内容正文:
Starter Unit 2 Keep Tidy! 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元的话题是“物品、颜色与保持整洁”,与此相关的写作一般是描述自己的物品、物品的颜色,介绍物品的摆放位置,以及如何整理物品、保持房间或书包的整洁,掌握基础的物品、颜色和方位表达。
2、 经典例题
一阶段审题立意
保持整洁是一种好习惯,能让我们的生活更有序。老师让大家写一篇短文,介绍自己的书包和书包里的物品,说说这些物品的颜色、摆放位置,以及自己如何整理书包、保持书包整洁。
要求:1. 包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于80词,语言简洁,符合初一入门难度;
3. 正确使用本单元所学的物品、颜色和方位词汇。
审题:
1. 要点:介绍书包的颜色和摆放位置、书包里的物品及颜色、整理书包的方法、保持整洁的习惯
2. 人称:以第一人称(我)为主
3. 时态:一般现在时
4. 文体:短文(日常生活场景)
二阶段谋篇布局
一、开篇点题:Keeping tidy is a good habit. I have a nice schoolbag, and I always keep it tidy. Now I’d like to talk about my schoolbag and my things.
二、具体介绍相关内容:
1. 书包介绍:Firstly, my schoolbag is blue. It is always on my chair in my room when I don’t use it.
2. 物品与颜色:Secondly, I have many things in my schoolbag. They are a red cap, a yellow ruler, some black pencils, a white eraser and a brown bottle.
3. 摆放与整理:Thirdly, I put my books in the schoolbag, my pencils and eraser in a box, and my cap on the top of the schoolbag. I tidy my schoolbag every day after school.
三、表达感受:
Keeping my schoolbag tidy is easy. It helps me find my things quickly and keeps my room clean. I will keep this good habit forever.
三阶段积句成篇
开头句
1. Keeping tidy is a good habit, and it makes our life more organized.
2. I have a beautiful schoolbag, and I always keep it tidy with my things in order.
3. We have many things in our daily life, and we should put them in the right place.
4. It’s important to keep our schoolbag and room tidy every day.
中间句
1. My schoolbag is green. It is on my desk when I do my homework.
2. I have a pair of black shoes. They are under my bed.
3. What colour is your cap? It’s orange. It is in my schoolbag.
4. I have some pencils and an eraser. They are in a small box in my schoolbag.
5. I put my books on the desk and my socks under the bed to keep my room tidy.
6. Every evening, I tidy my schoolbag and put all my things in the right place.
7. Firstly, my schoolbag is red; Secondly, I have many things in it, like a ruler and pencils; Thirdly, I tidy it every day to keep it clean.
结尾句
1. Keeping tidy is easy and useful. It helps me find my things quickly.
2. I will keep the habit of keeping tidy and make my life more organized.
3. Putting things in the right place is a good habit, and everyone should have it.
4. I like my tidy schoolbag and room. It makes me feel happy every day.
常用基础词汇(替换名言警句,贴合入门难度)
1. 物品类:schoolbag, cap, ruler, pencil, eraser, bottle, book, shoes, socks, keys
2. 颜色类:red, blue, green, yellow, black, white, brown, orange
3. 方位类:in, on, under, on the top of
4. 常用句型:What colour is it/are they? It’s/They’re...; Where is it/are they? It’s/They’re...
三、范文欣赏
Keeping tidy is a good habit. I have a nice schoolbag, and I always keep it tidy. Now I’d like to talk about my schoolbag and my things.
Firstly, my schoolbag is blue. It is always on my chair in my room when I don’t use it. Secondly, I have many things in my schoolbag. They are a red cap, a yellow ruler, some black pencils, a white eraser and a brown bottle. My cap is on the top of my schoolbag, and my ruler and pencils are in a small box. Thirdly, I tidy my schoolbag every day after school. I put my books in the schoolbag, my eraser with my pencils, and my bottle next to the box. I never put my things everywhere.
Keeping my schoolbag tidy is easy. It helps me find my things quickly and keeps my room clean. I will keep this good habit forever. I also hope everyone can keep their things tidy and have a good life.
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