Unit 4 Inspiration 记叙文写人（单元应用文写作精练）英语沪教版2020选择性必修第二册

Unit 4 Inspiration记叙文写人 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：记叙文写人（Writing an essay about a teen role model）写作指南 写作框架： 开篇段 Introduction 用名人名言/现象引入“青少年榜样”话题，明确指出自己的榜样是谁，简要说明其核心特质（如坚持、创新、责任感）。 主体段 Body Paragraph 聚焦榜样的核心事迹，通过1-2个具体事例（如公益行动、克服困难的经历），展现其品质。 分析榜样的影响，说明其如何改变自己的认知、行为（如激励自己坚持爱好、参与公益），或对社会/同龄人的积极作用。 结合自身，阐述从榜样身上学到的启示，以及未来如何以其为目标行动（如培养同款品质、践行相似理念）。 结尾段 Closing 总结榜样的价值，重申其对自己的意义，升华主题（如“榜样不是遥不可及的偶像，而是照亮成长的光”）。 写作词汇短语： 1. 描述榜样特质 • 责任感：a strong sense of responsibility • 毅力/坚持：perseverance, stick to one’s goals, never give up • 创新/创造力：innovation, creativity, come up with new ideas • 同理心/善良：empathy, kindness, care about others • 自律：self-discipline, manage one’s time well 2. 描述事迹与影响 • 发起/参与（活动）：launch, take part in, participate in • 克服困难：overcome difficulties, get through hard times • 激励/鼓舞：inspire, encourage, motivate • 产生影响：have a positive impact on, make a difference to • 改变/塑造：change one’s attitude, shape one’s values 3. 衔接与过渡 • 引出事例：For example, Take...as an instance • 递进关系：What’s more, Besides, Furthermore • 总结观点：In conclusion, In short, To sum up 写作句型： 【开头句】 • “As the saying goes, ‘A role model is a light that guides our way.’ Among all the people who inspire me, ______ stands out as my most admired teen role model.” • “In today’s world, many teens look for someone to learn from. For me, ______ is such a person—his/her ______ (特质) and ______ (事迹) have deeply touched my heart.” 【中间句】 • “One of the most impressive things about ______ is that he/she ______ (具体事迹). For example, when ______ (场景), he/she ______ (行动), which showed his/her ______ (特质).” • “Faced with ______ (困难), ______ didn’t back down. Instead, he/she ______ (行动), finally ______ (结果)—this experience tells me how important it is to ______ (品质).” • “______’s story has a huge influence on me. Because of him/her, I started to ______ (自己的改变), and I’ve realized that ______ (感悟).” • “Not only does ______ inspire me, but he/she also encourages many other teens to ______ (对他人的影响). It’s amazing how one person can ______ (总结影响).” 【结尾句】 • “In conclusion, ______ is more than just a role model to me—he/she is a reminder that ______ (核心感悟). I will keep learning from him/her and try to ______ (未来行动), making myself a better person.” • “Looking back, ______’s qualities and actions have shaped who I am today. I believe that as long as I follow his/her example, I can ______ (目标), just like he/she did.” 写作模板： On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous people we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Among all the people in my life, the one that impresses me most is ……. …… was born in ……, ……. At the age of ……，she graduated from …… University. She is a good-looking ……- year-old girl,who has a pretty face and always wears a bright smile. As our ……,…… sets a good example. She is an enthusiastic fan of science and has made some creative inventions. What impresses me most is that she is always ready to help others when they meet with difficulties. …… is so good a person that she is highly thought of by all the people around her. Her dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like her in the future. 【2023年全国甲卷】你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 【2020年全国一卷】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us.____________________________ 【2006年全国卷II】假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。 内容应包括： 1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务 1.【2007年全国卷I】 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选择这样的笔友。 具体条件包括：1.年龄；2.性别；3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠的等） 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。 2. 【2019年湖北省武汉市】 学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。内容要点如下: 1.三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦: 2.父母为教师，在校深受欢迎: 3.分担家务，周末户外活动: 4.相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长: 5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。注意: 1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称: 2.词数:60-80: 3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译: 4，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇:popular adj.受欢迎的 activity n.活动 rule n.规矩 3. 【浙江省杭州市四校联考2023-2024学年高一上学期10月月考英语试题】 假如你是李华，你校的英语阅读社团（English Reading Club）正在招募新成员，你非常渴望加入，请你用英语写一封申请信，内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.喜欢阅读的书籍类型；3、加入英语阅读社团的原因。 注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 【湖南省长郡中学2024届高三上学期月考二】 假定你是李华，正在新西兰某中学学习。你校将举办跨文化演出活动，请你给活动负责人Mr. Brown写封信，申请当主持人。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.你的优势；3.期待答复。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 5. 【2019年全国Ⅰ卷】 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信目的； 2．个人优势； 3．能做的事情。 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结束语已为你写好。 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 4 Inspiration记叙文写人 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：记叙文写人（Writing an essay about a teen role model）写作指南 写作框架： 开篇段 Introduction 用名人名言/现象引入“青少年榜样”话题，明确指出自己的榜样是谁，简要说明其核心特质（如坚持、创新、责任感）。 主体段 Body Paragraph 聚焦榜样的核心事迹，通过1-2个具体事例（如公益行动、克服困难的经历），展现其品质。 分析榜样的影响，说明其如何改变自己的认知、行为（如激励自己坚持爱好、参与公益），或对社会/同龄人的积极作用。 结合自身，阐述从榜样身上学到的启示，以及未来如何以其为目标行动（如培养同款品质、践行相似理念）。 结尾段 Closing 总结榜样的价值，重申其对自己的意义，升华主题（如“榜样不是遥不可及的偶像，而是照亮成长的光”）。 写作词汇短语： 1. 描述榜样特质 • 责任感：a strong sense of responsibility • 毅力/坚持：perseverance, stick to one’s goals, never give up • 创新/创造力：innovation, creativity, come up with new ideas • 同理心/善良：empathy, kindness, care about others • 自律：self-discipline, manage one’s time well 2. 描述事迹与影响 • 发起/参与（活动）：launch, take part in, participate in • 克服困难：overcome difficulties, get through hard times • 激励/鼓舞：inspire, encourage, motivate • 产生影响：have a positive impact on, make a difference to • 改变/塑造：change one’s attitude, shape one’s values 3. 衔接与过渡 • 引出事例：For example, Take...as an instance • 递进关系：What’s more, Besides, Furthermore • 总结观点：In conclusion, In short, To sum up 写作句型： 【开头句】 • “As the saying goes, ‘A role model is a light that guides our way.’ Among all the people who inspire me, ______ stands out as my most admired teen role model.” • “In today’s world, many teens look for someone to learn from. For me, ______ is such a person—his/her ______ (特质) and ______ (事迹) have deeply touched my heart.” 【中间句】 • “One of the most impressive things about ______ is that he/she ______ (具体事迹). For example, when ______ (场景), he/she ______ (行动), which showed his/her ______ (特质).” • “Faced with ______ (困难), ______ didn’t back down. Instead, he/she ______ (行动), finally ______ (结果)—this experience tells me how important it is to ______ (品质).” • “______’s story has a huge influence on me. Because of him/her, I started to ______ (自己的改变), and I’ve realized that ______ (感悟).” • “Not only does ______ inspire me, but he/she also encourages many other teens to ______ (对他人的影响). It’s amazing how one person can ______ (总结影响).” 【结尾句】 • “In conclusion, ______ is more than just a role model to me—he/she is a reminder that ______ (核心感悟). I will keep learning from him/her and try to ______ (未来行动), making myself a better person.” • “Looking back, ______’s qualities and actions have shaped who I am today. I believe that as long as I follow his/her example, I can ______ (目标), just like he/she did.” 写作模板： On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous people we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Among all the people in my life, the one that impresses me most is ……. …… was born in ……, ……. At the age of ……，she graduated from …… University. She is a good-looking ……- year-old girl,who has a pretty face and always wears a bright smile. As our ……,…… sets a good example. She is an enthusiastic fan of science and has made some creative inventions. What impresses me most is that she is always ready to help others when they meet with difficulties. …… is so good a person that she is highly thought of by all the people around her. Her dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like her in the future. 【2023年全国甲卷】你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 答案： Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond. Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 著名的：well-known → famous 人物：figure → person 强调：emphasize → stress 基础：foundation → basis 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.  拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.  【点睛】 【高分句型1】Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语) 【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)  【2020年全国一卷】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us.____________________________ 答案： The person I respect     There are many respectable people around us. From them, not only could we learn how to do things, but also, we could learn how to get along with people. My mother is such a model that I respect most.    Born as the eldest sister in a family of five siblings, my mother shouldered her household responsibility at a very early age. Doing a variety of chores at home, and at the meantime, having an excellent performance at school, she tried her best to fulfill all the tasks in and out. It was her efforts that helped my grandparents ease the burden and survive the bitter days. What’s more, my mother is always willing to help those in need no matter how difficult her own condition is. Because of this, she is quite popular in our neighborhood.     Hadn’t been my mother, I wouldn’t be raised up as an independent and industrious person. 【写作思路】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。 第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。 第二步：列提纲 第三步：连词成句 第四步：连句成篇 1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因 2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So 第五步：润色修改 高级词汇： sibling n. 兄弟姐妹；household adj. 家庭的；chore n. 家庭杂务；fulfill v. 履行、实现；industrious adj. 勤奋的； 短语表达： such + n. + that… 如此以致于；shoulder the responsibility 承担责任；in and out 里里外外；ease the burden 减轻负担；survive the bitter days 熬过苦日子； 句型： It was + 被强调部分 + that… Hadn’t been my mother, I wouldn’t be raised up as an independent and industrious person. 【2006年全国卷II】假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。 内容应包括： 1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务 答案： Dear Sir / Madam: My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one. 　　                                                   Yours faithfully, 　                                                       Li Hua 【写作思路】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容申请当亚洲冬季运动会志愿者为题，写一篇申请信。 高级词汇： interpreter 口译者 高级短语： work as a volunteer 充当志愿者 the Winter Asian Games 亚洲冬季运动会 be ready to 乐意做 高级句式： I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. 状语从句和定语从句 1.【2007年全国卷I】 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选择这样的笔友。 具体条件包括：1.年龄；2.性别；3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠的等） 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。 答案： Dear Peter, I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in travelling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country. 【写作思路】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生描述一下你理想中笔友，写一篇求助信。 高级词汇： similar类似的 share 分享 高级短语： do me a favor帮我一个忙 in her early twenties在某人20多岁时 In my mind在我看来 take care of 照顾 高级句式： I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.宾语从句 it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.状语从句，it would be better for sb to do sth 句型 2. 【2019年湖北省武汉市】 学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。内容要点如下: 1.三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦: 2.父母为教师，在校深受欢迎: 3.分担家务，周末户外活动: 4.相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长: 5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。注意: 1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称: 2.词数:60-80: 3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译: 4，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇:popular adj.受欢迎的 activity n.活动 rule n.规矩 答案： My Family I'm Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three people in it. They are my father, my mother and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well with our neighbors. At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. Good family rules help me grow up. I study hard, and all the teachers and classmates like me. My home is a warm place. 【写作思路】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容以My Family为题，写一篇短文参赛。 高级词汇： popular受欢迎的 neighbors邻居 高级短语： At home在家里 get along well with与……相处好 try one’s best to do尽某人最大努力 accompany with陪伴 communicate with沟通 help sb do帮某人做 grow up成长 高级句式： We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. 并列动词 3. 【浙江省杭州市四校联考2023-2024学年高一上学期10月月考英语试题】 假如你是李华，你校的英语阅读社团（English Reading Club）正在招募新成员，你非常渴望加入，请你用英语写一封申请信，内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.喜欢阅读的书籍类型；3、加入英语阅读社团的原因。 注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 答案： Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a freshman in our school. Learning that the English Reading Club is recruiting new members, I am writing to apply to be one of them. As an outgoing and sociable boy, I am a reading enthusiast. I read a wealth of books, among which western literary works are my favorite. (The spellbinding classics give me a deep insight into foreign history and culture, broaden my horizons, and bring me extraordinary enjoyment and endless thinking as well.) The English Reading Club, therefore, becomes what I’m eager to join. For one thing, challenging to read books in the original will definitely improve my English level. For another, I can make more like-minded friends.     I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your early reply. Li Hua 【写作思路】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容，写一篇申请信。 1.基本时态为一般现在时。 2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山介绍写信目的：申请成为社团一员；第二段介绍自我介绍（要点1）+喜欢的书籍类型（要点2）+加入社团的原因（要点3）；第三段希望获准。 高级词汇： enthusiast热衷爱好者 spellbinding引人入胜的 like-minded志同道合的 therefore意为“因此”，用作插入语 高级短语： Learning that听说 a wealth of一大堆 give me a deep insight into sth让我深入了解了某事 broaden one's horizons开阔视野 as well也 For one thing, ... For another, ...一方面，另一方面 高级句式： I would appreciate it if you could ...如果...我将不胜感激。 4. 【湖南省长郡中学2024届高三上学期月考二】 假定你是李华，正在新西兰某中学学习。你校将举办跨文化演出活动，请你给活动负责人Mr. Brown写封信，申请当主持人。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.你的优势；3.期待答复。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 答案： Dear Mr. Brown, I am an exchange student from China. I am writing to apply to be the host of the cross-cultural performance organized by our school. First and foremost, my proficiency in English makes it easy for me to communicate with the audience. Plus, I am very familiar with traditional Chinese culture, and therefore it will be my responsibility to share Chinese stories with the teachers and students in our school to make China voice better heard. Even more important is my rich experience since I have participated in many host competitions in China. I would appreciate it if you could give my application your full consideration. Looking forward to your favorable reply. Yours, Li Hua 【写作思路】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容，写一篇申请信。 （1）审题判定文体为申请信； （2）李华身份根据文本要求需要交代； （3）因文本主体部分为介绍自己担任跨文化演出活动主持人的优势，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。 高级词汇： plus此外=besides, in addition, what's more等 高级短语： first and foremost首先 proficiency in精通... makes it easy for sb to do sth使得做某事对某人而言很容易 share Chinese stories with sb to make China voice better heard讲好中国文化 give my application you full consideration充分考虑我的申请 favorable reply肯定答复 高级句式： Even more important is ...表语形容词置于句首产生完全倒装结构 I would appreciate it if you could ...如果...我将不胜感激 5. 【2019年全国Ⅰ卷】 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信目的； 2．个人优势； 3．能做的事情。 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结束语已为你写好。 答案： Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing to ask if I could work for the exhibition of Chinese paintings. I'm a visiting student at a school in London for a two-month stay. I read your advertisement on the school website, and I'm pleased to know that you are recruiting volunteers for the Chinese painting exhibition. I'm very interested in it. I love art, and I've been learning traditional Chinese painting in the last few years. My English is good enough for communication.I can help visitors better understand Chinese paintings. What's more, I can even show them how to paint with Chinese brush and ink. If my application could be taken into favorable consideration, I would be grateful. And your early reply will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【写作思路】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容，写一篇申请信。 高级词汇： website网站 recruit招募 brush刷子 appreciated感激的 高级短语： the exhibition of Chinese paintings 中国画展览 What's more另外 高级句式： I love art, and I've been learning traditional Chinese painting in the last few years现在完成进行时 What's more, I can even show them how to paint with Chinese brush and ink.宾语从句show sb sth If my application could be taken into favorable consideration, I would be grateful. 状语从句 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $