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无灵主语表达情绪
Definition
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无灵主语句概述
无灵主语句:无灵主语+有灵动词
无灵主语:无生命的名词或名词短语作为句子的主语,如时间、地点、自然现象、行为动作、人物情感等;
有灵动词:有生命的动作执行者发出的动作,如see, find, witness, escape,rule等。
Night approaching, darkness ruled the forest.
无灵主语 +
有灵动词
Compare & Summarize
1. When I saw the scene, I felt horrible.
2. China was founded in 1949.
3. The lecture on Tang poetry will be held in our school hall.
4. There was thick fog in the field.
5. She lost courage.
① The sight of the scene filled me with horror.
② 1949 witnessed the establishment of China.
③ Our school hall will witness the lecture on Tang poetry.
④ The thick fog blanketed the field.
⑤ Courage deserted her.
Summary 1:
① 无灵主语可以是动作、_________、_________、_________、_________、等
② 表达公式:___________ + ______________ + 其他
action
time
place
weather
emotion
无灵主语
有灵动词
Focus: Emotions
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无灵主语在情绪描写中的应用
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表达公式:
Courage deserted him.
表达公式: 情绪类名词 + 动词 + 其他
表达公式: 无灵主语 + 有灵动词 + 其他
Emotions
Practice
Positive Emotions
开心 happiness delight joy pleasure
激动 thrill excitement
放松 relief relaxation
热情 passion enthusiasm
满意 satisfaction contentment
惊讶 surprise amazement shock astonishment
Practice
Negative Emotions
伤心 sadness sorrow grief
绝望 desperation despair hopelessness
焦急 worry anxiety
害怕 scare fear fright horror terror
羞愧 shame
尴尬 embarrassment 孤独 loneliness
当主语是情感类名词时,常见的谓语动词:
抓住:rule; catch;seize
支配:hit; strike; take hold of
出现:creep over; well up in sb.
席卷:come over; sweep/flood over sb
撕裂:tear sb into piece
剥夺:deprive sb of sth
抛弃:desert sb
哽咽:choke sb
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常用句型:
1.A wave/flush/sense of +情感名词+flooded over /swept over/seized /took hold of sb.
某人感到一阵....之情...
eg. A wave of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news.
2.The tears of+ 情感名词 +welled up in one's eyes.某人流下....的泪水
eg.The tears of happiness welled up in her eyes.
3.情感名词A +gave way to+ 情感名词B(to do sth).
情感A消失,情感B取而代之
eg.Anxiety and fear gave way to great confidence to continue my performance.
Practice
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1. _______________ tore him into pieces.
Anxiety/Worry
2. __________ choked my words.
Anger
3.
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seized me.
Satisfaction/
Contentment
他焦虑万分,肝肠寸断
我气的说不出话。
我对此很满意。
5. _______________________
________________________blanketed the whole classroom.
Horror/ Terror/ Fright/ Fear/ Scare
4. ______________________________________________________deprived me of my power of speech.
Astonishment/ Shock/ Amazement/ Surprise
我惊讶得说不出话来。
恐惧笼罩着这个教室。
Courage deserted him.
A great sense of relaxation flooded over him.
A wave of horror suddenly seized him.
他没有了勇气。
他感到非常轻松。
他突然感到不寒而栗。
Rewrite the sentences.
1. His confidence suddenly ________him(不自信) when he had to speak.
2. He felt horrible.
A flush of ______ suddenly ________ him.
3. He felt very anxious.
__________________ tore him into pieces.
4. I was proud that you could run an online store successfully.
________________ _____________me because you could run an online store successfully.
A wave of anxiety
horror
seized
A sense of pride
took hold of
deserted
Writing
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请在此输入您的副标题
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Have a try!(5minutes)
结合课堂过程中所见所感,根据所给段落开头续写第一段文章,使之构成一个完整的段落。
要求:1. 50-80字左右
2. 运用至少两个无灵主语句(表达情绪)
3. 内容符合当前情境
Paragraph One: Miss Jiang raised a question, then casting an encouraging smile in my direction. But___________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
Paragraph Two: I let out a sigh of relief and sat down. ___________
____________________________________________________________
Homework
Finish the whole continuation writing.
Miss Jiang raised a question, casting an encouraging smile in my direction. But the classroom with so many honored teachers inside held me still. A wave of nervousness washed over me, I kept my head down, eyes fixed on the desk. If none of us stood up to answer the question, how embarrassed she would be! The thought of this conquered my fear and anxiety. Standing up, I said my answer loudly and proudly, bringing about thunderous applause.
I let out a sigh of relief and sat down.
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