Unit1-4书面表达（专项训练）-2025-2026学年译林版八年级英语下学期期中提升突破

参考答案 1．Dear Milan, I’m glad to hear that you’d like to visit my hometown. Great changes have taken place here in the past few years. In the past, the houses were old and shabby, and the roads were narrow. People led a simple life. But now, there are many tall buildings standing everywhere. The roads are wide and clean, and the environment is beautiful. It’s very convenient to travel around. Besides, there are many places of interest here. I sincerely invite you to come and visit my hometown. I’ll be glad to be your guide. Best regards! Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：这是一篇书信体的邀请信，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：告知对方家乡过去和现在的变化 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：语言表达要真诚、友好，准确传达邀请的诚意；描述家乡变化时要清晰对比过去和现在；格式要符合书信的规范。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：表达收到对方想要参观家乡消息的喜悦之情，引出家乡发生了很大变化。 主体段：具体描述家乡过去和现在的不同，突出现在的良好状况，如房屋、道路、环境等方面，还提及有很多名胜古迹。 结尾段：再次发出邀请，并表示愿意做对方的导游，最后送上祝福。 [第三步：要点展示] 要点一：家乡过去和现在的变化 过去：old and shabby/narrow/a simple life/inconvenient等 现在：tall buildings/wide and clean/ beautiful/convenient/places of interest/tourists等 2． My Life’s Changes Great changes have taken place in my life in the past few years. In the past, I went to school by bike and spent my free time playing games or watching TV. Now I take the subway to school, which is faster. In my spare time, I often travel to different places to enjoy the scenery. I also visit museums online to learn new knowledge without going out. These changes make my life more colorful and convenient. I really enjoy my new life. 【详解】写作步骤解析 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用used to/一般过去时描述过去，一般现在时描述现在 明确要点：描述生活、出行、休闲方式的变化 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数80-100词，基础易懂，贴合初中教材，无语法错误 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，点明生活发生了巨大变化 主体段：分出行、休闲两方面对比过去与现在的变化，加入旅行、在线游览 结尾段：总结变化带来的好处，表达对新生活的喜爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：出行方式变化 过去：went to school by bike; took a bus to travel far away等 现在：take the subway to school, faster and more convenient; travel by high-speed train to different cities, more comfortable等 要点二：休闲方式变化 过去：spent free time playing games/watching TV; studied only in the classroom等 现在：travel to different places; do sports with friends to keep healthy;visit museums online to learn knowledge等 要点三：变化的感受 感受：life becomes more colorful and convenient; get more knowledge and keep healthy; enjoy new life等 3．例文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown. In the past, the houses were old and small. The roads were narrow and dirty. It was not convenient to go out. But now, everything has changed. The houses are tall and new. The roads are wide and clean. There are many parks and supermarkets. We can go anywhere easily by bus or underground. My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful. I love it very much. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，用一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：家乡过去的情况、现在的情况、感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：语句通顺，语法正确，词数80左右 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：点明主题，表达介绍家乡的变化 第二段：介绍家乡过去的情况 第三段：介绍家乡现在的情况 结尾段：表达感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去的情况 住房情况：old/small/crowded等 道路情况：narrow and dirty/untidy等 交通情况：not convenient/traffic jam等 要点二：家乡现在的情况 住房情况：tall and new/big等 道路情况：wide and clean/tidy等 交通情况：by bus/underground/train等 要点三：表达感受 感受描述：more and more beautiful/love/be proud of ...等 4．    China has many amazing places, but the Great Wall is my favorite wonder. It stretches across the northern part of our country.     The Great Wall is incredibly long and old. When I stood on it, I felt like I was touching history. It looks just like a giant dragon winding its way over the mountains. I was deeply moved by the wisdom and hard work of ancient Chinese people who built this magnificent structure thousands of years ago.     Visiting the Great Wall made me feel incredibly proud to be Chinese. I love our motherland and I am proud of its long and glorious history. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文/记叙文，以一般现在时为主，夹杂个人感受. 明确要点：1.介绍：奇迹的名称、位置。2.描述：它的主要特点。3.表达：你的感受和对祖国的情感。 确定人称：第一人称（I/My）为主，第三人称（It/They）为辅。 注意事项：紧扣提示三点，控制词数，语言流畅。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，引出你所选择的“奇迹”及其位置。 主体段：详细描述该奇迹的外观、规模或历史背景等主要特点。 结尾段：总结你的参观或了解后的感受，升华主题，表达对祖国的热爱和自豪感。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：开篇引入 引入句：China is home to many wonders. Among them, I am most impressed by... 具体信息：...the Great Wall. It runs across northern China. 要点二：描述特点 特点选择：规模宏大、历史悠久、工程浩大。 具体描述：It is very long and old. It looks like a huge dragon lying on the mountains. It was built thousands of years ago to protect the country. The ancient people built it with their hands, which was a great achievement. 要点三：表达感受与情感 感受描述：Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very excited and proud. It is a symbol of the wisdom and hard work of the Chinese people. 情感升华：I love our country and I am proud of our long history and culture. 5．例文： Dear Tom, I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the houses were old and the roads were narrow, so it was not convenient for us to go out. But now, there are many tall buildings and wide roads. The traffic is much easier and faster. People live a better life. I often travel around with my family in our free time. Welcome to my hometown! I’ll show you around then. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信体短文，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：家乡过去的状况（房屋老旧、道路狭窄、出行不便）、现在的变化（高楼林立、道路宽阔、交通便捷）、人们生活改善及个人休闲活动 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：包含所有要点，可适当发挥；条理清晰，语句通顺；词数80词左右   [第二步：构思布局] 采用三段式结构 开头段：回应Tom要来中国的消息，引出家乡的变化 主体段：对比家乡过去和现在的面貌，说明生活改善 结尾段：发出欢迎并承诺届时带他游览   [第三步：要点展开] 开头回应：I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. Great changes have taken place in my hometown. 过去状况：In the past, the houses were old and the roads were narrow, so it was not convenient for us to go out. 现在变化：But now, there are many tall buildings and wide roads. The traffic is much easier and faster. People live a better life. 生活改善：I often travel around with my family in our free time. 结尾邀请：Welcome to my hometown! I’ll show you around then. 6． 例文 Dear John,     I’m glad to hear that you will come to China, I hope you will come to Yangzhou. Yangzhou lies in the east of Jiangsu Province, with a population of about 4.5 million. It has a pleasant climate, and April is the best time to visit here, with warm weather and beautiful flowers everywhere.     There are many famous places of interest. The Slender West Lake is a must-see, where you can enjoy the beautiful lake views and traditional Chinese gardens. You can also visit Ge Garden, which is famous for its unique rockery and bamboo.     Besides, you can taste local snacks like Yangzhou fried rice and steamed buns. I will be your guide and show you around. I’m looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：应用文，用一般现在时为主   明确要点：扬州（位置、人口、气候、最佳游览时间），扬州名胜古迹（瘦西湖、个园），扬州特色小吃，发出邀请并主动提出做向导   确定人称：第一人称(I/my)、第三人称（Yangzhou/it）   注意事项：语气亲切自然，符合书信格式，准确传递邀请意图   [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构：   开头段：承接对方要来中国的消息，发出邀请（希望对方来扬州），简要介绍扬州的位置、人口和最佳游览时间   主体段：分别介绍扬州的著名景点（瘦西湖、个园）和当地特色小吃，展现扬州的魅力   结尾段：主动提出做向导，表达对对方到来的期待，呼应开头邀请   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：扬州基本情况   位置描述：lies in the east of Jiangsu Province / is located in the east of Jiangsu Province / is in eastern Jiangsu Province等   人口描述：with a population of about 4.5 million / has a population of around 4.5 million / there are about 4.5 million people here等   气候与游览时间：pleasant climate / comfortable climate；April is the best time to visit here / the best time to come to Yangzhou is April；warm weather / mild weather；beautiful flowers everywhere / flowers blooming everywhere等   要点二：扬州名胜古迹   景点选择：the Slender West Lake / Ge Garden / Daming Temple / He Garden等   景点描述：enjoy the beautiful lake views and traditional Chinese gardens / appreciate the beautiful lake scenery and traditional Chinese gardens；famous for its unique rockery and bamboo / well-known for its special rock piles and bamboo等   要点三：扬州特色小吃与邀请   小吃选择：Yangzhou fried rice / steamed buns / Yangzhou jadeite steamed buns / Yangzhou egg tarts等   邀请与向导：I will be your guide and show you around / I will act as your guide to show you around；I’m looking forward to your coming / I’m looking forward to your arrival / I’m expecting your coming等 7．例文 Dear Simon, I’m glad to introduce my hometown, Nantong to you. Nantong is a beautiful city with a long history. It has rich culture, like blue and white calico. You can also visit Langshan Hill, a famous place of interest with wonderful views. What’s more, the transport here is convenient. You can get around easily by bus or subway. You can also try delicious local food, like fresh Nantong seafood. The Jianghai Tourism Festival is coming soon. I really hope you can come and have fun here. I’m sure you will fall in love with Nantong. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主，围绕介绍南通并发出邀请展开写作 明确要点：介绍南通的文化、景点、交通、美食等特色，向Simon发出游玩邀请 确定人称：第一人称（I）/第二人称（You） 注意事项：表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，词数90词左右，不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：文章开头已给出，引出对南通的介绍 主体段：依次介绍南通的文化特色、著名景点、便捷交通和特色美食 结尾段：结合江海旅游节，发出邀请并表达期待，点明对Simon来访的期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍南通文化与景点 文化特色：with a long history/has rich culture/It is famous for traditional blue and white calico 景点推荐：You can visit Langshan Hill/It is a great place to enjoy the view of the Yangtze River 要点二：介绍南通交通与美食 交通状况：the transport here is convenient/You can take buses or subways easily around the city 特色美食：You can also try delicious local food/Fresh seafood here tastes very good 要点三：发出邀请并表达期待 活动契机：The Jianghai Tourism Festival is coming soon/There will be many interesting activities for visitors 发出邀请：I really hope you can come and have fun here/We can have a wonderful time together here 8． 范文： Dear sister,     I’m so happy to hear that you will come to Singapore next month. Let me tell you something about our country.     First, you can enjoy lots of delicious food here, such as Hainanese chicken rice and curry. Second, you should visit the Night Safari to see animals at night and the National University of Singapore to enjoy the beautiful campus.     To be a well-mannered student, please remember: don’t litter, queue up for tickets and food, speak softly in public places, and always say “please” and “thank you”. These small actions make a big difference.     I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Li 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确认文体：这是一封建议告知类书信 (应用文)，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：需包含美食介绍、景点介绍、文明行为建议 确定人称：第一人称 (I) 和第二人称 (you) 注意事项：不得使用真实姓名和学校 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：表达对表妹来访的开心之情，引出介绍 主体段一：介绍新加坡的美食和景点 主体段二：说明文明行为建议 结尾段：表达期待见面的心情 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：美食介绍 美食种类：delicious food/local dishes/traditional food等 具体例子：Hainanese chicken rice/curry等 要点二：景点介绍 景点：the Night Safari/see animals at night/the National University of Singapore/enjoy the beautiful campus/night zoo等 要点三：文明行为建议 建议：don’t litter/queue up for tickets and food/speak softly in public places /say “please” and “thank you”/be polite/use kind words等 总结：small actions make a big difference/being polite shows respect等 9．例文 I often read books in my free time. I read for pleasure and knowledge: it helps me relax after school and opens up my mind. I love reading storybooks for fun and science books to learn new facts. I have good reading habits: I take notes while reading, draw mind maps to remember key points, and read for 30 minutes every day. Reading makes me wiser and enriches my life. In the future, I will keep reading and share good books with my friends. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：本文是一篇应用文，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：为什么喜欢阅读、介绍阅读的书籍类型、说明个人阅读习惯 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：词数80左右，覆盖所有思维导图要点，逻辑连贯，不出现真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 点明主题，引出对阅读的分享 开头段： 主体段：按“阅读原因→书籍类型→阅读习惯”的逻辑，依次覆盖所有要点，层次清晰 结尾段：总结阅读的意义，升华主题，呼应“畅享阅读”的征文主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：阐述阅读的原因 原因：for pleasure/for knowledge/for relaxing/to improve my studies等 要点一：阅读的书籍类型 类型：storybooks/science books/history books/nature books等 要点三：个人阅读习惯： 习惯：take notes while reading/draw mind maps to remember key points/read for 30 minutes every day/discuss with friends等 10．例文 My favourite book Reading is like a bright light in my life. It fills me with knowledge and opens up a whole new world, so I love it deeply. Reading makes my life full and colourful. It helps me open up my mind and learn more about the world. My favourite book is The Little Prince. It tells the story of a prince’s adventures on different planets. Through his stories, I learn the true meaning of love and friendship. It is not only a story for children but also a lesson for adults. For reading tips, I suggest everyone read slowly and take notes to understand better. We should also read classics to enrich our minds. Let’s start reading right away and make our lives more colourful by reading! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：本文是一篇应用文，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①读书的意义 ②介绍最喜欢的书 ③读书的建议 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：词数不少于90，覆盖流程图所有要点，逻辑连贯 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明阅读的重要性，奠定全文基调 主体段：按“读书的意义→ 最喜欢的书→ 读书建议”的逻辑，依次覆盖流程图所有要点，层次清晰 结尾段：发出号召，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：读书的意义 make life full and colourful/open up my mind and learn more about the world/bring endless joy/Relax等 要点二： 书名：《The Little Prince》/《Journey to the West》/《A Brief History of Time》等 内容：tells the story of a prince’s adventures.../the story of the monks’pilgrimage/popular science knowledge about the universe等 读后感：learn the true meaning of love and friendship/courage and teamwork/inspire interest in science等 要点三：阅读建议 read slowly and take notes/read classics to enrich our minds/stick to daily reading/Read widely等 11． 例文 I love reading books, especially science fiction. They are full of rich imagination and show me various amazing future worlds with wonderful stories. I usually read for half an hour quietly before going to bed every night. Sometimes, I take careful notes to remember good ideas and beautiful sentences in them. Reading not only brings me great joy and relaxation, but also helps me learn many new words and think more deeply about life. Good books are just like close friends, always guiding me to grow better and become wiser every day. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：书籍类型及原因、阅读时间及方式、收获 确定人称：第一人称(I) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明主题 主体段：围绕阅读展开论述 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：书籍类型及原因 类型选择：science fiction/classic novels/adventure stories… 原因说明：full of rich imagination/have interesting plots/plots are exciting and surprising… 要点二：阅读时间及方式 阅读时间：before going to bed/on weekend afternoons/at lunch time… 阅读方式：take careful notes/read with my classmates and discuss ideas/mark exciting parts to read again… 要点三：收获 收获说明：think more deeply about life/understand more about people’s feelings/become more brave in life… 12．例文 Reading is important While AI tools like Deepseek provide instant answers, reading still plays an important role in our growth. Firstly, books teach us what AI can’t. For example, fairy tales show us how to tell right from wrong while history books help us understand the past. Reading encourages us to think deeply instead of copying answers. However, what can we read? In fact, we can choose different types of books in different areas. We can not only read about our subjects like Chinese and Physics, but also read something we are interested in, including music, painting, travelling and so on. By the way, in order to be a wise reader, we’d better take notes when reading a book. Using AI tools to check new words is helpful. But we shouldn’t depend on them too much so that we can develop our thinking abilities better. Reading is like a key. It opens the door to knowledge and helps us grow with AI together. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：议论文，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：补全标题,读书的原因、读书的范围、理性读书的方法 确定人称：第一人称（I/We），客观论述为主 注意事项：词数100词左右，覆盖所有思维导图要点，逻辑清晰，语法规范。    [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：补全标题，直接点明核心观点 主体段：介绍读书的原因，读书的范围，理性读书的方法 结尾段：总结升华，点明读书的意义 [第三步：要点展开+素材填充] 要点1：读书的原因 原因表达：books teach us what AI can’t/tell right from wrong/understand the past/think deeply等 要点2：读书的范围 书籍类型：subjects (Chinese/Physics)/interesting things (music/travel/painting)等 要点3：理性读书的方法 方法描述：take notes/use AI tools to check new words等 建议提醒：don’t depend on AI too much等 13．例文 My advice for an online museum With the development of AI and VR, online museums are becoming more and more popular. I hope to see ancient cultural relics and famous artworks in the online museum. It can use VR technology to let us “walk through” the museum and enjoy exhibits closely. Online museums are important because they break time and space limits, allowing people around the world to visit easily. I think online museums are amazing—they bring culture closer to us and make learning more fun. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：本文是一篇应用文，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：① 想在线博物馆看到的内容；② 可使用的技术；③ 在线博物馆的重要性；④ 个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：词数90词左右，覆盖所有 4 个提示问题，逻辑连贯，语句通顺 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明主题，引出对线上博物馆的建议，承接征文背景 主体段：按“想看的内容→可用技术→重要性→个人感受”的逻辑，依次覆盖所有问题要点，层次清晰 结尾段：总结观点，表达对线上博物馆的期待，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：想看的内容 I hope to see ancient cultural relics and famous artworks in the online museum./local cultural treasures and historical stories等 要点二：可用的技术 It can use VR technology to let us “walk through” the museum and enjoy exhibits closely./AI to introduce exhibits in detail and VR to offer a 360-degree view等 要点三：重要性 Online museums are important because they break time and space limits, allowing people around the world to visit easily./they help people enjoy culture without going out, especially during busy times等 要点四：感受 I think online museums are amazing—they bring culture closer to us and make learning more fun./I find online museums really wonderful— it brings us a brand-new cultural experience等 14．例文 My way of travelling Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose “in-person travel” because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories. First, travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. Second, it’s a chance to escape from daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views. Although “online tours” are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it’s about living in the moment. 【详解】【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：议论文，以一般现在时、一般过去时为主 明确要点：围绕“My way of travelling”，完整覆盖3个写作要点（选择与原因、相关旅行经历、感悟），词数100词左右 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实人名、校名，全文连贯通顺，开头已给出不计入总词数 【第二步：构思布局】 开头段：题目已给出引入，点明自己的旅行选择 主体段：阐述选择的原因，分享印象深刻的旅行经历 结尾段：总结感悟，升华主题 【第三步：要点展开】 选择1：亲历旅行（In-person travel） 要点一：选择与原因 核心词汇：experience cultures deeply/create unforgettable memories/feel local atmosphere/escape daily routines/immerse myself in local life/make lasting memories/feel the real vibe/get away from busy life 要点二：旅行经历 核心词汇：visit Beijing/walk through the ancient hutongs/taste street food/talk with locals/climb the Great Wall 要点三：感悟 核心词汇：nothing compares to real adventure/travelling is about living in the moment/real experience can’t be replaced/travel is about enjoying the present   选择2：云游（Online tours） 要点一：选择与原因 核心词汇：convenient/time-saving/visit places without going out/learn about the world at home /easy and accessible/save time and money/explore the world from home 要点二：旅行经历 核心词汇：online tour of the Palace Museum/zoom in to see details/learn history/zoom in on cultural relics/learn about history online 要点三：感悟 核心词汇：broaden horizons/great way to learn about the world/widen my horizons/a perfect way to explore the world 15．参考范文 The Internet Changes Our Life The Internet is changing our lives in many ways. It makes the world feel smaller, because we can connect with people everywhere easily. With the Internet, we can do many things at home. We can take online classes to learn new knowledge, go on virtual trips to famous places, and chat with friends whenever we want. The Internet is fast and convenient. It helps us do almost everything quickly. It really changes our daily life for the better. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：互联网让世界变小；可以在线学习、旅游、聊天；方便快捷，改变日常生活 确定人称：第一人称 (we/our/us)、第三人称 (It/the Internet) 注意事项：80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明互联网正在改变我们的生活，引出“让世界变小”的特点 主体段：分别介绍互联网的三个功能：在线学习、虚拟旅游、线上聊天 结尾段：总结互联网“方便快捷”的优势，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：世界因互联网变小 核心表达：makes the world feel smaller/connect with people everywhere easily/talk to people around the world easily/makes the world a global village等 要点二：网络多元功能 核心表达：take online classes/go on virtual trips/chat with friends online/learn online/talk to friends online/visit places virtually等 要点三：便捷改变生活 核心表达：fast and convenient/change our daily life for the better/simple and fast/improve our daily life等 16． Reading plays an important role in my life. I like reading novels and history books best. I usually spend half an hour reading every evening before going to bed. Reading brings me a lot of changes. It not only helps me learn more knowledge and open up my eyes to the world, but also makes me calm down when I feel stressed. It enriches my mind and makes me a better person. Reading makes a full man. I hope all my classmates can keep reading every day. Let's open more books and enjoy the fun of reading together! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：分享类记叙文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：喜欢的书籍类型及阅读时间、阅读带给你的帮助与改变、呼吁同学们坚持阅读 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、学校名称等隐私信息 [第二步：构思布局] 采用三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出阅读的重要性，介绍自己喜欢的书籍类型与日常阅读时间 主体段：具体阐述阅读带来的学习提升、心态成长等帮助与改变 结尾段：总结阅读的意义，点题 “Reading makes a full man”，向同学们发出坚持阅读的呼吁 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：喜欢的书籍类型及阅读时间 书籍类型选择：novels、history books 阅读时间安排： half an hour、every evening before going to bed 要点二：阅读的帮助与改变 学习提升：learn more knowledge、open up my eyes to the world 心态成长：calm me down when I'm stressed、enrich my mind 个人收获：help me become a better person 要点三：呼吁同学们坚持阅读 点题：Reading makes a full man 发出号召：hope all my classmates can keep reading every day、Let's open more books and enjoy the fun of reading together！ 17．范文： My favourite book My favourite book is Gulliver in Lilliput. It is written by Jonathan Swift. It tells a story about a man named Gulliver. He goes on a trip by sea and arrives at an island with small people. I love this book because it is very interesting. It makes me feel happy and relaxed. I learn to be brave and kind from this book. I think everyone should read this great book. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书籍介绍类记叙文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：包含四个方面——书名、作者、主要内容、喜欢的原因 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第三人称（it/he） 注意事项：语句通顺，语法正确；词数70~90 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：介绍书名和作者 第二段：描述书的主要内容 第三段：说明喜欢的原因 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：书名和作者 书名：Gulliver in Lilliput/Harry Potter/The Little Prince/Journey to the West 作者：Jonathan Swift/J.K. Rowling/Antoine de Saint-Exupéry/Wu Cheng’en 要点二：主要内容 主角：a man named Gulliver/a boy named.../a little prince 情节：goes on a trip/arrives at an island/has many adventures 特色：with small people/in a magical world/on a farm 要点三：喜欢的原因 趣味性：very interesting/full of fun/makes me feel happy and relaxed 教育意义：learn to be brave and kind/learn valuable lessons 要点四：个人收获 品质学习：learn to be brave/learn to be kind/learn to face difficulties 情感体验：brings me joy/helps me relax/makes me think 18． 范文： Hello everyone! Today I’d like to share my love for books and online tours. My favourite book is The Old Man and the Sea by Hemingway. It tells a story about an old fisherman who never gives up, even when facing great difficulties. I also enjoy online tours because they are cheap and convenient. I can visit famous places around the world without leaving home. It really opens up my mind. Both reading books and taking online tours help me learn new things and relax. They make my life richer. I hope everyone can try them! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿/分享类文章，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：最喜欢的一本书（书名、作者、简要内容）、喜爱在线旅游的原因（省钱、方便、开阔视野）、读书与在线旅游共同带来的收获 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖所有要点 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开场白：引出话题 主体段一：介绍最喜欢的一本书 主体段二：说明喜爱在线旅游的原因 主体段三：总结读书与在线旅游的共同收获 结束语：号召 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：最喜欢的一本书 书名与作者：The Old Man and the Sea by Hemingway/...by...等 简要内容：an old fisherman who never gives up/facing great difficulties/keeps fighting等 要点二：在线旅游的原因 省钱：cheap/save money/no travel costs等 方便：convenient/visit places without leaving home/easy to do等 开阔视野：open up my mind/learn about different cultures/see the world等 要点三：共同收获 学习收获：learn new things/get knowledge/understand the world better等 放松身心：relax/enjoy myself/feel peaceful等 生活丰富：make my life richer/bring me joy等 要点四：号召 号召表达：I hope everyone can try them!/Let’s enjoy reading and online tours together.等 19． 例文 Hello, everyone. The great writer Gorky once said, “Books are the ladder of human progress.” Reading is a wonderful way to enrich our minds. It not only broadens our knowledge and opens our minds, but also helps us develop independent thinking and shape a positive attitude towards life. My favorite book is The Little Prince, written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry. The main character is a little prince from a tiny planet. I love this book because it teaches me the true meaning of love, friendship and seeing with the heart. It reminds me to keep a childlike innocence and cherish the people around me. Let’s read more books and grow together. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿（读书分享类），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：读书的好处（增长知识、开阔思维、独立思考等）、介绍一本喜欢的书（书名、作者、主要人物、喜欢的原因） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露班级、姓名等个人信息，词数不少于90词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接首句，总述读书的好处，点明读书的意义 主体段：介绍自己喜欢的书，包含书名、作者、主要人物和喜欢的原因 结尾段：发出读书倡议，呼应主题，收束全文 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：读书的好处 核心作用：broaden our knowledge and open our minds（增长知识，开阔思维）、develop independent thinking（培养独立思考）、shape a positive attitude（塑造积极心态） 表达逻辑：用 not only…but also…结构串联，符合初中语法，清晰易懂 要点二：介绍一本喜欢的书 书名&作者：The Little Prince written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry 主要人物：a little prince from a tiny planet 喜欢的原因：teaches the true meaning of love, friendship and seeing with the heart（教会爱、友谊与用心看世界的真谛）、reminds to keep childlike innocence and cherish people（提醒保持童心、珍惜身边人） 语言特点：用初中核心词汇，句式简单，符合学生水平 20．例文 My Favourite Book: The Little Prince The Little Prince is a famous novel written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry. It tells of a young prince who visits different planets and learns about life, love and friendship. The main character, the Little Prince, leaves his planet and his rose to travel the universe. He meets a fox and a pilot, and the story tells us that what is important cannot be seen with the eyes. I love this book because it teaches us to value simple things in life, like friendship and kindness. I would highly recommend it to everyone, especially teenagers, because it helps us understand the importance of love and responsibility. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主，介绍书的内容和表达感受。 明确要点：书名、作者、国籍；主要内容（小王子，玫瑰，狐狸，飞行员）；喜欢的原因 确定人称：第三人称（介绍书）和第一人称（表达喜好）。 注意事项：书名要斜体，条理清楚，行文连贯，词数不少于90。。 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：总起句，介绍书名，作者和核心主题。 主体段：分述故事梗概和核心人物，引用名言。 结尾段：总结感受，说明喜欢的原因并推荐给他人。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：书籍介绍 书名：The Little Prince 作者：Antoine de Saint-Exupéry 核心主题：life, love, and friendship 要点二：故事梗概 主要角色：the Little Prince/the rose/the fox/the pilot 情节发展：travel the universe 核心教诲：what is important cannot be seen with the eyes 要点三：个人感受 喜欢原因：teaches us to value simple things 推荐对象：everyone, especially teenagers 推荐理由：understand the importance of love and responsibility 第2页，共22页 第21页，共22页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $Unit1--4书面表达 1.假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Milan想来中国旅游，想到你的家乡看看。请你给他写一封电子邮 件，介绍家乡过去和现在的变化，并邀请他来访。 写作要点： 1.过去：房子老旧、道路狭窄、生活简单： 2.现在：高楼林立、道路宽阔、环境优美、交通便利、有很多名胜古迹： 3.邀请他来家乡游玩，你愿意做他的导游。 写作要求： 1.词数80-100左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)： 2.语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 2.题目：My Life's Changes 要求： 1.条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范，无语法错误； 2.结合Unit1-3所学内容，描述自己过去和现在生活、出行、休闲方式的变化； 3.可加入在线游览、旅行等相关内容，词数80-100词： 4.内容贴合教材，基础易懂，适合初中学生。 第11页，共11页 3.假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解你的家乡这些年的变化。请你根据以下提示，给Tom写 一封电子邮件，介绍家乡的变化。 提示： 1.过去：房子旧，道路窄，交通不便： 2.现在：房子新，道路宽，交通方便，有公园、超市； 3.你的感受。 要求：1.词数80左右； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确。 4.请你写一篇短文，介绍中国的一处奇迹（古代或现代均可)，谈谈它的特点以及它带给你的感受。 提示： 1.介绍奇迹的名称、位置； 2.描述它的主要特点； 3.表达你的感受和对祖国的情感。 要求： 1.词数80-100词左右； 2.内容完整，条理清晰： 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 第10页，共11页 5.假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom想来中国游玩，并想了解你家乡的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一 篇80词左右的短文。 要点提示： 1.过去：房屋老旧、道路狭窄、出行不便： 2.现在：高楼林立、道路宽阔、交通便捷； 3.人们生活更好，你经常和家人周边旅行。 要求： 1.包含所有要点，可适当发挥： 2。条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范： 3.词数80左右。 6.假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jon计划四月份来中国旅游。请你给他写一封邮件，邀请他来你的 家乡旅行。 写作提示： 1.简单介绍你的家乡扬州（如地理位置、人口及气候等）； 2.推荐游玩景点（至少两处）： 3.其他的游玩建议。 写作要求：1.邮件中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.邮件中不得出现真实姓名和学校 名称；3.词数100左右（邮件中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 Dear John. I'm glad to hear that you will come to China,I hope you will come to Yangzhou. 第11页，共11页 Yours, Li Hua 7.南通有情，温暖如春；南通有情，诚意满满。“江海旅游节”拉开帷幕，向游客们发出“常游南通， 乐享南通，爱上南通”的邀约。假如你是李华，根据提示选择或自拟至少两个要点，写一封电子邮件给你的 朋友Simon,介绍南通并邀请他来南通游玩。 1)Culture 2)Transport 3)Places of interest 4)或自拟 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.词数90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Simon. I'm glad to introduce my hometown,Nantong to you. Yours, LiHua 8.假如你是新加坡(Singapore)的李丽，你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹来信告诉你下个月来新加坡旅游。 请你根据以下提示给她写一封信，并告诉她在旅游期间如何做一名文明的(well-mannered)中学生。 写作要点： 第10页，共11页 1.美食多样 2.旅游景点：夜间动物园the Night Safari、新加坡国立大学the National University of Singapore 3.在新加坡旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生 写作要求： ()不得使用真实姓名和学校。 (②)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。 (4)字数100词左右。 Dear sister, Yours LiLi 9.假如你校英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图提示，用英文写一篇短 文投稿。 Enjoy reading Why do you read? What kind of books What are your do you read? reading habits? for pleasure storybooks take notes for knowledge science books draw mind maps 注意：(1)内容须包含以上所有要点，并作适当发挥； (2)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数： (3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。 I often read books in my free time. 第11页，共11页 10.读万卷书，行万里路。读书是生活中不可或缺的部分，读书使人充实，读书使人生更加多彩。请 你根据以下流程图，以My favourite book'”为题。介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。并谈一谈关于读书的建议。 Meaning Book Tip 注意事项： (why) (what) (how) (1)短文内容需涵盖流程图中的要点，并作适当发挥； (2)要求语句通顺、意思连贯； (3)词数不少于90，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My favourite book Reading is like a bright light in my life. Let's start reading right away and make our lives more colourful by reading! 11.最近，你校英语社团正在开展“好书伴我成长”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文， 分享你的阅读习惯与感悟，参加此次活动。 要点提示： 1.你喜欢的书籍类型及原因； 2.你的阅读时间和阅读方式： 3.阅读带给你的收获。 要求： 1.词数80-100： 2.包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。 第10页，共11页 12.2025年1月，Deepseek横空出世，其强大的推理与知识整合能力给人们的生活、工作、学习都 带来了巨大的影响。对此，有人产生困惑和疑问：在当今这个人工智能蓬勃发展和信息爆炸的时代，我们 还需要读书吗？读书还能给我们带来什么呢？请在横线处补全标题，并根据思维导图，谈谈你的看法。 Why do we read? Reading is What can we read? How should we read wisely? 要求： ()内容：包含思维导图中的所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)词数：100词左右。 l3.随着AI和VR技术的发展，线上旅游正成为新风潮。你校英语俱乐部与市博物馆联合举行题为“y advice for an online museum"的征文比赛。请根据下方提示问题，结合自己的线上博物馆游览经历，写一篇90词左 右的英语文章，参加比赛。Questions: 1.What do you want to see in an online museum? 2.What technology can an online museum use? 3.Why are online museums important nowadays? 4.How do you feel about online museums? My advice for an online museum 第11页，共11页 14.随着网络和人工智能(AI)的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择：“云游Online tours'”和亲历 In-person travel”。“云游借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”，则是亲身前往心 仪之地，感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，那你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My way of travelling” 为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。 写作要点： 1.陈述你的选择并说明原因（至少两点）； 2.分享一次令你印象深刻的相关旅行： 3.谈谈你的感悟。 My way of travelling Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings.I choose l5.以“The Internet Changes Our Life'”为题，写一篇短文，80词左右。 要点： 1.互联网让世界变小； 2.可以在线学习、旅游、聊天； 3方便快捷，改变日常生活。 第10页，共11页 l6.假定你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展Reading makes a full man”读书分享活动。请你根据以下 要点写一篇短文，分享你的阅读经历与感受。 要点提示： 1.你喜欢的书籍类型及阅读时间； 2.阅读带给你的帮助与改变： 3.呼吁同学们坚持阅读。 要求： 1.词数80-100： 2.包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 l7.请以My favourite book”为题写一篇短文。要求： 1.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范： 2.内容包括：你最喜欢的书的名字、作者、主要内容、你喜欢的原因； 3.词数70-90。 l8.假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部正在举办“Books and Online Tours”"主题分享活动。请你根据以下 要点，写一篇英语短文进行发言。 第11页，共11页 要点提示： 1.你最喜欢的一本书（书名、作者、简要内容）： 2.你喜爱在线旅游的原因（省钱、方便、开阔视野）； 3.结合自身经历，谈谈读书与在线旅游共同带给你的收获。 要求： 1.包含所有要点，可适当发挥： 2.词数：80-100词； 3.语句通顺，条理清晰，书写规范： 4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。 19.高尔基说过：“书籍是人类进步的阶梯。”为提高学生阅读兴趣，学校英语社将组织一场读书分享会， 请你根据以下信息，用英文写一篇读书心得与同学分享，心得包括以下内容： 1.读书的好处 *增长知识，开阔思维*独立思考*…。 读书心得 2.介绍一本喜欢的书 *书名、作者*主要人物*喜欢的原因 注意：1.词数：不少于90；2.不得透露班级、姓名等个人信息。 Hello,everyone.The great writer Gorky once said,"Books are the ladder of human progress. 第10页，共11页 Thank you for your listening 20.书籍是人类进步的阶梯，一本好书能给予我们无尽的启迪与力量。请你选择一本印象最深刻的书， 撰写一篇读书报告。 写作要点： 1.What is the book about?(The title,the author,and the main idea.) 2.What happens in the story?(The main character and key events.) 3.Why do you like it?(What did you learn?Would you recommend it?) 要求：1.包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.词数不少于90。 第11页，共11页