2026届高考英语读后续写微技巧“五感”融入写作 课件

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦“感官描写在写作中的应用”专题，依据高考评价体系梳理了读后续写、应用文等题型中视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉的考查要求，通过2021全国I卷等真题实例分析，明确感官描写在写作评分中的核心权重，归纳出“真题识别+词汇积累+句式运用”的备考路径。 课件亮点在于“真题引路+多感官融合训练”，如以2025全国I卷续写“Toby wagging tail”为例解析视觉描写技巧，结合“giggle”“thunder”等拟声词强化听觉表达，培养学生语言能力和思维品质。特设“五感词汇库”和“范文翻译对比”，帮助学生掌握感官描写融入写作的得分技巧，教师可据此开展针对性训练，提升复习效率。

Sensory Descriptions in the Writing Teaching Objectives: ●1. learn to use our senses(感官) to describe the surroundings ●2. learn to weave(把......融入) the senses into writing How many senses do we have? Five What are the Five Senses? hearing听觉 smell嗅觉 taste味觉 sight/vision视觉 touch(触觉) （physical feeling and emotional sensation） Identify the sensory descriptions 1. (2021全国I卷读后续写）Soon, the delicious smell of breakfast filled the kitchen. 2.（2025全国I卷读后续写）Toby rushed out, wagging his tail and jumping up happily! 3.（2026深圳一模应用文）This lamp is designed as a wild goose with a fish in its mouth. 4. (2026汕头一模读后续写）The dining room was soon filled with laughter and warmth again, perfectly keeping the festive evening alive despite Dad’s absence. 5.（2026潮阳中英文周考（上进3月联考卷）应用文）I took a deep breath and tasted the sweetness of friendship in the cool wind. 6.（2026汕头二模读后续写）Excitement filled his heart as he gained a vital clue. vision vision hearing/... taste/... touch (emotional sensation) smell （2026汕头二模续写范文一） What kind of sensory description is the underlined part? Ms. Brown frowned, saying many elderly people were not used to sleeping with socks on. Kenneth froze, the socks still in his hands. He realized that his design, although effective, was far from perfect. Ms. Brown suggested that something smaller or less noticeable would be a better option. Kenneth listened carefully, knowing that in order to make the device widely accepted, it had to be something elderly people would feel comfortable wearing without disrupting their routine. He understood that a solution had to fit naturally into their everyday lives—technology should serve people, not force them to change. While reflecting on Ms. Brown's suggestions, Kenneth suddenly noticed a button. What if he could design a button-sized device that could be attached to people's clothing and still function just as effectively? Inspired by this idea, Kenneth worked tirelessly. After months of testing, the new version of the invention was born, and it was soon welcomed by both elderly residents and caregivers. Though the button-sized device brought Kenneth into the spotlight, he never forgot why he started. He came to understand that the success of his invention lay in his genuine care for the elderly and their caregivers. scene(场景画面) visual description visual description The high __________ are covered with ______, casting a _________(dazzle) light. mountains snow dazzling dazzle/ˈdæzl/ vt. 使目眩耀眼；使惊艳 Description of sound let’s listen to the sounds Gentle ___________ of leaves in the wind. The sound of _______ was crashing against the shore and the cries of ___________. waves sea birds rustling rustle/ˈrʌsl/ vi. 沙沙作响 Build up more useful words The stream giggled over polished stones. 小溪在光洁的石头上咯咯流淌（潺潺流水） The train thundered past. 火车轰隆隆地驶过 The willows sighed as the breeze blew through the leaves. 微风吹过柳树叶子时，柳树叹息起来 The pitter-patter of rain drops made up the symphony. 噼里啪啦（淅淅沥沥）的雨点组成了交响乐。 giggle 发出咯咯声；咯咯笑 thunder 轰隆隆作响 sigh 叹气；叹息 pitter-patter 噼里啪啦 Description of smell ●The fresh scent of jasmine filled the evening air. ●She wore a perfume with a sweet fragrance that lingered. ●After the downpour, the smell of wet earth rose thickly(浓密地). 清新的香气 一股甜香 湿润的泥土气息 It’s time for the sense of “smell” Description of taste ●The juicy watermelon tastes sweet and refreshing, a perfect treat on a hot summer day. 多汁的西瓜尝起来_________________，是炎热夏日的绝佳享受。​ ●The rich and creamy chocolate melted in my mouth, leaving a delicious aftertaste. _________________巧克力在我口中融化，留下美味可口的余味。 又甜又清爽 浓郁丝滑的 Let’s learn about the sense of “taste” Description of touch (Translate) ●The warm sunlight brushes gently my skin, giving me a cozy and comfortable feeling. 温暖的阳光轻抚着我的皮肤，给我一种惬意舒适的感觉。 ●The rough texture of the old wall under my fingers told a story of its long history. 我手指下旧墙粗糙的质感诉说着它悠久的历史。 smooth soft sticky Let’s talk about “touch” ●The cherry blossoms were in full _________（盛开）, their delicate pink petals falling gently in the breeze, creating a _____________（dream）carpet on the ground. （视觉）​ Practice makes perfect ●I could hear the cheerful _________ (chirp叽叽喳喳) of birds and the gentle __________ （rustle) of leaves in the breeze. （听觉）​ ●The ______(清新的) smell of damp earth and pine filled my nose（扑鼻而来）. （嗅觉）​ chirping rustling fresh bloom dreamy A. bloom B. boom C. boost ​●我咬了一口亲手采摘的野莓，它们 甜美而浓郁的味道在我口中炸裂开来。（味觉） ●当我行走时，脚下柔软的草感觉凉爽且舒适宜人。（触觉） I took a bite of the wild berries I picked, and their ____________________ exploded in my mouth. ​ The soft grass under my feet __________________ as I walked. ​ sweet and strong taste felt cool and pleasant Dear Eric, ____________________(我十分兴奋得知) you’re planning a trip to Shantou. _____________(我写信目的是) whole-heartedly recommend Queshi Scenic Area, a must-see(不可错过的、必看的) attraction that combines beautiful mountains and the sea. Located on the southern bank of the Han River, the scenic area is a paradise for nature lovers. When you walk along the stone paths, you can feel the cool breeze blowing through the green pines. The sound of birds singing and streams flowing adds a touch of special joy. Taking a deep breath, you will smell the fresh scent of various flowers and plants . Looking around, you can see the ancient temples hidden among green trees, and the vast river winding like a silver ribbon. If you come here in autumn, you can even taste the sweet local fruits, which are juicy and refreshing. It’s truly a place that offers peace and beauty. ____________________________(我迫不及待地想欢迎来这儿) and show you around this amazing place. _________________________(我期待共享) this wonderful experience with you. Yours, Li Hua I’m thrilled to hear that I’m writing to I can’t wait to welcome you here I’m looking forward to sharing Translation: 1.When you walk along the stone paths, you can _________________________ through the green pines. 你沿着石板小径行走时，你能感觉到凉爽的微风吹过翠绿的松树。 2.The sound of ____________________________ adds a touch of special joy. 鸟鸣与溪流潺潺的声音为这片景色增添了别样的欢乐。 3._________________, you will ________________ of various flowers and plants. 深吸一口气，你会闻到各种花草植物散发的清新气息。 4.Looking around, you can see the ancient temples hidden among green trees, and the vast river _______________________. 放眼望去，你能看到古寺掩映在绿树丛中，辽阔的江河如银带般蜿蜒流淌。 5.________________________, you can even taste the sweet local fruits, which are __________________. 如果在秋天前来，你甚至能品尝到甜美的当地水果，多汁又清爽。 feel the cool breeze blowing birds singing and streams flowing smell the fresh scent winding like a silver ribbon juicy and refreshing Taking a deep breath If you come here in autumn Dear Eric, I’m thrilled to hear that you’re planning a trip to Shantou. I’m writing to whole-heartedly recommend Queshi Scenic Area, a must-see attraction that combines beautiful mountains and the sea. Located on the southern bank of the Han River, the scenic area is a paradise for nature lovers. When you walk along the stone paths, you can feel the cool breeze blowing through the green pines. The sound of birds singing and streams flowing adds a touch of special joy. Taking a deep breath, you will smell the fresh scent of various flowers and plants. Looking around, you can see the ancient temples hidden among green trees, and the vast river winding like a silver ribbon. If you come here in autumn, you can even taste the sweet local fruits, which are juicy and refreshing. It’s truly a place that offers peace and beauty. I can’t wait to welcome you here and show you around this amazing place. I’m looking forward to sharing this wonderful experience with you. Yours, Li Hua Reading & Memorizing: 1. （触觉）你沿着石板小径行走时，你能感觉到凉爽的微风穿过绿色的松树。 When you walk along the stone paths, you can feel the cool breeze blowing through the green pines. Reading & Memorizing: 2. （听觉）鸟鸣与溪流潺潺的声音增添了一丝丝别样的欢乐。 The sound of birds singing and streams flowing adds a touch of special joy. Reading & Memorizing: 3.（嗅觉） 深吸一口气，你会闻到各种花草植物散发的清新香气 Taking a deep breath, you will smell the fresh scent of various flowers and plants. Reading & Memorizing: 4.（视觉）环顾四周，你能看到古寺掩映在绿树丛中，辽阔的江河如银带般蜿蜒流淌。 Looking around, you can see the ancient temple hidden among green trees, and the vast river winding like a silver ribbon. Reading & Memorizing: 5.（味觉） 如果在秋天前来，你甚至能品尝到甜美的当地水果，多汁又清爽。 If you come here in autumn, you can even taste the sweet local fruits, which are juicy and refreshing. Summary Sensory Descriptions in writing Thank you! null 67126.35 $