2025-2026学年仁爱科普版英语七年级下册期中复习单元写作指导

原创【仁爱】七下英语期中复习单元写作指导 Unit 7-9 | 完全原创内容 | 期中备考必备 【仁爱】七下英语期中复习单元写作指导 Unit 7 Being a Smart Shopper 理性购物 一、话题分析 主题定位：聚焦"明智消费"与"合理规划" ， 引导学生从消费者视角出发 ，分析购物行为中的明智与不明智之处 ，培养理性消费意识和财商思维。 写作类型： · 记叙文 ：叙述一次难忘的购物体验（如讨价还价成功、避免冲动消费等经历） · 议论文： 阐述明智购物的重要性及具体方法（如货比三家、量入为出等原则） 说明文 ：介绍如何帮助家人或朋友做出明智的购物决策 核心词汇： budget（预算） 、 bargain（讨价还价） 、affordable（负担得起的） 、 receipt（收据） 、 refund（退款） 、comparison（比较） 、value for money（性价比） 、consumer（消费者） 核心句型： · It's wise/sensible to... （做 是明智的） · You should/shouldn't... （你应该/不应该 ） · On one hand... On the other hand... （一方面 另一方面 ） · The more... the less... （越 越不 ） 二、写作思路 步骤 内容 Step 1: 确定立场 明确自己是支持还是反对某种购物方式（如网购vs实体店），并亮明观点 Step 2: 搭建框架 记叙文：背景导入 → 购物过程 → 经验总结 议论文：观点引入 → 理由阐述（2-3点） → 结论呼吁 Step 3: 丰富素材 运用比较级、最高级、条件句（if引导）增强说服力；穿插具体事例或个人感受 三、句式参考 1. 开头句（5-6个） 记叙文开头： · One weekend, my mother took me to the shopping mall to buy a new backpack for school. · I still remember the day when I learned an important lesson about spending money wisely. · Last month, I made my first purchase online, and the experience was quite different from shopping in stores. · When I saw the big "SALE" sign in the window, I couldn't resist going inside to have a look. 议论文开头： · In today's world, knowing how to be a smart shopper is more important than ever. · With so many advertisements around us, it's easy to spend money on things we don't really need. 2. 中间句（5-6个） ( 表达比较： The blue shirt costs 20 yuan less than the red one , but I think the red one looks more stylish. Although online shopping offers lower price s, you can't try things on before buying them. The more expensive item isn't al ways the better one — sometimes a cheaper choice gives you more value. 提出建议： ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 · If you want to save money, it's a good idea to wait for sales instead of buying at full price. · Before making a purchase, ask yourself whether you really need it or just want it. · Reading customer reviews can help you decide if a product is worth buying or not. 3. 结尾句（5-6个） 记叙文结尾： · From that day on, I started to think twice before buying anything I didn't really need. · That shopping trip taught me that patience and comparison are the keys to be ing a smart consumer. · I went home with a smile, feeling proud of the smart choice I had made that day. 议论文结尾： · In conclusion, being a wise shopper means spending money on what truly matters, not on every tempting offer. · Let's remember that true happiness doesn't come from buying more things, but from making thoughtful choices. · By following these simple tips, anyone can become a smarter shopper and enjoy life more. 范文赏析（一） 题目：学校英文角正在开展以"My Shopping Experience"为题的征文活动。请你根据提示 ，写一篇60词左右的短文 ，谈谈你的一次购物经历及收获。 内容要点： 1. 购物的地点和原因 2. 购物过程中发生的事情 3. 这次经历带给你的感悟 【参考范文】 My Shopping Experience Last Saturday, I went to a department store with my father to buy a birthday gift for my grandmother. At first, I wanted a beautiful silk scarf, but it was too expensive — 300 yuan! Then I noticed a lovely handmade card with a small flower bookmark. It cost only 25 yuan but looked very meaningful. I bought it instead. My grandmother loved it so much when she received it. This experience taught me that the thought behind a gift matters more than its price. 【详解】 ( ① 题材 ：记叙文 | ② 时态 ：一般过去时 | ③ 亮点词汇： meaningful , thought 高分句型： It cost only 25 yuan but looked very meaningful .（ but 连接的并列句 ， 表示转折对比） 写作技巧： 通过价格对比（300元 vs 25元）突出"心意比价格更重要"的主题 ，结尾感悟升华立意。 ) 范文赏析（二） 题目：假如你是李华 ，你发现有些同学在购物时喜欢跟风（follow trends） 、买名牌。请你给校报写一篇短文 ，谈谈你对这种现象的看法 ，并提出合理消费的建议。 内容要点： 1. 部分同学盲目跟风购物的现象 2. 盲目消费带来的问题 3. 提出2-3条理性消费的建议要求：词数60左右 ，题目自拟。 【参考范文】 Think Before You Buy These days, some students in our school like to follow trends and buy famous brands. They think it makes them cool and popular. However, this kind of blind spending can cause problems. It not only wastes money but also creates pressure on families. As for me, I believe we should be smart shoppers. First, we should buy things based on our needs, not wants. Second, it's wise to compare prices before buying. Last but not least, we should learn to save money for future use. Remember, being yourself is more important than wearing expensive clothes. 【详解】 ① 题材 ：议论文 | ② 时态 ：一般现在时 | ③ 亮点词汇： blind spending, pressure, based on 高分句型： First, we should buy things based on our needs, not wants.（based on作状语 ，修饰buy things） 结构亮点：采用"现象-问题-建议"三段式结构 ，建议部分用First、 Second、 Last but not least串联 ，层次分明。 【仁爱】七下英语期中复习单元写作指导 Unit 8 Our Blue Planet 蓝色星球 一、话题分析 主题定位： 围绕"地球保护"与"环境意识"展开 ， 引导学生关注自然环境问题 ，表达对地球的热爱 ，倡议采取环保行动 ，体现青少年的社会责任感。 写作类型： · 说明文 ：介绍地球面临的环保问题（如污染、气候变化、物种灭绝等） · 倡议书 ：号召大家保护环境、节约资源（如低碳出行、垃圾分类等） 记叙文 ：记录一次参与环保活动的经历 核心词汇： environment（环境） 、 protect（保护） 、 pollution（污染） 、climate（气候）、 endangered（濒危的） 、 recycle（回收利用） 、 reduce（减少） 、 reuse（再利用） 、global warming（全球变暖） 、sustainable（可持续的） 核心句型： · We should/must... （我们应该/必须 ） · If we don't..., ... will... （如果我们不 ， 将会 ） · It's our duty to... （……是我们的责任） · Every little bit helps. （积少成多） 二、写作思路 步骤 内容 Step 1: 引入话题 描述地球现状或引用数据引出环保主题，激发读者共鸣 Step 2: 分析问题 倡议书：问题列举 → 原因分析 → 解决建议 记叙文：活动背景 → 参与过程 → 收获感悟 Step 3: 发出呼吁 总结环保意义，号召读者从身边小事做起，共同守护蓝色星球 三、句式参考 1. 开头句（5-6个） ( 描述现状： ) · Our planet Earth is the only home we have, so it's important to take care of it. · Have you ever looked up at the blue sky and wondered how to keep it clean? · Every year, millions of tons of plastic waste end up in our oceans, rivers and lakes. · Climate change is becoming a serious problem that affects everyone on Earth. 引入活动： · Last week, our class took part in a tree-planting activity in the local park. · On Earth Day, our school organized a "Green Life" campaign to raise environmental awareness. 2. 中间句（5-6个） 说明危害： · If we keep cutting down trees, many animals will lose their homes and become homeless. · Plastic bags take hundreds of years to break down, which causes serious pollution to the soil and water. · The more cars we drive, the worse the air quality becomes, and the more health problems people will have. 提出行动： · We can start by reducing waste — for example, using cloth bags instead of plastic ones. · Turning off lights and taps when not in use is an easy way to save energy and water. · Riding bicycles or taking public transportation instead of driving can greatly reduce air pollution. 3. 结尾句（5-6个） 发出倡议： · Let's work together to protect our beautiful planet — every small action counts! · It's our duty to keep the Earth clean and green for future generations. · Remember, we don't need to do great things — we just need to do small things in a great way. · Every tree we plant today will make the world a better place tomorrow. 总结感悟： · Through this activity, I realized that protecting the environment starts with each of us. · I believe that as long as we all do our part, our blue planet will become even more beautiful. 范文赏析（一） 题目：学校英语俱乐部正在举办"Protect Our Earth"主题演讲比赛。请你写一篇60词左右的演讲稿 ，谈谈地球面临的问题以及我们能做什么。 内容要点： 1. 地球面临的主要环境问题 2. 这些问题带来的后果 3. 中学生可以采取的环保行动 【参考范文】 Protect Our Earth Dear everyone, Our Earth is in danger! Factories produce too much smoke, which causes air pollution. Rivers and lakes are getting dirty because of waste from factories and homes. Many wild animals are in danger because their living places are disappearing. As middle school students, we can do something to help. We should plant more trees and use less plastic. We can also save water and electricity at home. Remember, protecting the Earth is protecting ourselves. Let's take action from today! 【详解】 ① 题材 ：演讲稿/倡议书 | ② 时态 ：一般现在时 | ③ 亮点词汇： in danger, take action 高分句型： Factories produce too much smoke, which causes air pollution.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 写作技巧：开头用"in danger"制造紧迫感； 中间用"As middle school students"将话题落到中学生身上；结尾用祈使句发出号召。 范文赏析（二） 题目：上周末 ，你和同学们参加了一次社区组织的垃圾分类实践活动。请根据以下提示 ，写一篇60词左右的英文日记 ，记录这次经历和你的感受。 内容要点： 1. 活动的时间、地点和参与人员 2. 你们具体做了什么 3. 这次活动带给你的收获或感受 ( 【参考范文】 ) ( A Meaningful Weekend Last Saturday afternoon, I joined a community activity about garbage classification wit h my classmates. We went to a nearby community an d learned how to sort different kinds of waste — recyclable waste, kitchen waste, and harmful waste. At first , I thought it would be boring , but I was wrong . I found it very interesting and helpful . I learned that proper waste sorting can protect the environment and save resources. Now I always sort my garbage at home. This weeke nd was really meaningful! 【详解】 ① 题材： 日记/记叙文 | ② 时态 ：一般过去时为主 | ③ 亮点词汇 ： garbage classification , recyclable , sort 高分句型： At first , I thought it would be boring , but I was wrong .（ but 连接的并列句 ，形成情感转 折） 结构亮点： 采用"欲扬先抑"的写法 ，先说"以为无 聊"再说"发现有趣" ，使文章更具可读性和真实感。 ) 【仁爱】七下英语期中复习单元写作指导 Unit 9 From Here to There 出行与方位 一、话题分析 主题定位： 围绕"交通出行"与"方位表达"展开 ， 引导学生描述出行路线、指明地点方位、分享旅行见闻，体现生活中的实用英语交际能力。 写作类型： · 应用文： 问路与指路（如写邮件询问地点、给外国朋友指路） 记叙文 ：描述一次难忘的旅行经历或出行故事 说明文 ：介绍如何到达某地或推荐一条最佳路线 核心词汇： direction（方向） 、 intersection（十字路口） 、traffic light（红绿灯） 、crosswalk （人行横道） 、avenue/d Boulevard（大马路） 、 block（街区） 、 landmark（地标）、 downtown（市中心） 、subway/underground（地铁） 、transfer（换乘） 核心句型： · Go straight / Turn left / Turn right （直走/左转/右转） · It's about... minutes' walk/drive from... （从 步行/开车约 分钟） · You can't miss it. （你一定找得到） · How do I get to...? / Could you tell me the way to...? （……怎么走？） 二、写作思路 步骤 内容 Step 1: 明确地点 确定目的地和出发点，理清两者之间的空间关系 Step 2: 规划路线 指路说明：起点出发 → 途经地标 → 到达终点 旅行记叙： 出发准备 → 途中见闻 → 到达感受 Step 3: 精确描述 使用方位介词（across from, next to, between）和指示词（first, then, finally）使路线清晰易懂 三、句式参考 1. 开头句（5-6个） 问路开场： · Excuse me, could you please tell me how to get to the nearest subway station? · I'm new here. Would you mind showing me the way to the City Library? · Hi, I'm looking for the Science Museum. Do you know where it is? 旅行开头： · Last summer vacation, my family and I traveled to Beijing, the capital city of China. · The best trip I ever had was the one to the ancient town of Pingyao last year. · Getting lost in a new city can be scary, but it can also lead to wonderful discoveries. 2. 中间句（5-6个） 指路说明： · Go straight along this road for about 200 meters, and then turn left at the second traffic light. · The museum is just across from the park, next to a big blue building. You can't miss it. · Walk down Nanjing Road until you reach the People's Square. The theater is on your right. · Take Bus No. 5 and get off at the fourth stop. The hospital is right in front of you. 旅行叙述： · We took a train from our city to the seaside. The journey took about three hours. · The scenery along the way was amazing — green mountains on one s ide and a beautiful river on the other. · When we finally arrived, we were tired but excited to explore the new place. 3. 结尾句（5-6个） 指路结尾： · Hope this helps! If you still can't find it, feel free to call me. · It's about a 15-minute walk in total, so you should be able to get there easily. · The whole trip takes less than half an hour, so it's very convenient. 旅行结尾： · The trip was unforgettable, and I learned a lot about the local culture and history. · From this trip, I understood why people say "It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." · I will treasure this wonderful memory forever and hope to visit again someday. 范文赏析（一） 题目：假设你叫李明 ，你的美国笔友Tom想来北京旅游 ，想请你帮忙推荐一处景点并告诉他如何到达。请根据以下提示 ，写一封60词左右的电子邮件。 内容要点： 1. 推荐一个景点（如故宫、长城等） 2. 描述该景点的特色 3. 告诉他从机场/火车站如何到达 【参考范文】 How to Get to the Forbidden City Dear Tom, I'm so glad you are coming to Beijing! I highly recommend visiting the Forbidden City. It's one of the most famous historical sites in China, with beautiful ancient buildings and a rich history. From the airport, you can take Airport Line 2 to Dongzhimen Station, then transfer to Line 1 and get off at Tiananmen East Station. The Forbidden City is only a short walk from there. I hope you have a wonderful time in Beijing! Best wishes, Li Ming 【详解】 ① 题材： 电子邮件/应用文 | ② 时态 ：一般现在时 | ③ 亮点词汇： highly recommend, transfer 高分句型：you can take... then transfer to... and get off at...（清晰地描述了换乘路线） 写作技巧：格式规范（Dear...、 Best wishes, ...） ；推荐理由简洁有力；路线说明条理清晰（先...然后...最后...）。 范文赏析（二） 题目：上周末 ，你和家人去郊外野餐（have a picnic） 。请根据以下提示 ，写一篇60词左右的短文 ，描述这次出行的经历。 内容要点： 1. 出行的目的地 2. 使用了什么交通工具 3. 途中或到达后的所见所闻 4. 这次出行的感受 ( 【参考范文】 A Happy Picnic Last Sunday, my family went to Blue Lak e for a picnic. We drove there because it was quite far from home — about 40 minutes by car . On the way , we saw green hills , golden fields , and farmers working in the sunshine. When we arrived, the lake looked like a mirror under the blue sky. We enjoyed delicious food by the water and took many photos. It was a rela xing and wonderful day for all of us! 【详解】 ① 题材 ：记叙文 | ② 时态 ：一般过去时 | ③ 亮点词汇 ： golden fields , relax 高分句型： On the way , we saw green hills , golden fields , and farmers working in the sunshine . （分词短语 working 作后置定语修饰 farmers ） 写作技巧： 按时间顺序叙事（出发→途中→到达→结束 ） ； 用具体数字（40 minutes ）增强 可信度；善 用感官描写（ see , enjoy ）让画面更生动。 ) 写作小贴士 时态选择：记叙过去的事情用一般过去时；说明现状或通用道理用一般现在时 · 逻辑连接：使用First/Then/Finally, On the one hand/On the other hand等连接词让文章更连贯 细节丰富：适当加入数字、颜色、情感等细节 ，使文章更具画面感 · 句式多样：尝试使用but/however连接的并列句、which/who引导的定语从句、 if引导的条件句等 首尾呼应：结尾句可呼应开头提出的观点或问题 ，使文章结构更完整 $