内容正文:
Introduce yourself
Starter: Writing
写作步骤
1.审好题
2.列提纲(三段式)
3.写好句
4.成篇章
进入初中的第一天,英语老师让同学们在英语课堂上用英语做一个自我介绍,写一篇自我介绍的发言稿。
Step 1: 审好题
1.审人称:人称以第 人称为主
2.审体裁:__________
3.审时态:时态以_________________为主
一
一般现在时
写作任务
应用文
自我介绍
1. 基本信息:
年龄、姓名等 2. 爱好和性格 3. 感受和新学期的展望
写作任务
Greeting (问候)
Name (姓名)
Age(年龄)
Birthday
Hobbies
Wishes [wɪʃ]
Feelings
How to introduce ourselves?
写作任务
Step 2: 列提纲(三段式)
段落布局
Beginning
Body
Ending
开头:打招呼并引出话题
正文:详细介绍自己
结尾:总结感受和表达愿望
问候并介绍姓名
引出自我介绍的主题
年龄、籍贯和兴趣爱好
外貌特征及性格特点等
用积极的语言表达对新学期的展望并总结
写作任务
Step 3: 写好句→词句积累
1.名字__________ 2.来自__________ 3....岁__________ 4.生日__________ 5.一月__________ 6.二月__________
7.三月__________ 8.四月__________ 9.五月__________ 10.六月__________ 11.七月__________ 12.八月__________ 13.九月__________ 14.十月__________ 15.十一月__________
16.十二月__________
个人信息:
name
be\come from
years old
birthday
January
February
March
April
May
June
July
August
September
October
November
December
表达生日:in +月份(首字母大写)
写作任务
1.帅气的__________ 2. 美丽的__________ 3. 高的__________
4.矮的__________ 5.壮的__________ 6.可爱的__________
外貌特征:
1.外向的__________ 2.害羞的__________ 3.乐于助人的__________
4.勇敢的__________ 5.努力的__________ 6.友好的__________
short
beautiful
strong
tall
cute
handsome
性格品质:
outgoing
shy
helpful
hard-working
brave
friendly\kind
ice
表达外貌和性格:be + adj.
写作任务
1.爱好_______________ 2. 喜欢做某事__________
3.最喜欢...__________ 4.很喜爱...__________
5.擅长...__________ 6.看书__________
7.踢足球__________ 8.打篮球__________
9.弹钢琴__________ 10. 听音乐__________
11.看电视__________ 12.画画__________
13.旅游__________
hobby--复数 hobbies
love...best
be good at...
play football
play the piano
watch TV
travel
like\love\enjoy doing sth
like ...very much
read books
play basketball
listen to music
draw
兴趣爱好:
Beginning
打招呼并给出姓名(引出话题)
1.大家好,我是Mike.
—————————————————————————————
Hello, everyone. My name is Mike/I am Mike.
Step 3: 写好句
关键词:
I am = My name is
→注意be动词的正确使用
2.今天是我在初中的第一天。
_____________________________________________________
关键词:
in junior high
the first day
注意这里的“我”应为形代
Today is my first day in junior high.
→表示地点的短语可放在句末
3.让我介绍我自己给你们。
_____________________________________________________
关键词:
let sb. do sth.
introduce sb. to sb.
Let me introduce myself to you.
4.我是12岁并且我的生日在七月。
_____________________________________________________
5.我来自四川成都。
_____________________________________________________
I come from Chengdu Sichuan. / I am from Chengdu Sichuan.
关键词:
课文原句仿写:
in July.
可适当使用and将句子并列
I’m thirteen years old. My birthday is in May.
Body
详细介绍自己(个人信息、外貌品质、兴趣爱好等)(注意逻辑顺序)
I’m twelve years old and my birthday is in July.
twelve
英语中介绍地点通常是小地点在前,大地点在后(首字母大写)
come from / be from
→注意be动词的正确使用
6.我个子很高,有一头长发。
_____________________________________________________
7.我是一个友好的男孩。
_____________________________________________________
I’m tall and have long hair.
关键词:
描述身高、外貌和性格→be + adj.
tall, short, fat, thin
注意中英文表达的差别:在这里“头”这个量词无需翻译。
常见的描述性格的词语:kind 善良的
have long hair
→short hair, curly hair
关键词:
I am a nice boy.
nice friendly
helpful 乐于助人的
8.我喜欢帮助人们。
_____________________________________________________
关键词:
like/love/enjoy
+ doing
help
I like helping people.
I am a nice boy. I like helping people.
Tips
第8句是第7句的延伸,进一步体现我友好的性格。合理扩展句子(举例子或补充细节)是写作“凑字数”的技巧之一,也可以让作文更连贯。
nice
I like helping people
9.我很喜欢运动。
_____________________________________________________
10.我喜欢跑步、踢足球和游泳。
_____________________________________________________
I love sports very much.
关键词:
like/love...very much
like/love doing sth.
本句还需注意三个并列动词的使用。
I like running, playing football and swimming.
关键词:
两句都有“喜欢”,可以同义词替换,减少重复。
Tips
第9.10句为课文原句。读背课文,积累好词好句是提高我们写作水平的重要方法。
Ending
总结感受和表达愿望
11.我现在有点紧张,但是我很开心遇到你们。
____________________________________________
12.我想和你们所有人交朋友!
_____________________________________________________
I am a bit nervous now, but I am also happy to meet you.
I want to make friends with you all!
课文原句
也可以进行适当的改编:
new teachers and classmates
课文原句
写作步骤
请勿乱涂乱画!保持卷面整洁!
成篇章
Hello, everyone. My name is Mike. Today is my first day in junior high school. Let me introduce myself to you.
I am twelve years old and my birthday is in July. I come from Chengdu Sichuan. I am tall and have long hair. I am a nice boy. I like helping people. I love sports very much. I like running, playing football and swimming.
I am a bit nervous now, but I’m also happy to meet you. I want to make friends with you all! Thank you!
基础版:
要求:表达简介,语法准确,要点齐全。
成篇章
Hello, everyone. My name is Mike. Today is my first day in junior high school. I am glad to introduce myself to you.
I am twelve years old and my birthday is in July. I come from Chengdu Sichuan. I am tall and have long hair. I am a nice boy. I like helping people. I have many hobbies. But I love sports best. I like running, playing football and swimming. Also, I like playing football with my good friends.
I am a bit nervous now, but I’m also happy to meet new teachers and classmates. I want to make friends with you all! And I am going to join a football club. It’ll be a lot fun! Thank you!
进阶版:
要求:多加利用课本中的句子,为文章补充更多的细节,但也要保证准确性。
检查
评价标准 Yes No
1.格式、时态是否正确
2.主谓是否一致
3.要点是否齐全
4.人称是否正确
5.语序是否有问题
6.语言是否符合习惯
7.句子结构是否完整
8.固定短语是否恰当
9.拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数是否准确等
Hello everyone. My name is .
I’m ______________years old.My birthday is in____________.
l like .
I’m ___________________________________.
I want to __________________.To _________, I’m going to......
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