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2026年广州高三英语二模读后续写深度解读 人与自然・守护生命暖心行动类（高考高频主流题材） （2026年4月21日下午考试） 第二节 读后续写（满分 25 分） Last summer, we moved into a beautiful house where sunlight flooded the kitchen every morning. The only downside was the backyard: behind tall, messy bushes lay an old pond, dry and smelly. “Let’s bring it back to life!” I suggested. My parents smiled and agreed. It became our family’s summer project. We cleaned out the mud and lined the edge with pretty stones. At the garden shop, I chose cattails and water lilies. “They float like little umbrellas,” Mum said. “Yes,” I replied proudly, “and they keep the water cool and clean.” Then came the best part: two tiny goldfish — Spotty and Sparkly. I also asked about a pond heater. I’d read that if the pond froze solid in winter, the fish would run out of oxygen. They needed a small hole in the ice to breathe, which a heater could keep open. But they were sold out. As we left, I noticed a poster listing clever ideas to prevent ice from sealing the pond — for example, keeping the water moving, since flowing water doesn’t freeze easily. I thought we’d get a heater long before winter, so I didn’t think much of them. Soon, baby fish appeared! Frogs and butterflies often visited too. Our pond felt like a living ecosystem. Then one evening, the weather report warned of an early freeze — colder and sooner than usual. My stomach dropped. We still didn’t have a heater! Dad immediately ordered one online. “It’ll arrive before the ice forms,” he promised. Early the next morning, I woke to a world covered in white. I threw on my coat and ran to the pond. It was frozen with clear ice — no open water! Yet I could still see the fish moving slowly beneath. I rushed back inside. Dad had already called the delivery company, but they said it wouldn’t arrive today because of the icy roads. “The fish can only last half a day without fresh air!” I cried. “Let’s think of something now,” Mum said. 注意：续写词数应为 180 左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 （1） So we started brainstorming ideas together. （2） By nine o’clock, we had built a simple device to keep a hole open in the ice. 一、全文深度解读 1. 读情节 情节阶段 内容描述 开端 全家改造旧池塘，种植物、养金鱼，期待过冬 发展 池塘加热器售罄，未重视防冻妙招；突遇早冻，池塘冰封 高潮 加热器因雪路延迟送达，金鱼面临缺氧危险 续写第一段 全家集思广益，回忆海报方法，确定流水防冻方案 续写第二段 自制装置成功破冰供氧，金鱼获救，全家收获成长 2. 读人物 人物 人物特点 I 细心负责、热爱生命、善于观察、临危不乱 Parents 支持配合、冷静智慧、动手能力强 Goldfish 弱小无助，是全文守护的核心对象 3. 读时态 全文以一般过去时态为主，续写需保持时态一致，动作、场景、情绪均使用过去时。 4. 读冲突 冲突类型 冲突内容 外在冲突 突发早冻、池塘冰封、加热器延迟送达 内在冲突 “我” 的焦急担忧、全家紧急自救的决心 5. 读情绪发展 原文：期待→安心→担忧→恐慌→紧张续写发展：冷静→思考→行动→安心→欣慰结局：团结协作化解危机，守护小生命，懂得敬畏自然 6. 读主题 核心主题：团结协作能化解危机，用智慧与爱心守护弱小生命。延伸主题：提前准备的重要性、自然生命可贵、家庭同心力量大。 二、首句定位与续写框架 Paragraph 1：集思广益，确定方案承接开头句→全家回忆海报妙招→一致认同 “流水不冻” 原理→紧张但坚定地准备材料。 Paragraph 2：装置完工，成功救鱼承接开头句→介绍自制装置原理与效果→冰面保持开口，金鱼恢复活力→加热器次日送达，全家感悟成长。 三、原文伏笔与回扣 原文伏笔 回扣伏笔 poster: keep water moving, not freeze easily 续写用 “让水流动” 破冰，呼应海报提示 pond heater sold out 续写紧急自制装置，替代加热器 fish need oxygen to breathe 续写核心目标：保开口、通氧气、救金鱼 early freeze, no heater 续写紧急自救，化解突发危机 四、高阶表达积累 必写场景 1：紧急 brainstormWe wracked our brains for practical ways to save the fish in panic.译文：我们焦急万分，绞尽脑汁寻找救鱼的实用办法。 必写场景 2：回忆妙招I suddenly recalled the poster saying running water never freezes easily.译文：我突然想起海报上说流动的水不易结冰。 必写场景 3：装置生效The device worked perfectly, keeping a small hole open for fresh oxygen.译文：装置效果极佳，保持小口开放，让氧气顺利进入。 必写场景 4：主旨升华Love and wisdom can always protect the fragile lives in nature.译文：爱与智慧总能守护大自然中脆弱的生命。 五、续写范文 So we started brainstorming ideas together. I paced anxiously, then suddenly remembered the poster I’d seen in the garden shop — running water would not freeze. Mum and Dad agreed it was the most workable solution. We quickly collected a small water pump, pipes and a battery pack from the garage. My hands shook with urgency as we prepared each item, hoping the method could really save the fish from lacking oxygen. By nine o’clock, we had built a simple device to keep a hole open in the ice. We placed the pump in the pond and let water flow gently on the ice surface. Soon a clear opening stayed unfrozen, and fresh air reached the fish below. They swam actively again, as if expressing thanks. The next day, the heater finally arrived, but we knew our quick thinking had saved the day. This unforgettable experience taught us that unity and wisdom can protect every small life in nature. 六、微场景训练 场景：突发早冻池塘冰封，全家自制装置救金鱼 动作描写：全家急找材料、组装装置、让水流动破冰。 情绪描写：焦急恐慌、冷静思考、紧张操作、欣慰安心。 语言描写：“我想起海报说流动的水不会结冰！” 心理描写：只要保持开口，金鱼就能活下去。 主旨升华：团结与智慧，能守护每一个弱小生命。 解析： 动作描写：We searched for materials, built the device and made water flow to break the ice. 情绪描写：Anxiety turned into calmness, then joy and relief. 语言描写：I cried, “I remember running water never freezes!” 心理描写：We believed the fish could survive if we kept a hole open. 主旨升华：Unity and wisdom can protect every small and weak life. 七、十句五定法拆解（口诀：承细渲心行，承动解情结） 段落 句子序号 功能 核心任务 口诀 Para. 1 第 1 句 衔接首句 承接 brainstorm，写全家焦急思考 承 第 2 句 细节 / 场景 回忆海报妙招，确定核心方案 细 第 3 句 环境 / 人群 全家快速寻找材料，紧张准备 渲 第 4 句 内心 / 神态 “我” 焦急又期待，双手颤抖 心 第 5 句 动作描写 齐心整理工具，准备制作装置 行 Para. 2 第 6 句 衔接首句 承接装置完工，介绍使用方法 承 第 7 句 动作 / 场景 启动装置，水流破冰保持开口 动 第 8 句 解决问题 氧气进入，金鱼恢复活力 解 第 9 句 情绪描写 全家松一口气，欣慰安心 情 第 10 句 结尾升华 团结智慧守护生命，收获成长 结 Paragraph 1 So we started brainstorming ideas together. 序号 口诀 续写 第 1 句 承 We looked at each other worriedly, wracking our brains for ways to save the fish. 第 2 句 细 I suddenly recalled the garden shop poster that running water never freezes easily. 第 3 句 渲 We immediately rushed to the garage to collect pipes, a pump and a battery. 第 4 句 心 I was filled with worry and hope, with my hands shaking a little in a hurry. 第 5 句 行 Dad and I worked together to check the tools, ready to make the lifesaving device. Paragraph 2 By nine o’clock, we had built a simple device to keep a hole open in the ice. 序号 口诀 续写 第 6 句 承 We set up the device gently on the ice and connected it to the battery correctly. 第 7 句 动 The water began to flow slowly, keeping a small opening from freezing over. 第 8 句 解 Fresh oxygen flowed in, and the fish swam happily and actively under the ice. 第 9 句 情 We sighed with great relief, smiling at each other with deep joy and pride. 第 10 句 结 This experience taught us that unity and wisdom can protect every small life. 八、公式对应解析 1、 承：承接段首句，描写全家焦急思考的状态 2、 细：回忆关键伏笔（海报妙招），明确自救方案 3、 渲：刻画全家快速找材料的紧张场景，烘托氛围 4、 心：描写 “我” 担忧又期盼的内心，贴合情绪 5、 行：全家协作准备工具，为制作装置铺垫 6、 承：承接第二段首句，介绍装置安装使用 7、 动：启动装置、水流破冰，展现自救过程 8、 解：冰口保持、氧气充足，金鱼成功获救 9、 情：全家欣慰放松，渲染温暖圆满的情绪 10、 结：点明主题，团结与智慧守护生命 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $