Unit 5 Languages around the world Reading for Writing 如何写建议信 课件（含导学案）-2025-2026学年人教版高中英语必修第一册

人教版必修一 Unit 5 Languages Around the World Reading for Writing Lead-in Pre-reading search home login sign up like favorite comment a post A blog is an online forum(网络论坛) where you can post(v.发帖子) to record or discuss your activities and ideas. Skim the blog and answer the questions. 1. Who started this discussion? Wang Le 2. Who responded to it? Liu Wen, Jia Xin and Li Rui 3. What are those posts mainly about? Some Chinese students’ biggest problems with learning English and their advice. Read the posts and find out the problems and advice. Name Problem Advice Liu Wen Jia Xin's advice 1.listen to ; 2. what you hear; 3. you voice and to the radio host’s. Jia Xin Li Rui's advice It all depends on . 1. For , use short requests; 2. For , use longer request; 3. For , use more polite phrases. Li Rui Your advice trouble with listening to native English speakers how to be polite in English remembering vocabulary English radio programmes repeat record compare who you're talking to close friends people who are not so close someone senior to you How to describe a problem clearly? Liu Wen Hi! I’ve been studying English since primary school. I used to get high marks in English, but now I’m having a lot of trouble with my listening. When I listen to native English speakers talking in a video, I can catch only a few words. I can never quite get the main idea. Any advice? topic sentence + supporting details (facts) Listening to English radio programmes helps me get used to how fast native speakers talk. I also repeat what I hear to help myself to experience the feeling of the language. Sometimes I even record my voice so I can listen to myself and compare my pronunciation with the radio host’s! My biggest headache is how to be polite in English. It’s so much easier to just say “Open the window!”, but in English that can sound really terrible. I have to think about who I'm talking to and then decide whether to say, “Open the window, please!” or “Could you open the window, please?” or even longer “Would you mind opening the window, please?” Jia Xin topic sentence + supporting details (example) Yeah, that’s really hard! I think it all depends on who you’re talking to. If I’m talking to a close friend, I can use short requests, like “Open the window”– our relationship is close and we’re equals, so I only need a few words to bridge the gap between us. But if I’m talking to someone who isn’t very close to me, I must make my request longer—and I must make it a question, not a demand, e.g., “Could you open the window, please?” If I’m talking to someone senior to me, then I should say, “Would you mind opening the window, please?” For me, vocabulary is my biggest problem—there are just SO MANY new words! I can’t keep all the new vocabulary straight in my head, and I certainly can’t remember how to use them all properly. HELP! Li Rui topic sentence + supporting details (facts) Learning English Wang Le Liu Wen Jia Xin Li Rui Draw a mind map about the blog Name Problem Advice Li Rui Your advice remembering vocabulary giving advice Discuss in groups and brainstorm some good advice to Li Rui. What is your biggest problem with learning English? survey spoken English writing grammar reading comprehension 77% 43% 56% 79% problems 系列 1 类别 2 类别 3 类别 4 4.3 2.5 3.5 4.5 Write a post about English study Post-writing: Exchange your drafts and give feedback. General content Is the advice clearly explained? Does the writer give a clear description of the problem? Does each sentence relate to the main idea? Basic writing skills Does the writer use proper expressions to give advice? Does the writer use correct spelling, punctuation, and capitalization? Are there any grammar mistakes? Is the handwriting easy to read? Checklist 高考链接：write a letter of asking for help. 假定你是高一新生李华，在学习英语过程中遇到了困难。请用英语给English Weekly 的编辑写一封邮件求助，主要内容如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.遇到的困难； 3.希望得到建议和帮助 注意：1.词数：约100个单词 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor, Best wishes. Yours sincerely Li Hua Learning English requires persistence and efforts! Post-writing: Difference between a blog and a letter A blog: informal language & posted immediately A letter: formal language & draft & a fixed format 高考应用文写作 Vocabulary building My advice is to use flash cards and to write down the word on one side and a sentence using the word on the other side. Sometimes I even draw a picture on the card, which makes it easier for me to remember the word. Then I can study them when I have time, like on the bus. Describing problems I don’t know how to…… … is a big difficulty for me. ... is my biggest problem I can not/ I can never… I have no idea how/what.. My biggest problem/headache is … I (also) have trouble with… I have some difficulties in … topic sentence + supporting details Write a blog about English study Express problems But now I’m having a lot of trouble with my listening. I can never quite get the main idea. My biggest headache is how to be polite in English. For me, vocabulary is my biggest problem. I can’t keep all the new vocabulary straight in my head. I certainly can’t remember how to use them all properly. List your problems in learning English and brainstorm some useful advice. spoken English understanding others grammar problems vocabulary problem proper use of English lack of confidence 你是高一学生李华，英语学习上遇到了困难，写信向Miss Wang寻求建议，要求包含以下内容： 1．单词多，很难记住； 2．课文太长，难以背诵(recite)； 3．写作有困难； 4. 听说能力低； 5. 向Miss Wang寻求学习英语的方法。 Writing task 要求：不要逐字逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节，词数100左右。 写作指导1: 定框架 体裁 人称 时态 布局 第一、第二人称 求助信（asking for advice） 一般现在时 第一段：写信目的 第二段：描述具体问题 第三段：表达感激 要点1：我英语学习上遇到了困难，写信向Miss Wang寻求建议。 要点2：我发现课本单词多，很难记住。 要点3：课文太长，我难以背诵(recite) 。 要点4：写作有困难，语法错误比较多。 要点5：听说能力低，听说考试表现糟糕。 要点6：向Miss Wang寻求学习英语的方法。 要点7：表达感激。 写作指导2:定要点并适当补充内容 Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 表并列连接词：what's more，besides，in addition， additionally，furthermore，what's worse（更糟糕的是） Last but not least（最后但重要的） 要点2：我发现课本单词多，很难记住.(定语从句) I find our textbook full of new words which are very difficult for me to remember. 要点4：写作有困难，语法错误比较多。（ have great difficulty in ） I have great difficulty in writing and always make many mistakes in grammar. 要点5：听说能力低，听说考试表现糟糕（do badly in, v-ing作结果状语） My listening and speaking ability is weak, making me do badly in listening and speaking exams. 写作指导3：遣词造句 你是高一学生李华，英语学习上遇到了困难，写信向Miss Wang寻求建议，要求包含以下内容： 1．单词多，很难记住； 2．课文太长，难以背诵(recite)； 3．写作有困难； 4. 听说能力低； 5. 向Miss Wang寻求学习英语的方法。 While-Writing 要求：不要逐字逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节，词数100左右。 Dear Miss Wang， My name is Li Hua. I'm writing a letter to you to ask for some advice on English learning. I have met with many difficulties in learning English since I entered senior high school. First of all, I find our textbook full of new words which are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What's more, I have great difficulty in writing and always make many mistakes in grammar. Last but not least, my listening and speaking ability is weak, making me do badly in listening and speaking exams. I don’t know what to do now. Would you like to introduce me some advice so that I can learn English more easily? I would greatly appreciate your timely help. Yours， Li Hua 【核心短语及句型】巩固 1 blog [n] 博客 — blogger [n]写博客的人 used to get high marks(分数) 曾经得高分 be/get used to doing sth 习惯于做某事 have difficulty/trouble with sth 在...方面有困难 listen to sb doing sth 听到某人正在做某事 catch([v]明白；听懂=understand) only a few words 听懂几个单词 get used to how fast native speakers talk 习惯母语人士的语速 repeat what I hear 重复我听到的内容 $ Book 1 Unit 5 Reading for writing导学案 Write a blog about English study Step 1 Lead-in A blog is an online forum(网络论坛) where you can post(v.发帖子) to record or discuss your activities and ideas. Step 2 Reading Task 1 Fast Reading: Skim the blog and answer the questions. 1. Who started this discussion? 2. Who responded to it? 3. What are those posts mainly about? Task 2 Detailed Reading: Read the posts carefully and fill in the table. Name Problem Advice Liu Wen Jia Xin’s advice 1. listen to ; 2. what you hear; 3. you voice and to the radio host’s. Jia Xin Li Rui’s advice It all depends on 1. For , use short requests; 2. For , use longer request; 3. For , use more polite phrases. Li Rui Your advice Task 3 Find out some useful expressions about describing a problem from the posts. 1. 2. 3. 4. Thinking: How to describe a problem clearly? Step 3 Post-reading：Draw a mind map about the blog. Step 4 Writing Task 1 Discuss in groups and brainstorm some good advice to Li Rui. advice Thinking: What is your biggest problem with learning English? Task 2 Write a post about English study. Li Rui ….For me, vocabulary is my biggest problem-there are just SO MANY new words! I can’t keep all the new vocabulary straight in my head, and I certainly can’t remember how to use them all properly. HELP! Step 5 Post-writing: Exchange your drafts and give feedback on your partners’ draft. The checklist General content Is the advice clearly explained? Does the writer give a clear description of the problem? Does each sentence relate to the main idea? Basic writing skills Does the writer use proper expressions to give advice? Does the writer use correct spelling, punctuation, and capitalization? Are there any grammar mistakes? Is the handwriting easy to read? Revise your draft according to your partner’s comments. Step 6 Homework: write a letter of asking for help. 假定你是高一新生李华，在学习英语过程中遇到了困难。请用英语给English Weekly 的编辑写一封邮件求助，主要内容如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.遇到的困难； 3.希望得到建议和帮助 注意：1.词数：80词左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor, Yours sincerely Li Hua Accumulation 积累 1. I’m writing to ask you for help/assistance. 2. I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand. 3. I have difficulty/trouble in ..., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 4. I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, … What’s more, … What troubles me most is that I… 5. Unfortunately, I find/feel it quite difficult/hard/challenging/demanding to do sth. 6. Faced with so many difficulties, I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on...? 7. I am wondering if you could help me with these difficulties. 8. I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. 9. I would appreciate it if you could offer me some necessary/timely help. 10. I would be grateful if you could.... Looking forward to your early reply. 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $