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Unit5
Nature’sTemper
What can we do to prepare for the worst?
单元话题写作讲练
Listen and guess:
What is the weather like?
wind
cloud
storm
thunder
lightning
rain
How does it make you feel?
Have you ever experienced bad weather?
Was it as scary as a tsunami? (No!)
What happened to you ?
Late for school?
wet all over?
got stuck in traffic?
Maybe...
Sometimes bad weather just makes our day terrible – not dangerous, but unlucky.
Bad weather can make things out of control. Now we’ll read about Ma Li’s story on a special day.
I’m Ma Li. I didn’t experience a tsunami like Tilly, but I had a terrible day because of bad weather.
Look at the pictures. What do you think happened to me?
What luck on my unlucky day! Let’s see what happened on that day!
Scanning
Ma Li
Did Ma Li have a good day or a bad day?
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Read the text again and complete the Mind-map.
Ma Li woke up late.
She ran to the bus stop.
She started reviewing her notes.
It started to rain and she became cold and wet.
The bus driver said they would be late.
The teacher decided not to have a test.
Scanning
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.Last Friday started terribly. First, my alarm clock didn’t go off, so I woke up late and had to rush to the bus stop.
.I had a test that morning, so I was reviewing my notes while I was waiting for my bus. All of a sudden, thunder rolled across the sky. Then it started to pour. The wind was too strong for me to use my umbrella!
.By the time the bus came, I was cold and wet. I was still worrying about the test when the bus driver said that we would be late. There was a landslide along our usual road.
c.When I finally reached my classroom, out of breath, my teacher was already waiting at the door. Many others were also late because of the rainstorm. As a result, she said we weren’t having a test after all! What luck on my unlucky day!
3a Read about Ma Li’s day and order the events.
She started reviewing her notes.
It started to rain and she became cold and wet.
The bus driver said they would be late.
Ma Li woke up late.
The teacher decided not to have a test.
She ran to the bus stop.
How many parts can this passage be divided?
Beginning
Developing
Ending
Story Structure
three-part structure
Skim reading
By the time the bus came, I was cold and wet. I was still worrying about the test when the bus driver said that we would be late. There was a landslide along our usual road.
Underline the words and phrases that indicate the times of the events or connect them together.
Last Friday started terribly. First, my alarm clock didn’t go off, so I woke up late and had to rush to the bus stop.
I had a test that morning, so I was reviewing my notes while I was waiting for my bus.
All of a sudden, thunder rolled across the sky. Then it started to pour. The wind was too strong for me to use my umbrella!
When I finally reached my classroom, out of breath, my teacher was already waiting at the door. Many others were also late because of the rainstorm.
As a result, she said we weren’t having a test after all! What luck on my unlucky day!
While-reading
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时态(Tense Usage)
Tips:按时间顺序描述事件,一定要注意背景与动作的时态区分
过去进行时(背景)
was/were+doing
一般过去时(突发) did
While-reading
Circle the Verbs of the events .
Read and find out where the acts happened.
home
bus stop
bus
classroom
1.Last Friday started terribly. First, my alarm clock didn’t go off, so I woke up late and had to rush to the bus stop.
2.I had a test that morning, so I was reviewing my notes while I was waiting for my bus. All of a sudden, thunder rolled across the sky. Then it started to pour. The wind was too strong for me to use my umbrella!
3.By the time the bus came, I was cold and wet. I was still worrying about the test when the bus driver said that we would be late. There was a landslide along our usual road.
4.When I finally reached my classroom, out of breath, my teacher was already waiting at the door. Many others were also late because of the rainstorm. As a result, she said we weren’t having a test after all! What luck on my unlucky day!
Why did each event happen? Find the cause and effect in the story.
Cause and effect: Things happen for clear reasons.
How does the writer present her story ?
3c Think about a day when you experienced bad weather. Discuss the events of your day with a partner.
1.What kind of bad weather was it?
2.What were you doing when the bad weather started?
rain,wind,thunderstorm,snow...
Sentence starters:
It was a ________.
There was a ________.
The weather was ________.
Example: It was a thunderstorm. Thunder rolled across the sky.
Use while or when to set the scene.
Sentence starters:
I was ________ when the weather started.
I was ________ while I was ________.
Example: I was walking to school when the rain started.
Let’s analyze
How to make a story vivid?
Writing tip:
Tip2:Use five senses rules
What she heard:
thunder rolled across...
What she saw:
It started to pour.
How she felt:
The wind was too strong for me to use...
I was cold and wet.
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What are the Five Senses?
Let’s learn
Use the Five Senses in writing can make readers in scenes and stories, which can improve your writing to a higher level.
视觉:sight-what you see with your eyes, details of surroundings and people that you can see with your eyes.
听觉:sound-what you hear with your ears, sounds in the environment that you are in.
触觉:touch-1.How you feel, the emotions you experience in a situation. 2.the objects you touch.
嗅觉:smell-what you smell with your nose.
味觉:taste-what you taste with your tongue/ what you experience with your lips.
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4.What happened or went wrong because of the bad weather?
got wet / cold;
umbrella broke / blew away;
missed the bus / train;
traffic jam;
arrived late;
event was canceled
Sentence starters:
Because of the rain, I ________.
The wind was so strong that ________.
As a result, ________.
Then, ________.
Example: Because of the rain, I missed the bus. As a result, I was late for school.
Step What to Say
1 Last ________, I experienced a ________.
2 I was ________ when it started.
3 I heard ________ and saw ________. I felt ________.
4 Because of the weather, ________. Then ________. Finally, ________.
Discussion Framework
Example:
Last Tuesday, I experienced a heavy rainstorm. I was walking home from school when it started. I heard thunder and saw dark clouds. I felt cold and scared. Because of the rain, I got completely wet. Then I had to wait for an hour at a bus stop. Finally, I arrived home late and missed dinner.
3d Write a story about your day. Use 3a as an example.
Last Friday, I had a really bad day. While I was having breakfast with my younger sister, the sky was growing darker and darker. I heard thunder and saw lightning. When I left the house, ..
Opening: sets the mood
Scene:tells what the writer was doing.
Weather change
Transition:过度
Pre-writing
本单元教材写作情境为“你因为恶劣天气度过了糟糕的一天,写一篇关
于这一天的故事”,属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“灾害防范”这一主题群,涉
及子主题“自然灾害与防范措施,人身安全与自我保护”。常见的写作任务
是描述自然灾害发生前的准备、发生时的经历以及如何应对自然灾害,体
裁多为记叙文或说明文。
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(Unit 5 Section B 3d P49)
审题指导
1.文体:记叙文2.人称:第一人称3.时态:过去进行时和一般过去时
思路点拨
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教材写作品读
Last Friday,I had a really bad
day. While I was having breakfast
with my younger sister,the sky was
getting darker and darker. I heard
thunder and saw lightning. 教材原句
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When I left the house,it started
to rain heavily. The rain was ①too
heavy for me to see the road clearly.
Later,while I was waiting at the bus
stop,②all of a sudden,the cold
wind blew harder,making me feel
terribly cold. My old umbrella even
③went wrong because of the strong
wind. ①【Section B 3a】The wind was
too strong for me to use my
umbrella!(too…to…太……而不
能……)
②【Section B 3a】All of a
sudden,thunder rolled across the
sky.(all of a sudden 突然)
③【Section B 3c】What happened
or went wrong because of the bad
weather?(go wrong 出现故障)
续表
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At last,the bus came. But
because of the rainstorm,there was a
lot of traffic. So the bus was moving
very slowly.④As soon as it stopped
at my school,I jumped off and
rushed towards the classroom.⑤By
the time I got to the classroom, ④【Section B 1d】Tilly’s father
believed her as soon as she…
(as soon as 一……就……)
⑤【Section B 3a】By the time
the bus came,I was cold and
wet.(by the time 到……的时
候)
续表
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I was wet through and ⑥out of
breath.
⑦As a result,I was not only
late but also felt really bad. It was
really a day I never wanted to have
again! ⑥【Section B 3a】When I finally
reached my classroom,out of
breath,my teacher was…
(out of breath 上气不接下气)
⑦【Section B 3a】As a result,
she said we weren’t having a test
after all!(as a result 因此)
续表
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开头句
1.上周日,在我们城镇发生了一起山体滑坡。
翻译: ____________________________________________
Last Sunday,a landslide happened in our town.
2.We were driving home from our relatives’ house when the strong winds
started.【教材Section A 3a】
仿写:当地震发生时,我们正在睡觉。
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We were sleeping when the earthquake happened.
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中间句
1.Suddenly,I heard a loud noise outside.(用all of a sudden升格)
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All of a sudden,I heard a loud noise outside.
2.All of us were shocked and stood still.(用so…that…升格)
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All of us were so shocked that we stood still.
3.He jumped into action right away and rushed to get people off the beach.
【教材Section B 1b】
仿写:然后我们立刻行动起来,冲了出去。
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Then we jumped into action right away and rushed out.
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4.When we arrived at the high ground,we saw the landslide hit our
house.(用as soon as和out of breath升格)
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As soon as we arrived at the high ground,out of breath,we saw the
landslide hit our house.
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结尾句
1.…but thankfully,her family made it to safety just as the water hit the
hotel.【教材Section B 1b】
仿写:我们很伤心,但幸运的是,就在滑坡冲到我家前,我们成功抵达了
安全地带。
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We felt very sad,but luckily,we made it to safety just before the
landslide hit our house.
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2.Thanks to her knowledge and quick thinking,one schoolgirl was able to
save over 100 lives.【教材Section B 1b】
仿写:多亏了老师教给我的知识,我才能在一场自然灾害中救下我的家人。
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Thanks to the knowledge from my teacher,I was able to save my family in a natural disaster.
【名言积累】
1.It never rains but it pours.祸不单行。
2.The darkest hour is that before the dawn.黎明前的时分是最黑暗的。
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自然灾害可能突然降临,我们无法阻止自然灾害,但我们可以用知识
武装自己。请你根据下面提示,以“A Landslide”为题,写一篇短文。
提示问题:
●When did the landslide happen?
●What were your family doing when the disaster happened?
●What did you hear,see,do or feel during the disaster?
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审题指导
1.文体: ________
2.人称: __________
3.时态: ____________和 ____________
记叙文
第一人称
过去进行时
一般过去时
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思路点拨
(温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲)
总述灾害发生的背景
Last Sunday,a landslide…
详述灾害场景,避险措施和结果
I was doing…my parents were doing…
All of a sudden,I heard…
I remembered that our teacher once…
Then we…and rushed out.
…we arrived…we saw…
We felt…but luckily…
点明主题
Thanks to the knowledge…,I was able to…
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小试身手
【基础版】
A Landslide
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Last Sunday,a landslide happened in our town.My family
experienced a terrible day.
It was ten in the morning. I was doing my homework at home. My
parents were doing chores.Suddenly,I heard a loud noise outside. All
of us were shocked and stood still.Then we heard someone
shouting“Landslide! It’s a landslide.” Just then,I remembered that our
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teacher once told us we should quickly escape to the high ground when a
landslide happens. I told my family about it and we started to rush out.
When we arrived at the high ground,we saw the landslide hit our
house. We felt very sad,but luckily,we were safe.
Thanks to the knowledge from my teacher,I was able to save
my family in a natural disaster.
【提升版】
A Landslide
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Last Sunday,a landslide happened in our town.My family
experienced a terrible day.
It was ten in the morning. I was doing my homework at home while
my parents were doing chores.All of a sudden,I heard a loud noise
outside. All of us were so shocked that we stood still.Then we heard
someone shouting,“Landslide! It’s a landslide.”Just then,I remembered
that our teacher once told us we should quickly escape to the high ground
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when a landslide happens. I told my family about it.Then we jumped
into action right away and rushed out. As soon as we arrived at the
high ground,out of breath,we saw the landslide hit our house. We
felt very sad,but luckily,we made it to safety just before the
landslide hit our house.
Thanks to the knowledge from my teacher,I was able to save
my family in a natural disaster.
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