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读后续写之50个场景描写
【场景1】表示"感到...情绪与情感"
a flush/flash/thrill/burst/wave/ripple/current/pang/dose/surge/flicker(闪现)/beacon(本意:指明灯)/rush of +情感名词+flooded over/swept over/washed over/crept over悄悄爬上/seized/overwhelmed/enveloped/shoot through/run through/crowded in on/took hold of/bubble up inside sb.
=sb felt a feeling/sense of+情感名词+welling up in one`s heart/within sb
=sb was seized/consumed/overwhelmed/overcome/gripped/overflowing with+情感名词
=sb was engulfed/immersed in+情感名词
=sb gave way to/brimmed over with+情感名词
=One`s heart swelled with+情感名词
=A look of+情感名词+passed over/spread across/flashed one`s face
=One`s face showed an expression of+情感名词
=One`s face flushed from+消极词汇;One`s face flushed with+积极词汇
=One`s voice was thick with+情感名词(regret、disappointment、anxiety、nervousness等)
=There was a suggestion/shade of +表情描写词+ on her face.
某人脸带...表情。
=I was floating in an ocean of+情感名词, and 情感名词+is too mild a word to express one`s feeling. 我漂浮在......的海洋里。......无法表达我现在的心情。
sb yield to+情感名词=be overcome/overwhelmed with+情感名词 沉浸在....情感中。
He yielded to joy. = He let himself be carried away by joy.
常见情感名词:
joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/
disappointment/guilt愧疚/shame羞愧/unease不安/jealousy嫉妒/astonishment...
情感的交织变化表达法:
句型1:情感1 melted away,giving away to 情感2.
The misunderstanding and jealousy melted away/faded away/vanished into thin air, giving way to affection and warmth.嫉妒和误解消失得无影无踪,变成了爱和温暖。
句型2:Gradually,gone was 情感1, and 情感2 found its way back.
Gradually, gone forever was the sense of insecurity and confidence found its way back.
渐渐地,不安的感觉消失了,我恢复了自信。
句型3:情感1 disappeared/vanished/faded away, replaced by+a sense of 情感2.
1.Fear disappeared,replaced by regret.
2.The previous uneasiness that had clouded her mind had vanished, replaced by a sense of contentment.之前困扰她心头的不安已经消失不见, 取而代之的是一种满足感。
句型4:情感1 haunting sb was eventually blown away,and 情感2 laid dormant in one`s heart.
The heavy clouds of disappointment haunting me were eventually blown away, and excitement laid dormant(蛰伏的;休眠的) in my heart.笼罩在我身上的阴云最终消散,兴奋在心头暗涌。
句型5:情感1,thick/heavy with 情感2,gave way to/was shattered by /was swept away by/was overshadowed by/was replacedd by a thunderous standing ovation.
a.The deafening silence,thick with nervousness, gave way to/was shattered by a thunderous standing ovation from the audience as the Badgers took the lead by two points in the final, heart-stopping seconds.紧张又死寂的气氛,突然被一阵雷鸣般的起立鼓掌声所取代,因为獾队在最后那令人心跳骤停的几秒钟内以两分优势领先。
b.An agonizing(令人焦虑的) silence, heavy with nervousness, hung in the air. Then, a thunderous standing ovation(起立鼓掌) erupted as the Badgers seized a two-point lead in the last, make-or-break seconds.
句型6:Her mother turned, her eyes widening in disbelief before welling up with tears of joy. (2026届广州市高三年级调研测试续写范文)
Seeing Amy at the door, her parents froze for a second in disbelief, then their faces lit up with joy.
以下都是无灵主语:
①紧张的氛围笼罩着整个房间。(grip)→Nervousness gripped the whole room.
②他突然感到不寒而栗。(sweep)→A chill of horror suddenly swept over him.
③想到她一个人面对这个棘手的问题,她觉得万念俱灰。
→Despair seized her at the thought of her facing the tricky issue alone.
④我渐渐开始担心起来。(creep)→A slight of anxiety crept over me.
⑤对新一轮疫情的担忧笼罩着整个城市。(overshadow)
→Fear of another pandemic wave overshadowed/clouded/enveloped/haunted the whole city.
⑥妈妈简直不敢相信自己的耳朵,感激的泪水在眼眶里打转。
→Mother couldn't believe her ears, tears of gratitude welling up/gathering/swirling in her eyes.
⑦我尴尬不已。→Embarrassment enveloped me totally.
⑧她失去勇气。→Her courage deserted her.
⑨他焦虑万分,肝肠寸断。→Anxiety tore him into pieces.
⑩一股暖流在她内心升腾.→A warm feeling spread through her heart.
=A rush of affection rose in her heart
11.我们深感恐惧.→Fear held us entirely in its power.(这个句型一般用于负面情绪)
12.他脸上的表情是既担心又兴奋。→A mix of worry and excitement was etched on his face.
Her heart raced with a mix of worry and excitement.
A wave of nostalgia had a grip on me ,when I pass my hometown.
书面表达造句练习:无灵主语
1.这场胜利让看台上的观众兴奋不已。(set...afire)
The victory set the crowd in the stands afire with excitement.
2.我兴奋的说不出话来。(deprive...of...)
Excitement deprived me of all power of speech.(佳句)
比较:Excitement was too mild a word to describe my feeling.
“兴奋”这个词汇不足以表达我内心的感受。
A surge of excitement bubbled up inside me.
3.他一看到熟悉的面庞,便热泪盈眶。(well up)
When he saw the familiar face, tears welled up in his eyes.
4.厚厚的积雪笼罩着整个大地。(blanket)
The thick snow blanketed the field.
5.一想到他的母亲便使他吃不下饭。(appetite)
The thought of his mother led to his loss of appetite.
6.雨使得游客无法欣赏到满月。(prevent)
The rain prevented tourists from enjoying the full moon.
7.我给她礼物时,她的脸上焕发出了光彩。(light up)
Her face lit up/brightened when I gave her the present.
8.突然,一个主意一闪而过。(flash)
Suddenly, an idea struck me in a flash.
9.他耗尽了热情,显得虚弱不堪,当塔走下台阶时,步伐踉跄了。(cause)
The weakness of exhausted passion caused her to totter as she descended the steps.
10.当主持人开始宣读获奖名单时,我感到一阵焦虑,心脏怦怦直跳。(seize)
When the host started to read out the winning list, a wave of anxiety seized me,my heart racing.
11.直到那时,我才意识到,正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。(conquer)
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
12.他走上台时突然失去了自信。(escape)→常用confidence/ambition/strength等做主语
His confidence suddenly escaped/deserted him when he stepped onto the stage.
比较:Her name slipped his mind.
13.这个镇引以为荣的是有个美丽的湖。(boast)
The town boasts a beautiful lake.
14.他突然感到一阵如释重负。(flood)
A great sense of relief flooded over him.
15.嫉妒使他发狂。(drive)
Jealousy drives/drove him crazy.
16. 我看着我的父母,一种诚挚的感激之情在我心中油然而生。(wake)
A sincere gratitude woke within me as I gazed upon my mother and father.
17.看到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧。 (fill)
The sight of the scene filled me with fear.
18.震惊使我说不出话来。(rob...of)
The astonishment robbed me of the power to say anything.
19.恐惧慢慢地蔓延在她身上。(creep)
Fear slowly crept up on her/crept over her.
20.Yet, from time to time, a faint guilt brushed her heart. (2026届广州市高三年级调研测试)
21.Shame washed over Amy. She opened her mouth, but no words came out. (同上)
经典例句赏析:
1.Susan flushed deeply and looked away.脸涨得通红,目光看向别处
2.He flushed angrily.=He flushed with anger 气得脸红了。
3.She felt a sudden flush of anger.她突然感到一阵愤怒。
4.I was overcome with an urge to cry.我控制不住想哭一场。
5.Harriet was overwhelmed with a feeling of homesickness.心中充满思乡之情,不能自已。
6.She got into a panic when she couldn`t find the ticket.
7.An atmosphere of excitement rose in the school→John`s hopes rose.
8.His confidence was badly shaken.他的信心备受打击。
9.Anger welled up within him.
10.Ellen`s jaw dropped.(表惊讶震惊)
11. A thrill of joy filled her heart.
→Joy poured into her heart, causing it to ripple like spring water.
喜悦涌进了她的心中,心仿佛荡漾在春水里。
12. A ripple of excitement ran through them.
13.Gratitude and admiration rushed in my heart.我心里奔腾着感激和钦佩之情。
14.Her rage swept over/through her like a tidal wave. 愤怒像潮水般席卷了她。
15. A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。
16.She was seized by a sudden pang of conscience/unease.
她突然感到一阵内疚(a pang of+负面词汇)
17.A pang of conscience sent a light wash of pink into her cheeks.
一阵良心上的愧疚感让她的脸颊泛起了淡淡的粉红色。
18.The weeks leading up to the race were filled with hard practices and a strict diet.
比赛前的几周充满了艰苦的训练和严格的饮食控制。(2024年杭州一模读后续写原文)
19.She had/projected an air(神态) of calm self-confidence about her.
她浑身散发着沉稳自信的气息。(calm修饰self-confidence;calm后加and也是可以的)
注意:an air of...通常用来描述一种整体的氛围或气质,而不是具体的面部表情。
20. A spark of interest flowered into a lifelong obsession.一丝兴趣最终绽放为毕生的痴迷。
比较:What started as mere curiosity flowered into a consuming passion.(2023年潍坊二模七选五)
最初的好奇绽放成了一种难以抗拒的热爱。
21.She saw a flicker of doubt in his eyes.她看见一丝怀疑在他的眼中一闪而过。
22.As part of the celebrations a chain of beacons was lit across the school.
23.She was a beacon of hope in troubled times.在动荡的年代,她是人们的希望之灯。
24.You were and always will be a beacon of peace and hope.
25.Hearing what Dad said, Alice was taken hold of by a surge of disappointment mixed with sadness. (佛山二模)
26.A beam of guiding light during my darkest moments, illuminating the path ahead, serves as a reminder that even in the depths of despair, there is always a way forward, a glimmer of possibility that can lead to brighter days.
27.A dose of laughter can work wonders in helping to relieve stress and anxiety.
28.When faced with a challenging situation,a dose of courage and determination can help you overcome any obstacle.
29.A flicker of a smile crossed her face.
30.A sudden warm gust of wind stirred me.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之激动与兴奋
On the journey to the lake, a wide excitement took hold of Mom. Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, her eyes twinkling with excitement. When we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and excitedly urged us to put up the tent. Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and then came a scream of excitement. Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom could hardly contain her excitement. Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled. Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down with excitement.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之感激与感动
Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a passerby pushed him to safety. With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, Peter said thankfully,
“You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.” It was very moving to see how much strangers could care for each other. He smiled with gratitude as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy. Touched deeply, the crowd clapped violently. Later, knowing what had happened, his mother shed tears of joy and gratitude.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之愤怒1
Tom's recent behaviour made Mr Smith burst into anger. Finding his homework was unfinished again,Mr Smith let out a cry of anger, with his eyes shining with annoyance. Mr Smith,whose patience had worn thin, called Tom's father. Learning his son had been so badlybehaved,Tom's father felt so angry that he turned around and glared at Tom, “You'd better explain what's going on!”However, Tom hung his head and said nothing, which made him frown. He pulled a long face in anger. Eventually, unable to contain his anger, he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之愤怒1
他的脸涨得通红,双手紧紧攥成拳头,关节发白。耳朵里嗡嗡作响,仿佛周围的声音都被堵住了,只剩下他内心翻腾的怒火。
His face flushed, and his fists clenched so tightly that his knuckles blanched. A faint ringing sound filled his ears, muting all other sounds around him, leaving only the rage boiling deep within.
分析:通过视觉(脸涨得通红)、触觉(拳头攥紧)、听觉(耳朵嗡嗡作响)等感官描写,情感逐步升级,读者可以更深刻地感受到人物的愤怒,不再是简单的“他很生气”。
clutch v.抓住
blanch /blæntʃ/ (因害怕、紧张等)变白,脸色苍白
读后续写微技能--心理描写之开心
She stood by the window, joyfully and patiently watching. Golden sunlight danced in her long hairand the children's laughter floated in the air. She stared at the end of the road, hoping her close friend would come earlier. It seemed as if she had been standing there for a century. Suddenly a wave of happiness and excitement seized/took hold of/swept over/came over her when she caught sight of a familiar figure. Her heart leaped with joy, and a shining smile lit up her face. She ran to her friend and threw herself into her friend's arms. Tears of joy/happiness /excitement welled up in their eyesas they hugged tightly together.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之悲伤2
泪水模糊了她的视线,手指轻轻捏着袖口,指尖冰冷。房间里静得只有钟表的滴答声,她的呼吸短促,仿佛每一口气都带着沉重的压抑。
Tears blurred her vision, her fingers lightly gripping the edge of her sleeve, cold and trembling. The room was so quiet that only the ticking of the clock could be heard. Her breaths were short and shallow, as if each breath carried the weight of her unspoken sorrow.
分析:在这个例子中,通过视觉(泪水模糊了视线)、触觉(指尖冰冷)、听觉(钟表的滴答声)等感官描写,悲伤的情感被具象化,读者能感受到人物的情感深度,而不只是看到“悲伤”这个词汇。
读后续写微技能--心理描写之惊恐
I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly at the sight of the polar bear. A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. Extremely frightened, I felt my legs were trembling and my palms were sweating. Beside me was my wife, who was standing still, frozen with fear. Looking at the polar bear's bloody mouth, she was nearly dead with fright. Fear flooded over her, making her shaking all over. Her throat tightened and her knees felt weak.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之紧张1
Upon entering the grand hall, she saw a vast audience waiting for the performance. A wave of nervousness washed over her. As she stepped forward, her face turned pale and her legs trembled. She tried to conceal her anxiety, but her heart pounded—thump, thump, thump—each painful beat making her feel faint. At last she reached the front. Drawing a deep breath, she tried to steady herself, her mind suddenly blank. Instinctively(本能地), she reached for her partner’s hand, only to find her own fingers ice-cold, sweaty, and still shaking.
The moment I stepped onto the stage, my mind went utterly blank. Beads of sweat broke out on my forehead, and my knees trembled uncontrollably. Then my anxious gaze fell on Mareya, and as if by magic my confidence returned. I drew a deep breath, steadied myself, and began my speech.
“I’d like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude to my best friend, Mareya…” The words flowed effortlessly—not merely from my lips, but from the depths of my heart.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之紧张2
读后续写微技能--心理描写之尴尬与羞愧
When Jenny rolled, she fell heavily on the blanket. Kids laughed in surprise at the noise. Standing uncomfortably and hopelessly and feeling as if the whole world was laughing at her, Jenny was so ashamed that the color flooded her cheeks. She must be really stupid to fall down in the game! Disappointment and embarrassment written in her burning face, she felt tears began to well up in her eyes. In bitter disappointment and desperation, she ran swiftly to her room and locked herself in. Embarrassment and the feeling of failure flooding to her, she threw herself into the bed, weeping wildly.
Their laughter fading away, I stood rooted to the spot in embarrassment, tears welling up in my eyes.他们的笑声渐渐消失了,我尴尬地站在原地,眼泪涌了出来。
读后续写微技能--心理描写之惊讶
John had always told him that outside the window there was an amazing park. Mike struggled to walk to the window. Surprisingly, it faced a blank wall. Mike rubbed his eyes hard,and stared. His mouth dropped/hung open in surprise/amazement. He froze there for a while, wideeyed, as if rooted to the spot. He was speechless with shock when he thought of the beautiful scene John had described to him every day. Confused and astonished, he gaped at the wall,“Why is it a wall?” he murmured. Shaking his head in disbelief, he still couldn't believe his eyes.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之宽慰与温暖
Alice felt relieved to see a car approaching. When the driver with a smile offered a ride to her, she gasped with relief. Alice finally got in the car, and a mixture of warmth and relief flooded over her. Reaching the tall building where her office was, Alice breathed a sigh of relief. Tears of appreciation welled up in her eyes as she thanked the stranger for his help, but he just smiled warmly. She felt warm in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之内疚与自责
Looking at Anne's face wet with tears, I began to feel regretful and guilty. Suddenly, Anne let out a cry of regret,“I'm so silly.” Then she dashed out before I could say a word, leaving me dumb with deep regret. I froze there, with regretful tears in my eyes. If only I had not quarreled with Anne! Finally, with guilt and regret flowing in my mind, I rushed out to apologize to Anne. I, my voice thick with regret, said sincerely, “I`m so sorry for being unkind to you."
读后续写微技能--心理描写之焦虑与担忧
Lost in the mountain, they had nothing to do but wait for rescue anxiously. As the evening wore on, they grew increasingly/more and more worried. Worse still/Even worse, fog began creeping into the forest. Everything around them was swallowed by the darkness, undoubtedly leaving them even more helpless. Tony stood there helplessly, frowning. Mary was close to crying with anxiety and fear.
5.篮球比赛胜败攸关的投篮描写
The ball sailed through the air, spinning perfectly, and swished cleanly through the hoop(嗖的一声直接进蓝框),securing the win for his team and sending the crowd into a frenzy. The deafening silence mixed with nervousness gave way to standing thunderous applause from the stands as the Badgers took the lead by two points in the last make-or-break seconds. When the final buzzer(终场哨声) sounded, the Badgers had won the championship. "
2025年广州市高三期末考试读后续写范文:
“Real magic comes from practice, not from luck.” With that resolve surging through her, she dribbled past two defenders in quick succession, leapt skyward, and released the ball. It sailed through the air in a perfect arc, spinning rhythmically before swishing through the net just as the buzzer pierced/shattered the silence. For a heartbeat, the court was wrapped in stunned silence. Then, as reality set in, a thunderous roar erupted from her teammates. Lila had sealed the victory in the final, do-or-die seconds—transforming her hard training into victorious magic."真正的魔力源于苦练,而非运气。"带着这股翻涌的决心,她连续快速运球突破两名防守队员,腾空跃起,将球投出。篮球划出完美的弧线,在空中旋转着规律的自转,终场哨声刺破/击碎寂静的瞬间,球应声入网。整个球场凝固在震惊的寂静中足有一个心跳的时间。当众人回过神来,队友们爆发出雷鸣般的欢呼。莱拉在这决胜的、背水一战的最后时刻锁定了胜局——将刻苦训练淬炼成胜利的魔法时刻。
"Real magic comes from practice, not from luck." Fueled by that conviction, Lila darted forward, weaving past two defenders in quick succession. With the clock winding down, she launched into the air, her body taut(绷紧) with focus. The ball left her fingertips in a smooth, flawless arc, spinning gently as it soared toward the rim. Just as the buzzer shattered the tension, it dropped cleanly through the net—nothing but net. For a heartbeat, the court was wrapped in stunned silence. Then, as reality set in, a thunderous roar erupted from her teammates. Lila had sealed the victory in the final, do-or-die seconds—transforming grit, discipline, and relentless practice into pure, unforgettable magic.
In the following days, Jack and Leo trained on the playground with the smartwatches on. Jack stared at the endless track ahead—his past 1,000-meter failures weighed on him. Leo noticed his hesitation, patted his shoulder and encouraged, “Every step tests the app and builds your strength!” Jack caught up immediately, eyes fixed on the watch’s real-time data. But he soon grew exhausted and breathless, his pace slowing down. The teacher’s words lingered sharply in his mind, so he adjusted his breathing and fought on. Days later, their sweat polished the app’s accuracy, and Jack turned from a struggling runner into one who could finish the race steadily.
Then came the PE exam day, and Jack stood at the starting line, calm and ready. When the starting gun fired, he rushed off with the app-installed smartwatch on his wrist.Leo stood by the track, shouting, “You can make it!” Jack gritted his teeth, swinging his arms at a fast but controlled pace. Hardly had he crossed the finish line when his classmates erupted into thunderous applause. The PE teacher stepped forward and nodded in approval. Jack grinned in relief and pride, and it was not until then that he realized this journey not only impressed others but also expanded his own abilities. (2026届高三汕头市教学质量监测 续写范文)
11. 跌倒后的重新站起动作链:
跑步时意外跌倒,感到疼痛和羞愧 → 抬头看周围同学的目光,脸红 → 深呼吸,慢慢站起 → 拍掉衣服上的灰尘 → 笑着对朋友说没事 → 继续跑步,决心更加努力
例子: The fall came out of nowhere, pain searing through her knee → She glanced up, cheeks burning as eyes turned her way → Taking a deep breath, she pushed herself up → Brushing off the dirt, she mustered a smile and said, “I’m fine” → With determination, she resumed running, vowing to push harder.
Breathing in the dust of the desert, the blossoms of the orange trees, and the terrible smell of the dairy farm, we made our way across the city. We pounded miles and miles into our running shoes, marking with every step the path to greatness. The scorching sun beat upon my back, blinding me with its brilliance. Nothing was going to stop me, though.(2024年杭州一模续写原文) 辛苦跑步训练的描写
Amina laced up her worn running shoes and stepped outside.
When Amina had one last lap to run, her lungs burned, her feet pounding against the track. The ground felt harsh, each step a reminder that she must clench her jaw and push on.
At first, she ran to escape the memories and the pitying looks of her neighbors. But day by day, something changed. The rhythm of her steps became a way to heal the hurt and face the challenges ahead.
Running had become her lifeline, a bridge between her past and present. Amina felt a lump in her throat, but not from sadness.
She nodded, a smile spreading. "Yes," she said, her accent thick but voice firm. She realized she’d been running through more than just miles. With each step, she’d crossed the borders of fear, isolation, and pain. (摘选自Z20名校联盟2025届高三第三次联考阅读B)
My chest heaved(起伏)painfully as I struggled for breath, and my legs felt like heavy stones.
My heart pounded wildly in my chest, each beat echoing in my ears as my breath came in rapid, ragged gasps. My legs, heavy as lead/ice-blocks, struggled to carry my weight.
My legs trembled violently with fatigue, and sweat rolled in thick beads down my forehead, stinging my eyes.
Ignoring the searing pain(灼痛) in my injured limbs, I began to hobble(蹒跚) forward, one agonizing(极其痛苦的) step at a time, inching my way toward the finish line.
Suddenly, without warning, my knees buckled(发软) beneath me, and I crashed to the ground with a thud(扑通声).
The final stretch felt like an endless journey, each step a battle against my exhausted body. But I refused to give up. With a final burst of determination, I staggered across the finish line—last.
Using my last bit of strength, I got on my hands and knees and crawled, inch by inch, across the finish line.
Shame pulsed through my veins as Dad squatted down and pulled me into his arms.
Hardly had my feet crossed the line when my father rushed forward and swept me into a warm, comforting hug, his embrace a testament to the pride and love that outweighed any finish line position.
I clenched my fists hard and a wave of frustration rushed through me.
Patting me on the shoulder, my dad comforted me in a gentle voice,"Don't let this setback define you. This is just a small bump on you road to success. Everyone stumbles, but it's how you get back up that matters.
At that time,the sun peeked through the clouds(穿过云层), its warm rays seemed to infuse(注射) me with self-confidence.
After that I set a new schedule for my practice,I believed that the future held endless possibilities for me.
读后续写微技能--心理描写之悲伤1
Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily while Jane sat alone, at a loss. An air of sorrow and loneliness settled over her. Feeling left out, Jane was getting desperate with loneliness. She rode home from school slowly, numb with sorrow. Then she locked herself in her room, abandoning herself to great sadness. She felt so sad that she found herself crying unconsciously, unable to hold back her tears. She wept quietly, feeling it was the saddest moment for her young life.
仿写1:
1. 她悲伤得不能自已。
She felt seized by a burst of sadness.=She drowned herself in sadness
2. 我感到高兴极了。
A wave of happiness flooded over me.
3. 他感到非常恐慌。
A flush of panic spread across one's face/cheeks.
A flush of fear flooded/swept over him.
He felt a flush of panic.
【场景2】表示"(因为紧张、害怕、惊恐、焦虑)心跳"
1. Sb could feel one's heart pounding wildly in one's chest.
(pounding/beating/racing/pumping/thumping/leaping/hammering/
thudding/going pitter-patter/fluttering ) (wildly/hard/fast)
某人感到心脏在胸腔中砰砰直跳
1).My heart was thumping with fear as I walked through the dark hallway.
当我穿过黑暗的走廊时,我害怕得心怦怦直跳。
2).His heart pounded with nervousness before he stepped onto the stage.
在登上舞台之前,他紧张得心怦怦直跳。
3).Her heart was racing with anticipation as she waited for the results.
她心怀期待,心怦怦直跳,等待着结果。
害怕地发抖(身体) shake/tremble with fear
害怕地大声尖叫(嘴巴)scream loudly with horror
害怕地心跳加快(心)one`s heart pounded/raced/beat wildly with fear
吓呆了 be struck numb/frozen with fear
吓得目瞪口呆(嘴巴)be open-mouthed with horror
紧张得咬指甲 bite my nails
惊慌失措 be seized with panic
焦虑不安:心神不安 all of a flutter
为某事担忧 lose sleep over sth.
非常紧张 get strung up
让某人感到紧张不安 put sb on edge
心提到嗓子眼儿 sb.'s heart flies into one's mouth
情感名词(如 fear/terror/panic/surprise/shock 等)+ rooted sb. to the spot 某人因某种情感而呆住、无法动弹。
例句:1.Embarrassment rooted him to the spot after he tripped in public. 在公共场合绊倒后,尴尬让他僵在原地。(补充细节)
2. A sense of overwhelming dread rooted him to the spot when he heard his name called at the police station, unsure of what trouble awaited him.(有细节,好句) 当他在警察局听到自己的名字被喊到时,一种强烈的恐惧感让他僵在原地,不知道等待他的会是什么麻烦。
3.Panic rooted the hiker to the spot when she realized she had wandered off the trail and couldn’t see any familiar landmarks around her. 当徒步旅行者意识到自己偏离了步道,而且周围看不到任何熟悉的地标时,恐慌让她僵在原地。
a. His heart raced, his palms sweated/sweat trickled down his forehead, and his throat tightened as a knot formed in his stomach. He hauled his trembling legs onto stage/podium, his body shaking with nerves. But at the thought…, gradually his nervousness faded.
b. He felt his hands trembling and heart pounding wildly. “You’ll be great, Peter,” Isabel encouraged him. Peter took a deep breath to compose himself and then went on stage.
c. When I was about to go on stage, my heart was pounding so hard that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
d. When it was finally time for Dj to sing, the music played on, and he froze. His little face grew pale, and we could see the panic in his eyes as the silence grew.
e. My heart began to race and my mind went blank.我心跳加快,大脑一片空白。
f.However,the moment I was on stage,my mind went blank.Beads of sweat oozed on my forehead and my knees trembled involuntarily. Suddenly,my anxious glance rested on mother.As if by magic,I regained my confidence. Taking a deep breath,I composed myself and began speech.
1. At the sight of the wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. 一看到那只狼,我就被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制,手心冒汗。
2. Frozen with fear, he was too scared to move an inch.他吓得僵住了,吓得寸步难行。
3. Last night, I dreamed about being chased by an angry dog. I really had my heart in my mouth. 昨晚我梦到被一条疯狗追, 吓得我心都提到嗓子眼了。
4. That horror movie made my hair stand on end.那部恐怖电影让我毛骨悚然。
5. She trembled all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她浑身颤抖,如坐针毡。
6. He panicked/ was seized by panic, covered his eyes with his hands and screamed loudly in fright / fear / terror. 他惊慌失措,用手蒙住眼睛,惊恐地大声尖叫。
7.George felt the pressure mounting as the clock ticked down to the final seconds.(篮球比赛快结束时的紧张气氛)
8. Lost in the mountain, they had nothing to do but wait for rescue anxiously.
他们在山里迷了路,只好焦急地等待救援。
9. Every time we hugged her, she stepped back a little, her eyes filled with anxiety as well as curiosity. 每次我们抱她的时候,她都会往后退一点,眼睛里充满了焦虑和好奇。
10.As the evening wore on, they grew increasingly/ more and more worried.
随着夜色渐深,他们越来越担忧。
11. A wave of tension struck him.一阵紧张感向他袭来。
12.With butterflies in his stomach, Derek detailed the accident to Mr Such.
德里克忐忑不安地向萨奇先生详述了事故经过。
13. She tried to hide her nervousness, but she could feel her heart thump.
她试图掩饰自己的紧张, 但她能感觉到自己的心在怦怦地跳。
14.She felt a knot of anxiety tighten in her stomach as she waited for the test results.
(当她等待着测试结果时,她感到胃里一阵焦虑的紧绷。)
15.The protagonist's heart raced with unease as she faced the daunting task ahead.
(当主人公面对艰巨的任务时,她的心情变得不安起来。)
16.Anxiety washed over him like a tidal wave, making it difficult to concentrate on anything else.
(焦虑如潮水般涌上他心头,让他难以集中精力做其他事情。)
17.The character's hands trembled with anxiety as she prepared to deliver an important speech.
(当角色准备发表重要演讲时,她的手因焦虑而颤抖。)
18.Every decision she made was clouded by a sense of anxiety, fearing the consequences of each choice.
(她每做出一个决定都伴随着焦虑感,担心每个选择的后果。)
19.The constant feeling of unease gnawed at her, leaving her sleepless and restless.
(持续的不安感使她烦躁不安,无法入眠。)
20.The protagonist's mind raced with anxious thoughts, unable to find peace or tranquility.
(主人公的思绪充满焦虑的思考,无法找到宁静与安宁。)
21.A sense of impending doom hung over him like a dark cloud, filling him with anxiety.
(一种即将到来的厄运感像一块乌云笼罩着他,让他充满焦虑。)
22.The weight of anxiety pressed down on her chest, making it difficult to breathe.
(焦虑的负担压在她的胸口,使她难以呼吸。)
23.The character's thoughts were consumed by worries and what-ifs, fueling her anxiety.
(角色的思绪被担忧和各种可能性所占据,助长了她的焦虑。)
24.Each passing day brought a new wave of anxiety, intensifying the character's fears.
(每一天的流逝带来了新一轮的焦虑,加剧了角色的恐惧。)
25.The protagonist's sleep was plagued by restless nights filled with anxious dreams.
(主人公的睡眠被焦虑的梦境所困扰,夜晚无法安宁。)
26.Anxiety gripped him tightly, making it difficult for him to enjoy even the simplest pleasures.
(焦虑紧紧地抓住了他,使他甚至无法享受最简单的乐趣。)
27.The constant need for reassurance revealed the depth of her anxiety and insecurity.
(对安抚的持续需求揭示了她焦虑和不安全感的深度。)
28.The protagonist's mind became a battlefield of anxious thoughts, fighting against self-doubt and uncertainty.(主人公的思绪成为焦虑思考的战场,与自我怀疑和不确定性作斗争。)
29.The character's heart raced with anxiety as she waited for the life-altering news.
(当角色等待着改变生活的消息时,她的心情变得焦虑起来。)
30.The weight of responsibility and expectations fueled his anxiety, leaving him mentally exhausted.
(责任和期望的重压助长了他的焦虑,使他精神疲惫不堪。)
31.A sense of impending doom hung over the protagonist, filling every moment with anxiety and dread.
(一种即将降临的厄运感笼罩着主人公,每一刻都充满了焦虑和恐惧。)
32.The constant worry of failure haunted her every step, crippling her with anxiety.
(失败的持续担忧萦绕着她的每一步,让她深受焦虑之苦。)
33.The character's mind was a whirlwind of anxious thoughts, making it difficult to find clarity or peace.
(角色的思绪像旋风般充斥着焦虑的思考,难以找到清晰或宁静。)
教师版——微场景情绪描写训练: 紧张&害怕类
在续写中,紧张和害怕的描写可以通过以下方式展示:
表情和肢体语言:人物面色苍白,手心冒汗,身体发抖,眼神惶恐,嘴唇颤抖等。
内心状况:心跳加速,呼吸急促,脑海中充满负面念头,如恐惧、焦虑和不安。
行为反应:身体僵硬,无法移动或逃跑,声音颤抖,说话结巴或语无伦次,可能
出现手脚无力或乏力的现象。
描述环境:环境昏暗,充满紧张气氛,如阴森的树林、无人的街道或陌生的地方。
另外从表达方式和语言来看,如果想描述主人公的紧张,害怕的情绪,
可以借助以下表达:
can`t help trembling情不自禁发抖;
their hearts were beating/pounding very fast他们心跳得很快;
a flood of fear welled up in him、be thrown into a state of panic充满恐惧;
be seized/overwhelmed by a strong feeling of terror充满恐惧;
freeze with fear/terror吓呆; One’s heart missed/skipped a beat;
feel like sitting on pins and needles=have ants in one`s pants;
one`s heart sank某人心头一沉;
have butterflies in one`s stomach (心里七上八下)。
一、句型训练
1. Jobie picked up the pace, her heart pounding louder the closer she got.
乔比加快了脚步,越靠近,她的心跳得越厉害。
2. Jack froze with terror, unable to utter a single word.
杰克吓得僵住了,一句话也说不出来。
3. I was shaking like a leaf when I went up to deliver my speech in front of all those people.
当我在那么多人面前发表演讲时,我浑身发抖。
4. Trembling with fear, she shook all over, her face pale.
她吓得浑身发抖,脸色苍白。
5. With no sign of her lucky shoes, she got into such a panic that her throat tightened, and
her knees felt weak. 找不到她的幸运鞋,她陷入了恐慌,喉咙发紧,膝盖发软。
6. Pacing back and forth, the girl clutched the corner of her clothes tightly, her palms wet with
sweat.女孩来回踱步,紧紧抓着衣角,手掌被汗水湿透了。
7. The sound of footsteps approaching from behind sent shivers down his spine.
后面传来的脚步声让他背脊发凉。
8. She could feel her palms sweating and her knees trembling involuntarily with fear.
她能感觉到自己的手掌在出汗,膝盖也不由自主地颤抖着,充满了恐惧。
9. The storm raged outside, its howling winds and crashing thunder adding to the Toms’ sense
of terror.外边暴雨肆虐,大风和雷声咆哮,让汤姆越来越恐惧。
10. She felt a cold sweat break out on her forehead, her body consumed by nerves.
她感到额头上冒出了一身冷汗,紧张的不能自已。
二、微场景运用
场景一:学校唱歌比赛成绩揭晓,Emily紧张害怕。
Emily hurried to the school and nervously glanced at (紧张地瞥了一眼)the list on the door of
the choral room. The fear of being rejected came to strike again (害怕被拒绝的恐惧又来了). “Wow!” Emily abruptly covered her wide-opened mouth, feeling as if her heart would
jump out(感觉她的心好像都要跳出来了). There, at the top of the list was posted her name.
The leading singer!
场景二:和弟弟一起外出,结果在人群中走散了,“我”很紧张焦虑又害怕。
Scared and frozen on the spot(吓得呆在原地), I felt the need to see, hug my brother and
make sure he was all right. My stomach twisted. I ran up and down the aisles in the dark,
panic filling my small chest (恐慌填满了我小小的胸膛) and making it difficult to breathe
(使其呼吸困难). Anxious as I was (尽管我很焦虑), I could not find him. Tears of frustration
and fear trickled/streamed down my face (沮丧和恐惧的泪水顺着我的脸流下来),but I
continued to run.
场景三:Jenny第一次在众目睽睽之下进行演讲,请描写他的紧张和渴望成功的决心。
Jenny’s heart raced/pounded (怦怦跳) and she wrung her hands nervously as she prepared to
deliver her first-ever speech in front of a crowd. Her palms were sweaty(她的手上都是汗), and a
mixture of excitement and anxiety filled her mind. She couldn’t stop imagining herself
stumbling over (说话结巴) her words or forgetting key points ,which made her stomach churn .
Taking deep breaths, she tried to calm her nerves, but the weight of countless eyes staring at
her made it difficult to steady herself. Despite her fear, Jenny reminded herself of how
important this moment was. She was determined to conquer her stage fright and deliver a
speech that would leave a lasting impression.
场景四:Marco感到紧张不安。但当他走上舞台开始演讲时,他感到完全轻松自在,
心情平静。令他震惊和惊奇的是,他竟然赢得了这场比赛。
Marco was overwhelmed with nerves, his stomach fluttering with butterflies. But as he
stepped onto the stage and began to speak, he felt completely at ease, as if he belonged there.
To his surprise and amazement, he unexpectedly won the competition.
“stage" 被用作抽象概念,指“舞台表演”或“戏剧行业”时,不用冠词,但指具体的舞台,则必须有冠词:
He dreams of working in stage and film.他梦想从事舞台和电影行业。
我往台下一看,啊呀!不看不要紧,这一看我的心更慌了。有多少双眼睛盯着我呀!我的两手也不知道怎样放好了,我的眼睛也不知道往哪里看合适,我的头也嗡嗡的响起来。最可恨的是我的腿也有点哆嗦了。As I glance down at the stage, a wave of panic washes over me. Countless eyes are fixed on me, and I have no idea what to do with my hands or where to focus my gaze. My head is spinning, and worst of all, my legs are trembling slightly.
描述残疾女孩舞台献歌重获自信(2024佛山高质量发展联盟读后续写)
When the host announced it was Jane`s turn,she was wheeled onto the stage. Jane was greeted with warm applause. As she began to sing, the audience got captivated by her beautiful voice.Seconds after her performance,the entire audience rose with thunderous cheers.When wheeled off the stage,Jane received praise and bouquets of flowers from her teachers and classmates.Jane was moved to tears.The kindness and encouragement from her teachers and classmates stimulated Jane`s enthusiasm for life,making her regain confidence in pursuing her original dream,which I will support wholeheartedly.
克服紧张而即兴发挥、却意外获得成功的演讲经历:
Few things terrify me like public speaking. The thought of all eyes fixed on me, expecting profound insights, triggers panic akin to free-falling from a plane with a delayed parachute opening.
On that particular occasion, nerves consumed me entirely. My mind went blank as a sheet of untouched paper, my hands shaking so violently that the microphone picked up the rustle of my speech notes like a thunderstorm in a quiet room. I forgot every carefully rehearsed line, every bullet point on those now-useless pages, and simply began to speak from the gut. I talked about the raw reality of freshman struggles—the loneliness of navigating a new campus, the crippling doubt of every exam, every awkward social interaction—and how small voices like ours often go unheard in a system that prioritizes perfection over progress. Though the speech lasted merely three minutes, it felt like an eternity, a paradox of time stretching and shrinking simultaneously.
When the event ended, unexpected praise came: “Diana, you were the best speaker today.” I laughed nervously, feeling like a fraud yet strangely alive. That trembling performance taught me: growth begins beyond comfort. What if I’d played it safe? I’ll never know. But confronting fear brings a thrilling freedom, worth every shaky step.
仿写2:
1. 上台领奖时我感到心砰砰直跳。
I could feel my heart pounding as I collected/took up the prize on the stage.
2. 他打开信,心在咚咚跳着。
He unfolded the letter, his heart racing.
3.他哽咽地说着这些话的时候,心怦怦直跳。
His heart hammered as he choked out the words.
1.He breathed a sigh of relief.他松了一口气。
2.His breathing grew slower, as a new calm settled over him.
他重新获得新的平静,呼吸减慢了。
3.He felt greatly relieved and his joy was immense.他感到如释重负,快乐无限。
4.He could feel the tension released and a flood of warmth spread through his
body.他能感觉到紧张感的释放,一种温暖的感觉传遍全身。
5.He regained his calmness/composure and could think straight clearly.
他恢复了镇静,头脑清醒。
6.I still remember the shock that rooted me flat against the wall.
我仍然记得当时惊呆了,靠在墙上,一动不动。
7.Rose froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.
罗斯惊呆了,好像扎根在地上一样。
8.I stared at him in shock and a faint sound of surprise escaped my throat.
我惊愕地盯着他,不禁发出轻轻的惊愕声。
9.When Mary heard the bad news, her eyes widened further and her mouth hung
open in surprise.当玛丽听到这个坏消息时,她的眼睛睁得更大,嘴也张着。
【场景3】和“惊讶&舒缓” 有关的描写
1. His casual attitude completely took me aback.他那随意的态度让我大吃一惊。
2. Jenny was numb with shock, sitting there with her eyes wide open.
珍妮惊呆了,睁大眼睛坐在那里。
3.We froze, as if rooted to the spot, our mouths dropping/hanging open in surprise/astonishment/shock.
我们僵住了,好像生了根似的呆在原地,惊讶地张大了嘴巴。
4.We were too surprised/astonished/shocked/amazed to speak or even to think.
我们太惊讶,以至于不能说话,甚至不能思考。
5.He couldn’t believe his eyes. He shook his head in disbelief.
他简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。他难以置信地摇头。
6. She stared at him, frozen with shock/amazement. 她惊呆了,直瞪着他。
7. Her eyes opened wide in an apprehensive look of surprise.
她双眼圆睁,脸上露出一种充满忧虑的惊讶表情。
亮点短语(面部动词+介词短语)
惊讶的皱眉(眉)
raise the eyebrows/frown in surprise
惊讶的睁大眼睛(眼)
one's eyes grew wide/widen in astonishment/astoundment (astonish/astound; astonished/astounded)
眼中闪过一丝震惊(眼)
a spark of surprise flashed/passed across one's eyes
惊的倒吸一口气(鼻)
gasp in astonishment
惊掉了下巴(下巴)
one's jaw dropped to the ground with shock
惊讶地张开嘴巴(嘴)
one`s mouth hung open in surprise
惊呆了
be struck numb/stand still/froze with shock=be taken aback by.../be dumbfounded
亮点好句
动作/语言描写+情感词汇
听到这个意外的消息,Mary呆住了,动弹不得。(动作描写)
Hearing the unexpected news, Mary was struck numb with shock, as if rooted to the spot.
爱丽丝拿出钱包,非常惊奇地说,“这么说,两个比一个更便宜?”(语言描写)
“So two are cheaper than one?" Alice said in a surprised tone/voice, taking out purse.
神态描写+情感词汇
我一打开盒子,就惊奇地睁大眼睛。(面部:眼睛)
The moment I opened the box, my eyes grew wide in great surprise/astonishment.
汤姆看到他时,双眼闪现出一种惊奇的表情,他的脸也变白了。
Tom's eyes flashed one look of surprise at her, and his face turned pale.
心理活动描写+情感词汇
当我意识到孩子们为我准备礼物,我大吃一惊。
It gave me a shock when I realized that my children prepared gifts for me.
我惊讶地发现,孩子们也明白她的举动意味着什么。
Astonished, I realized that the boys had also recognized what her action meant.
语境操练
根据所给情节,用一句话续写“惊讶”,丰富细节,升级表达
We approached and found the driver of the car was a six-year-old boy.
动作描写(呆住,张口结舌)
Frozen with shock, We approached and found the driver of the car was a six-year-old boy.
神态描写(目瞪口呆)
Speechless with shock, we approached and found the driver of the car was a six-year-old boy.
修辞手法(夸张,下巴掉到地上)
With our jaws dropping to the ground, We approached and found the driver of the car was a six-year-old boy.
1. Tears blurred(模糊)/clouded(蒙住) one's eyes/vision.
→As he looked at Katherine, great sorrow clouded his eyes. 他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。
2. One's eyes got misty(模糊的). →teary eyes 泪水汪汪的眼睛
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed/blurred with tears.泪眼模糊
4.Tears welled up in one's eyes, blurring the vision.(用分词结构补充说明结果,更具动态感)
5. Tears roll down one's cheeks/face 泪水顺着脸颊落下
6.Tears rolled/trickled/streamed/slid warmly down her cheeks.两行热泪顺着脸颊流下。
7.Tears welled up in one`s eyes.
8.One`s eyes were brimming with tears.某人的眼里充满泪水。
→Her eyes brimmed with tears.(过去时)
9.She wept for joy喜极而泣
10.He was profoundly moved and shed tears.他感动地流下眼泪。
11.Sob uncontrollably不由自主地哭起来
12.Her eyes were red and swollen from crying.她眼睛红红的,因为哭过而肿胀。
13.Her cheeks were wet with tears.
14. She suddenly choked with sobs, her tears gushing(涌出) from her eyes.
15. And every night she cried into her pillow as though her heart would break into pieces.
每一个夜晚,她把头埋在枕头里哭,肝肠寸断。
【场景4】表示“流泪、哭、伤心等"
16.down in the dumps 心情很难受
→Carol is a bit down in the dumps because she failed her final exam.
17.have a face like a wet weekend一脸愁云惨雾的
→He’s got a face like a wet weekend.他的脸像下了一周的雨,愁云惨雾的。
18.lump in one’s throat 如鲠在喉
→He had a lump in his throat when saying goodbye to his best friend.
当与好朋友说再见时,他硬咽哭起来。
19.a gloomy feeling 一种悲伤的情绪
→At this time a gloomy feeling took possession of him.
此时一种阴郁的情绪充满了他的心头.
20.be cut up 伤心极了
→He was really cut up when all his friends refused to help him.
当所有的朋友都拒绝援助他时,他难过极了。
21.表示刚刚哭过的样子
→The child raised her head, revealing a tear-stained face.
那个孩子抬起头,露出一张泪痕斑斑的脸。
1. Her hands shaking, she was on the verge/edge of tears.
她的手颤抖着,几乎要哭了。
2.He was reduced to tears.他泪流满面。
3.He was moved to tears.他感动地哭了。
4.She was saddened to tears.她难过地哭了。
5.He was close to tears.他几乎要哭了。
→“几乎……哭起来了”
读后续写微技能--动作描写之哭泣
When the girl heard the news, she cried tears of hopelessness and frustration. Her mother, standing at the door,hugged her child tightly with her eyes flooded with tears. The girl was too choked with emotion to speak. She sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down her face. And after a while she turned round to look at her father. However, her tears brimmed over again as she started to speak. Her father fought back his tears and tried to comfort her.
仿写4:
1. 当得知我被重点大学录取时,我妈差点儿就哭了。
My mother was/came close to tears when she heard I was admitted to a key university.
2. 他低垂着头(hang/lower one`s head),泪流满面。
He hung/lowered/bowed/ducked his head, with tears rolling down his face.
His head drooped, tears rolling down his cheecks.
【场景 5】“v+with…:因…而…"
1. His face lit/brightened up with pleasure.
2.His face flushed/burned/reddened with embarrassment/anger.
3.He felt his cheeks burning with shame.
4.His face paled with fright.
5.His cheeks were wet with tears.
6.Her eyes were wide with horror.
7.Her eyes widened with horror.
8. His face beamed with pleasure他笑容满面。
9. . ...sighed with relief 松了一口气
10.tremble/shiver/quiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
→当他打开盒子,手激动的发抖。(手部动作+情感)
His hands were trembling with excitement as he opened the box.
比较:be numb with pain 痛得麻木了→She was numb with grief.她悲伤到失去知觉。
11.Her eyes sparkled/glowed/twinkled with excitement/pleasure.
12.His eyes brimmed with tears.
13.His eyes welled up with tears of gratitude.
14.He leapt into the air with joy.
15. One`s heart swelled with+情感名词
16.Boiling with rage, he swung his fist wildly at me.他怒不可遏,疯狂地向我挥动拳头。
with/in amazement=amazedly惊奇地
with/in disgust=disgustedly厌恶地
with/In disappointment=disappointedly失望地
with/in relief 欣慰地
with/in embarrassment=embarrassedly尴尬地
with/in satisfaction=contentedly满意地
with/in surprise 吃惊地
with/in excitement=excitedly兴奋地
with/in delight=delightedly高兴地
with/in curiosity=curiously好奇地
in confusion=confusedly
in admiration=admiringly
in silence=silently
in secret=secretly
in a hurry=hurriedly
in fear=in (a) panic=in terror=in horror=fearfully
in puzzlement=puzzledly困惑地
in shock吃惊地
with sorrow=sorrowfully悲痛地
with sadness伤心地
with joy高兴地
with fear 因为害怕
with courage勇敢地
助记:addressed写有地址的
坚定地 determinedly=with determination
饶有兴趣地 interestedly=with interest
满怀信心地 confidently=with confidence
小心谨慎地 cautiously=with caution
害怕地 fearfully=in fear=in panic=in terror=in horror
困惑地 in confusion/in puzzlement
震惊地 in shock
仰慕地 admiringly=in admiration
吃惊地 amazedly=in amazement
如释重负地 with/in relief
悲伤地 sorrowfully=with sorrow
悄悄地 secretly=in secret
自豪地 proudly=with pride
激动地 excitedly=with/in excitement
高兴地 delightedly=with/in delight
尴尬地 embarrassedly=with/in embarrassment
好奇地 curiously=with curiosity
伤心地 sorrowfully=with sorrow
焦虑地 anxiously=with anxiety
耐心地 patiently=with patience
迅速地 hurriedly=in a hurry
操练:介词短语
He listened to her explanation _____________(耐心地).
He went to the cave _________________ (非常好奇地)
We waited for the news ____________ (焦虑地)
"I have passed all my exams", he announced ________________ (满意地)
Desmond eyed her anguished face ___________(同情地)
He looked at me ____________________(困惑地)and did not answer the question.
He looked around ________ (震惊地),unwilling to believe what she had seen.
Because of the limited time, he rushed to airport ________ (匆忙地).
His face went white _____________(因为害怕), when he heard about the news.
I was so cheerful that I ran there________________________(散步并作两步).
with patience
with great curiosity
with anxiety
with/ in satisfaction
with sympathy
in confusion/puzzlement
in shock
in a hurry
with fear
in three and two steps
仿写5:
1.他内心充满自豪 。
His heart swelled with pride.
2.他握紧双拳(clench one`s fists),气得发抖。
He clenched his fists, trembling with rage.
3. 他害怕得发抖,焦虑地走来走去(pace back and forth/to and fro/up and down)。
He shivered with fear, pacing back and forth in anxiety.
【场景6】表示"不知道做..."
1. Sb did sth, wondering what to do next.
2. Sb did sth, not knowing what to do next.
3. Sb did sth, unsure of what to do next.
4. Sb was at a loss what to do.手足无措
5. Sb was in a dilemma about whether to do it or not. 感到难以决定...
例句:Amy remained frozen for a moment, not knowing how the call had ended. Then her eye fell on her family photo on the desk, with her parents on either side.(2026届广州市高三年级调研测试 续写原文)
仿写6:
1.他犹豫了,不知道如何回答才既诚实又婉转.(combine)
He hesitated,uncertain of how to combine honesty and diplomacy in her answer.
2. 老师突然出现,他不知所措。
The teacher suddenly appeared, and he was at a loss what to do.
【场景7】表示"某人想到/明白...; 有了主意"
1. It suddenly occurred to sb that-clause
=It hit/struck sb that-clause
=It clicked with sb that-clause
=It dawned on sb that-clause
=Sb had an epiphany that…
2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.
=...came/flashed/crowded into one's mind
=…sprang to mind
→An idea flashed across his mind.
3. One's mind began to race 头脑开始快速转动
比较:My heart began to race and my mind went blank.
我心跳加快,大脑一片空白。
仿写7:
1.我突然意识到我并不需要这些东西来让自己快乐。
It suddenly dawned on me that I didn't really need these things to please myself.
2. 突然他想到一个好主意。
Suddenly a brilliant idea flashed into his mind/sprung to his mind.
3. 我突然想到我没有锁门。
It struck me that I had left the door unlocked.
【场景8】表示“愤怒"
①.I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。
②.He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。
③.His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。→His anger was cooled.
④.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤.He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。
⑥.His voice trembled with anger/rage.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦.He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。
→His eyes are burning.
give sb. a sharp scolding 严厉训斥某人严厉训斥某人
⑧.He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑨.He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
⑩.His face clouded with anger.=sth cast a cloud of gloom他气得脸色阴沉。
⑪make one’s blood boil 怒不可遏,火冒三丈
⑫hold back one’s pent-up anger抑制住某人的怒火
⑬fly off the handle=fly into a rage大发雷霆
→bury the hatchet(小斧头)=reach a compromise/make peace冰释前嫌
⑭ He was tongue-tied with anger.他气得结巴起来。
⑮.Then she stood up, wrapping her coat around her angrily.
然后她站了起来,怒气冲冲地穿上大衣。
⑯ .She looked at him with eyes flashing angrily. 她愤怒地看着他。
⑰. Sobbing with rage, Carol was taken to the hospital. Carol气得抽泣起来,被送进了医院。
⑱.他气得脸都红了.His face turned red with rage.
His face flamed/flushed/glowed/burned with anger.
⑲.The teacher flipped his lid when the student didn't know the answer to a very elementary question.当这个学生连一个基本问题都不会时,老师大发雷霆。
⑳. Her anger brewed like a storm, bubbling up inside her chest.
Her anger coiled(缠绕) like a snake in her chest, slowly tightening as it brewed.
㉑. His face was gloomy with anger.他气得脸色阴沉.
㉒. George's father will raise the roof when he hears what his son has done.
如果George的父亲知道乔治做了什么,他一定会大发雷霆。
㉓. If you blow up at someone, you lose your temper and shout at them.
如果你对某人发火,你就会发脾气,对他们大喊大叫。
㉔.He ran out of the room with a burst of anger/in a fit of anger, slamming the door behind him.
他一阵愤怒地跑出房间,随手摔上了门。
场景描写(情绪“怒”——渐进描述)
Really not knowing what to do, he plumped down on the sofa simply, burying his head into his arms and breathing heavily. But it didn’t work. Casting a cloud of gloom, he stood up and walked to the window with his hands behind back, staring into the distance. What had just happened was flashing in front of him fast like a film, which made his blood boil. He took a deep breath and clenched his fist and teeth, trying to contain his emotion. However, the fire in his chest seemed to spread more and more quickly so that he was still unable to hold back his pent-up anger, with face flushing soon. He turned around and banged the table violently with a big holler and rushed out of the house, disappearing in the heavy rain, as if only the rain could damp down the fire inside.
他实在不知道怎么办才好,干脆一屁股坐在沙发上,把头埋在臂弯里,喘着粗气。但这并没有奏效。他满脸阴沉地站起来,背着双手走到窗前,凝视着远方。刚才所发生的一切像放电影一样在他眼前迅速地闪过,使他怒不可遏。他深吸一口气,握紧拳头,咬紧牙关,试图控制自己的情绪。然而,他心中的火似乎越烧越旺,憋着的怒火还是无法克制,脸很快就涨红了起来。他转过身来,大叫一声猛捶一下桌子,接着冲出屋子,消失在大雨中,好像只有雨才能浇灭他心中的火气似的。
相关词汇:
plump down on the sofa 一屁股坐在沙发上 cast a cloud of gloom 脸色阴沉
make one’s blood boil 怒不可遏 hold back one’s pent-up anger抑制住某人的怒火
with face flushing soon 脸快速涨红 damp down the fire 把火扑灭
仿写8:
1. Sheldon 非常生气,冲出房间,摔门而去。
Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. .
2.谢尔顿怒不可遏,朝我挥了挥拳头。
Boiling with rage, Sheldon shook his fist at me.
【场景9】表示"迫不及待做...; 毫不犹豫"
1. sb could hardly wait to do sth
2. without a second thought不假思索;毫不犹豫地
3. without even thinking
4. without delay 立即;毫不迟延地
5. without hesitation毫不犹豫
比较:but on second thoughts 但是转念一想
仿写9:
1.他迫不及待地要赶回家将一切告诉他的。
He could hardly wait to get back home and tell his parents everything.
2. 水冰冷冰冷(freezing cold),可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。
The water was freezing cold, but without a second thought the young man dived in.
【场景10】表示"尴尬embarrassment"
1. I wished the ground would open up and swallow me whole when I forgot the words(台词) to my speech.
2.She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.
窘迫之中她用双手捂住了脸。
3. Jack`s face flushed/burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。
4. 我尴尬不已。Embarrassment enveloped me totally.
5.The silence in the room was deafening as I stood there, mortified.
仿写10:
1. 我的脸颊因羞愧而发烫,红晕一直蔓延到脖子上。
My cheeks burned with shame, a blush creeping up my neck.
2. 我的思绪飞快地转动,拼命地想要逃离这个尴尬的局面。
My mind raced, desperately searching for an escape from the awkward situation.
3. 当所有人都转过头盯着我看时,我的胃仿佛打了结一样难受。。
My stomach tied itself in knots as everyone turned to stare at me.
【场景11】表示“发出......(声音)”
1.There were loud shouts and cheers (from...) when...
从......传来喊叫与欢呼声。
2. let out a cry/scream(of horror/fear/terror/shock/surprise/pain....)
3. let out a howl(嚎叫)/growl(咕咕叫、低吼声)/yell/sigh/yelp(突然的尖叫声)
发出......的声音
4.burst out in stormy applause=burst into a storm of applause爆发出雷鸣般的掌声
5.burst into a sigh of disappointment 发出失望的叹息声
6.The police car approached, its siren screaming.
7.Treated so unfairly, she howled in pain and anger.
受到如此的不公平对待,她痛苦而愤怒地嚎哭起来。
仿写11:
1.当他登上讲台时, 现场传来了雷鸣般的掌声。
The whole hall burst into a storm of applause when he walked onto the podium(较小).
A stormy applause broke out in the hall when he stepped onto the stage(较高大).
2.她看见他时吓得大叫一声。
When she saw him, she let out a cry of horror.
3.他嚎叫着,像一只受伤的动物。
He howled like a wounded animal.
【场景12】表示“走;跑;冲;奔"
1.‘’各种走‘’: stalk 昂首阔步地走; stumble 跌跌撞撞地走;结巴 stagger/ shamble蹒跚地走;
stroll散步,溜达; stride 大踏步走;sneak鬼鬼祟祟地走;slip/steal into…溜进…;
stamp one`s feet 跺脚;重踩→stamp/stomp (生气)跺脚;sprint(短跑)冲刺
sidle 侧身走→slip/steal悄悄地走; limp一瘸一拐地走;creep 爬动
toddle婴儿般摇摆地走;tiptoe 蹑手蹑脚地走;trot 小步快跑;trudge艰难地走
drag one`s legs 迈着沉重的步伐走→drag one`s feet/heels拖延;磨蹭;故意迟缓行动
2.dart/dash/rush/hurry
3. run like the wind 飞奔
4.storm into/out of…愤怒地冲进、冲出…→stomp angrily out of the office
5.pace the room/floor 在屋子里走来走去
dawdle over sth在某件事情上磨洋工
dawdle along 磨蹭,慢吞吞走
drag one’s legs: “因疲劳、受伤等拖着腿走”,非固定短语使用,侧重实际动作描述(侧重生理动作)
drag one’s feet/heels “因不愿意而故意拖延、磨磨蹭蹭、不配合”,固定短语,侧重心理情感描述(含贬义)
例 1:The injured dog dragged its legs across the floor.
(受伤的狗拖着腿在地板上走。)—— 描述动物因受伤的肢体动作。
例 2:She dragged her heels when it came to doing homework.
(一提到做作业,她就磨磨蹭蹭。)—— 描述对任务的抗拒态度。
误区:将 “drag one’s legs” 误用作 “拖延” 的比喻义。
比较:He dragged his legs on the project.(×)
He dragged his feet on the project.(√)
《放风筝的人》: We took strolls in(溜达) the musty-smelling bazaars of the Nar-e-Nau section of Kabul, or the new city,west of the Tazir Akbar Khan district. We talked about whatever film we ahd just seen and wakjed amid the bustling crowds of bizzrris. We snaked our way(蜿蜒前行) among the merchants and the beggars, wandered through(徘徊) narrow alleys cramped with rows of tiny,tughtly packed stalls. Baba gave us each a weekly allowance of ten Afghanis and we spent it on warm coca-cola and rosewater ice cream topped with crushed pistachios.
摘自英文小说Matilda :生动描绘出小女生Matilda跟她最喜爱的教师Miss Honey一起回家时的喜悦心情,形象逼真,跃然纸上。
It seemed as if though a valve(阀门)had burst inside her and a great gush(喷出涌出)of energy was being released. She trotted(小步快跑)beside Miss Honey with wild little hops(蹦跳)and her fingers flew as if she would scatter(使分散)them to the four winds and her words went off like fireworks, with terrific speed.仿佛她体内的一个阀门蹦裂了,一股巨大的能量喷涌而出。她在霍妮小姐身边小跑着,不停地蹦蹦跳跳,手指乱飞,好像要把它们吹散到四方似的。她的话像烟火一样,飞快地喷出来。
练一练 根据释文,回顾所学单词
1. ___________--to walk using the front parts of your feet only, so that other people cannot hear you
2. __________--to go somewhere secretly, trying to avoid being seen
3. __________--to walk with weak unsteady steps, as if you are about to fall
4. __________--to walk with difficulty, especially because your feet or legs hurt
5. __________--to walk somewhere in a slow relaxed way
6. _________--to walk slowly and change direction often, especially without a particular aim
7. _________--to walk slowly around or to a place, often without any particular sense of purpose or direction
8. _________--to walk or travel around an area without any definite aim or direction
9. _________--to walk in an extremely proud and confident way
10. ________--If you pace a small area, you keep walking up and down it, because you are anxious or impatient.
11. _________--If you dash somewhere, you run or go there quickly and suddenly.
12. _________--If people rush to do something, they do it as soon as they can, because they are very eager to do it.
13. _________--to do sth more quickly than usual because there is not much time;to move quickly in a particular direction
14. _________--to go somewhere quickly and quietly, especially without being noticed
15. _________--to move quickly and quietly, for example in order not to be noticed; to make sth move in this way
tiptoe
sneak
stagger
hobble
stroll
meander
wander
roam
swagger
pace
dash
rush
hurry/rush
slip
slide
经典例句:
1.Walking on tiptoe, I approached him behind.用脚尖走,我悄悄走到他的身后。
2.Standing on tiptoe, the boy looked over the wall.那孩子踮着脚望墙外。
3.She tiptoed quietly into the room,not wanting to disturb anyone.
她踮着脚尖悄悄走进房间,不想打扰任何人。
4.She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.她溜下床,蹑手蹑脚地走到窗户旁边。
5.I sneaked up the stairs.我蹑手蹑脚地上了楼。
6. The boy sneaked in without paying.这个男孩没有付钱人偷偷地溜了进来。
7. stagger to one`s feet摇摇晃晃站起来
8.The old man hobbled across the road.一瘸一拐地穿过马路
9. We decided to take a leisurely stroll in the park. 我们决定在公园里悠闲地漫步。
10. I had the chance to stroll around this beautiful city with my wife for a whole day.
我有机会和我的夫人用整整一天的时间游览这座美丽的城市。
11. He staggered home, drunk.他喝醉酒,踉跄着回了家。
12. He staggered to his feet.他摇摇晃晃地站起来。
13. We meandered through a landscape of mountains, rivers, and vineyards.
我们在群山、河流和葡萄园构成的美丽画卷中漫步。
14. She wandered aimlessly around the streets.她在大街上漫无目的地到处游荡。
15. The child was found wandering the streets alone.那孩子被发现独自在大街上瞎转。
15. After winning the first prize, the player swaggered about proudly.
得奖以后,这位选手神气十足地到处走动。
16.My wife went home in a hurry only to find the door locked.
我妻子急忙回到家,结果却发现门锁着。
17. She hurried away without saying goodbye.
她连声再见都没说就急忙离开了
18. He made a wild dash for the door.
他朝门口猛冲过去。
19. Suddenly she dashed down to the basement.
她突然冲下地下室。
用恰当的‘走’填入空格处
1). She ___________ to the bed so as not to wake the baby(蹑手蹑脚).
2).He could feel a flush of warm blood________up his face(爬上).
3).Lisa________________ her feet firmly in front of me(一动也不动地站着).
4).Father______the room restlessly.
5).I_______ myself through daily chores,feeling exhausted.
6).She______into the house by the back entrance so as not to be seen.
7).He______over the stone and fell.→He______his step and fell.
8).I must_______________,or I will miss the train.
9).Demonstrators________through the streets of the city.
10).He was so drunken that he_________all the way home.
11).He_______from his chair and rushed to pick up the phone.
12).They enjoyed_________(漫步)through the countryside.
13).He_________________to his feet and rushed for the phone.
14).She turned and_______________out of the room(咚咚地走出).
tiptoed/slipped
creeping
planted/glued/pinned
dragged
paced
dash/hurry/rush
tripped
sneaked
marched
staggered
sprang
wandered
leapt/jumped/sprang
missed
stamped/stomped
In-class Practice:
赏读集团上学期期中考试读后续写范文,并要求完成练习。
Bill was up again and running. However, due to the painful fall, he couldn`t run as fast as before. He clutched his right knee with pain,_________________(跌跌撞撞地往前走).Unfortunately, fourteen kids all _______________________(从他身边冲过), leaving him far behind. _________________________________(感到沮丧), he paused,_________________(发出痛苦的叹息声) and tears_____________(涌出) in his eyes. So_________________(一…..就…) I got close enough, I helped him__________(straight) up and put his arm______ my shoulders(填介词), supporting him in an effort to_______________their legs forward (吃力地前行). Bill and I both
collapsed and_______for air(大口喘气), heart still______________(狂跳)in our chest.
stumbling forward
raced/dashed by
Engulfed in frustration
let out a sigh of pain
welling up
the moment
straighten
around
dragged
gasped
pounding wildly
仿写12:
1. 我们跌跌撞撞地回到家,衣服一直在滴水(drip)。
We stumbled home, with my clothes dripping water.
2. 飞快地回到家,Tim冲过前门。
Racing home, Tim burst through the front door.→The door burst open.门冲开了
3.他的名字,我竟忘得一干二净。
His name slipped from my memory completely.
【场景13】表示"鼓起勇气"
summon up/pluck up/screw up one's courage
build up/work up the courage
gather/muster courage
find the courage
take the plunge
get up the nerve
steel/brace oneself
face up to/stand up to something
仿写13:
1.我终于鼓起勇气登上了舞台。
Finally, I plucked enough courage to go on stage.
2.我鼓起勇气,径直向那个人走去。
Gathering (up) my courage, I walked straight towards the man.
【场景14】表示"还记得某人的话;还在某人的脑海中"
1. One's words/laughter (echoed/rang out) in one's ears.
2. One's words(voice/song) lingered[徘徊/逗留]/stuck in one's mind/head.
3. One`s words flashed across one`s mind
4.Laughter/Applause/One`s words echoed/lingered+地点介词.
=地点+ resounded with one`s laughter/applause/words.
=One`s laughter/applause/words resounded through+地点介词
笑声/掌声/某人的话在某处回荡/久久不散。
【2024广州一模】When George, despite not breaking his father's individual record, made the selfless pass that led to the team's championship victory, the applause for his sportsmanship and teamwork echoed through the historic gym.
当乔治尽管没有打破父亲的个人记录,却做出了无私的传球,带领球队赢得了冠
军时,体育馆里为他的体育精神和团队合作而响起的掌声回荡在这座历史悠久的体育馆中。
【2022新高考I卷】As David,who had always doubted his own endurance, crossed the finish line of the marathon, a wave of triumphant laughter, a release of all his pent-up effort and disbelief, echoed from him through the cheering crowd.当一直怀疑自己耐力的大卫冲过马拉松终点线时,一阵胜利的笑声,一种他所有压抑的努力和难以置信的情绪的释放,从他身上发出,并回荡在欢呼的人群女。
【2024 杭州二模】After Angili poured her heart out in her first public tabla performance, overcoming her stage fright, the surprised and genuine applause from the audience lingered in the small auditorium,marking the true beginning of her musical journey.安吉丽克服了她的舞台恐惧症,在她的首次塔不拉鼓公开表演中倾注了全部心血之后,观众席上爆发出惊喜而真诚的掌声,在小礼堂中久久回荡,标志着她音乐之旅的真正开始。
[2025杭州一模】When the shy student finally unveiled their deeply personal and expressive artwork, a piece they almost didn't share, the encouraging applause from their classmates and teacher echoed through the art room, validating their courage to be vulnerable.
当那个害羞的学生终于展示了他们极具个人色彩和表现力的艺术作品--件他们几
乎不愿分享的作品时,同学和老师们鼓励的掌声回荡在画室里,肯定了他们展现
脆弱一面的勇气。
At the graduation ceremony, when she walked up to receive the degree, the auditorium erupted in applause. A freshman girl ran up to her later, tears in her eyes: ‘I thought I was too old to start over, but you showed me it’s never too late.’ She smiled—those late nights, it turned out, had lit a spark for more than just herself.”
仿写14:
1.老师鼓励的话还在她的耳边回响。
Her teacher's encouraging words still echoed in her ears.
Her teacher's encouraging voice still lingered in her head.
2. 我的脑子里仍然充满奇怪的想法与忧虑。
My head was still full of strange thoughts and worries.
Strange thoughts and worries crowded into my mind.
场景15:表示"转折"
1. But bad luck for sb, .... 但是某人真不走运
2. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that -clause
3. …, but in vain→ With the rock, he hit the window violently to smash the window in, but in vain.
→With the rock,he hit the window violently, trying in vain to smash….
4. …, but without success
5. …, but no use
6. But on second thoughts, ... 但是转而一想,...
7. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
仿写15:
1.使我们高兴的是,结果所有的人收到了礼物。
To our delight, it turned out that every one of us received a gift.
2.Jack真不走运,他绊了一脚,摔在地上。
But bad luck for Jack, he tripped and fell to the ground
3.她朋友想劝她和他一起回家可只是白费唇舌。
Her friend tried to persuade her to go back home with him, but in vain.
场景16:表示"心里想"
1. An inner voice told sb that 从句内心的声音告诉某人...
2. ...thought/said to oneself
e.g. In the back of her mind, she thought to herself, “I don't know if we can afford an expensive bill right now.”
仿写16:
1. 心里的声音告诉他,他所做的错了。
An inner voice told him that what he had done was wrong.
2.当他回家时,他心里想道,"这会是谁呢?"
"Who could it possibly be?" he thought to himself as he walked home.
场景17:表示"时间"
1. not long after that,...
=shortly afterwards, ...
=before long, ...
=It didn't take long before-clause 不久, ...
2. in the blink of an eye/in a flash/in the split second 眨眼的功夫; 一瞬间
3.after what seemed to be centuries 在经过了好像几个世纪之后
① After what seemed like an endless journey, the plane finally landed.
② After what seemed to be an eternity, the doctor finally came out of the operating room.
在仿佛无尽地等待之后, 医生终于从手术室里走了出来。
③ After what seemed to be a never-ending night of worry, the first light of dawn finally appeared.在仿佛永无止境的、充满担忧的一夜之后,天边终于出现了第一缕曙光。
仿写17:
1.不久以后,我们到达一流动的小溪。
Not long after this, we reached a running stream.
2.一时间,他站在那里一动不动,几乎不相信发生的事。
For an instant, he stood still, hardly believing what had happened.
场景18:表示"希望"
1. in the hope that-clause 希望 ……
2. see/feel a glimmer/gleam/ray/flash of hope 看到一丝希望
→a glimmer of amusement/warmth; a beacon of hope希望之灯
3. Sb has a small window of opportunity to do sth 有一线希望来做某事
4.Sb sees a silver lining 某人看到一线希望。
5. John`s hopes rose.
6.His confidence was badly shaken.他的信心备受打击。
7. But their hopes were dashed (破灭) as they stared at a darkened storefront(黑漆漆的店面) and a ‘Closed’ sign.
仿写18:
1.她眼睛扫过大厅望Richard会在那里等。
She glanced about the hall, hoping that Richard would be waiting for her.
2.我注视她,感到了一线希望。
I looked at her and felt a glimmer of hope.
3.他转过身来,想忍住眼泪。
He turned around, trying to fight back his tears.
场景19:表示“笑、高兴、喜悦等"
1.give a jump in the air跳到空中(表示开心).
→我又高兴又激动,蹦跶了一下,然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟着我微笑着的妈妈进了超市。(脚部动作+情感)
Delighted and thrilled, I gave a jump in the air and then skipped into the supermarket along with my smiling mother.
2.shed tears of joy高兴地流下眼泪
→I wore a shining smile./My face lighted up./Tears of joy poured out
3.wear a big/happy smile 面带灿烂的、高兴的笑容
4.force/manage/squeeze a tight smile强装欢颜
→Both Rebecca and her mom smiled a sigh of relief. 露出宽慰的笑容。
5.smile bitterly/broadly/brightly 苦涩地笑、灿烂地笑→smile a watery smile
6.His face wore a welcoming smile.他脸上挂着热情的微笑。
7.A dazzling/beaming/radiant smile spread across her face 她脸上闪过灿烂的笑容
→(比较) He beamed a warm smile at her.他对她热情地微笑。
8.flash a smile 露出笑容→He flashed me a toothy grin
9.The smile faded from his face.
10.A wide smile emerged from his blank expression. 他茫然的表情中露出灿烂的笑容。
比较:There was a faraway/absent look on his face. 他脸上露出恍惚的/心不在焉的神情。
11.His face beamed with pleasure他笑容满面。
12.a hearty burst of laughter一阵爽朗的笑声
13.grin up at sb with pleasure高兴地抬头对某人咧嘴而笑
14.with a tender smile on his face带着温和笑容
15.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
16.grin from ear to ear 咧嘴而笑
17.A huge smile played at the corners of her mouth.(play比dance更自然些)
18.His mouth widened to a smile.他咧开嘴笑了。
19.人群既喜悦又激动。(环境描写)
An air of delight and excitement settled over the crowd.
20.他脸上露出笑容,双眸中闪烁着激动的光芒。
A smile lit up his face and his eyes were shining/ sparking/twinkling with great joy/ excitement.
21.smile微笑/laugh哈哈大笑/chuckle轻声笑/giggle咯咯笑/sneer讥笑/beam笑容满面/grin露齿笑/snigger暗笑/roar吼叫、大声地说、放声大笑/smirk傻笑
“开心”类情绪描写拓展:(介词短语)
I`m wild with joy. (狂喜)
I`m in high spirits. (情绪高涨)→be down in low spirits./be in low spirits
I`m in good mood. (心情很好)
I`m like a dog with two tails. 非常开心
One`s eyes sparkled/lit up/gleamed/shone with excitement/interest...
One`s eyes sparkled/lit up/shone with inspiration/understanding...
His eyes shone with inspiration as he outlined the new idea.
他阐述新想法时,眼睛因灵感而发亮。
gleam with (excitement/interest 等)
指 “隐约闪光、发出微光”,常带微妙或隐含的情感(如狡黠、得意)。
搭配争议点:
√ 与 Excitement/Interest 搭配:可行,如 “眼中闪烁着兴奋 / 兴趣的光芒”。
× 与 Understanding 搭配:较不合适。“Understanding”(理解)侧重理性领悟,而 “gleam” 更侧重情感或机敏的闪光,而非理性认知的体现。
例:She grinned, her eyes gleaming with mischief.
她咧嘴笑了,眼中闪烁着调皮的光芒。
情感名词(joy/delight/excitement...) was shining in one’s eyes
某人眼里闪着…的光芒.
例句:The rain stopped, and relief was shining in my dad’s eyes as he held the dry umbrella for me.(加入 “雨停”“递干伞” 的视觉细节,画面感更强)
Excitement was shining in my cousin’s eyes—she jumped up and pointed at the pandas as we walked into the zoo.(加入 “跳起来指熊猫” 的动作,“兴奋” 的情感更真实)
As the lamp light fell on mom’s hands, warmth was shining in her eyes—and I suddenly knew that love is in these small moments.(用 “灯光下的温暖光芒” 呼应 “亲情在小事中” 的主旨,升华自然)
1. Delighted and thrilled, I gave a jump in the air and then skippedinto the supermarket along with my smiling mother.
又高兴又激动,我蹦跶了一下,然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟着我微笑着的妈妈进了超市。
2. Overjoyed或Wild with joy/delight/happiness , he jumped up and ran happily around the yard. 他欣喜若狂,跳了起来,高兴地在院子里跑。
3. Her hands were trembling with excitement/excitedlyas she opened the box.
当她打开盒子时,她的手激动得发抖。
4.After Steve learned this satisfactory result, a sense of joy and happiness swept over/flooded over/crowded in on him.史蒂夫听到这个令人满意的结果后,一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。
5. I was delighted/pleased beyond description, hardly able to believe in my good fortune.
我高兴得无法形容, 几乎无法相信我的好运。
His face lit up and there was something nice flashing in his eyes.
With a big smile, he nodded and gave her a thumbs-up.
他面露喜色两眼放光,带着灿烂的微笑点了点头,对她竖起了大拇指。
He couldn`t help rolling in the aisles(捧腹大笑) so that his mouth was wide open and
his eyes narrowed into slits.
看到这滑稽的场面,他忍不住笑得嘴巴张得大在的,两眼眯成缝。
She felt a wave of pleasure and warmth run through her whole body, which made her
dance for joy(欢欣鼓舞, 手舞足蹈), feeling over the moon.
她感到一阵美好穿透全身,这使她高兴得手舞足蹈,欣喜若狂
仿写20:
1.花儿在灿烂地微笑,鸟儿在欢快地叫着。
Flowers are smiling brightly, and birds are singing joyfully.
2. 笑声在房间里萦绕。
Laughter lingered around the room.
3.Ken点点头,笑容蔓延在他的脸上。
Ken nodded,a grin spreading across his face.
场景21:表示“拒绝"
1.Wave off one`s offer挥手拒绝帮助
2. She declined the offer with a wave of her hand.她挥手拒绝了帮助。
场景22:和“手hand、finger、fist、arms”有关的动作
1. She dug her hands deep into her pocket. 她把手深深地插入口袋。
→He slid his hands into his pockets.他悄悄地将手插进口袋里。
reach into one`s pocket把手伸进口袋→dig into one`s pocket 慷慨解囊;掏腰包
2. She shrugged and spread her hands. "That’s all I can tell you."
她耸耸肩,摊开双手说:“我只能告诉你这么多了。”
3. Hold sth tightly in one`s hand紧紧抓住某东西
4. wave off one`s offer挥手拒绝帮助
With a wave and a shout he ran down the road to meet us.
他挥挥手,大喊一声,顺着马路跑去迎接我们。
→She declined the offer with a wave of her hand.她挥手拒绝了帮助。
5.bury one`s face in one`s arms把某人的脸埋在胸前→hide one`s face in one`s hands用手捂脸
6.cup one`s hands around one`s mouth双手拢在嘴边
→I cupped my hand over the phone so they couldn’t hear me.
我用手捂住电话,免得他们听到我的话。
7.rest one`s chin on one`s hand 把下巴托在手上
8.bury one`s hands in the pockets把手插在口袋里
9.press one`s hand on one`s chest (表惊吓)把手放在胸口
10.wring one`s hands together(由于焦虑而)扭绞双手
11.rub one`s hands fiercely 使劲地搓手; rub the back of one`s neck揉后脖颈;rub one`s eyes揉眼睛
12.She nervously fingered the collar.
→Her fingers nervously twisted her dress.
→She fidgeted with her dress.她不安地摆弄她的裙子。
13.clench one`s fists 紧握双拳→clench one`s hands into fists把某人的双手攥成拳头
→ These words clinched(确定) my guess.
→ He clutched his right knee with pain, stumbling forward.
14….banged his fist loudly on the table拳头重重地砸在桌子上。
15. Boiling with rage, he swung his fist wildly at me.他怒不可遏,疯狂地向我挥动拳头。
16.give sb a slap in the face 给某人一个耳光
17.He crossed and uncrossed his arms双手盘起又放下了。
18.He folded/crossed his arms and stared at me.双臂合抱在胸前,直直地看着我。
→hold out/open one`s arms张开双臂
19.She swept her son up into her arms with her eyes wet as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out of him.她眼含泪水,一把将儿子搂入怀中,仿佛想要把他紧紧抱住,直到他喘不过气来。
→throw one`s arms around sb/one`s neck/one`s waist.张开双臂抱住某人、抱住某人的脖子、抱住某人的腰
→gather/pull sb into one`s arms把某人拉倒怀里; hug/embrace/hold sb in one`s arms把某人抱在怀里;pull sb into a tight embrace/hug 一把拉过某人,紧紧抱住
20.bury one`s face in one`s arms把某人的脸埋在胸前→hide one`s face in one`s hands用手捂脸
21.keep sb at arm`s length用手臂不让某人靠近
21.Olive dashed into the room, grabbed her bag, and ran out again.(一把抓住)
22.He chased the thief, tripped him up and grabbed the camera.(夺回相机)
23. I could feel my heart thumping wildly, and my palm sweating.
25. She sobbed, hiding/burying her face in her hands.她掩面啜泣。
26.He stood silently with his arms folded.
27.The thief snatched the handbag and disappeared into the crowd.
28.He stroke the cat and patted the dog.
30.He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.
31.She stroke her fingers through my hair and said, ‘‘Of course, there`s a Santa Clause.’’
32.Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.
33. She took the child’s hand and helped him climb the steps.她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶。
34.He reached for her hand and held it tightly. 他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住。
35. A strong hand reached out and caught hold of her arm.一只有力的手伸了出来抓住了她的手臂。
36. She smiled and held out / reached out a hand in welcome.她笑着伸出一只手表示欢迎。
37.Her hands shook as she lifted the glass to her lips.她的手颤抖着把杯子送到唇边。
39.He held the key in his hand.他手里拿着钥匙。
40.He grasped the rope with both hands.他双手抓着绳子。
41.He shook my hands as if we were long lost friends.他握住我的手好像我们是失散多年的朋友。
仿写22:
1.他把手伸进口袋,拿出火机。
He reached into his pocket and pulled out a lighter.
2. 他的双手攥成了拳头。
His hands were closed/clenched into tight fists.
场景23:和“腿、脚leg、foot”有关的各种动作
1. jump/spring/leap to one`s feet 跳起来→give a jump in the air跳到空中(开心)
2. rise/start/get to one`s feet 站起来
3. cross one`s legs 翘着二郎腿
→She sank into an armchair and crossed her legs.
她坐到一把扶手椅上,跷起了二郎腿。
4.spring from the chair从椅子上跳起来
5.hike up to the top of the hill爬到山顶
6.plant one`s feet firmly on the ground站在那里一动也不动
7.struggle to one`s feet挣扎着站起来
8.drag one`s leg 吃力地走
9.stamp/tap/stomp one`s feet跺脚→She was tapping / stamping/stomed her feet impatiently.
她不耐烦地跺着脚。
10.kneel down on the ground(knelt--knelt) 跪在地上
11.Trip sb up把某人绊倒→trip sth over被某东西绊倒
12.Carefully,he stepped over the broken glass.小心翼翼地踩过碎玻璃。
13.Joyfully,he skipped up the street.高兴地跳过街道。
14.She crossed the finish line on tired legs.她用她那疲惫的双腿穿过了终点线。
15.He rose to his feet on shaky legs.他双腿颤抖地站了起来。
16.His legs were so weak that he could hardly stand.他腿软的几乎站不住了。
17. She begins dancing, kicking her legs high in the air. 她开始跳舞,做了空中高踢腿动作。
18. He fell over this time, flat on his back with his legs wide.
他这次摔倒了,背部着地,双腿叉开。
19. He got shakily to his feet.他颤抖地站了起来。
20. He likes to put his feet up and watch TV when he gets home.
当他回家的时候,他喜欢翘着脚看电视。
21. She felt her throat tightened.
仿写23:
1.他们在刺骨的寒风中跪倒在地,将鸭子逼到一道旧木栅栏前。
They got down on their knees in the freezing cold, and cornered the duck against an old wooden fence.
Her teacher's encouraging voice still lingered in her head.
2. 心跳加速,手心冒汗,喉咙发紧,他拖着颤抖的双腿。
Heart racing, palms sweating and throat tightening, he dragged his trembling legs.
onto the podium/stage. Strange thoughts and worries crowded into my mind.
【场景24】和“eyes、pupils(瞳孔)”有关的动作
1. Alice sat there,with her eyes fixed on/focused on/glued to the blackboard.
2. Widen one`s eyes with terror惊恐地睁大眼睛
3. Her eyes grew wide/widened in surprise/with disbelief. 她的眼睛惊讶地、不相信地睁大了。
4.Her eyes were wide with horror=Her eyes widened with horror.
5. One`s words flashed across one`s mind
6. Mr Smith hung his head low with his eyes blinking and fluttering.
低垂着头,不断地眨眼,眼神飘忽不定。
7.I blinked my eyes hard.
8. His eyes were shining with anger.
9.Her eyes shined/sparkled/glowed/glimmer/glitter/twinkled/kindled with excitement/joy/pride...
→I saw her eyes shining with tears.
10.His eyes were red with fury.
11.Her eyelids fluttered but didn`t open.
12. Beli’s diamond eyes locked on to her. 《奥斯卡·瓦奥短暂而奇妙的一生》贝利钻石般的眼睛紧盯着她。
13.Her pupils dilated/dai`leit/扩张 like camera lenses capturing the shocking scene.
她的瞳孔像相机镜头一样放大,捕捉着这令人震惊的一幕。
12.shut/squeeze one`s eyes 闭上双眼
→Tina shut her eyes tightly and bit her lip. 蒂娜紧闭上双眼,咬了咬嘴唇。
13.roll one`s eyes翻白眼
14.squint one`s eyes 眯眼睛
15.take one`s eyes off…把视线从…挪开
16.Feast one`s eyes on…尽情欣赏……
17.lift one`s eyes抬起眼睛
18.one`s eyes scan the room扫视房间
19.happiness radiated from her eyes.
20.hungry eyes landed/fell on…饥饿的目光落在…上
22.His eyes brimmed with/filled with tears.
23.Tears blurred her eyes/vision.
24.His eyes dropped to his lap when he answered.
25.His eyes was turned to the door when he heard the handle turning.
→ He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning.听到门把转动的声音,他向门那边看去
26.At first her eyes widened and kindled. Soon afterwards, tears blurred her eyes.
27. He was breathing fire and fury and inquired with two eyebrows knitted into one.
他气得呼呼响,两道眉毛皱成一团问号。
28.As the music faded, he took her hand and asked her to dance, their eyes locked in a moment that seemed to last forever. 音乐渐弱,他牵起她的手,邀请她跳舞,他们的目光锁定,仿佛永恒。
29.As I blinked through tears at the end of Chestnut's story, the message was clear: humans are an inseparable part of nature.
29. Her eyes misted over as she immersed herself in their good memories.
当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时,眼睛模糊起来了。
30. He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
31. When Mary heard the bad news, her eyes widened further and her mouth opened.
当玛丽听到这个坏消息时,她的眼睛睁得更大,嘴也张着。
32.She looked her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.
她直视父亲的眼睛,诚实地回答了他的问题。
33.He seemed unwilling to meet my eyes.他似乎不愿意与我的目光接触。
34.She tried to sit up, her eyes fixed on Joan‘s face(独立主格).她试图坐起来,目光紧盯着琼的脸。
35.His eyes scanned the room as he entered.他进屋时眼睛扫视了整个房间。
36.Happiness danced in his eyes. 幸福在他眼中翩翩起舞。
bright/sparkling/twinkling/shining eyes 闪闪发光的眼睛
dark eyes 乌黑的眼睛;
blue eyes蓝色的眼睛;
grey eyes灰色的眼睛;
brown eyes棕色的眼睛;
wide-open eyes睁得圆圆的眼睛;
sunken eyes 凹陷的眼睛;
deep-set eyes深陷的眼睛;
bloodshot eyes布满血丝的眼睛
long eyelashes 长睫毛;
thin eyelashes 细细的睫毛;
thick eyelashes浓密的睫毛;
curving eyelashes 弯弯的睫毛
thick/bushy eyebrows 浓密的眉毛;
thin eyebrows 细细的眉毛
dashing eyebrows 剑眉;
arched eyebrows 柳叶眉;
penciled eyebrows 用眉笔描过的眉毛
仿写24:
1.他的眼中闪烁着激动的光芒。
There was a sparkle of excitement in her eyes.
2. 幸福从她的眼里散发出来。
Happiness radiated from her eyes.
3.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
He glared at me with his burning eyes.
1.I was frozen to the spot, motionless.
2.吓呆了 be struck numb/frozen with fear.
3.那条狗突然跳出来冲向我,我吓呆了,一动不敢动。(遇险类情节)
When that dog jumped out at me, I was frozen with fear, too scared to move an inch.
4. Numb/Frozen with fear, Marc couldn't say a word, and dared not look at his father's
cloudy face.
5. At the thought of being lost in the woods, he was frozen with shock.
6. When it was finally time for Dj to sing, the music played on, and he froze. His little
face grew pale, and we could see the panic in his eyes as the silence grew.
7.She froze, her mouth hanging open. 她呆住了,嘴张开着。
8. Rose froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.
罗斯惊呆了,好像扎根在地上一样。
【场景25】和“freeze、flutter、stir等”有关的动作
flutter vi/vt 飘动;颤动; 挥动(翅膀、旗帜等);
(鸟)振翅飞舞;(人)兴奋、紧张不安
1.Dead leaves fluttered slowly to the ground.枯叶缓缓飘落到地上。
2.The flag fluttered in the breeze.旗帜在微风中飘动。
3.We watched the butterflies fluttering in the garden.
4.Her eyelids fluttered but didn`t open.她眼帘动了下,但 没有睁开眼睛。
5.She fluttered her eyelashes at him.她向他使了个眼色。
6. Mr Smith hung his head low, with his eyes blinking and fluttering.
低垂着头,不断地眨眼,眼神飘忽不定。
7.If your heart/stomach flutters,you become very nervoud or excited.
8.She nervously fluttered around the office.烦躁不安地在办公室走来走去。
stir搅拌;well up涌现
9.A slight breeze was stirring the branches. 微风吹动着树枝。
10.His stomach stirred with fear. 他内心感到一阵恐惧。
11.Her broad smile was rooted in my heart.
12.Enormous delight welled up in every corner of the classroom.
和creep, envelop, loom, linger,haunt,swirl几个动词有关的动作
1新鲜煮制的咖啡香气包围了整个厨房,以温暖迎接新的一天。
The aroma of freshly brewed coffee enveloped the kitchen, welcoming the day with warmth.
2 雾蒙蒙的森林中出现了一个庞大的身影,后来发现是一只好奇的熊在探索这片区域。
A hulking figure loomed in the misty forest, later revealed as a curious bear exploring the area.
3 当母狮在草原边缘潜伏时,羚羊紧张地感知到了迫在眉睫的危险。
As the lioness loomed at the edge of the grassland, the antelope grew tense, aware of the impending danger.
4 那首老歌的旋律在空气中挥之不去,唤起了往日的回忆。
The melody of the old song lingered in the air, evoking memories of days gone by.
5 乌云开始笼罩地平线,预示着暴风雨的来临。
Dark clouds began to envelop the horizon,signaling the approach of a storm.
6 月光将夜晚包裹在银色的光辉中,增添了一丝浪漫。
The moonlight enveloped the night in a silver glow, adding a touch of romance.
7 她的勇气显得格外突出,激发了大家的热情并为整个团队注入了新的活力。
Her courage loomed large, sparking enthusiasm and infusing the team with new energy.
阅读下面篇章,体会动词 creep,envelop, loom,linger 在文中作用,并翻译文中画下划线部分。
The evening twilight enveloped the quiet village in a deep orange glow. As the sun slowly dipped below the horizon, painting the sky in hues of orange and pink.Suddenly, the sound of children's laughter drifted through the narrow streets, their joy spreading like wildfire. A gentle breeze swept through, rustling the leaves and casting shifting shadows across the ground. The scene lingered in the minds of the villagers, reminding them of simpler times. And in that moment, the warmth seemed to hold the promise of better days to come. The echoes of laughter lingered long after the sun had completely vanished.
夜幕降临,暮光给宁静的小村庄笼上了一层深橙色的柔光。夕阳缓缓落下,渐渐隐入地平线,将天空染成了橙色和粉色。忽然,孩子们的笑声在狭窄的街道上回荡,欢乐像野火般迅速传开。微风轻拂树叶沙沙作响,地面上铺满变幻的影影绰绰。这一幕深深印在人们心中,让他们想起那些简单的时光;这-刻的温暖似乎也带来了对未来美好日子的期盼。笑声的余音久久回荡,直到太阳完全隐去之后依然萦绕耳畔。
仿写25:
1.她停顿了一下,任由那些深层的情绪在体内盘旋。
She paused, letting these deep emotions swirl(旋转) through her.
2. 随着截止日期的临近,不确定性在团队上空逐渐显现,给他们的信心投下了阴影。Uncertainty loomed over the team as the deadline approached,casting shadows on their confidence.
1.He sneaked a look/glance at her.=He peeked at her.=He took a quick peek at her.
他偷看了她一眼。
2.stare/gaze/peer at…凝视……→gaze up at sb抬头看某人
→If you gaze long enough into an abyss,the abyss will gaze back into you.
你凝视深渊的时候,深渊也在凝视你(尼采)
Jeremy just stood in silence, staring off blankly at the wall.
杰里米只是静静地站着,茫然地盯着墙壁.
Edward stared off into space for a long moment.
3.peer/glance fearfully over one`s shoulder提心吊胆地回头看一眼
4.gape at…. 目瞪口呆地看着……
5.glare at… 怒视……→The two men stood glaring drunkenly at each other.
6.wink at… 朝……眨眼
7.glance at…扫了一眼……
8.catch a glimpse of…暼了一眼……
9.cast a look at sb=throw/shoot a look at sb朝某人看了一眼
→She shot her a meaningful look.《秘密花园》她向他意味深长地看了一眼。
10.stare sb up and down上下打量某人=look sb up and down
11.stare sb in the eye 盯着某人的眼睛看(eye用单数!)
12. steal a glance at…偷看一眼……
【场景26】和“看”有关的动作
He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
13. exchange a knowing glance 交换会意的眼神
14.look up into the sky抬头看着填空→Standing beside the empty road, they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace from within.
站在空旷的道路旁,他们抬头仰望天空,从内心感受到珍贵的平和。
仿写26:
1.盯着他们好有一两秒种,我希望能够提醒他们该闭嘴了。
Staring at them for a second or two, I hoped that the stare would serve as a warning to let
them shut up.
2. 抑制住揍他们的冲动,我转过身狠狠地看了他们一眼。
Fighting the urge to beat them, I turned around and shot/cast a furious glance at the rude couple.
【场景27】和“shoulder”有关的动作
1.Pat/tap sb on the shoulder轻拍某人的肩膀
2. Peer/look (back) over one`s shoulder回头看
3.Shoulder one`s way through the crowd用肩挤着穿过人群
4.Just shrugged his shoulders 耸了耸他的肩膀
5.Your bag slipped off your shoulder.
6.lean your head on sb`s shoulders 将头靠在某人肩膀上
7.put one`s arms around one`s shoulders抱着某人
8.shoulder/undertake/take/bear the responsibility for…
9.get the cold shoulder受冷遇→give sb the cold shoulder冷对某人
10.cry on one`s shoulder向某人倾诉以求同情
11.take sth on one`s own shoulders自己承担责任
12.shift sth from one`s shoulder推卸责任
13.with one`s shoulder to collar紧张地、拼命地(工作)
14.Put one`s shoulder to the wheel努力工作
i.e. If you want to finish the work on time,you need to put your shoulder to the wheel.
15.Stand shoulder to shoulder团结一致
16.Talk straight from the shoulder 直言不讳地说
【场景28】和“head”有关的动作
1. nod in greeting点头打招呼
2.nod in approval 点头同意→They nodded their heads in agreement.
3.Bury one`s head in the hands双手抱拳
→He put / held his head in his hands, greatly annoyed.他双手抱头,十分生气。
→She buried her head in the pillow.她用枕头捂住脑袋。
4.Hold one`s head high高昂着头
5.Scratch one`s head 挠头→He scratched his head, not understanding a word.
他挠了挠头,一个字也听不懂。
6.Mr Smith hung his head low, with his eyes blinking and fluttering.
低垂着头,不断地眨眼,眼神飘忽不定。
7.He drooped/lowered/hung/bent in shame羞愧地低下头
→bow one`s head尴尬、难过、祈祷时低头
→His head drooped and tears fell into his lap.他耷拉着脑袋,眼泪滴落在大脚上。
8.Shake one`s head in disbelief怀疑地摇摇头
9. She rested her head on his shoulder.她将头靠在他的肩膀上。
10. It never entered my head that he might be lying.我从未想过他会是在撒谎。
仿写28:
1.我头一碰到枕头就睡着了。
I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow.
2. 我决定去走走,清醒一下头脑。
I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.
1….touched his heart….打动了他的心
2….pierced my heart….刺疼了我的心
3.Her heart leapt with joy她心花怒放
4.Her heart melted.她的心软了。
5.With a sinking/heavy heart心情沉重
6.With a light heart轻松愉快地→Last night,I went to the theater with a light heart.
7.My heart began to race and my mind went blank.我心跳加快,大脑一片空白。
8.His heart/spirits sank他情绪低落。→
9.A thrill of joy filled her heart.→A ripple of excitement ran through them.
10. Gratitude and admiration rushed in my heart.我心里奔腾着感激和钦佩之情。
11.I could feel my heart thumping wildly, and my palm sweating.
12.Sb's heart sings(心)/aches(心疼)/pounds(心跳加速/races rapidly(心跳加速)/skips abeat(很紧张)/sinks(失望)
13.sth capture sb's heart.
【场景29】和“heart”有关的描写
【场景30】如何描述‘感激’
1. Tears of gratitude filled her eyes.
2.She had a deep gratitude towards David.
3.The Committee expressed its gratitude for the contribution he had made.
4.Will you let me take you out to dinner tomorrow in gratitude for what you
have done?
5.She accepted his offer with gratitude.
6.承蒙帮助,感恩不尽: I owe you a debt of gratitude for your kind help
7.我的感激心情不是用语言所能表达的:My gratitude is beyond my power of expression.
流下感激的泪水 shed tears of gratitude
感动的落泪 be moved to tears
对......深表感恩 have a deep gratitude towards...
松了一口气 breathe a sigh of relief/ sigh with relief/ to one's relief/ gasp with relief
哽咽的 with a lump in one's throat
为了感谢 in gratitude for ...
感激的泪水顺着脸颊流下,皮特紧紧地抱着格林。
With tears of gratitude rolling/ streaming/coursing down his cheeks, Peter hugged Green tightly. (with复合结构)
我非常感动,喉咙哽咽,更大声地鼓掌。
Touched deeply and feeling a lump in my throat(非谓语), I clapped my hands even more loudly.
看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照,实在令人感动。(结尾的感悟)
It is very moving to see how much strangers can care for each other.
我终于坐下来哭了起来,心中满是温暖和宽慰。
I finally sat down and cried, a mixture of warmth and relief flooded/ washed over me.
我们爬上了直升机,松了口气。(脱险后情感)
We climbed into the helicopter, gasping with relief/ breathing a sigh of relief.( 非谓语)
1. Overwhelmed with heartfelt gratitude, I couldn’t utter a word. 我心怀感激, 无语凝噎。
2. Having gained his genuine favour, we expressed/extended our sincere gratitude to him.
得到了他的真心支持,我们对他表示了真诚的感谢。
感谢信必背:extend / convey / express one`s sincere / heartfelt gratitude/ appreciation to sb.
向/对某人表达真诚/衷心的感谢
3.With tears of gratitude rollingdown his cheeks, Peter said thankfully, “You’ve saved me today. I couldn’t thank you enough.”感激的泪水顺着彼得的脸颊流下,他感激地说:“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”
感激的泪水: tears of gratitude/ appreciation
感激的泪水从某人的脸上流了下来:(with) tears of gratitude / appreciation streaming/ rolling down his cheeks
眼里涌出了感激的泪水:(with) tears of gratitude/ appreciation wellingup in one`s eyes
4.For him, it may have been a joke, but I was moved/ touched to tears in a flash.
对他来说,也许这是个玩笑,但刹那间我感动到热泪盈眶。
(感动到流泪: be moved/ touched to tears)
5.It was an event that happened in the school last year. But it is now still fresh in my mind and keeps me touched all the time.那是去年发生在学校的一件事,却至今仍让我记忆犹新,令我感动不已。
6.Surprised and moved,she bowed low to us and murmured thanks,weeping tears of gratitude.
她既惊喜又感动,向我们深深鞠躬低声道谢。
他在寒冷的天气里感到温暖,相信处处都有好心人。
He felt warm in the cold weather, and believed there was kindness in every corner.
他们彼此凝视,心中一阵宽慰。
They looked at each other, and felt a wave of relief went through /flooded over/ washed over them.我被震撼了,心中满是对这个勇敢男孩的骄傲和爱。
I was blown away and my heart was full of pride and love for the brave boy.
请根据所给情节,尝试续写人物感激、温暖的情节。利用动作、神态和语言描写等表现人物的感激和如释重负。
on a cold morning, Peter was nearly knocked down by a passing car when a passer-by pushed him to safety...
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With tears of gratitude hanging in his eyes, he thanked the passer-by with a lump in his throat, "Thank you so much!" But the passer-by just smiled warmly. Peter felt warm in the cold weather, believing there was kindness in every corner. It was very moving to see how much strangers could care for each other. Touched deeply, the crowd clapped their hands loudly. Later, knowing what had happened, Peter's mother
gasped with relief, and shed tears of gratitude.
1.The girl`s voice began to crack(沙哑).
2.Thunder crashed and boomed outside.外面雷声大作。
3.A large branch came crashing down.一根大树枝啪啦一声掉落下来。
4.The plates went crashing to the ground.盘子哗啦几声摔落在地上。
5.A brick crashed through the window.一块石砖哗的一声砸穿窗户。
6.He`s always cracking his knuckles把他自己的指关节弄得啪啪响。
7.He`s always cracking jokes.开玩笑
8.The whip cracked over the horses` heads.鞭子在马头上方啪啪响
【场景31】拟声词crack例句
1.Jess was torn by anger and worry.被内心的愤怒和忧虑所撕扯着。
2.She was torn between her love of dancing and her fear of performing in public.她内心矛盾极了:既热爱舞蹈又害怕公开表演。
3.Seeing her so upset really tore at his heart.
看到她如此不安,他心里难受极了。
4.I`m torn/conflicted on….在…事情上纠结。
【场景32】tear例句
1.in a tearing hurry/rush匆忙地
2.at a staggering pace 以极快的速度
3.at a snail`s pace以极慢的速度
4.at an alarming rate以惊人的速度
【场景33】‘速度’的表达法
【场景34】和“voice”有关的动作
1. The girl`s voice began to crack(沙哑).
2.groan=moan vi 呻吟
3. I whispered nervously, with my voice trembling a bit.
4.Reg`s voice shook with rage.
5.His voice was choking with rage.他气得声音哽咽。
6.said in a choked voice/tone 声音哽咽地说
7. Margarito choked up as he explained the accident to his mom and comforted her.
8. She shouted at the top of her voice but heard nothing in response except the roaring waves.
9.Peggy, her voice thick with regret, said sincerely, “We're so sorry for being unkind to you."
【场景35】和“tooth/ear/nose”有关的描写
1. His white and even teeth flashed.他洁白整齐的牙齿一闪而过。
2….strained my ears to do sth竖起耳朵来做某事
3.grin from ear to ear咧嘴而笑
prick up one’s ears 竖起耳朵
strain one’s ears 倾耳静听
cover one’s ears 捂住耳朵
wiggle one’s ear 扭动耳朵
listen with half an ear 半听不听
one’s ears pop 耳朵嗡嗡作响
wrinkle one’s nose 皱起鼻子
blow one’s nose 擤鼻涕
hold/pinch one’s nose 捏住鼻子
twitch one’s nose 抽动鼻子
flatten one’s nose against 把鼻子贴在
trit one`s teeth要紧牙关;下定决心
【场景36】和“mouth、throat、lip等”有关的描写
1. She stood rooted to the spot,her breath caught in her throat.呆立原地,她喘不过气来。
2.His jaw dropped.他非常惊讶。
3He straightened up and looked at me, open-mouthed.他直起身,目瞪口呆地看着我。
4.My heart was in my mouth when… 当…的时候,我紧张地心到了喉咙口。
5.She froze, her mouth hanging/dropping open. 她呆住了,嘴张开着。
6.His throat tightened with fear when…
7….felt a lump in his throat.感到喉咙哽住了
8.His lips quivering/trembling.他的嘴唇颤抖着(独立主格结构)
9. He covered his mouth to hide his yawn. 他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。
10.My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.
我走进她的办公室时,紧张得心都到了嗓子眼
11.My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.闻到食物的香味,我开始流口水了。
12.His mouth widened to a smile.他咧开嘴笑了。
13.Suddenly a hand cupped her mouth.突然一只手捂住了她的嘴。
14.A smile played around his mouth.他的嘴上挂着一丝笑意。
15. I stared at him in shock and a faint sound of surprise escaped my throat.
我惊愕地盯着他,不禁发出轻轻的惊愕声。
16.bring a smile to one`s lips; a smile returns to one`s lips; His lips curved into a smile
bite one’s lips 咬嘴唇 lick one’s lips 舔嘴唇 smack one’s lips 咂嘴 purse one’s lips 抿嘴
句子巩固练习:
1. The dog ________ its ears when it heard a strange noise. 这只狗听到奇怪声音时竖起了耳朵。
2. She ________ her ears to hear what they were whispering about. 她竖起耳朵听他们在嘀咕些什么。
3. The child _________ his ears to block out the loud noise. 孩子捂住耳朵避免听到嘈杂的声音。
4. Her ears ________ as the plane descended. 飞机下降时她的耳朵嗡嗡作响。
5. She __________ her nose at the smell of the rotten eggs. 她闻到烂蛋的味道时皱起了鼻子。
6. He ______ his nose loudly, causing everyone in the room to turn and look at him.
他大声擤鼻涕,引起房间里所有人的注意。
7. She ________ her nose as she walked past the smelly dumpster. 她捏住鼻子,走过难闻的垃圾箱。
8. The puppy _________ his nose as he sniffed around the garden. 小狗抽动着鼻子,在花园周围嗅来嗅去。
9. He __________ his nose against the glass to see the fish better. 他把鼻子贴在玻璃上更好地看鱼。
10. She ____ her lips to prevent herself from crying. 她咬住嘴唇克制住自己的哭声。
11. She _________ her lips after drinking the tasty juice. 她喝完美味的果汁后咂了咂嘴。
pricked up
strained
covered
popped
wrinkled
blew
pinched
twitched
flattened
bit
smacked
1. ...let out/breathed a sigh of relief 松了一口气
2. ...sighed with relief 松了一口气
3. (A wave of) relief flooded/washed over sb.
4. to one's relief, .. 使人欣慰的/放心的是
【场景37】和“如释重负”有关的描写
He was relieved to see Jeannie reach the other side of the river safely.
看到珍妮安全到达河对岸,他心头一块石头落了地。
2. It was a great relief to be back on dry land after such a rough crossing.
渡过汹涌澎湃的大海回到陆地后使人感到如释重负。
3. Knowing that they had arrived safely took a load off my mind.得知他们平安到达后我如释重负。
4. They exchanged relieved glances. 他们如释重负地彼此看了看。
5. We all breathed a sigh of relief when he left.他走了以后,我们大家都如释重负地松了口气。
6. Finally telling the truth was a great weight off my shoulders.最后讲了实话使我如释重负。
7. I felt a huge surge of relief and happiness. 我如释重负,感到一阵欣慰。
8. Afterwards I felt a great sense of relief. 后来我感到如释重负。
9. A feeling of relief washed over her. 她顿时如释重负。
10. She sighed with relief that it was all over. 事情总算全都过去了,她轻松地舒了一口气。
11. I'm so relieved that I don't have to do the after-dinner speech - it's such a weight off my mind!
饭后不必作演讲使我舒了一口长气——我终于放下了心头大石!
12. Karen found herself heaving a sigh of relief. 卡伦发现自己如释重负,长舒了一口气。
13. She let out/gave a sigh of relief. 她释重负地松了口气。
14. A huge burden was lifted from my shoulders when I told my parents about my problem.
我把自己的问题告诉父母后,感到如释重负
仿写37:
1) 飞机安全着陆,我顿时放下心来。
I breathed a sigh of relief as the plane landed safely.
A wave of relief flooded over/through me as the plane landed safely.
To my relief, the plane landed safely.
2) 没有人受伤,我们都松了一口气。
No one was injured, and we all breathed a sigh of relief.
【场景38】和“face/cheek”有关的描写
1.A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crossed his face.
→Dead silence spread across the classroom.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
2.His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。
3.His face looked a little confused他看起来有点因惑。
4.Jack`s face flushed/burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。
5.Her face paled with fright.她吓得脸都白了。flush脸红
6.He had a slight frown on his face他的脸上现出有点儿愁眉不展的样子。
7. His face lit up/brightened up/glowed with pleasure.
8.He felt his cheeks/face burning with shame.
9.His cheeks were wet with tears.→She limped away in tears.她一瘸一拐地流着泪走了。
10. His face beamed with pleasure他笑容满面。
11.He rested his cheek on her shoulder.他将面颊靠在她的肩上。
12.Color rushed/flooded/rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.
意识到有人在看她,她顿时涨红了脸。
13.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rushing to her face.
她是如此羞愧,以至于脸涨得通红。
14.A tear slid down her cheek一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。
15.He kissed her on both cheeks and got on the train.他亲了亲她的脸颊,然后上了火车。
16.Pleasure kindled his face.欢愉使他容光焕发。
17.A pang of conscience sent a light wash/flush of pink(一抹淡淡的粉色) into her cheeks.
一阵良心上的愧疚感让她的脸颊泛起了淡淡的粉红色。
18.Sb's face softens(面色缓和)/hardens(面色严肃)/blackens(面色阴发/reddens(脸变红了).
17.Her face clouded with anger.她气得脸色阴沉。
18.His face contorted, white with anger.他的脸都扭曲了,气得发白。
19.A frown now stood on his face.他邹起了眉头。
20.The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.该消息使他脸上蒙上一层阴影。
21.They sat there with glum looks on their faces.他们坐在那里,一脸的忧郁。
22.She sobbed,hiding her face in her hands.
23. He was the ugliest thing I had ever seen! You could see the veins beneath his yellow skin. His hair was black and his teeth were white. But these things contrasted horribly with his yellow eyes, his wrinkled yellow skin and black lips.他是我看到过的最丑陋的东西!他黄色皮肤下的血管依稀可见。他的头发是黑色的,他的牙齿是白色的,但这些东西却与他的黄色眼睛、皱巴巴的黄色皮肤以及黑嘴唇形成了骇人的对比。
*鉴赏*
作者通过对怪物的详细的外貌描写,表达了作者对怪物的厌恶、惊恐之情。
24. She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.
窘迫之中她用双手捂住了脸。
【场景39】三个以-er结尾的名词短语:
1.a game changer 改变游戏规则的人或事物;对局势有重大影响的事物
The hit show has been a game changer for the network.
这个热门节目很大程度上改变了这家电视网络。
2. stress reliever 缓解压力的事物或活动
Taking a walk in the park every evening has become my favorite stress reliever.
每晚在公园散步已经成了我最喜欢的减压方式。
3.eye opener 令人大开眼界的经历、事物或启示
Traveling to a remote village was a real eye opener for me.
去偏远村庄旅行的经历对我来说真是一次大开眼界的体验.
关于说的动作嘟囔:whisper/mumble/grunt嘟哝着说/murmur
结结巴巴地说:stutter=stammer /falter/stumble over words
fumble helplessly for words=be helplessly at a loss for words支支吾吾说不出合适的话;
fumble for sth摸找东西 shaky,halting debate performance颤抖结巴的辩论表现
His voice faltered as he began his speech. He often trips(结巴) on "-ld".
As a child, he had a dreadful stammer. ‘W-w-what?’ he stammered.
With a catch in her throat, she mumbled(含混不清地说), "Thank you."
blurt out脱口而出; chatter v.喋喋不休;吱吱地叫
宣布:announce/declare 保证:promise/assure 建议:offer/propose/suggest;
喊叫:cry out喊叫/call喊叫/shout大喊/scream尖叫/yell大喊/exclaim惊叫(因高兴、愤怒、痛苦、惊讶等)
其他的说:add补充说道/retort反驳道/protest抗议道/sob哭诉道/comfort安慰道/frown皱眉说
【场景40】和“说”有关的描写
My heart raced and my palms grew sweaty as I fumbled for words.
仿写40:
1.我的心跳加速,手心也开始出汗,我语无伦次地寻找着词语。
1.A little spark kindles/fuels/ignite a great fire.星星之火可以燎原。
2.We watched the fire slowly kindled.我们看着大火慢慢烧起来了。
3.Suspicion kindled within her.
4.Her imagination was kindled/fueled/ignited by the exciting stories.
5.Pleasure kindled his face.欢乐使他容光焕发。
6. At first her eyes widened and kindled. Soon afterwards, tears blurred her eyes.
7.She felt a warmth of pride kindled in her.她感到一阵自豪感在心中燃起。
8.Her teacher kindled/fueled/ignited her interest in music.
9.A warmth of pride was kindled/fueled/ignited in her by her teacher.
10.Her reply fueled/kindled/ignited his anger and he erupted like a volcano.
她的回答激怒了他,他像火山般爆发了。
[场景41]和“kindle、fuel、ignite”有关的描写
"intrigue" 常表示“引起兴趣或好奇心”,而不是愤怒。
1.A beam of guiding light during my darkest moments, illuminating the path ahead, serves as a reminder that even in the depths of despair, there is always a way forward, a glimmer of possibility that can lead to brighter days.
2.His face beamed with pleasure他笑容满面。
3.A dazzling/beaming/radiant smile spread across her face.
她脸上闪过灿烂的笑容
4.He beamed a warm smile at her.
他对她热情地微笑。
5.The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.
[场景42]和“beam”有关的描写
【场景43】和“扑、坐、抱、蹲、跪”有关的动作
1. throw oneself on the bed 扑倒在床上
2.throw oneself on the floor 扑通坐在地上
3.The child threw himself into my arms.扑进我怀里→gather sb in one`s arms一把抱起某人
4.throw oneself on/at sb扑向某人→ Joseph threw himself on/at his father.
5.spring/rush at… 朝……扑去
6.pounce on… 朝…扑去
7. plump down on the sofa 一屁股坐在沙发上
8.give sb a bear hug给我一个热情的拥抱
9.Squatting in the garden, she planted seeds of hope, believing that one day they would bloom into a garden of dreams.蹲在花园里,她种下了希望的种子,相信有一天它们会绽放成梦想的花园。
10.Kneeling in front of the painting, she studied the brushstrokes, each one a testament to the artist's passion.跪在画前,她仔细研究着笔触,每一笔都是艺术家激情的见证。
1.• The dog barked loudly,its deep,resonant woof echoing through the empty streets.狗大声地吠叫,它那深沉而洪亮的汪汪声在空旷的街道上回荡。
2.• The cat meowed softly,a gentle,purring sound that seemed to vibrate in the air.猫轻轻地喵喵叫,那温柔的呼噜声似乎在空气中振动。
3.• The birds chirped cheerfully,their melodious tweets filling the morning air.鸟儿欢快地啁啾,它们悦耳的叫声充满了清晨的空气。
4.• The horse neighed loudly,its high-pitched whinny piercing the silence.马大声嘶鸣,它那高亢的嘶叫声刺破了寂静。
5.• The cow mooed softly,a low,rumbling sound that echoed across the fields.牛轻轻地哞哞叫,那低沉的轰鸣声在田野间回荡。
6. The sheep bleated pitifully,their high-pitched baas blending into a chorus.羊可怜地咩咩叫,它们高亢的叫声汇成了一片合唱。
7.The pig grunted contentedly,its low,guttural noises indicating satisfaction.猪满足地哼哼,它那低沉而粗哑的声音显示出它的惬意。
8.The duck quacked loudly,its sharp,nasal honk echoing through the pond.鸭子大声嘎嘎叫,它那尖锐而鼻音重的叫声在池塘中回荡。
【场景44】和“动物叫声”有关的描写
9.The rooster crowed at dawn,its loud,triumphant cock-a-doodle-doo announcing the start of a new day.
公鸡在黎明时分打鸣,它那响亮而得意的喔喔声宣告着新的一天的开始。
10.The lion roared fiercely,its powerful,thunderous growl shaking the ground.狮子凶猛地咆哮,它那强大而雷鸣般的吼声震动着大地。
11.The tiger growled menacingly,its deep,guttural snarl sending shivers down the spine.老虎凶狠地低吼,它那低沉而粗哑的咆哮让人不寒而栗。
12.The wolf howled mournfully,its long,eerie cry piercing the night.
狼哀伤地嗥叫,它那悠长而诡异的叫声刺破了夜空。
13.The monkey chattered excitedly,its rapid,high-pitched chatter filling the forest.猴子兴奋地吱吱喳喳,它那快速而高亢的叫声充满了森林。
14.The bats squeaked shrilly,their high-pitched squeals echoing through the cave.蝙蝠尖声尖叫,它们高亢的尖叫声在洞穴中回荡。
15.The snake hissed menacingly,its sharp,sibilant sound striking fear into the heart. 蛇凶狠地嘶嘶叫,它那尖锐的咝咝声让人感到恐惧。
16.The bees buzzed busily,their constant hum filling the garden.
蜜蜂忙碌地嗡嗡叫,它们持续的嗡嗡声充满了花园。
17.The cicadas chirped loudly,their rhythmic,high-pitched calls filling the summer air.蝉大声地鸣叫,它们有节奏的高亢叫声充满了夏日的空气。
18.The frogs croaked noisily,their deep,resonant croaks blending into a symphony.青蛙嘈杂地呱呱叫,它们深沉而洪亮的叫声汇成了一首交响乐。
19.The pigeon cooed softly,its gentle,rhythmic cooing creating a soothing sound. 鸽子轻轻地咕咕叫,它那温柔而有节奏的咕咕声营造出一种舒缓的声音。
20.The butterfly fluttered by,its delicate wings making a soft,rustling sound.蝴蝶飞过,它那纤细的翅膀发出轻柔的沙沙声。
21.The fish splashed noisily,its fins creating a rhythmic,splashing sound in the water. 鱼嘈杂地拍打水面,它的鳍在水中发出有节奏的溅水声。
22.The pigeon cooed mournfully,its soft,melancholic cooing echoing through the empty courtyard.
鸽子哀伤地咕咕叫,它那柔和而忧郁的咕咕声在空旷的庭院中回荡。
23.The owl hooted softly,its deep,resonant hoots echoing through the dark forest.猫头鹰轻轻地咕咕叫,它那深沉而洪亮的叫声在黑暗的森林中回荡。
第一组 狗狗
1.Then she would pop out from under the shopping trolley and make people jump.
然后,她(狗狗)从超市小推车里冒出头来,吓得人们一跳。
2..Loulou jumped out straight into a puddle.Rain was soaking through her fur and the wind was icy. She had to walk along a horrible, muddy track with the other dogs.露露直接跳到一个水坑。雨淋得她浑身湿透了,风很冷。她不得不和其他狗沿着一条可怕的泥泞的小路走。
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