides/Moreover/What’s more(此外), we visited Nanjing University. The students who were working hard there left us a deep impression. We also climbed Zijin Mountain. It was amazing to enjoy the natural beauty on top of the mountain. I felt tired but excited.
We enjoyed ourselves so much that we even didn’t want to return home. I hope I can visit Nanjing again.
In my opinion, the study trip not only opens up a new world to us, but also improves our knowledge. What’s more, it does make us relaxed. In a word, the study trip makes a great difference to us.
★亮点词句:The students who were working hard there left us a deep impression, 其中 who 引导的定语从句修饰先行词 students
leave sb a deep impression给某人留下深刻的印象
读万卷书,不如行万里路。研学活动是课堂的延伸,更是学校教育和校外教育衔接的创新方式,促进了孩子们的全面发展,各学校积极开展了丰富多彩的研学活动。请以“My_____Study Tour”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一次你研学活动的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
My Unforgettable Study Tour
Last month, my classmates and I went on a study tour to the science museum, which was both fun and meaningful.
We saw many amazing things such as space rockets, smart robots, and new inventions. My favorite part was the space room, where we learned about different planets in the sky. We also tried some cool science experiments ourselves.
“Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.” This unforgettable study trip gave me a deep understanding of this saying. Also, this trip made me more interested in science. I understand now that learning isn’t only inside the classroom—it’s also about seeing and trying real things. I really want to join more study tours like this next time!
我难忘的研学之旅
上个月,我和同学们一起参加了一次既有趣又有意义的科学博物馆研学旅行。
我们看到了许多令人惊叹的事物,例如太空火箭,智能机器人和新发明。我最喜欢的部分是太空屋,在那里我们了解了天空中不同的行星。我们还亲自尝试了一些很酷的科学实验。
“读万卷书,行万里路。”这次难忘的研学旅行,让我对这句话有了深刻的理解。这次参观使我对科学更感兴趣了。我现在明白了,学习不仅仅在教室里——它还关乎亲眼所见和亲身实践。我真的很希望下次还能参加更多这样的研学旅行!
★亮点词句: 得分点1:开篇点题,直接引出一次难忘的研学旅行;
得分点2:使用such as进行举例,丰富了细节内容。
得分点3:where引导的定语从句,修饰先行词space room,补充了场景细节,使描述更加具体、生动。
得分点4:分享了个人感受,并升华了研学活动的意义。
话题二:兴趣爱好
健康的兴趣爱好可以使我们感受到生活的色彩、增加生活的乐趣;可以陶冶我们的性情、提高文化素养;它还能给我们带来知识、 友谊和快乐。在生活中,你有什么兴趣爱好?请以“My hobby”为题,结合自身经历写一篇英语短文。
要点:1.你的兴趣爱好是什么? 2. 叙述你自己产生这个爱好的一次经历(包括时间、地点、过程及结果)3. 从中你学到了什么?
My hobby
It's important to develop some hobbies in life. Painting is my hobby.
I still remember there was a time when my mom took me to the art museum. I was deeply interested in the fantastic paintings. I asked my mom if/whether I could learn painting and my mom agreed. From then on, I attended the painting classes. The teachers taught me how to design the whole painting. I became more and more interested in painting. I kept practicing painting in my spare time. Luckily, I even came second in the city painting competition. I do feel proud of myself.
Painting makes my life more colorful and enjoyable. I really enjoy painting.
我的爱好
培养生活中的兴趣爱好至关重要。绘画是我的爱好。
至今仍记得母亲带我去艺术博物馆的时光,那些伟大的画作让我深深着迷。我曾问母亲是否可以学习绘画,母亲欣然同意。从那时起,我便开始参加绘画课程。老师教会了我如何构思整幅画作,我对绘画的兴趣与日俱增。业余时间我坚持练习绘画,幸运的是还在市绘画比赛中获得了亚军。我为自己感到无比自豪。
绘画让我的生活更加丰富多彩,我真心热爱绘画。
★亮点词句:there was a time when…. :曾经…....,when引导的是定语从句 come second 获得第二名
from then on从那时起 attend the classes 听课 do feel 是强调句
我们知道阅读有很多好处。你校读书节活动即将到来,为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语社团将以“My Reading Life”为题向学生征文,请你结合自身情况,根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. What kind(s) of books do you enjoy most? And why? (storybooks, science, history...)
2. a) What problems do you have when reading? (poor time planning, new words...)
b) How do you solve them?
3. Your advice on making reading more enjoyable
要求:1. 短文应包括所有写作要点,条理清楚,行为连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
My Reading Life
Reading always brings me joy and knowledge._____________________________________________________________
范文一
My Reading Life
Reading always brings me joy and knowledge. Among all kinds of books, I like adventure storybooks best. ①They are full of interesting plots and vivid characters, which can take me to different worlds. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
However, I often meet difficult words while reading. To solve this problem, I carry a small notebook. ②When I meet a new word, I write it down and look it up in the dictionary. I also make a sentence with the word. This helps me remember and use the word better. (when引导时间状语从句)
To make reading more enjoyable, first, we should find a quiet place to read, like a library corner. It can help us focus on the story. Second, choose books that we truly love. When we are interested in the topics, reading becomes fun instead of work.
③Let’s follow these steps and enjoy the wonderful world that reading offers. (祈使句Let’s do sth.发出号召)
我的阅读生活
阅读总是能给我带来快乐和知识。各类的书籍中,我最喜欢冒险故事书。它们充满了有趣的情节和生动的人物,能把我带到不同的世界。
然而,我在阅读时经常遇到难词。为了解决这个问题,我会带一个小笔记本。遇到生词时,我把它记下来,然后查字典。我还用这个单词造一个句子。这有助于我更好地记住并运用这个单词。
为了让阅读更愉快,首先,我们应该找一个安静的地方阅读,比如图书馆的角落。这能帮助我们专注于故事。其次,选择我们真正喜欢的书。当我们对书的主题感兴趣时,阅读就变成了一种乐趣,而不是任务。
让我们按照这些步骤,享受阅读带来的奇妙世界吧。
★亮点赏析: ①用两个形容词短语描述了故事书的魅力;which引导的非限制性定语从句展现了阅读带来的沉浸式体验,想象力丰富。
② when引导的时间状语从句,具体描述了解决阅读遇到生词时的做法,体现了良好的学习方法。
③用祈使句Let’s do sth 发出号召,既总结了阅读的价值,又升华主题,增强了感染力。
★积累运用:adventure 冒险 be full of充满 interesting plots有趣的情节 vivid characters生动的角色
write down 写下 look up查阅 focus on集中于 enjoy the wonderful world 享受这个精彩的世界
★佳句仿写:1. 我喜欢读故事书,这能让我在忙碌的一天后感到放松。(用which引导非限制性定语从句)
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2.当我感到累的时候,我会选择读我最喜欢的书来让自己振作起来。(用when引导时间状语从句)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.让我们每天多花点时间阅读,一起发现书籍的乐趣吧! (用Let’s do sth发出号召)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文二
My Reading Life
Reading always brings me joy and knowledge. Among all kinds of books, history books are my favorite, because they tell about the past and great people. When I read them, I feel like I can talk with famous people from history and learn how they lived. (用because引导原因状语从句,扩写喜欢历史书的原因,逻辑清晰)
However, it’s hard for me to remember some names and dates. To deal with this, I write them down in a notebook so that I can review them regularly. I also watch short history videos to deepen my understanding. (so that,以便:引导目的状语从句)
Here are some tips for a more enjoyable reading experience. First, share your favorite books with friends and talk about them. Second, try drawing pictures of the stories you read, which can not only help you remember the stories better but also make reading more interesting.【用not only...but also...并列结构说明了画图这一阅读方法的双重好处(帮助记忆、使阅读更有趣),语义紧凑。】
Therefore, I warmly invite you all to explore the valuable lessons in history books with me.
我的阅读生活
阅读总能给我带来快乐与知识。在各类书籍中,历史书是我的最爱,因为它们讲述过去的故事和伟大人物的事迹。当我阅读时,感觉自己仿佛能与历史上的名人对话,了解他们的生活。
然而,对我来说记住一些人名和日期很难。为解决这个问题,我把它们记在笔记本上,以便定期复习。我也会观看历史短视频来加深理解。
这里有一些让阅读体验更愉悦的小技巧。首先,和朋友分享你最喜欢的书并交流心得。其次,试着为读过的故事画画,这不仅能帮你更好地记住故事,还能让阅读更有趣。
因此,我热忱邀请大家和我一起探索历史书中宝贵的知识。
★亮点赏析: ①用because引导原因状语从句,扩写喜欢历史书的原因,逻辑清晰;
②To deal with...作为过渡,衔接自然;so that引导目的状语从句扩写记笔记想要达成的结果,内容充实;
③用not only...but also...并列结构说明了画图这一阅读方法的双重好处(帮助记忆、使阅读更有趣),语义紧凑。
★积累运用:feel like感觉像...... deal with=solve处理,解决 review regularly定期复习 try doing sth尝试做某事
invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事 explore the valuable lessons探索宝贵的经验
deep adj.深的 deeply adv.深深地 deepen v.加深,(使)变深
★佳句仿写:1. 我喜欢读科学书,因为它们激励我去探索未知的世界。(用because引导原因状语从句)
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2.她制定了一个阅读计划,以便这个月能读完更多的书。(用so that引导目的状语从句)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.我经常和朋友分享书籍,这不仅能增进我们的友谊,还能使我们相互学习。(用not only...but also...表并列)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
话题三:行为习惯
俗话说,习惯决定成败。拥有好的习惯一定会令你受益匪浅。请以“Develop good habits”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点: 1.你有哪个好习惯? 2.你养成这个习惯的经历。(包括时间、人物、过程和结果) 3.从中你有何收获?
Develop good habits
When I was very young, my mother used to read some stories to me before bedtime, which made me interested in reading. When I grew older, I began to read books. Different kinds of books not only open up a whole new world to me, but also help me get a lot of knowledge. A good book is like a teacher who will give me a helping hand whenever I am in trouble.
Now reading has become an important part of my daily life. And it has become one of my good habits.
In my opinion, good habits make a great difference. We should do as much as we can to develop good habits.
★亮点词句:used to do 过去常常做某事 not only…but also 结构
a teacher who will give me a helping hand, who引导定语从句,修饰先行词 a teacher
养成良好的⽣活习惯和学习习惯,对我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数 100 左右的短文
生活方面
1.健康饮食;多吃水果和蔬菜,少吃肉和零食. 2.经常锻炼……. 3.管理好时间…
学习方面
1.课前预习;课后及时复习 2.认真听讲;做笔记 3.按时完成作业;互相帮助
好处
1.帮助我们更好地学习知识。 2.提高技能,使我们学会自我控制。
你的感受和打算
1.…… 2……..
Good living and learning habits are of great importance to us.
In our daily life, we should keep a healthy diet. For example, we should eat more fruit and vegetables instead of meat and snacks. Also, it’s important for us to do more exercise. And we should learn to make good use of our time. In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson and go over what we have learnt in time.In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully and take notes.Besides, we had better finish our homework on time and help each other.
In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills. We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.
I think good habits are really good for our mind and body. It’s time for us to develop good habits.
★亮点词句: be of great importance to = be very important to有很大重要性 make good use of 充分利用
prepare well for 为…做好充足的准备 go over what we have learnt in time及时复习所学内容
had better do sth 最好做…... develop good habits 培养好的习惯
what we have learnt in time, 做went over的宾语,是宾语从句
话题四:志愿者
现在越来越多的喜欢在闲暇之余做志愿者服务社会,请以“Being a volunteer”为题,根据写作要点提示用英语写一篇 100 词左右文章。
写作要点提示:1. 介绍你做志愿者的一次经历(包括时间、过程及结果等) 2. 你从中获得的感受(不少于两点)
Being a volunteer
Volunteering is a good way to spend our free time. It is like a beam of warm sunshine, bringing us joy and a sense of satisfaction. An unforgettable experience for me was helping old people at an a nursing home.
My class visited a nursing home/ an old people’s home(敬老院) and looked after the old people last Sunday. We cleaned their rooms and did some washing. After that, some of us read the newspapers and talked with them, and others sang songs to cheer them up. Before we left, we also gave away many magazines to them so that they could read when they were alone. Helping others made me very happy. When I saw the old people laughing happily, I couldn’t feel better. (我感到再好不过了)
We hope our volunteer work can make a difference to the old people’s life. From now on, I will do as much volunteer work as possible.
★亮点词句: a beam of warm sunshine一束温暖的阳光 joy快乐 a sense of satisfaction一种满足感
do some washing洗衣服 cheer sb up使某人高兴起来, 振作起来 give away捐赠
so that以便,目的是,引导目的状语从句
can’t/couldn’t feel better感到再好不过了(否定+比较级表达最高级含义)
as ... as possible = as … as sb can 尽可能......
★★备注:本篇范文可以和一件小事、难忘的经历等话题通用。
话题五:幸福、开心
幸福是什么?幸福是热气腾腾的早晨,幸福是失意时的鼓励,幸福是奋斗后的喜悦...... 请以“The happiness in my life”为题用英语写一篇短文。
1.叙述一次让你感觉幸福、开心的一件事(包括时间、过程) 2.阐明此事让你感到幸福的原因 3.就如何获得幸福给出自己意见(不少于两点)
范文一
The happiness in my life
Our life is full of happiness.I can feel happy from time to time.
One day, on my way to school, I noticed a little boy crying sadly. I walked towards him and asked what happened. He told me that he lost his way and couldn’t find his parents. I decided to take him to the police station nearby and stayed with him until his parents arrived. They got together happily. I couldn’t feel better when they wore smiles on their faces.
In my opinion, there are always happy things around us. We should do them as often as possible.
Here are suggestions on how to keep happy. On the one hand, we should keep working hard to achieve happiness. On the other hand, helping others in need can also bring us happiness.
★亮点词句: on one’s way to 在去…路上 notice sb doing 注意到某人正在… wear smiles on one’s face 面带微笑
get together 团聚、团圆 keep doing 坚持做… as ... as possible = as … as sb can 尽可能......
范文二
The happiness in my life
Our life is full of happiness. I can feel happy from time to time.
Last term, I was chosen to take part in an English Speech Competition. The moment I heard the news, I felt very nervous, as I was always afraid of speaking in public. I wondered if I could succeed and I wanted to give up. My English teacher Mary noticed that. She had a long talk with me and encouraged me to challenge myself. After that, I kept practicing every day. When I got the first prize in the competition, I felt happy from my deep heart.
My happiness is not only from my teacher's encouragement but also from the success through my hard work. I hope you can experience your own happiness in your life.
★亮点词句:take part in 参加 English Speech Competition英语演讲比赛 challenge myself挑战自我 keep doing sth坚持做某事
from my deep heart发自内心 be afraid of doing sth. 害怕做某事 speak in public在公众场合发言 as表原因 = because
succeed v.成功 success n.成功 successful adj.成功的 successfully adv.成功地 hard work 努力工作/学习
encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 encourage v.→encouragement n.
★★备注:本篇范文可以和帮助、一次难忘的经历等话题通用
话题六:健康
每年的 3.21 日是世界睡眠日(World Sleep Day),2018 年世界睡眠日的主题是“规律作息,健康睡眠(Regular Rest, Healthy Sleep)”.但据调查初
中生睡眠时间普遍低于 8 小时,请就此现象写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法,内容包括:
1. 造成中学生睡眠不足的原因(至少两条) 2. 睡眠不足对中学生造成的影响; 3. 为解决这个问题,请你提出合理化建议(至少两条)
Nowadays many students don’t get enough sleep. Here are some reasons for it.
First, they have to do a lot of homework, which makes them stay up late. Second, because classes start early, students have to get up early to get to school on time. Besides, some students get used to playing mobile phones or computers until midnight. As a result, they feel sleepy and tired in class and that’s why some of them get poor grades in the exams.
Here are some suggestions on how to solve this problem. On the one hand, teachers shouldn’t l give a lot of homework to students so that they can have enough time to sleep. On the other hand, the school should start no earlier than 8:30 am.
★亮点词句:stay up late熬夜 on time准时 get used to doing sth习惯于做某事 as a result因此 feel sleepy感到困倦的
On the one hand...one the other hand:一方面......另一方面......
现在,中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量,但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因:①作业多,没有时间 ②沉迷于电脑、手机游戏 ③害怕运动时受伤
2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响;①肥胖, 容易生病 ②缺乏自信
3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议.(不少于两点)
Many students don’t do enough exercise or never do exercise in their spare time now. There are some reasons for it. First, some students have too much homework to do, so they don’t have enough time for exercise. Second, some students who are crazy about mobile phones or computer games spend their valuable time on them. Last but not least, other students are worried about getting hurt while doing exercise.
Having less exercise influences us in many ways. Some students can get fatter easily. What’s worse, they sometimes fall ill. Finally, some students lose confidence in themselves.
I think students should spend as much time as they can doing exercise every day outside the school. Besides, they should manage their time better.
★亮点词句:spend time on sth 在某事上花费时间 last but not least最后但同样重要的是 be worried about担心 get hurt受伤
while/when doing ...当做某事时 in many ways 在很多方面 what’s worse更糟糕的是 fall ill生病
lose confidence in失去信心 spend time (in) doing sth在做某事上花费时间 manage one’s time管理好时间
体育运动的重要性日益凸显。请以“我运动,我健康,我快乐”为题,写一篇 100 字左右的文章参与投稿。
内容包括:1.介绍你喜欢的运动并说明原因; 2.记述你难忘的⼀次体育运动经历; 3.呼吁同学们积极参加体育运动。
My favorite sports are swimming and playing table tennis, because both of them not only bring me pleasure but also keep me fit.
I have been in love with swimming since 2018. At the beginning, I found it hard to learn to swim because I didn’t know how to breathe when swimming. My coach gave me some useful suggestions and encouraged me to practice more. I kept trying for a month and finally I succeeded.
From this experience, I learn that nothing is impossible for a person with a strong will.
I hope all of us can take an active part in sports and live a healthy and happy life.
★亮点词句:fall in love with→be in love with爱上 fit=healthy健康的 coach教练 breathe v.呼吸 a strong will坚强的意志
take part in参加 take an active part in积极参加
find it + adj+ (for sb)to do sth觉得/发现做某事(对某人来说)是......的
现在越来越多的同学变得肥胖,请根据以下提示写一篇 100 词作文。
原因
1.作业多,经常熬夜 2.不健康的饮食习惯:喜欢吃肉和零食 3.缺少锻炼
后果
1.影响学习与身体健康 2.受到别人嘲笑,没有信心
你的建议和看法
1. ...... 2. ......
Now, more and more students are getting fatter and fatter.
There are some reasons for it. First, there is so much homework for them to do that they have to stay up late. Second, they don’t have a healthy diet. For example, they like to eat meat and snacks instead of vegetables and fruit. Last but not least, some students spend lots of time playing computer games and they do less exercise.
It has a bad influence on us. On the one hand, being fat not only does harm to our studies but also our health. On the other hand, they are often laughed at by others and lose their confidence because they are too fat.
In my opinion, being fat is a serious problem. We should develop a healthy living habit. We should do as much exercise as we can to keep fit.
★亮点词句: so……that… 句型 instead of 代替、而不是 have a bad influence on 对…有坏的影响 spend….doing 结构 not only… but also…不但….而且….
最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示,学生近视率仍维持在高位水平,且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容,写一篇短文。
主要原因
1. 睡眠不足 2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
3. 不正确使用眼睛,如阳光下读书
预防方法
1. 做眼睛保健操,多进行体育活动 2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
3. 多吃对眼睛有好处的食物如胡罗卜、鸡蛋等
你的观点
1…. 2….
参考词汇:近视的 shortsighted 视力 eyesight
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main reasons.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time. What’s worse, many students develop a bad habit of using their eyes, like reading in the sun.
In order to have good eyesight, first, we should do eye exercises every day and try to do more sports in our spare time. Second, we had better develop a good habit of using our eyes. Last but not least, it is necessary to eat more food which is good for our eyes, such as carrots, eggs and so on.
In my opinion, we should realize the importance of protecting our eyes and try our best to take good care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future.
★亮点词句: develop a good/bad habit of...养成好习惯/坏习惯 in the sun在阳光下 do eye exercises做眼睛保健操
It is necessary to do sth固定句型 realize the importance of...意识到......的重要性
see our bright future看见光明的未来
话题七: 分享
分享是一种行为方式,也是一种良好的品质(quality)。人生处处充满分享,懂得分享非常重要。分享快乐,快乐加倍;分担烦恼,烦恼减半。请
根据以下提示,以“My Sharing Experience”为题,写一篇短文。
要点:1.描述一次经历(包括时间、人物、过程和结果)。 2.你的认识。 3.号召大家进行分享
My Sharing Experience
Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people. In the past, I was so shy that I hardly talked to others, so I had so few friends. Whenever I had some worries, I got used to keeping them to myself. As a result, I felt lonely from time to time. One day, I tried sharing my worries with my classmates bravely. To my surprise, he offered me some useful advice. From then on, I wasn’t shy anymore. Now, I always share my worries and secrets with others. I’ve made a lot of friends.
In my opinion, sharing makes a great difference in our daily life. Sharing is both interesting and helpful. We can learn a lot by sharing something with each other.
So everyone, let’s join our hands to share!
★亮点词句: get/be used to doing 习惯于做某事 keep...to oneself保守秘密,指不将信息或想法与他人分享
as a result因此 from time to time时不时,间或 try doing sth尝试做某事 try to do sth尽力做某事
to one’s surprise令某人吃惊的是 not …anymore 不再 share sth with sb将某人与某人分享
make a difference起作用,有影响 join one’s hands to do 齐心协力做某事
祈使句Let’s do sth. 发出号召
话题八:谚语与生活
同学们,初中我们学习了⼀些谚语,请以“My favourite saying”为题,写⼀篇 100 词左右作⽂。
要求:1.介绍⼀下你最喜欢的谚语 2.讲述⼀次这个谚语对你影响的经历 3.你的认识(不少于两点)
My favorite saying is the early bird catches the worm/ actions speak louder than words/no pain, no gain.
In the past, I didn’t do well in English and often failed the exam, but I didn’t lose heart. In order to learn English well, in the morning, I used to get up early in order to spend as much time as I could practicing English. After class, I went over what I learned in class in time. More importantly, whenever I had difficulty with my English, I always asked my teacher for help. Through my hard work, I made great progress in my English at last.
In our daily life, we can’t avoid difficulties. However, as the saying goes, the early bird catches the worm/ actions speak louder than words/no pan, no gain. We should keep working hard instead of giving up easily. I believe we can make progress in this way.
★亮点词句:used to do 过去常常做某事 lose heart 灰心 realize one’s dream 实现某⼈的梦想。 go over 复习
have difficulty with sth 在…⽅面有困难 ask sb for help=turn to sb for help 向…求助
spend as much time as sb can doing 花费尽可能多的时间做…
话题九:小事情,大意义
改编自湖北省高考题:“不积跬步,无以至千里;不积小流,无以成江海。”这句话告诉我们,要做大事,必须从小事做起,只有不断积累,才能取 得最后的成功。请你根据下面的要点和要求,以“Doing Small Things Is Important”为题,用英语写一篇 80--100 词的短文。
内容提示:1. 事情的起因、经过和结果;2. 谈谈这件事对你的影响; 3. 你的认识
There was a time when I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Grade Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well in it. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient enough to explain them to him. Gradually, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved, too. Finally, we became the best friends.
Every time I meet others who are in need, I will try my best to help them because I believe helping others is helping ourselves.
Small things make a great difference. Let’s take action to do small things as often as possible.
★★备注:本篇范文可以和帮助、一次难忘的经历等话题通用
话题十:弘扬中华传统文化
随着中国的发展,越来越多的国家和人民开始关注中国,迷恋上中国文化,喜爱上中国 的传统习俗,请你用英语写一篇文章,向外国友人介绍一个 你喜欢的中国传统节日,以及你丰富多彩的节日生活。
写作提示:1. 简单介绍一下这个中国传统节日; 2. 详细叙述你在这个节日里的一段难忘而又有意义的经历; 3. 简述你对经历的感想。 The Among all the traditional Chinese festivals, the Spring Festival is my favorite.
Last year, before the festival, I did some cleaning in my house. I bought some new clothes. On the Chinese New Year’s Eve, our family got together and had a big reunion dinner. After dinner, we watched the Spring Festival Gala. We set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. I got much lucky money. Besides, I visited my relatives and friends. How happy I was!
In my mind/eyes/opinion, traditional festivals play an important role in our daily life. They’re a symbol of Chinese culture and bring us great fun. We should celebrate them.
★亮点词句:did some+V-ing 做些… get together 团聚、团圆 set off fireworks 燃放烟火 lucky money 压岁钱
the Spring Festival Gala 春晚 play an important role in 发挥作用
a symbol of …的象征 How happy I was!感叹句的运用。
假设 China Daily 网站中的 Culture 版块中有一项“Tell a Chinese traditional story”征文活动。假如你是李华,请你以“My favorite Chinese traditional story”为题写一篇英语文章进行投稿。
提示: 1.描述故事内容。 2.故事带给你的影响和启发。
My favorite Chinese traditional story
Among all the traditional Chinese stories, YuGong moves the mountains is my favorite.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called YuGong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Although others laughed at him, Yu Gong kept moving the mountains day after day, and year after year with his family. Finally, a god was so moved that he helped to take the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up when we face difficulties.
其他热点作文
礼物是家⼈或朋友送给你的⼀份真情厚意,通常代表着祝福、鼓励或奖励。你曾经收到最好的礼物是什么?请以“The best gift I’ve ever got”为
题,根据提示写⼀篇 100 词的英语作⽂。
1.介绍这份礼物及特别之处 2.分享礼物背后的故事(包括时间、经过和结果) 3.你的感悟(不少于两点)
The best gift I’ve ever got is a bike. In the past, I was too lazy to spend enough time on my studies. In order to encourage me to work hard, my father promised to buy me a nice bike that I was looking forward to. From then on, I gave up my bad habit. In my free time, I used to spend as much time as I can on my studies. Finally, I wasn’t lazy any more. I made great progress. I got the bike.
In my opinion, the bike isn’t a common bike. It stands for my hard work. Anyone who is willing to work hard can succeed at
last
★亮点词句: too…to 结构. spend…on 句型 not…anymore 不再 stand for 代表、象征。
a nice bike which I was looking forward to.与 Anyone who is willing to work hard, which和who引导的是定语从句。
人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次……当你克服困难第 一次成功地完成某件事情时, 这份与众不同的 经历一定让你难忘。请以 My first time to…为题, 将题目补充完整, 写一篇短文。
内容包括: 1. 你的第一次经历是什么?(包括时间,过程和结果) 2. 你为什么对这次经历难忘? 3. 你有怎样的感受及收获? My first time to cook
As we all know, everyone has his own unforgettable experiences. I still remember the first time I cooked, which was the most unforgettable experience in my life.
Last summer, my parents were so busy that we couldn’t have dinner on time. Because of my parents’ hard work, I decided to make dinner. It was the first time for me to cook for them. It was really hard for me. I tried many times but failed. Then I searched the Internet for some information on how to make tomato soup and meat. I followed the instructions to make them step by step. An hour later, I got the supper ready. When my parents returned from work, they were surprised and happy. They praised me for what I had done. I felt proud of myself.
I realized I was not a child anymore. I think it's our duty to share some housework. I will never forget this experience!
毕业在即,回顾三年初中生活,一定有难忘的人和事。请以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:1. 描述一件难忘的事; 2.谈谈你的收获与感受。
My Unforgettable Junior High School Life
How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. It is a wonderful journey which is full of many unforgettable memories. I’d like to share one meaningful experience that I will never forget.
Last year, our school held an English speech competition. At first, I didn’t want to take part in it, as I was poor at speaking English. However, my English teacher encouraged me to have a try and told me that I should believe in myself. With her support and encouragement, I began to practice my spoken English by communicating with my classmates in English in my spare time. Also, whenever I met problems, I always asked my teacher for help. With the help of my kind English teacher and classmates, I became more interested in English and made great progress in my English studies. Before I took part in the competition, I was full of confidence. To my surprise, I won the first prize and all the classmates were proud of me.
This experience taught me that no matter what kind of difficulty we met, we should believe in ourselves and never give up. I will always remember this experience and lessons I learned during my junior high school life.
我的难忘初中生活
时光飞逝!我的初中生活即将画上句点。这段充满美好回忆的旅程中,有件意义非凡的经历让我永生难忘。
去年学校举办英语演讲比赛时,我原本因英语水平有限而犹豫是否参赛。但英语老师鼓励我尝试,并告诉我要相信自己。在她的支持与鼓励下,我开始利用课余时间用英语与同学交流练习口语。遇到难题时总会向老师请教,在师生们的帮助下,我对英语的兴趣日益浓厚,学业成绩也突飞猛进。参赛前我信心满满。令我吃惊的是,我竟斩获一等奖,同学们都为我骄傲。
这段经历教会我:无论遭遇何种困难,都要保持信念、永不言弃。初中时代的点点滴滴,都将永远铭刻在我心中。
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