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Unit 7 When Tomorrow Comes 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元的话题是“未来生活”,与此相关的写作一般是描述对未来世界的预测(如科技、交通、生活、工作等方面),或是讲述自己未来的梦想与规划,也可结合科技发展谈谈如何为未来做准备。
写作时,可以先引出“未来”这一话题,然后具体描述对未来世界的预测或自己的未来梦想,再写写实现梦想或适应未来的方法,最后表达对未来的期待与展望。
2、 经典例题
一阶段审题立意
未来充满无限可能,科技的发展会改变我们的生活。假如你是张明,你的美国网友Tom来信询问你对未来生活的预测,以及你未来的梦想和准备。请你用英语回复一封邮件,分享你的想法。
要求:1. 邮件必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于100词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked about my predictions about the future and my dreams. Now I’d like to share them with you.
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I’m looking forward to the future and will work hard to make my dreams come true. Please feel free to share your ideas about the future too.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
审题:
1. 要点:介绍对未来世界的预测、自己的未来梦想、为未来/梦想做的准备
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般将来时为主,介绍准备时可用一般现在时
4. 文体:应用文(邮件)
二阶段谋篇布局
一、开篇点题:I’m so glad to hear from you...Now I’d like to share my predictions about the future and my dreams with you.
二、具体介绍相关内容:
1. 未来世界预测:Firstly, I think the future world will be quite different. AI and robots will... Besides, the transport system will...
2. 个人未来梦想:Secondly, my dream for the future is to... I want to... and I will...
3. 为未来/梦想做的准备:Thirdly, to prepare for the future and realize my dream, I will... I will keep learning and...
三、表达感受:
I’m looking forward to the wonderful future. I believe as long as I work hard, my dreams will come true.
三阶段积句成篇
开头句
1. The future is full of possibilities, and I have many predictions about it.
2. I’m so glad to hear from you and share my ideas about the future with you.
3. Everyone has dreams for the future, and I also have my own plans.
4. With the development of technology, our life in the future will be very different from now.
中间句
1. I think there will be more robots in our life, and they will do most of the boring housework for us.
2. AI will change our study and work. Students may study at home instead of going to school in the future.
3. There will be fewer traffic accidents because the transport system will become more efficient.
4. My dream is to become an AI expert, so I will study hard at science and computer technology.
5. I think people will live longer because we will have better health care technology.
6. To prepare for the future, we should accept change and keep learning new skills.
7. Firstly, I predict AI will be everywhere in our life; Secondly, I want to be a space pilot in the future; Thirdly, I will work hard to make my dream come true.
结尾句
1. I believe the future will be better and better if we work hard together.
2. Seize the day, and look forward to the future. I will try my best to realize my dreams.
3. It’s interesting to think about the future, and I can’t wait to see what it will be like.
4. Please feel free to share your predictions and dreams about the future with me.
名言警句
1. Seize the day, and look forward to the future. 珍惜当下,展望未来。
2. The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. 未来属于那些相信梦想之美的人。
3. Technology is a tool, and it’s up to us to shape the future. 科技是工具,塑造未来取决于我们自己。
三、范文欣赏
Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked about my predictions about the future and my dreams. Now I’d like to share them with you.
Firstly, I think the future world will be quite different. AI and robots will work everywhere, doing most of the boring housework and helping save lives in emergencies. Besides, the transport system will be more efficient, so there will be fewer traffic accidents. Secondly, my dream for the future is to become an AI expert. I want to study computer technology in a good university and develop useful AI products to make people’s life easier. Thirdly, to prepare for the future and realize my dream, I will study hard at math and computer science every day. I will also keep learning new skills and accept new changes.
I’m looking forward to the future and will work hard to make my dreams come true. Please feel free to share your ideas about the future too.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
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