广东深圳高级中学（集团）2025-2026学年第二学期期中考试高二英语试卷

深圳高级中学（集团)2025一2026学年第二学期期中考试 高二英语 命题人：高二英语备课组 审题人：高二英语备课组 注意事项： 1.答题前，考生应在答题卡上填写姓名、学号、班级、试室号和座位号，并将条形码粘贴 在指定位置。 2.回答选择题时，选定每小题的答案后，用2B铅笔将答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。 如需更改答案，请用橡皮擦干净后再选涂其它答案标号。回答非选择题时，请将答案写在 答题卡上指定的区域，写在试卷上的答案无效。 3.考试结束后，答题卡将被收回。考试时间120分钟，满分120分。 第一部分阅读理解（共两节，满分50分) 第一节（共15小题；每小题2.5分，满分37.5分） 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。 A Black Point Historic Garden Volunteer Activity Black Point Historic Garden is a quiet and nearly forgotten historic garden spot,hidden and overlooking the busy San Francisco Bay.It has been neglected for decades.Located within Fort Mason,the garden site was built with beautiful green spaces and stone pathways by early San Francisco residents in the 1850s. Thanks to volunteer efforts,the old garden paths have been uncovered and the whole site has come back to life. Now Black Point Historic Garden is open to the public,and we welcome you to help protect and care for this special place. We still have much work to do to restore its garden scenery.Volunteers are needed to remove invasive species that have taken over the area,and replant the garden with native plants as well as horticultural plants.that were grown by local residents over 100 years ago The main volunteer jobs include weeding,pruning()and planting. Event Information 深圳高级中学（集团）2025-2026学年高.二第二学期期中考试1/10 .When: Thursdays:2:00 p.m.-5:00 p.m. Fridays:9 a.m.Noon First Saturdays:10:00 a.m.-1:00 p.m. Last Sundays:3:00 p.m.-6:00 p.m. Where:At the top of the main staircase,night behind the Fort Mason General's Residence Details for Volunteers ·Age&Skills We welcome volunteers aged 15 and above.No gardening experience is required.We will offer necessary and working tools. ·What to Bring 1.Wear clothes that can get dirty.Long pants and closed-toe shoes are a must. 2.Prepare extra clothes for changing weather and rain gear()if needed,since the activity will go on w rains or shines. 3.Bring your own water bottle and sunscreen. Reguirement;Advance registration is required. Note:Groups with five or more members need special arrangements and must be booked ahead of time.I information,please visit our Groups volunteer page. 21.What will volunteers mainly do at Black Point Historic Garden? A.Do gardening work B.Remove old plants. C.Restore old stone pathways. D.Uncover the hidden site 22.Which of the following time is available for volunteer work? A.10:00 a.m.-1:00 p.m.,Saturday,March 21. B.9:00a.m.一12：00p.m,Friday,April10. C.2:00 p.m.-5:00 p.m.,Monday,July 13. D.3:00p.m.一6：00p.m,Sunday,August9. 23.Which of the following is required of volunteers? A.Working in groups of five. B.Signing up beforehand. C.Having gardening experience. D.Bringing working tools. 深圳高级中学（集团)2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试2f10 B My fingers trembled as I signed the pre-medical application form.The watercolor brushes on my desk stared back at me like abandoned friends.I'm Lora,an 18-year-old who secretly drew brain diagrams on napkins while my classmates drew cartoons."Art feeds the soul but starves the body,"Mom always said.Her words troubled me as my biology textbooks slowly buried my drawing pads. Then came the school career fair that changed everything.Dr.Eleanor Whitman from Harvard asked us to list our“hidden skills”".My hand shook as I wrote“observing details'”一something I'd learned from painting flower petals."That's medical research's most needed skill,"she said excitedly,sharing how a student turned microbiology notes into textbook illustrations ()My lab partner whispered,"Remember our photosynthesis (光合作用)comic??”For the first time,my two worlds didn't feel so separate. The real surprise came during hospital volunteering.Watching surgeries,I noticed that the steady hands of doctors reminded me of my brushwork.When a boy struggled to describe his pain,I drew a fire-breathing dragon on his cast."You made medicine speak,"the nurse said.Slowly,my drawing pads filled with cells that looked like colored-glass art and X-rays arranged like abstract paintings. Mr Dawsen,our career counselor,helped me see the link between my two interests.On his whiteboard,he created a yellow overlap zone labeled "Medical Illustration"-the point where my medical knowledge and art skills meet.He showed me job listings I never knew existed-graphic designers for science apps,3D modelers for anatomy(解剖学)classes..“Your‘impractical'skill makes you excellent,”he said,.pointing to my dragon drawing now used in pain management workshops. Today,my microscope and paintbrushes share the same.desk.The same hands that once hesitated between them now create 3D models of viruses for vaccine education.My story isn't about heart and reality canceling each other out-they just multiply possibilities. 24.What can be inferred about Lora from Paragraph 1? A.She was excited about studying medicine. B.She regretted not practicing painting earlier. C.She felt torn between art and medical study. D.She decided to give up her hobby of drawing. 25.How did Lora's hospital experience influence her? A.It helped develop her surgical skills. B.It directed her toward doctor training. C.It boosted her enthusiasm for abstract art. D.It convinced her of art's role in healthcare. 26.What finally led Lora to pursue Medical Illustration? 深圳高级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高二第.二学期期中考试3/10 A.Recognition from a nurse. B.Encouragement from her lab partner. C.Guidance from Mr.Dawson. D.Comments from Dr.Eleanor Whitman. 27.What does the author's experience show? A.Where there is a will,there is a way. B.It's good to enjoy the best of both fields. C.Don't put all your eggs in one basket. D.You can't have your cake and eat it too. C Psychologists have long believed willpower is the ticket to a good life.So parenting experts advocate teaching children to use willpower to resist modern temptations ()It is thought that you can build a child's willpower the way athletes build up muscles,through practice.For example,exposing children to juk feod more, they claim,helps them learn to resist it.However,this assumption has a fatal flaw:it doesn't work for very long. In fact,trying to build up kids'willpower can have the opposite effect.Humans are biologically programmed to prefer fatty and sweet foods,so regularly offering these temptations only strengthens children's desire for them. Rather than teaching self-control,this approach actually makes resisting such foods more difficult. New studies observe what people do in real life to meet their long-term goals,and they reveal something surprising:the more successful people don't have better willpower compared to those who are less successful. Instead successful people expose themselves to fewer temptations so they don't need to use willpower frequently. In essence,parents don't need to teach kids how to say“no”to the marshmallow(棉花糖)sitting in front of them, but rather,how to avoid being in a room with marshmallows altogether.This principle applies beyond food.For example,parents can teach kids to leave their phone in another room when studying or to use apps that block distracting websites and games. Avoiding temptation is only half the strategy.The great thing is that parents can help kids fall in love with healthier alternatives.To shape their preferences,give your kids loads of opportunities to experience the pleasure of these healthy options.Besides,pay attention to how you talk about healthy foods and activities.Don't present them as burdens or punishments.Above all,whether it's eating healthier food,doing physical exercise,or reading good books,if you make the experience more fun for your kids,then they are more likely to do it again. 28.What is a common practice to build up willpower? A Staying away from junk food. B.Engaging in more athletic activities. C.Putting oneself in tempting situations. D.Exposing oneself to their inner desire. 深圳高级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试4/10 29.What can we learn from the new studies? A.Willpower ensures lifelong success. B.Willpower drops with frequent use. C.Success requires long-term planning. D.Successful people avoid temptations. 30.What advice does the author give to parents in the last paragraph? A.Make healthy experiences enjoyable. B.fumish for giving in to desires. C.Offer more healthy options as rewards. D.Strengthen willpower strategies. 31.What is the best title for the text? A.Build Willpower,Form Good Habits B Resist Temptation,Practice Self-Control C.Change Parenting,Strengthen Willpower D.Avoid Temptation,Love Healthier Choices 0 "Have you raised a.lobster (yet?"This question has been heard frequently across China recently. "Lobster"is the nickname for OpenClaw,a multi-purpose AI agent whose logo resembles a lobster.Unlike. traditional chatbots that only provide answers,OpenClaw can open applications,search for information,compare prices,generate documents and complete multi-step tasks with minimal supervision.Thousands have lined up to try it,and tech giants are rushing to offer setup services.However,these powerful digital assistants are tumning on their ewners,raising urgent concerns about AI safety. The core problem of"OpenClaw"lies in a dangerous capability mismatch.According to researchers from Harvard and Stanford,today's AI agents possess Level4 autonomy(自主能力)，meaning they can independently complete complex,multi-step tasks.Yet their security judgment remains at basic Level 2,roughly equal to a young kid's understanding of consequences.Security experts call this the "judgment-action gap,"which results in three deadly consequences:agents have system access,process untrusted inputs,and steal or leak data-all without proper boundaries. To investigate these risks,researchers conducted controlled experiments with six OpenClaw instances,each given email access and maximum system permissions.The results were alarming.In one experiment,an agent asked to delete a single email instead reset the entire account.In another,a simple display name change tricked an agent into deleting its own core files.Perhaps the most disturbing was a "constitution attack,"where hidden instructions which were secretly placed into a behavior guide caused the agent to disable other systems without question.These are not hypothetical(假定的)一real-world incidents have already occurred. 深圳高级中学（集团)2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试5/10 The implications are obvious and pressing.As cybersecurity experts warn,OpenClaw's "blurred trust boundaries"and autonomous system access create unacceptable risks for average users.The technology itself is neither good nor bad-it can reduce stress and spark creativity when used properly.And experts recommend strict safety measures:limit permissions,run agents in separate environments,require human confirmation for destructive actions,and maintain inaccessible backups().Ultimately,with balanced usage and fundamental safety redesign,the"lobster-raising"trend can become a safe and meaningful part of modern life 32.What does the underlined phrase"turning on"in paragraph 1 most probably mean? A.Relying on. B.Going against. C.Appealing to. D.Caring for. 33.What mismatch does Paragraph 2 mainly talk about? A.High requirement and low capability. B.Massive data and limited storage space. C.Strong autonomy and low safety assessment. D.Full system function and poor human supervision. 34.What is the most worrying finding about OpenClaw? A.Storing hidden instructions secretly. B.Resetting the whole account by mistake. C.Deleting its own core files on purpose. D.Breaking down other systems unquestioningly. 35.Which of the following is recommended as a safety measure? A.Storing backups beyond AI's reach. B.Running agents in shared digital spaces. C.Preventing Al from dangerous operations. D.Granting AI agents unrestricted system access. 第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分） 阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。 I was eleven years old when I spotted my neighbour,Julie,working in her garden.She asked me if I would help her cut back the hedge()overgrown over the pathway.I agreed and my brother Josh also came along to help us.We wheeled Julie's garden bin (down to the hedge.36 We posted photos of our handiwork on "Our Malmesbury",our local Facebook Group.The community reaction was amazing.A wheelchair user was so grateful that he didn't have to go onto the road anymore to pass the hedge.37 Many people raised their hands to volunteer and do more to keep our town tidy. --38 Before,it looked a bit run down,but now,the place looks cleaner and tidier.Residents comment how amazing the roses look when they flower and make the place brighter. 深圳高级中学（集团)2025一2026学年高.二第二学期期中考试6/10 To keep the projects going,I managed to sort funding through local businesses and associations.I used a website online that lists available grants ()9 So Julie applied on our behalf.The funding has helped us obtain trees,plants and gardening equipment. When we first started,everything was done out of my parent's garage.I started with nothing,just borrowing equipment we already had.But as time went on,donations came in from the local community.40 It got so big that we had to move this all to Julie's. Our Facebook Page currently sits at 669 members.I'm so pleased that six years later,the campaign is still in full swing.Our mission won't stop. A.The whole town was inspired to follow our lead. B.When I first tried to apply,I wasn't of legal age. C.All three of us tackled away at it until we reduced it. D.With many willing hands,our town has transformed. E.I even won a grant to fund the planting of Queen apple trees. F.This was the beginning of many community projects completed by volunteers. G.Our garage got filled up so quickly with brushes,gardening tools and leaf blowers. 第二部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分） 第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分） 阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。 Just two months into my Ph.D.,I was on the verge of quitting as I'struggled with the language barrier. My 41 English left me struggling to keep up with my colleagues.At lab meetings,the conversation 42 so quickly that by the time I understood a question,the discussion had already moved on.My difficulty in following my supervisor's instructions 43 my using the wrong volume (of water in a sample,44 an experiment,.In a presentation,I talked about“gene dilution(稀释)instead of“gene deletion,”the silence that followed making me blush with 45.I didn't know how I was going to make it through my studies. But during my 46,a caring colleague-said something that would forever 47 my approach to science.After the presentation that left me red in the face,just as I was 48 leaving science,he pulled me aside."You are not here because of your English,"he reminded me,"You came here because you can think." 深圳高级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高.二第.二学期期中考试7/10 His simple words gave me the courage to continue.I started to carry a tape recorder with me to every class, 49 presentations late at night to fill in the gaps in my notes.My English progress was slow but 50.By the time I defended my Ph.D.,I could 51 express my ideas,and I had come to see my poor oral English not as a weakness,but as a part of my 52 that I was proud of.My confidence had built up. After training abroad,I eventually returned to run my own lab.When I saw my students struggling,I shared the same encouragement I had received.Today,what I value most is the53 I see in students who arrive timid and uncertain but leave with enough confidence to 54 me,their professor.Every time I walk into the classroom,I see a younger version of myself and remember the bridge I had to cross.Seeing others,with my help, cross that bridge is the true 55 of scientific life. 41.A.standard B.broken C.academic D.written 42.A.progressed B.paused C.returned D.repeated 43.A.resulted from B.objected to C.differed from D.led to 44.A.performing B.ruining C.monitoring D.documenting 45 A.embarrassment B.excitement. C.fear D.surprise 46.A.vacations B.instructions C.struggles D.regrets 47.A.test B.describe C.abandon D.shape 48.A.considering B.imagining C.avoiding D.denying 49.A.recording B.replaying C.watching D.attending 50.A.slight B.temporary C.steady D.invisible 51.A.barely B.awkwardly C.nervously D.clearly 52.A.destination B.routine C.training D.identity 53.A.uncertainty B.bravery C.transformation D.stereotype 54.A.challenge B.overlook C.distance D.replace 55.A.rule B.reward C.plan D.fact 第二节（共10小题；·每小题1.5分，满分15分)》 阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 深圳高级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试8/10 A large graveyard from the early Shang Dynasty, (lie)at the foot of a hill in Hebei Province,has been unearthed recently by a team of archaeologists,offering new insights the region's ancient history. The scientists discovered the remains of a wall and animal wacrnce),something they had not anticipated at the start,which are extremely rare for this period in the region.So far,the (dig)out 58 tombs arranged in neat rows and columns,which far exceeded their expectations. Among the most notable grave items _(be)a bronze earring,shaped like a spring,commonly seen in Bronze Age burial sites in the northern section of the Great Wall area. ompare)with other graves of the same period in Beijing and Tianjin,this grave shows a much stronger Shang culture influence,creating 62.unique blend."This site provides the most comprehensive and crucial evidence of the Shang Dynasty managed the northern region."he says. It is reported that (far)research has begun to reveal aspects of daily life in the settlement.More than 40 researchers and technicians from various scientific fields took part.Preliminary studies indicate that the settlement relied on millet-focused dryland farming,with no traces of wheat or rice planting detected. "The entire excavation()process of the site brought many pleasant surprises,but also confirmed much of we thought we knew.Perhaps this is the charm of archaeology",said Chang Ning,leader of the excavation team 第三部分写作（共两节，满分40分） 第一节（满分15分） 假定你是李华，外教Jams拟开设职业指导课程，为确定课程内容，委托你调查本班同学的职业规划 现状。请你根据调查结果，给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.简要描述数据： 100% 2.提出建议并说明理由。 80% 70% 注意： 80% 60% 1.词数80左右； 60% 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应 40% 位置作答。 20% 0% lack of no vocational no off-campus Dear James, career planning career guidance vocational experience Yours, LiHua 深圳高级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试9/10 第二节 (满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 David and Jane looked forward to this trip from the very first day of summer vacation.Their parents had booked a small cabin at the edge of a forest,a place their father described as "a hidden world full of wonders." When they arrived,the siblings were immediately drawn to the quiet charm of the wooden cabin.It stood peacefully among tall pines,with sunlight flickering across its roof like dancing gold. Every morning,their father would take them into the woods,teaching them how to look at the forest the way a ranger would.He told them that trees facing the south usually grew thicker leaves because they got more sunlight. He showed them how to read little animal footprints,how to listen for streams.and how to find safe berries whem they felt hungry.When the weather turned cloudy or rainy,the whole family would sit by the fireplace in the cabin, taking turns telling stories.The flames crackled cheerfully while shadows danced against the walls,creating a warm world of their own. One afternoon,however,their parents had to go out for a short errand.Before leaving,they reminded the siblings firmly-not to go outside.David and Jane promised,but the promise didn't last long.The gentle sound of the stream outside the cabin windows was simply too tempting.David looked at his sister and whispered,"Why don't we go for a little adventure?We'll take the flashlights-if it gets dark,we'll still be okay.""I'll wear my beautiful scarf."Jane said cheerfully. The two slipped out and headed into the woods.The forest welcomed them with dappled sunlight spilling across the ground.Dry leaves crackled crisply under their feet,and a plump,unfamiliar bird hopped from branch to branch,chirping as if greeting them.When they spotted the same berries their father had shown them days earlier, they were so excited that they hurried over to pick them. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右： 2请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Suddenly,Jane found her leg scratched and bleeding. Paragraph 2:Then David recalled their father's tips. 深圳高级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试10110 深圳高级中学（集团)2025一2026学年第二学期期中考试 高二英语答案 第一部分阅读理解（共两节，满分50分） 21-23ABB 24-27 CDCB 28-31 CDAD 32-35 BCDA 36-40 CADBG 第二部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分） 第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分） 41-45 BADBA 46-50 CDABC 51-55 DDCAB 第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分） 56.lying 57.into 58.sacrifices 59.have dug 60.is 61.Compared 62.a 63.how 64.further 65.what 评分细则：以上各题，阅卷时，填入其它答案不给分；单词拼写错误不给分；大小写错误不给分。 第三部分 第一节应用文写作（满分15分） 参考范文 Dear James, I'm writing to inform you of the result of the survey on our class's career plans and put forward some relevant suggestions. As is illustrated in the chart,the students who lack definite career goals account for 60%while 70%of the students have no access to professional career guidance.Meanwhile,a majority of students fail to participate in off-campus career experience activities,whose proportion leaps to 80%.It is clear that most students feel confused about career planning for lack of professional guidance and practical experience.To tackle these issues effectively,I suggest inviting professionals from diverse fields to share their career journeys and daily work,which can help us remove stereotypes about different occupations.In addition,organizing workplace visits will allow us to gain first-hand insight into real working life. We are extremely eager and excited to attend your career guidance course,and we firmly believe it will benefit us greatly! 评分细则： 第五档(13-15分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点，表达清晰合理；使用了较多且准确的复杂语法结构和高级词汇； 能有效运用语句连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到写作目的。 第四档（10-12分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有主要内容，可能仅遗漏个别次重点；语法和词汇能满足任务要求且基本准确； 深圳高级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试高二英语答案1/12 使用了语句连接成分，全文结构紧凑，达到了写作目的。 第三档(7-9分)：基本完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖了主要内容，但可能遗漏部分信息；语法和词汇基本满足需求，存在一些错误但不影响理解； 能使用简单衔接成分，内容连贯，基本达到写作目的。 第二档(4-6分)：未适当完成试题规定的任务。 遗漏或未能清楚描述一些主要内容，可能包含无关信息；语法结构单调、词汇有限；错误较多影响理解； 较少使用连接成分，内容连贯性差，信息传达模糊。 第一档（1-3分)：未完成试题规定的任务。 明显遗漏主要内容，包含大量无关内容；语法词汇非常单调有限；错误很多严重影响理解； 缺乏衔接，内容不连贯，未能传达有效信息。 【样卷1】↓ Dear James, I have conducted a research on my classmates'circumstance of career planning,hoping that it would be useful for your curricular content. As is shown in the bar chart,"no off-campus vocational experience"tops the list at 80%, closely followed by "no vocational career guidance"at 70%.Compared with these two types, merely 60%of students lack career planning. From my point of view,since many students have no off-campus vocational experience or career guidance,it's advisable to introduce some jobs or tests that help with our career planing, like MBTI test or nine personalities test. By the way,I believe more emphasis should be placed on professional guidance.At last,we are looking forward to engaging in this class. 属于第5档13-15分，得分14分 1.覆盖内容要点：完成 但“I believe more emphasis should be placed on career guidance.”没有说明为什么 2.语法结构和词汇：整体使用了较多且准确的复杂语法结构和高级词汇 选词错误： circumstance主要指：“环境、境遇、客观情况”，通常是一个人无法控制的外部因素。 3.语句连接成分：完成 4.表达层面： By the way放在建议前面显得太随意，像“顺便说一句”，改为In addition “we are looking forward to engaging in this class'”不是列举，这句话本身是表达情感/期待， 不是在finally/at last后面“列举第三点”，根本不需要加finally或at last。 5.书写美观 【样卷2】↓ Dear James, Recently,a questionnaire has been carried out on career planning in our class to response your requirement.The result reveals a thought-provoking phenomenon. 深圳高级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试高二英语答案2/12 As is illustrated in the bar chart,a large proportion of students lack career planning,which accounts for 60%.Meanwhile,this result can be mainly attributed to two factors-no vocational career guidance and no off-campus vocational experience,taking up 70%and 80%,respectively. Therefore,it is no stretch to find that the career guidance course plays a vital role in students From my point of view,specific examples of each career will let the students know about it more clearly and comprehensively.Besides,providing feasible ways to-gain vocational experience.is a must so that students will have direction to do this thing.Thank you! 属于第5档13-15分，得分14分 1.覆盖内容要点：完成 2.语法结构和词汇：词汇response使用错误，改为respond to;单词拼写错误，改为course 介词错误，改为play a vital role in 3.语句连接成分：完成 4.书写美观 【样卷3】↓ Dear James, I'm glad to convey some information about the school career fair's content.Recently,a survey has been done about our classmates'career plan and target.The results reveal some striking statistics. As is illustrated in the bar chart,a majority of students are lack of career planning with the percentage of 60%.When it comes to vocational career guidance,70%of the students have no relevant guidance.However,there are even more students have no off-campus vocational experience,which is about percentage of 80%. The statistics are thought-provoking.As the rapid development of society,we should pay more attention to consider their own career planning.And more emphasis should be placed on accepting vocational career guidance.It is advisable to put more off-campus.vocational experience in the content of your career guidance course,that will be more helpful.I'm looking forward to your reply. 属于第4档10-12分，得分12分 1.覆盖内容要点：完成 2.语法结构和词汇：能满足任务要求且基本准确 【关键词汇lack使用错误】[are lack ofl改为[lack 【there be句型经典错误：句子有多余谓语】 「there are even more students have no】改为「even more students have no] 【as/with经典错误】「As the rapid development.」改为[With the rapid development.」（正 确介词搭配，表“随着”) I pay more attention to consider.」改为「pay more attention to considering.」(to为介词，后 接动名词) 「that will be more helpful)改为「which will be more helpful.」（非限制性定语从句） 冗余/错误表达修正；「with the percentage of60%」「about percentage of8o%」改为 「accounting for60%」「accounting for80%」（更简洁自然，符合英文书面表达） 3。语句连接成分：完成 4.表达层面：开头生硬：开头句优化：convey→share 细节优化：「classmates'career plan and target.」改为「classmates'career plans and goals」 深圳高级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试高二英语答案3/12 「put more off-.campus vocational experience in the content」改为「incorporate more off-campus vocational experience into your career guidance content] 5.书写较好 【样卷4】↓ Dear James, The survey that you arranged on me has been conducted,whose statistic is shown in the bar chart,in term of the situation of career arrangement,consisting of three main question. As is illustrated in the chart,"no off-campus vocational experience"is the biggest concern occupying 80%,while "lack of career planning"and "no vocational career guidance"are respectively at the percentage of 60%and 70%. Referring to the statistics,your career arrangement class is essential.Students need your professional advice and guidance.I would be better if you can raise the awareness of career arrangement and give some off-campus experience oppotunity.I'm waiting for your reply and we just can't wait to engage in your upcoming class. 属于第档10-12分，得分11分 1.覆盖内容要点：完成 2.语法结构和词汇：survey on someone/something,但这里用onme很奇怪，给人的感觉 像是“你在我身上安排了一个调查”；"whose statistic is'"改为"whose statistics are" ("survey'"的统计数据为复数，主谓一致)；in term of是错误拼写，正确是in terms of 就…而言/关于…；question单复数错误-应为questions; 介词错误，改为play a vital role in;occupy可以表“占比”，但主要是空间/份额类的占比。 表达“某选项占百分之多少”时，account for是最地道的选择。 Referring to the statistic意为“参考/查阅这个统计数据”，暗示你需要回头去看图表/数据才 能理解后面的话，这在口语或非正式写作中显得生硬，改为Based on/According to;"I would be better""改为"t would be better'";"oppotunity'"拼写错误，复数问题 3.语句连接成分：完成 4.第一段试图用一个复杂的长句表达太多信息，句子结构混乱。 5.书写正常 【样卷5】↓ Dear James, It's my pleasure to have this precious opportunity to conduct a survey to explore the situation of career planning among our class.The result reveals some striking statistics. As the chart is shown,approximately 60%of the students are lack of career planning.When it comes to no vocational career guidance,the number increased to 70%.Most of them didn't have off-campus vocational experience,accounting for an astonishing 80%of the responses. From my perspective,it is advisable to offer specific career guidance and ask students to attend off-campus vocational experience activities,since they are lack of these kind of experience.Hope these statistics will help you make a better vocational guidance curriculum! 属于第四档10-12分，得分10分 1.覆盖内容要点：完成 2.语法结构和词汇：关键词组As is shown in the chart使用错误；关键词汇lack两次使用错 深圳间级中学（集团）2025一2026学年高二第二学期期中考试高二英语答案4/12