内容正文:
第一章手把手教你写好提纲作文
第四节
10大主题轻松搞定
主题1
征文稿
倡议推荐
真题导练
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2024年浙江1月卷请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports
⊙主题同步
and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运
人教版必修第一册
动,内容包括:
Unit 3 Sports and Fitness
1.介绍这项运动;
译林版必修第一册
2.说明推荐理由。
Unit 1 Back to School
注意:
北师大版必修第一册
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
Unit 2 Sports and Fitness
2.请按如下格式作答。
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
审题构思
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文体类别
征文稿——倡议推荐
主题:介绍推荐的运动并陈述推荐理由
要点:①引入需要运动的背景
3维审题
主题要点
②阐述推荐的运动
③说明推荐理由并呼吁尝试
人称:第二、第三人称
人称时态
时态:以一般现在时为主
初稿搭建
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Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
As students,we
·(倡议推荐背景描述)
(项目名称)stands out as an
ideal choice for it.
It's simple/manageable:
(所需工具/材料)is all you need,and even
(所
需环境)works/.helps.It
(优势1).What's more,it
as
(优势2).
Best of all,it
which
(优势3).
So
(倡议行动1),
(倡议行动2)and
(倡议行动3).Youl
definitely
(收获1),
(收获2)and
(收获3)!
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Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
⊙亮点词汇
As students,we spend most of our day sitting in class,and a
stand out突出;显眼
short break is the perfect time to move.Jumping rope stands out
as an ideal choice for it.
ideal ad山.理想的;完美的
It's simple:a rope is all you need,and even a small space like
boost v.促进;增强
the corridor works.Jumping boosts your heart rate quickly,burning
coordination n.协调;配合
calories to keep you fit.What's more,it improves coordination and
ease v.减轻;缓解
balanceas you jump to the rhythm.Best of all,it's fun:you can
give it a shot尝试一下
jump alone or with friends,turning exercise into a game that eases
definitely ad.肯定地;无疑地
stress from lessons.
So stand up,grab a rope and give it a shot.You'll definitely
refreshed adj.恢复精神的;神清
feel refreshed,ready for the next class and glad you did it!
气爽的
大家都站起来运动吧!
⊙出彩句式
作为学生,我们一天中大部分时间都坐在教室里,而短暂
①动名词短语作主语
的课间正是活动的绝佳时机。跳绳无疑是这项活动的完美
③现在分词短语作状语
选择。
⑤时间状语从句
它很简单:只需要一根绳子,哪怕是走廊这样的小空间也
⑥现在分词短语作状语+定语
能进行。跳绳能快速提高你的心率,帮助你燃烧卡路里,保持
从句
健康。此外,随着节奏跳跃还能提升协调性和平衡感。最棒
⊙细节增色
的是,它很有趣:你可以独自跳,也可以和朋友一起跳,把运动
②低门槛倡议支撑句
变成缓解课业压力的游戏。
④过渡语的运用
所以,站起来,拿起绳子试试吧。你一定会感到神清气
爽,为下一节课做好准备,也会为自己的这个行动感到开心!
⑦节奏式倡议并列结构
规范誊写
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第一章手把手教你写好提纲作文
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1.【动名词短语作主语】学习并演唱中文歌曲是提升你中文水平的一种绝佳方式。
2.【低门槛倡议支撑句】这真没什么大不了的:只管说出你的想法就行,哪怕声音发颤或有停
顿也没关系。
3.【过渡语】Doing group discussions in class helps you understand lessons better by exchanging
ideas.
(此外),it improves your communication skills as you learn to express
and listen.
(最捧/重要的是),it's a great way to turn study into a lively and
enjoyable experience.
4.【现在分词短语作状语+定语从句】你可以加入晨跑或者课后打篮球,把闲暇时间变成既
能增进友谊又能让大脑放松的美好时刻。
You can join the morning jog or play basketball after class,
5.【节奏式倡议并列句】加入一个社团,参与志愿活动,周末尝试一项新运动。你会结识更多
朋友,学到实用技能,也会发现校园生活远比想象中丰富多彩。
实战演练1
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请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Green Campus”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一些创建绿色校园
的做法,内容包括:
1.介绍这些做法;
2.说明做法意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Create A Green Campus,Everybody!
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人物介绍
真题导练
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2023年全国甲卷你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中
⊙主题同步
国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇
人教版必修第三册
短文投稿,内容包括:
Unit 2 Morals and Virtues
1.人物简介及事迹;
外研版必修第三册
2.意义或启示。
Unit 2 Making a Difference
注意:
北师大版必修第二册
1.词数100左右;
Unit 6 The Admirable
2.题目已为你写好。
A Historical Figure in China
审题构思
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文体类别
征文稿—人物介绍
主题:撰写一位中国历史人物的简介、事迹,
以及所带来的意义或启示
要点:①介绍历史人物的身份
3维审题
主题要点
②讲述其具有代表性的事迹
③分析其对社会与个人的意义启示
人称:以第三人称为主
人称时态
时态:以一般过去时为主
初稿搭建
A Historical Figure in China
Among widely acknowledged
stands out as the most influential in my
view.The reasons are as follows./Here are the reasons.
Known as a/an
(身份)in
(地点/时期),
was highly
appreciated because he/she made great contributions to
He/She spared no effort/devoted
his whole life to
(事迹1).Besides,he proposed
_(事迹2),which had a far--
reaching influence on
What impresses me most is
is such a role model that
(意义
启示)
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A Historical Figure in China
Among widely acknowledged Chinese historical figures,Fan
⊙亮点词汇
Zhongyan stands out as the most influential in my view.@The
stand out as作为…脱颖而出
reasons are as follows.
literary figure文学家
Known as a Chinese politician,educator,literary figure and
make contributions to为…做出
thinker in the Song Dynasty,Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated
贡献
because he made great contributions to society.He spared no
effort to carry out a series of reformsaimed at making his country
spare no effort不遗余力
prosperous.Besides,he proposed the establishment of a national
far-reaching ad.影响深远的
school system,which had a far-reaching influence on Chinese
role model n.榜样;楷模
education.
strive for为…奋斗/争取
What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life from
his masterpiece“Record of Yueyang Tower'':⑦“Be the first to worry
⊙出彩句式
about the troubles across the land,the last to enjoy universal
③过去分词短语在句首作状语
happiness."Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that his example
④过去分词短语作后置定语
always encourages me to strive for noble character.
⑤非限制性定语从句
中国的一位历史人物
在广受认可的中国历史人物中,我认为范仲淹是最具影
⑥主语从句
响力的一位。原因如下。
⑧结果状语从句(such..that.…)
范仲淹是中国宋代的政治家、教育家、文学家和思想家,
⊙细节增色
因其对社会做出的卓越贡献而广受赞誉。他不遗余力地推行
①修饰词的运用(形容词/副
了一系列旨在让国家走向富强的改革。此外,他提议建立全
词)
国性的学校体系,这对中国的教育产生了深远影响。
②过渡句/语
最令我印象深刻的是他在其代表作《岳阳楼记》中阐述的
著名人生信条:“先天下之忧而忧,后天下之乐而乐。”范仲淹
⑦名言名句
堪称典范,他的榜样力量始终激励着我追求高尚的品格。
⑧结尾总结句(人物介绍)
规范誊写
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A Historical Figure in China
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1.【过渡句】原因/理由如下。
2.【过去分词短语在句首作状语】作为中国古代伟大的思想家、教育家以及儒家学派的创始
人,孔子因对中国文化和伦理有着深远影响,已收到两千多年的尊崇。
Confucius has been respected for over two thousand years because of his deep influence on
Chinese culture and ethics.
3.【过去分词短语作后置定语】孔子提出了众多学说,旨在指引人们行为及维护社会秩序。
Confucius put forward numerous teachings
4.【非限制性定语从句】孔子教导了许多来自不同背景的学生,这帮助了他的思想在古代中
国的广泛传播。
Confucius taught many students from different backgrounds,
5.【主语从句】最让我印象深刻的是孔子对仁爱与尊重他人的重视。
is Confucius'emphasis on
kindness and respect for others
6.【结尾总结句(人物介绍):such.that.】孔子是这样一位伟大的教育家,他的教诲总
是激励学生们以开放的心态学习。
实战演练2
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题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹;
2.意义或启示。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
A Contemporary Celebrity in China
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活动报道
真题导练
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2023年浙江1月卷上周末你参加了校学生会组织的
⊙主题同步
“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容
人教版必修第二册
包括:
Unit 1 Cultural Heritage
1.活动的过程;
外研版必修第一册
2.收获与感想。
Unit 5 Into the Wild
注意:
译林版必修第三册
1.写作词数应为80左右;
Unit 1 Nature in the Balance
2.请按如下格式作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
审题构思
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文体类别
征文稿—活动报道
主题:介绍植物观察活动并陈述收获感想
要点:①引入活动话题
3维审题
主题要点
②阐述活动过程
③总结收获与感想
人称:第一、第三人称
人称时态
时态:以一般过去时为主
初稿搭建
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Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last Saturday,I participated in
(活动名称)organized by
(组织方).
The event was scheduled for
(时间).We headed to
(地,点).Upon
arrival,
(活动1).hat followed was
(活动2).
Through the activity,I gained
(收获).It was truly
(感想)!
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Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
⊙亮点词汇
Last Saturday,I participated in the "Getting to Know the Plants
participate in参加
Around Us"activityorganized by the Students'Union.
be scheduled for(某事)被安排
The event was scheduled for 8:00 a.m.We headed to the
nearby botanic garden by bus.Upon arrival,a local botanist
在;预定于
delivered a lecture on the diverse characteristics and uses of various
deliver a lecture on开展关于…
plant species.What followed was a guided walk around the
的讲座
garden,where we saw the vibrant sunflowers,the lush bamboo,
vibrant ad山.充满生机的
and the colorful daisies,each boasting unique features and uses.
boast v.以…为特色
Through the activity,I gained a greater appreciation for the role
that plants play in maintaining the ecosystem balance and providing
appreciation n.理解;赏识
resources for both humans and animals.It wastruly eye-opening!
maintainv.维持;保持
认识我们身边的植物
ecosystem balance生态系统平衡
上周六,我参加了学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”
eye-opening adj.令人大开眼界的
活动。
⊙出彩句式
活动定于早上8点。我们乘公交车前往附近的植物园。
①过去分词短语作后置定语
抵达后,一位当地植物学家开展了讲座,介绍了各种植物的不
②主语从句
同特征与用途。随后我们在园内进行了导览参观,看到了生
③非限制性定语从句
机勃勃的向日葵、郁郁葱葱的竹子和色彩缤纷的雏菊—一每
④现在分词短语作状语
种植物都拥有其独特之处与用途。
通过这次活动,我更深刻地认识到植物在维持生态系统
⑤定语从句
平衡、为人类和动物提供资源方面的重要作用。这次经历真
⊙细节增色
让人大开眼界!
⑥程度副词的运用
规范誊写
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1.【主语从句】接下来是参与者们一场热烈的讨论。
2.【过去分词短语作后置定语】我校在学校操场上组织了一场精彩的运动会。
The school playground witnessed a wonderful sports meet
3.【非限制性定语从句】接着我们参观了市中心的旧图书馆,在那里我们发现了许多珍贵的
历史书籍。
Then we visited the old library downtown,
4.【现在分词短语作状语】学生们在舞台上表演了一场精彩的戏剧,赢得了观众们热烈的
掌声。
Students performed a wonderful drama on the stage,
5.【程度副词】那真的令人难忘,而且让人收获满满!
It was
unforgettable and rewarding!
6.【定语从句】在志愿服务期间,我对社区工作者维护公众健康和提高居民生活质量所付出
的努力有了更深刻的理解。
During the volunteer work,I deepened my understanding of the efforts
实战演练3
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上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“生活技能大赛”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容
包括:
1.活动的过程;
2.收获与感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
The Life Skills Competition
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现象评析
真题导练
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2022年全国乙卷学校英文报正在开展以Learning
⊙主题同步
English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调
人教版必修第三册
查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
Unit 5 The Value of Money
1.学习活动状况描述;
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北师大版必修第三册
50%
2.简单评论;
Unit 8 Green Living
3.你的建议。
译林版必修第一册
189%
12%
注意:
Unit 2 Let's Talk Teens
读英语书籍听英语歌曲看英语电影浏览英语学习网站
1.词数100左右;
学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well.
审题构思
文体类别
征文稿——现象评析
主题:课外学英语方式评析
要点:①调查结果描述
3维审题
主题要点
②简单评论
③你的建议
人称:第一、第三人称
人称时态
时态:以一般现在时为主
初稿搭建
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Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well.From the survey results,
(结
果总述)
As is shown in the chart/According to the survey,over half of the/nearly half of
prefer
(占比最高者),followed by
(占比第二者).Relatively speaking,the
minority focus more on
(占比最低者),which just account for
This indicates
that
(结果评论).
From my perspective,
(观点陈述).To
(表明目的),
(我的建
议).For instance,
Only in this way will we
(达成的结果).
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Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well.From
⊙亮点词汇
the survey results,students have diverse after-class English-learning
diverse adj.多样的;各种各样的
preferences.
preference n.偏爱;偏好
As is shown in the chart,over half of the students prefer
listening to English songs,followed by those who choose to watch
browse v.浏览
English movies.Relatively speaking,the minority focus more on
account for(比例上)占;解释
reading English books or browsing English-learning websites,
which just account for 18%and 12%respectively.This indicates
respectively ad.分别地;各自地
that students tend to opt for enjoyable ways,seeking an immersive
tend to倾向于;往往会
and relaxed English-learning experience.
From my perspective,each method has unique value.To
opt for选择;挑选
learn comprehensively,we should balance these activities.For
enhance v.提高;增强
instance,we can read English books to boost vocabulary after
watching English movies,and use learning websites to practice
⊙出彩句式
grammar while listening to songs.Only in this way will we enhance
our English skills more effectively.
②过去分词短语作状语
课外学英语
③非限制性定语从句
要学好英语,我们能做的事情有很多。从调查结果来看,
学生们的课外英语学习偏好各不相同。
⑤倒装句(“Oly+状语”位于
如图所示,超过一半的学生倾向于听英文歌曲,其次是选
句首)》
择看英文电影。相对而言,少数学生更热衷于读英文书籍或
浏览英语学习网站,分别占比18%和12%。这表明,学生们
⊙细节增色
倾向于选择有趣的学习方式,追求沉浸式且轻松的英语学习
①过渡语/句(介词短语、非限
体验。
制性定语从句、分词短语、不定
在我看来,每种方法都有其独特的价值。要在学习上做
到全面,我们应该平衡开展这些活动。例如,看完英文电影
式短语)
后,我们可以读英文书籍来扩充词汇量;边听英文歌曲边借助
④评述总结句(This indicates
学习网站练习语法。只有这样,我们才能更有效地提升我们
的英语技能。
that.,+现在分词短语作状语)
规范誊写
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
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高中英语高分作文
高分秘籍
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1.【过渡语(介词短语)】
(从实际角度看),making a daily schedule
helps maximize spare time effectively.
2.【过渡语(非限制性定语从句)】
(俗话说/正如谚语所说),
"A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step."
3.【过渡语(分词短语)】
(相对而言),high school students
spend less time on physical exercise compared with academic study.
4.【过渡语(不定式短语)】
(简而言之),memorizing words
without context is less effective than learning them in sentences.
5.【过去分词短语作状语】Among after-school activities,playing basketball is the most popular
among boys,
(其次是踢足球).
6.【评述总结句(This indicates that.,+现在分词短语作状语)】这表明学校更注重全
面发展,组织更多课外活动以培养学生的实践能力。
7.【倒装句(Oly+状语位于句首)】只有这样,我们青少年才能免受网络负面信息的过度
影响。
实战演练4
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学校英语报正在开展以Means of Transportation Choices为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调
查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.出行方式状况描述;
49.70%
2.简单评论;
29.10%
3.你的建议。
18.60%
注意:
2.60%
1.词数100左右;
私家车
公交车/地铁
步行
其他
出行方式调查结果(人数百分比)
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Means of Transportation Choices
People have diverse preferences for transportation in daily travel.
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第一章手把手教你写好提纲作文
文化宣传
真题导练
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2021年新高考卷你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周
⊙主题同步
年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
人教版必修第二册
1.读报的经历;
Unit 1 Cultural Heritage
2.喜爱的栏目;
外研版必修第二册
3.期望和祝福。
Unit 2 Let's Celebrate!
注意:
译林版必修第二册
1.写作词数应为80左右;
Unit 3 Festivals and Customs
2.请按如下格式作答。
Youth and Me
审题构思
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文体类别
征文稿—文化宣传
主题:分享你与学校英文报Youth的故事,
并表达对其的期望与祝福
要点:①读报的经历
3维审题
主题要点
②喜爱的栏目
③期望和祝福
人称:以第一人称为主
人称时态
时态:以一般现在时为主
初稿搭建
Youth and Me
How time flies!It has been
(数字)years since
I still remember the first time
whose
(印象深刻的部分).Asa/an
(身份描述),I always feel
whenever
(积极影响1).My favorite
section is
are full of
pushing me to
(积极影响2).
Looking back,
has been like a good friend through my high school years.I sincerely
hope
(表达祝福)
O25.
高中英语高分作文
高分润色
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Youth and Me
⊙亮点词汇
①How time flies!②t has been ten years since Youth was first
catch one'seye吸引某人的目光
published.
inspired ad山.受到鼓励的
I still remember the first timeI got hold of a copy in the school
pick up学会;拿起
library three years ago,whosevivid stories caught my eye at
bravely ad.勇敢地
once.As a regular reader,I always feel inspiredwhenever I pick
it up.The stories ofoutstanding teens in the newspaper encourage
famous quotes名人名言
me to face challenges bravely.My favorite section is "Famous
life wisdom人生智慧
Quotes'”一those short sayings⑦from great people are full of life
push v.推动;促使
wisdom,pushing me to grow better every day.
look back回顾
Looking back,Youth has been like a good friend through my
⊙出彩句式
high school years.Isincerely hope it will be loved by more students
and keep bringing uswonderful articles andhelpful ideas.
①感叹句
《青春》与我
②固定句式(It has been..since..…)
时光飞逝!《青春》报创刊至今已十年。
③定语从句(省略关系副词when)
我仍记得三年前在学校图书馆第一次拿起它的情景,它
④非限制性定语从句(whose引导)
上面生动的故事立刻吸引了我。作为一名忠实读者,每次翻
⑥时间状语从句(whenever=
开它,我都深受鼓舞。报纸上优秀青少年的故事激励着我勇
every/each time)
敢面对挑战。我最喜爱的栏目是“名人名言”一那些来自
⑧现在分词短语在句尾作状语
伟人的短句充满人生智慧,促使着我一天天成长进步。
⑨现在分词短语在句首作状语
回首过往,《青春》报刊就像一位好朋友,陪伴我度过了高
⊙细节增色
中时光。我衷心希望它能受到更多学生的喜爱,继续为我们
⑤修饰词的运用(形容词、副词)
带来精彩的文章和有益的见解。
⑦介词短语作后置定语
规范誊写
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第一章手把手教你写好提纲作文
高分秘籍
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1.【感叹句】这一刻多么令人兴奋啊!
2.【固定句式(It has been.since..)】我校建校至今已四十年。
3.【定语从句(省略关系副词when)】我永远不会忘记我踏人高中校园的那一天。
I'll never forget
4.【非限制性定语从句(whose引导)】上学期我加入了校阅读俱乐部,其每周的讨论总能
激发新的想法。
I joined the school's reading club last semester,
5.【时间状语从句(whenever=every/each time)】作为辩论队的一员,每当我们进行
练习赛时,我都会集中精力。
As a member of the debate team,I always get focused
6.【现在分词短语在句首作状语】了解到社团正在招募新成员,我写信申请加入。
I am writing to apply to join
7.【修饰词的运用】We
(诚挚地)invite you to join our club activities,and
(由衷地)hope you will enjoy the time here.
实战演练5
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你校英语社团Eco正在庆祝创社五周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.社团的经历;
2.喜爱的活动;
3.期望和祝福。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Echo and Me
o27.参考答案
第一章第四节
人物介绍
主题1征文稿
高分秘籍
倡议推荐
高分秘籍
1.The reasons are as follows./Here are the reasons./
1.Learning and singing Chinese songs stands out as an
Here's why./There are several reasons for this./This
ideal way to improve your Chinese.
can be attributed to the following factors.
2.It's no big deal:just speak your mind,and even a
2.Known as a great thinker,educator,and founder of
shaky voice or a pause won't matter.
Confucianism in ancient China
3.What's more/Plus/Besides/Additionally/Furthermore/In
3.aimed at guiding people's behavior and maintaining
addition;Best of all/Most importantly/Above all else
social order
4.turning spare time into happy moments that can
4.which helped spread his ideas widely in ancient China
strengthen friendship and refresh your mind
5.What impresses me most
5.Join a club,take part in volunteer work,and try a
6.Confucius is such a great educator that his teachings
new sport on weekends.You'll meet more friends,
always inspire students to learn with an open mind.
learn useful skills,and find school life far more
实战演练2
colorful than expected.
A Contemporary Celebrity in China
实战演练1
Among widely acknowledged Chinese contemporary
Create A Green Campus,Everybody!
celebrities,Yuan Longping stands out as the most
As students,we live and study on campus daily,
influential in my view.Here are the reasons.
and every small action counts in creating a sustainable
Known as a renowned agricultural scientist in
environment.Here are some effortless yet effective ways
China,Yuan Longping was highly respected because of
to contribute.
his great contributions to the world.He devoted his
It's manageable:a reusable bottle is all you need-
whole life to researching hybrid rice,successfully
carry one,and you'll reduce plastic waste from
developing high-yield varieties that greatly increased
disposables;even seconds spent turning off unused
rice production.This breakthrough has helped feed
lights make a difference,cutting down electricity
millions of people around the globe.
consumption.And don't forget sorting trash:a simple
What inspires me most is his spirit of perseverance
divide into recyclable and non-recyclable bins teaches
and dedication to solving the problem of world hunger
responsibility,ensuring proper waste processing that
Yuan Longping is such a role model that his example
reduces pollution.
always encourages me to work hard for the benefit of
So take a reusable bottle,form the habit of saving
society.
energy,and start sorting trash.Let's create a green
中国当代的一位名人
campus,one small action at a time.
在广受认可的中国当代名人中,我认为袁隆平
大家一起来创建绿色校园吧!
是最具影响力的一位。原因如下。
作为学生,我们每天在校园里生活和学习,每一
袁隆平是中国著名的农业科学家,因其对世界
个小小的行动都对创建可持续的环境至关重要。以
做出的巨大贡献而深受尊敬。他毕生致力于杂交水
下是一些轻松又有效的参与方式。
稻研究,成功培育出高产品种,大幅提高了水稻产
这事儿不难:一个可重复使用的水瓶就够
量。这一突破帮助全球数百万人解决了温饱问题。
了—一带上它,就能减少一次性瓶子产生的塑料垃
最激励我的是他为解决世界饥饿问题所展现出
圾:哪怕花几秒钟关掉不用的灯,也能起到作用,降
的坚韧不拔和奉献精神。袁隆平是这样一位榜样,
低电力消耗。还有别忘了垃圾分类:简单地把可回
他的事迹始终鼓励着我为社会福祉而努力奋斗。
收和不可回收垃圾分开,能培养责任感,同时确保垃
活动报道
圾得到妥善处理,从而减少污染。
高分秘籍
所以,带上可重复使用的水瓶,养成节约能源的
1.What followed was a lively discussion among the
习惯,开始垃圾分类吧。让我们一步一个小行动,共
participants.
同创建绿色校园吧。
2.organized by our school
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3.where we found many rare historical books
7.Only in this way can we teenagers avoid being overly
4.drawing enthusiastic applause from the audience
influenced by negative online information.
5.truly/really/indeed/surely/certainly/definitely
实战演练4
6.that/which community workers make in safeguarding
Means of Transportation Choices
pubic health and improving residents'quality of life
People have diverse preferences for transportation
实战演练3
in daily travel.Here is a survey conducted among city
The Life Skills Competition
residents,shedding light on these choices.
Last Sunday,I participated in the "Life Skills
According to the survey,nearly half (49.70%)
Competition"organized by the Students'Union,which
of people opt for private cars.Public transportation like
aimed to foster our practical abilities.
buses or subways is chosen by 29.10%,while those who
At 9:00 a.m.,the school hall came alive with
walk only account for 2.60%.The rest (18.60%)prefer
activities.In the cooking area,students skillfully
other means.As the figures show,compared with public
made fried rice,fruit salads and other tempting dishes,
transportation,private cars are still a prime option for
filling the air with aroma.Nearby,the sewing station
most city residents,probably due to their unmatched
hummed with focused chatter as classmates sewed
convenience,which is disturbing trend from an
buttons onto shirts and crafted cute pencil bags.In the
environmental perspective.
home repair section,students demonstrated problem-
In my view,we should balance needs and
solving skills by fixing electrical outlets.I joined this
sustainability.For short trips,walking or biking is eco-
section,successfully repairing a wobbly wooden stool
friendly.For longer distances,public transport helps
with a screwdriver and glue.After the competition,an
reduce traffic jams and carbon emissions.Smart choices
award ceremony was scheduled to honor winners.
can make travel efficient while protecting our planet.
This event taught me life skills aren't just chores-
出行方式选择
they're tools for independence.I'm eager to master more
在日常出行中,人们对于交通方式有着多样的
skills.
偏好。以下是针对城市居民开展的一项调查,揭示
生活技能大赛
了这些选择情况。
上周日,我参加了校学生会组织的“生活技能
根据调查,近一半(49.70%)的人选择私家车出
大赛”,这项活动旨在培养我们的实践能力。
上午9点,学校礼堂里各项活动热闹开展。烹
行。29.10%的人选择公交车或地铁等公共交通,而
饪区,同学们熟练地制作炒饭、水果沙拉等诱人菜
步行的人仅占2.60%。其余(18.60%)的人偏好其
品,空气中满是香气。旁边的缝纫区里,大家一边专
他交通方式。数据表明,相较于公共交通,私家车仍
注地交流,一边忙着给衬衫钉纽扣、缝制可爱的铅笔
是大多数城市居民的首选,这可能是因为其无可比
袋。维修区中,同学们通过修理电源插座等任务展
拟的便利性,但从环保角度来看,这一趋势令人
现解决问题的能力。我也加入了维修区,用螺丝刀
担忧。
和胶水成功修好了一张摇晃的木凳。比赛结束后,
在我看来,我们应在需求与可持续发展间寻求
还安排了颁奖典礼为获胜者颁奖。
平衡。短途出行时,步行或骑行很环保。长途出行
这次活动让我明白,生活技能不只是日常琐事,
时,公共交通有助于缓解交通拥堵、减少碳排放。明
更是独立生活的工具。我渴望掌握更多技能。
智选择既能让出行高效,又能保护我们的地球。
现象评析
文化宣传
高分秘籍
高分秘籍
1.From a practical view
1.How thrilling /exciting the moment is!
2.As the saying goes
2.It has been forty years since our school was founded.
3.Relatively speaking
3.the day (when)I stepped onto the high school campus
4.To put it simply/To put it briefly/To sum it up/To
4.whose weekly discussions always spur/spark/inspire/
make it simple
ignite new ideas
5.followed by playing football
5.whenever/each time/every time we have a practice
6.This indicates that schools are paying more attention to
match
all-round development,organizing more extracurricular
6.Knowing that the club is recruiting new members
activities to foster students'practical skills.
7.warmly/sincerely;truly/genuinely
139.
实战演练5
with very different English levels,which could make
Echo and Me
practice less effective,as some students may struggle to
How time flies!Five years have passed since Echo
keep up.Instead,grouping us by language proficiency,
was founded.
or even forming small groups of three to four with a
I still remember joining it in my first year,whose
leader,would help everyone participate more
lively English corners drew me in at once-and since
effectively.Moreover,such structured groups allow for
then,I've never missed a single event the club
deeper communication and mutual support during
organized.As an active member,I've grown a lot:
practice.
practicing dialogues with peers helped me speak more
Thank you for considering my ideas.I believe
fluently,and role-play activities made learning fun.My
these adjustments will make our oral practice more
favorite is the“Story Sharing”session一listening to
fruitful.
others talk about foreign cultures in English always
Yours sincerely,
takes me into a new world.
Li Hua
Echo has been like a warm family,where I found
亲爱的Ryan老师:
true joy in English.I hope it will attract more students
我是三班的李华。得知您打算随机分组让大家
and keep bringing us wonderful moments of language
课后练习口语,我想和您说说我的一些顾虑和建议。
and friendship.
首先,随机分组可能会把英语水平差异很大的
“回声”与我
学生分到一起,这会降低练习效果,因为有些同学可
时光飞逝!“回声”英语社团成立至今已五年。
能跟不上节奏。相反,按英语水平分组,或者甚至组
我仍记得高一加入社团时的情景—一它热闹的
建3到4人的小团队并配备一个组长,能让每个人
英语角一下子就吸引了我,从那以后,我从未缺席社
都更有效地参与进来。而且,这样的结构化小组能
团组织的任何一次活动。作为一名积极的社员,我
在练习中促进更深入的交流和互助。
收获颇丰:和同伴练习对话让我的口语更流利,角色
感谢您考虑我的想法。我相信这些调整会让我
扮演活动让学习变得有趣。我最爱的是“故事分
们的口语练习更有成效。
享”环节一听大家用英语讲述异国文化,总能将我
您的学生,
带去一个全新的世界。
李华
“回声”就像一个温暖的大家庭,在这里,我找
活动策划
到了学习英语的真正乐趣。希望它能吸引更多同
高分秘籍
学,继续为我们带来语言与友谊交织的美好时光。
1.Organize a community-care project-gather storybooks,
主题2建议信
flower seeds and greeting cards;then let volunteers chat
栏目选择
with elders and share handmade gifts.
高分秘籍
2.Hold a "Book Sharing Comner"activity,where students
1.Compared with online courses;which lack face-to-
can exchange their favorite reading materials,such as
face interaction
classic novels or science magazines.
2.an initiative that strengthens students'sense of social
3.Hope you find this helpful!Looking forward to hearing
responsibility
good news from you.
3.strengthening the emotional connection between
实战演练7
classmates and teachers
Dear Jason,
4.Thank you for considering my suggestion./Thank you
Hearing that you're planning a "Leaping Youth"-
for taking my thoughts into account.I'm confident
themed club activity and need my help,I'm thrilled to
this adjustment will bring more benefits to our daily
share some ideas.
practice.
An interactive and sports-centered format would fit
实战演练6
best.First,organize a "Fitness Relay Race".Set up
Dear Ryan,
stations with activities like jump-rope challenges,mini-
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.Learning about the
obstacle courses,and basketball-shooting tasks.
random pairing for oral practice after class,I'm writing
Students can team up and compete while experiencing
to share my concerns and suggestions.
the fun of diverse sports.Next,host a "Healthy Living
To begin with,random pairing may mix students
Sharing Session".Invite a sports-loving classmate to
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