内容正文:
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi. One time, I was called at midnight to pick someone up. When I arrived, the building was completely dark except for one light in a window.
I walked to the door and knocked. After a long wait, the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. By her side was a small suitcase.
“Would you carry my bag out to the car?” she said. I took her suitcase and gave her my arm. We walked slowly to the street. She kept thanking me for my kindness.
“It’s nothing,” I told her. “I try to treat my passengers the way I want my mother to be treated.”
“You’re such a good boy,” she said. When we got in the taxi, she gave me an address. Then she asked, “Could you drive through the downtown?”
“It’s not the shortest way,” I answered.
“I don’t mind,” she said. “I’m in no hurry. I’m on my way to a hospice (临终安养院).”
I saw her eyes shining with tears.
“I don’t have any family left,” she continued. “The doctor says I don’t have very long.”
I quietly turned off the meter (计时器). “What road do you want me to take?” I asked.
For hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked. We drove through the neighbourhood where she and her husband had lived. Sometimes she asked me to just slow down while she sat staring into the darkness, saying nothing.
As the sun was coming up, she suddenly said, “I’m tired. Let’s go now.”
We drove in silence to the hospice. As we pulled up, two nurses were waiting for us. They helped her into a wheelchair.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
“How much do I owe you?” she asked me, reaching for her purse.
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A few days later, I received a letter from the hospice.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
I worked as a taxi driver twenty years ago--- _________________ --- I picked up an elderly lady at midnight--- _________________ --- the lady told me she was heading for a hospice--- _________________ --- I turned off the meter and toured the city with her--- we arrived at the hospice at dawn
4. 细节问答
What was the author’s job twenty years ago? :___________________________________
Where did the old lady want to go?:_________________________________
Why did the lady ask to drive through downtown?:
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What did the author do after knowing the lady’s situation?:_
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What did the lady show the author on the way?:
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Who waited for the old lady at the hospice?:
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What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
二十年前我是一名出租车司机→深夜接单接送一位八旬老人→老人告知自己无亲人、时日无多,将要前往临终安养院→我心生悲悯,关闭计价器→______________________→清晨抵达安养院,护士接应老人→(续写)_______________________________________→(续写)收到老人来信,读懂善意与温暖的传承
6.情感线
I:calm and professional→___________→sympathetic and warm→___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:
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英文:
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8. 句式
宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句
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9. 本文主题
温情治愈类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: “How much do I owe you?” she asked me, reaching for her purse.
衔接句1——How did the author respond? What did he do and say?
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Paragraph 2: A few days later, I received a letter from the hospice.
衔接句2——What was in the letter? What influence did it bring to the author?
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三.段落续写框架
第一段:老人伸手拿钱包,询问车费。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:几天后,我收到了一封来自安养院的信。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________。
四.段落续写
“How much do I owe you?” she asked me, reaching for her purse.
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A few days later, I received a letter from the hospice.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
I(出租车司机):善良温柔、共情细腻、质朴热忱,懂得体恤陌生人,愿意付出善意;the elderly lady(年迈老人):孤独无助、温柔谦和,眷恋过往、心怀感恩,坦然面对生命终点。
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
I worked as a taxi driver twenty years ago--- I received a midnight pickup order--- I picked up an elderly lady at midnight--- the lady said she had no family and little time left--- the lady told me she was heading for a hospice--- I turned off the meter and toured the city with her--- we arrived at the hospice at dawn
4. 细节问答
What was the author’s job twenty years ago? :He worked as a taxi driver.
Where did the old lady want to go?:She wanted to go to a hospice.
Why did the lady ask to drive through downtown?:She wanted to revisit places full of her precious memories before leaving the world.
What did the author do after knowing the lady’s situation?:He turned off the meter and accompanied her to tour the whole city.
What did the lady show the author on the way?:She showed him her former workplace and her old neighbourhood.
Who waited for the old lady at the hospice?:Two nurses waited for her.
What does the story tell us?:Small kindness can warm lonely souls and leave lasting warmth to others.
5.情节线
二十年前我是一名出租车司机→深夜接单接送一位八旬老人→老人告知自己无亲人、时日无多,将要前往临终安养院→我心生悲悯,关闭计价器,放弃计费→应老人要求绕城行驶,陪她重温工作、居住的回忆之地→清晨抵达安养院,护士接应老人→(续写)老人想要付费,我婉拒车费、温柔送别老人→(续写)收到老人的感谢信,被深深治愈,始终坚守善意
6.情感线
I:calm and professional→sympathetic→tender and warm→grateful and inspired(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:身为出租车司机的我深夜接送一位孤独的年迈老人,得知她即将离世,我关闭计价器陪她重温旧日回忆,最后婉拒车费,收获了来自老人的温暖谢意。
英文:As a taxi driver, I accompanied a lonely elderly lady to revisit her memorable places before she went to a hospice, turned off the meter and refused to charge her, gaining precious warmth and inspiration.
8. 句式
状语从句:When I arrived, the building was completely dark except for one light in a window.
非谓语动词:she asked me, reaching for her purse.
宾语从句:The doctor says I don’t have very long.
并列句:She showed me the building where she had once worked and we drove through her old neighbourhood.
定语从句:We drove through the neighbourhood where she and her husband had lived.
9. 本文主题
温情治愈类:平凡细碎的善意,能够温暖孤独的生命,温柔与善良是世间最动人的力量。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: “How much do I owe you?” she asked me, reaching for her purse.
衔接句1——How did the author respond? What did he do and say?
I refused to accept her payment, told her it was my small gift and wished her peace, leaving the lady moved.
Paragraph 2: A few days later, I received a letter from the hospice.
衔接句2——What was in the letter? What influence did it bring to the author?
The letter expressed her sincere gratitude, and this experience taught me the true meaning of kindness and warmth.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:老人伸手拿钱包,询问车费。
→①我连忙制止老人,婉拒收取车费→②我表示这是自己的一点心意,祝愿老人安好→③老人满是感动,轻声道谢后被护士推入病房;
第二段:几天后,我收到了一封来自安养院的信。
→①信中是老人真挚的感谢与简短的人生寄语→②我被深深触动,体悟到善意的价值→③从此始终温柔待人,传递温暖。
四.段落续写(满分范文,150词左右)
“How much do I owe you?” she asked me, reaching for her purse. Smiling gently, I shook my head and told her she owed me nothing. “There is no charge. I’m just glad I could walk with you through your last memories,” I said softly. A faint smile spread across her wrinkled face. She held my hand tightly and thanked me repeatedly. Watching nurses wheel her into the hospice, I felt a mixture of sorrow and warmth. I hoped my tiny kindness could bring comfort to her lonely final days.
A few days later, I received a letter from the hospice. In the letter, the old lady expressed her sincere thanks for my company and kindness. She wrote that my gentle company had made her last night warm and peaceful. Touched deeply, I realized that true kindness lay in selfless devotion. Since then, I have always tried my best to treat every stranger with warmth, for even small kindnesses can light up others’ lives.
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