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Unit 2 Home Sweet Home 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元的话题是“温馨的家”,与此相关的写作一般是描述家庭生活、自己能为家庭做的事、家庭互助,或是表达对家的理解与情感。
写作时,可以先谈谈家带给自己的感受,然后具体描述自己能为家庭做的事(如家务、装饰房间等),再写写家人间的互助场景,最后表达对“家”的理解和热爱。
2、 经典例题
一阶段审题立意
家是充满爱与温暖的地方,每个人都能为让家更美好做一些事。假如你是李华,你的英国网友Lucy来信询问你平时在家会做些什么来让家更舒适,以及家人之间如何互相帮助。请你用英语回复一封邮件,分享你的做法和感受。
要求:1. 邮件必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于100词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about what I do for my home and how my family helps each other. Now I’d like to tell you something about it.
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Home is the warmest place in the world. I hope you can share your story about your home too.
Yours,
Li Hua
审题:
1. 要点:介绍自己为家庭做的事、家人间的互助场景、对家的感受
2. 人称:以第一人称为主,介绍家人时用第三人称
3. 时态:一般现在时
4. 文体:应用文(邮件)
二阶段谋篇布局
一、开篇点题:I’m glad to hear from you...Now I’d like to tell you something about what I do for my home and how my family helps each other.
二、具体介绍相关内容:
1. 自己做的家务:Firstly, I often do some chores at home to keep it clean and tidy, such as...
2. 为家庭做的其他事:Besides doing chores, I also help decorate our home. Sometimes I...
3. 家人间的互助:My family members always help each other. When my parents are busy, I...; When I need help, my parents and siblings...
三、表达感受:
Doing things for my home makes me happy. I think home is a place full of love, and everyone should try our best to make it better.
三阶段积句成篇
开头句
1. Home is the warmest place in the world, and I want to do my best to make it better.
2. I’m glad to hear from you and share my story about my home with you.
3. Everyone can do something for their home, no matter how small it is.
4. It’s meaningful to help my family and make our home more comfortable.
中间句
1. I often do chores at home, such as sweeping the floor, doing the dishes and folding the clothes.
2. Could you please help me clean the bathroom? It’s a little dirty.(礼貌请求)
3. I can help my parents cook meals, take out the rubbish and hang up the photos on the wall.
4. When my parents are busy with work, I usually tidy up my room and help them mop the floor.
5. My sister often helps me fold my clothes, and I help her hang up her photos.
6. Sometimes we decorate our home together, like planting flowers on the balcony and making paper-cuts.
7. Firstly, I do daily chores to keep our home clean; Secondly, I help my family with their needs; Thirdly, we decorate our home together to make it more beautiful.
结尾句
1. Doing things for my home makes me feel happy and proud.
2. East or west, home is best. I love my home deeply.
3. I hope everyone can cherish their home and do something for it.
4. Please feel free to share your story about your home with me.
名言警句
1. East or west, home is best. 金窝银窝,不如自己的狗窝。
2. Home is where the heart is. 心之所向,便是家园。
3. A happy home is the best gift for everyone. 幸福的家是给每个人最好的礼物。
三、范文欣赏
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about what I do for my home and how my family helps each other. Now I’d like to tell you something about it.
Firstly, I often do some chores at home to keep it clean and tidy, such as sweeping the floor, doing the dishes and folding the clothes after dinner. Secondly, I help decorate our home sometimes. I often help my dad hang up the photos on the wall and plant flowers on the balcony with my mum. My family members always help each other. When my parents are busy with work, I tidy up my room and take out the rubbish by myself. When I need help to decorate my bedroom, my sister helps me make paper-cuts and bring a pair of scissors.
Doing things for my home makes me happy. I think home is a place full of love, and everyone should try our best to make it better. Home is the warmest place in the world. I hope you can share your story about your home too.
Yours,
Li Hua
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