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2026届 浙江金华十校2026年4月高三模拟考试（二模）--应用文解析 【题目呈现】 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在开展以"Teamwork"为主题的征文活动。请你针对你们班学习小组合作中部分成员不出力的"划水"(free-riding)现象，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： (1) 描述具体现象； (2) 提出你的建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Free-riding in Teamwork: A Problem to Solve ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【话题通用语料】 一、衔接短语 1. admittedly 诚然 2. more often than not 通常情况下 3. to address this issue 为了解决这个问题 4. what makes it worse 更糟糕的是 5. in light of 考虑到 6. for one thing… for another 一方面…另一方面 7. more importantly 更重要的是 8. in addition 此外 9. all things considered 总而言之 10. unfortunately 不幸的是 11. consequently 因此 12. specifically 具体来说 13. to address this issue 为了解决这个问题 14. first and foremost 首先 15. furthermore 此外 16. last but not least 最后但同样重要的是 17. in practice 在实践中 18. collectively 共同地 19. ultimately 最终 2、 现象描述的句式：（客观描述） 1. Recently, a worrying phenomenon has arisen that… 最近，一个令人担忧的现象出现了…… 2. Nowadays, it is common to see that… 如今，很常见看到…… 3. In daily group work, we are often faced with a problem where… 在日常小组合作中，我们常面临这样一个问题…… 4. Unfortunately, an unpleasant situation exists where… 遗憾的是，存在一种令人不快的情况…… 5. Presently, an annoying problem has become widespread among us: … 目前，一个令人困扰的问题在我们中间普遍存在：…… 6. It is widely noticed that a negative trend exists in … 人们普遍注意到，在…… 中存在一种不良倾向。 7. More often than not, we can observe that … 通常情况下，我们可以观察到…… 8. A disturbing fact has caught our attention that … 一个令人不安的事实引起了我们的注意…… 9. Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon where … 如今，存在一种普遍现象：…… 10. Much to our concern, the problem of … is becoming increasingly serious. 令我们担忧的是，…… 问题正变得越来越严重。 二、话题相关通用词块 （一）现象陈述与共情类 1. free-riding in group projects 小组项目中的划水行为 2. shirk their fair share of responsibilities 逃避自己应尽的责任 3. contribute little to the team 对团队几乎没有贡献 4. rely entirely on teammates’ efforts 完全依赖队友的努力 5. avoid participating in discussions 避免参与讨论 6. fail to meet assigned deadlines 无法完成分配的任务 7. hold back the team’s progress 拖慢团队的进度 8. create an unfair learning atmosphere 造成不公平的学习氛围 9. undermine team morale 打击团队士气 10. breed resentment among hardworking members 在勤奋的成员中滋生不满 11. free-riding behavior 划水行为 12. take credit for others' work 把他人的工作归功于自己 13. lack a sense of responsibility 缺乏责任感 14. low participation rate 参与度低 15. unfair workload distribution 工作量分配不均 16. hinder team progress 阻碍团队进度 （二）问题分析类（上面提到作为衔接下文解决建议时使用） 1. unclear division of labor 分工不明确 2. mismatched abilities and tasks 能力与任务不匹配 3. lack of a clear accountability system 缺乏明确的问责机制 4. low motivation to cooperate 合作积极性不高 5. poor communication within the team 团队内部沟通不畅 6. uneven workload distribution 工作量分配不均 7. no sense of team belonging 没有团队归属感 8. fear of making mistakes 害怕犯错 9. individualism over collectivism 个人主义大于集体主义 10. negative peer influence 负面的同伴影响 （三）建议与解决类 1. clarify each member’s specific role 明确每个成员的具体职责 2. assign tasks based on individual strengths 根据个人优势分配任务 3. establish a regular check-in system 建立定期的进度检查制度 4. enhance communication and coordination 加强沟通与协作 5. foster a sense of shared responsibility 培养共同责任感 6. set clear and achievable group goals 设定清晰可实现的团队目标 7. provide timely constructive feedback 提供及时的建设性反馈 8. promote fair evaluation of individual contributions 促进对个人贡献的公平评价 9. encourage active participation 鼓励积极参与 10. build a supportive team environment 营造互助的团队氛围 11. set clear deadlines 设定明确的截止日期 12. establish a peer evaluation system 建立同伴评价体系 13. foster a sense of belonging 培养归属感 14. hold regular check-ins 定期检查进度 15. promote mutual supervision 促进相互监督 16. recognize individual contributions 认可个人贡献 【三段段落布局及写作思路和主要内容】 Part 1 开篇段（现象共情陈述段） 写作思路 以同龄人视角开篇，先肯定小组合作在日常学习中的重要性，再客观陈述部分同学划水的具体现象，避免指责性语言，自然引出下文对问题的解决，完成"描述具体现象"的核心要点。 主要内容 1. 开篇点明小组合作是校园学习中不可或缺的方式，能帮助我们互相学习、提高效率；（引出现象一句话） 2. 客观描述校园内普遍存在的划水现象：不参与讨论、不完成分配的任务、坐等队友成果却共享成绩；（主要描写） 3. 简要提及这种现象带来的负面影响（拖慢进度、伤害同学感情），为下文提出建议做铺垫。（过渡用一句话） 专属语料 1. collaborative learning 合作学习 2. mutual support 互相支持 3. academic efficiency 学习效率 4. unfair burden 不公平的负担 5. team effectiveness 团队效率 6. individual contribution 个人贡献 7. group dynamics 团队动态 8. task allocation 任务分配 9. sense of fairness 公平感 10. collective goals 集体目标 句子： 1. It is widely acknowledged that collaborative learning plays an irreplaceable role in our daily school study.（主语从句，点明合作学习的重要性） 2. However, more often than not, we are troubled by the free-riding phenomenon, where some members contribute almost nothing while others bear the entire workload.（定语从句，客观陈述现象） 3. While some students may genuinely struggle with difficult tasks, others simply take advantage of their teammates’ hard work to get good grades effortlessly.（让步状语从句，共情客观原因，避免一刀切） 4. This unfair behavior not only lowers the team’s overall efficiency but also damages the sense of fairness among classmates.（并列结构，说明负面影响） 5. What makes it worse is that it gradually erodes the trust that is the foundation of effective teamwork.（主语从句+定语从句，深化问题的严重性） Part 2 主体段（具体建议提出段） 写作思路 承接上文的现象与问题，从学生可操作的角度提出2-3条具体、可落地的建议，每条建议都要针对划水现象的核心原因（分工不明、缺乏监督、责任感不强），避免空喊口号，完成"提出你的建议"的核心要点。语气恳切，符合同龄人身份。 主要内容 1. 第一条建议：小组项目开始前，根据每个人的优势明确分工，确保任务分配公平合理； 2. 第二条建议：建立简单的进度检查机制，定期交流任务完成情况，及时帮助有困难的同学； 3. 第三条建议：培养共同责任感，让每个人都认识到自己的贡献对团队成功的重要性。 专属语料 1. clear role definition 明确的角色界定 2. strength-based assignment 基于优势的分配 3. regular progress checks 定期进度检查 4. mutual supervision 互相监督 5. accountability mechanism 问责机制 6. team cohesion 团队凝聚力 7. shared responsibility 共同责任 8. timely assistance 及时帮助 9. constructive communication 建设性沟通 10. collective success 集体成功 句子： 1. To address this issue effectively, we need to take practical measures rather than just complain about it.（不定式作目的状语，自然引出建议） 2. First and foremost, before starting a group task, we should clarify each member’s responsibilities and assign work based on their strengths, which can avoid confusion and uneven workload.（定语从句，给出第一条具体建议） 3. In addition, setting up regular check-ins allows us to track progress and provide timely assistance to those who are falling behind.（动名词作主语，给出第二条建议） 4. More importantly, we should foster a sense of shared responsibility, understanding that no one can achieve success alone in a team.（现在分词作状语，升华建议的核心） 5. Only when everyone takes their responsibilities seriously can we create a positive and efficient cooperative environment.（部分倒装句，强化建议的重要性） Part 3 结尾段（呼吁升华段） 写作思路 承接上文的建议，发出真诚、有号召力的呼吁，可以强调团队合作能提高学习成绩，也可以是培养终身受益的能力等等，符合同龄人身份，不生硬说教，简洁收尾升华主题。 主要内容（不是要点核心内容，只是为了完善文章整体框架，以下几点任选其一即可，只用一句话收尾升华） 1. 总结划水现象的危害和解决问题的必要性； 2. 呼吁同学们主动承担责任，积极参与小组合作； 3. 升华主题：良好的团队合作能帮助我们实现共同进步，为未来的发展打下基础。 专属语料： 1. lifelong beneficial skills 终身受益的技能 2. mutual growth 共同成长 3. positive learning atmosphere 积极的学习氛围 4. collective effort 集体努力 5. academic success 学业成功 6. personal development 个人发展 7. teamwork spirit 团队精神 8. shared achievements 共同的成就 9. harmonious relationship 和谐的关系 10. promising future 光明的未来 句子： 1. All things considered, free-riding is a problem that harms every member of the team, and it is high time we took action to solve it.（虚拟语气，强调解决问题的紧迫性） 2. Let’s put an end to free-riding by taking our responsibilities seriously and contributing our fair share.（祈使句，发出直接呼吁） 3. By working together, we can not only achieve better academic results but also develop valuable teamwork skills that will benefit us for a lifetime.（介词短语作状语+定语从句，升华主题） 4. Every small effort counts, and our collective contributions will make our group work more effective and enjoyable.（并列句，鼓励大家从小事做起） 5. Let’s embrace the spirit of teamwork and grow together with our classmates throughout our school years.（祈使句，温情收尾） 【范文欣赏】 简单版 Free-riding in Teamwork: A Problem to Solve Group work is an important way for us to learn better. However, free-riding is common: some members avoid discussions, fail to finish assigned tasks, and still share the same grades as hardworking teammates. This unfair behavior slows down progress and creates resentment. To solve this, we should first clarify each person's role based on their strengths. Also, we can set up regular check-ins to track progress. Finally, a peer evaluation system will make everyone take their responsibilities seriously. Let's make our group work fair and effective together. 参考译文 团队合作中的划水现象：亟待解决的问题 小组合作是我们更好地学习的重要方式。然而，划水现象十分普遍：有些成员逃避讨论，完不成分配的任务，却仍和努力的队友获得相同的分数。这种不公平的行为拖慢了进度，也滋生了不满情绪。 为了解决这个问题，我们首先应该根据每个人的优势明确各自的职责。此外，我们可以建立定期的进度检查机制。最后，同伴评价体系会让每个人都认真承担自己的责任。 让我们共同努力，让小组合作变得公平且高效。 升级版： Free-riding in Teamwork: A Problem to Solve Collaborative learning has become an essential part of our academic life, yet the free-riding problem remains disturbing. Some students shirk their responsibilities entirely—they skip group discussions, miss deadlines, and take credit for others' efforts, which undermines team morale and hinders overall progress. To solve this, we need targeted measures. First and foremost, we should divide tasks clearly according to individual strengths to prevent workload imbalance. Furthermore, establishing a weekly check-in system allows us to monitor progress and offer timely help. Most importantly, incorporating individual contributions into the final grade will significantly reduce free-riding behavior. This way, we can grow together and build lifelong teamwork skills. 参考译文 团队合作中的划水现象：亟待解决的问题 合作学习已成为我们学业生活中不可或缺的一部分，但划水问题依然令人困扰。有些学生完全逃避责任 —— 他们缺席小组讨论，错过截止日期，还把他人的功劳据为己有，这不仅打击了团队士气，还阻碍了整体进度。 为了解决这个问题，我们需要有针对性的方案。首先，我们应该根据个人特长明确分工，避免工作量分配不均。此外，建立每周进度检查制度能让我们跟进进度并及时提供帮助。最重要的是，将个人贡献纳入最终成绩考核，会大幅减少划水行为。 通过这些方式，我们能够共同成长，并培养终身受用的团队合作能力。 应用文解析 第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $