大家好，今天我为大家分享的内容是如何通过添枝加叶丰富读后续写句子。高中英语牛津译林版2轮复习课。读后续写教学难点为，一、理解添枝加叶的含义，即通过运用添加修饰语、补充细节等方法丰富句子，让句子更生动具体。2、掌握丰富句子内容的常用方法，能对简单句子进行合理续写。3、提升语言表达能力和想象力，增强写作兴趣。以下为大家讲解一下策略。首先请对比这两个句子，很明显第二个句子with his wind five wealth speeding flames，哪吒runs s across the turbulent c第二个句子添加了一些修饰成分，with加宾语再加speeding flames以及swiftly. 还有across the . turbulent scene。通过添加以上这些修饰成分，第二个句子描写的更加生动形象，而且具有画面感。再看这个。例句，同样的第二个句子当中运用了clinching his face tightly，现在分词短语做状语以及bravely副词。作状语。还有his eyes pleased with determination。通过增加这些修饰成分，使得哪吒fans enemies这个场景更加的生动，而且具有画面感。策略一，添加修饰语，例如定语、状语、补语或同位语。For example, mary jumped off the . bike扩充句为。saying her sister mary jumped off the bike，在扩充句中添加了现在分词短语signal sister，解释mary从自行车上跳下来的原因。Another example the children said there silently扩充，句中增加了scared and形容词短语作状语，说明孩子们的状态如何。Another example, SHE saw her father. 再看扩。从句中，there he saw her father man's staring at her, who was wearing a expression relief. 在句中添加了there这个地点状语，发则后面又增加了同位语，其后还跟有一个互引导的定语从句。这种形象具体描写提升了句子层次，而且也更加的具有了画面感。处理增加感官细节，从视觉、听觉、嗅觉、触觉方面增加一些细节，让读者身临其境。例如the room was nice扩从句，the room was nice with soft blue walls, a big window left in sunlight and a small plant on the desk. 这里从视觉的角度增加了一些细节，使得这个房间的描写更加的生动形象。再看例句2，the soup was good扩充为the soup was good is warm，soft. Y test, mister, wait, a smell of garlic, making my stomach glory. 在崆峒句中添加了嗅觉和触觉，让读者身临其境。第三，the rain fell扩充为the rain fell typing softly on the window like little fingers。这里从听觉角度。增加了感官。性感官方面的描写，把下雨的场景描绘的更加具有更加剧的画面感和立体感。例句四，the wind blue扩充为the wind blue gender，but cool on my face and making the leaves russia like. 这里增加了触觉和听觉两个感官，把瓜分的场景描绘的更加的具体形象。策略三，增添人物细节描写，如表情、外貌、动作和心理活动描写。例如SHE opened . the box. 仅仅是一个非常简单的动作描写，我们可以把它扩充为SHE。Carefully open the bus with her trembling fingers inside a shine ride. Watch lay and he gazed in surprise. 这里通过一些动作描写，还有他的情感描写，把戏打开盒子的这个画面感立起来了。再看例2，the girl was scared扩充为the girl was scared和hot raced like a drum，her hands shook and SHE beat her leap to stop from crying. 这里通过描写他的心理活动以及动作，把这个女孩子害怕的这种心理非常勤奋的，非常形象的表现出来了。下面我们看一下practice number one，SHE feels so ashamed. 这里用上that so that引导状语从句来补充扩充这个句子that SHE felt her first。Learning number two, 听了老人的话。好，这里用现在分词短语做状语。Hearing what the old men said, SHE felt so ashamed. Number three. 用so加形容词的倒装结构来描写。So a shame did he feel that her face burning. He just run as quickly as he could. He, to get out of the older house. 用惊恐万分这个形容词做状语，terrified or scared. Number two, 用上现在分词短语做状语，thinking that he would see his wife soon. He just run as quickly he could to get out of the old house. 还可以用位置的复合结构with everything . ready。现在我们总结一下本课时内容，我们主要讲述了用添枝加叶法丰富句子。首先可以添加修饰语，如定语、状语、补语或同位语。第二个可以增加感官细节，如视听、嗅触觉，让读者身临其境。第三个策略还可以增添人物细节描写，如表情、外貌、动作和心理活动的描写。Homework基础层，扩充以下句子，提升层面。Write a short paragraph, three, two fb sentences about my favorite movie, using at least three types of details. Thank you so much . for today.