情感隐喻和非谓语在读后续写的妙用 课件-2026届高三英语一轮复习专项

读后续写高分突破 情感隐喻与非谓语的妙用 —— 精准技法拆解 · 实现写作质的飞跃 本课目标：精准生动描绘人物情感 掌握3类常见情感隐喻，结合非谓语用法，在高考写作中精准刻画人物内心世界 掌握描写情感常用长句句式 describe their emotions Lead-in He was sad. He was happy. He was surprised. Tears rolled down his cheeks/face. 泪水顺着他的脸颊滑落下来。 His face lit up（喜气洋洋，绽放笑容） with delight. 他的脸上充满喜悦。 He widened his eyes in shock. 他吃惊地瞪大眼睛。 写作痛点： 积累有限 表达苍白无力，平铺直叙（如 "He was sad"）难以打动读者，词汇贫乏让情绪流于表面。 通过隐喻，快速记住 让描述有画面感 01. 情感 = 手 / 抓取 (grasp, take hold of, seize) “情感是一只有形的手” 强调情感的突然性、强度与掌控力 grasp 抓住、占据 强调牢固掌控 take hold 抓住、控制 强调逐渐掌控 seize 突然抓住、攫取 强调动作突然性 情感名词+seized/took hold of/grasped+sb. 情感隐喻 情绪 名词 高兴 激动、兴奋 惊讶、震惊; 惊慌 失望 生气 害怕、恐惧 孤独; 内疚；羞愧 担心、担忧 紧张 伤心 happiness/delight/joy excitement surprise, panic disappointment anger fear/terror worry/concern nervousness sadness/grief/sorrow loneliness，guilt, shame Sadness seized him. Delight took hold of him. Surprise grasped him. 伤心抓住了他。 情感名词+seize/take hold of/grasp+sb. 练习1 3-5单词是不是太简单了？ 向后加非谓语扩充句子 A sudden panic seized him, making his heart race. 一阵突如其来的恐慌攫住了他，使他心跳加速。 seized him, making his face . Happiness/Delight light up 情感名词+seized/took hold of/grasped+sb, making...do seized谓语动词；making...作结果状语。 Surprise seized him, making his eyes widen（让他的眼睛瞪大）. 情感名词+seized/took hold of/grasped+sb, making...do 练习2 02. 情感 = 液体 / 潮水 (well up, sweep over, flood over, wash over柔和点) 动词 welled up in/inside (眼泪/情感)涌上/涌出 swept over 席卷/突然影响 flooded over 淹没 冲刺 washed over 漫过，袭来 名词 A flood（洪流）of+情感：一股……(情感爆发) a wave(波浪) of +情感：一阵…… a surge（涌） of+情感：汹涌的…… 最经典的情感隐喻之一。将抽象情感比作具象的水，强调情感的“流动性”与“不可阻挡性”，精准描绘情感突然爆发的强度。 A wave of excitement swept over him, making him jump with joy. 一阵兴奋席卷了他，使他高兴得跳了起来。 ＋ 情感类名词 ＋ ＋ sb, A flood of A wave of A surge of welled up inside swept over flooded over washed over A flood of grief washed over him, making his tears roll down his face. 练习3 03. 情感 = 对手 (got the better of sb / got the best of sb；overwhelmed) 将情感比作战斗中的对手，描述其战胜理智或意志力的状态。常用于负面情绪，使表达极具画面张力。 overwhelm v (情感)充溢；压倒，击败，征服；淹没 Get the better of sb / Get the best of sb 占上风，战胜某人（后者更口语化，语气更强） Fear got the better of him, and he decided not to take the risk. [分析]：直接描述“恐惧”这个“对手”战胜了“他”，体现情绪的压倒性。 [译文]：恐惧占了上风，他决定不冒这个险。 当我想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。 When I thought about what I had done to him, regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides. 向前加状语从句 描写人物情感三步骤： 先写发生了啥， 再写情绪怎么扑过来， 最后写身体怎么反应。 When/As/After..., 情感 seized/washed over/swept over/overwhelmed sb, making 身体反应 情节+情绪+身体反应 练习4 when/As/After..., 情感名词 seized/washed over/swept over/overwhelmed sb, making 身体反应 当C罗得知他们获胜时，喜悦席卷了他，他的脸上喜气洋洋。 When he learned that they had won, joy overwhelmed him, making his face light up. 练习4 when/As/After..., 情感名词 seized/washed over/swept over/overwhelmed sb, making 身体反应 听到这个意外的消息后，他太惊讶了，眼睛瞪得大大的。 After he heard this unexpected news, surprise seized him, making his eyes widen. 2025年高考读后续写真题分析：情感隐喻与高分表达 题目梗概：因派对将弟弟的狗关在户外致其淋雨，弟弟生气离开。“我”反省后登门道歉，最终兄弟和解。 一想到那天晚上发生的事情时，我就感到羞愧。 主人公开始愧疚 As I reflected on what had happened that evening, shame washed over me. ②当我们和解后， 一股暖意传遍全身，我们脸上都绽放笑容。 After I made up with my brother, a wave of warmth washed over me, making our faces light up. 和解后温暖-开心 弟弟带着狗回家后， 他被难过和孤独占据着。 My brother was burdened with sadness and loneliness. After my brother went home with the dog, sadness and loneliness got the best of my brother. Summary 手 水 对手 seized, grasped, took hold of welled up inside, flooded/washed/swept over got the better/best of; overwhelmed When/As/After..., 情感 seized/washed over/swept over/overwhelmed sb, making 身体反应 Homework Write a short paragraph about a moment when you felt very strong emotions—happy, sad, nervous, excited, or guilty. 要求： 1. 字数：80–120 词 2. 必须至少使用上面 4 组不同的情感隐喻短语 3. 要有：场景 + 情绪变化 + 心理感受 When I heard I had failed the exam, a wave of sadness swept over me at once. Fear seized my heart and I didn’t know what to do. The worry weighed on me heavily the whole night. Slowly, regret gnawed at me and almost swallowed my courage. I tried not to let sadness get the better of me. I told myself I must carry on and not be burdened with too much pressure. Thank You 写作是不断练习和积累的过程，愿大家在未来的学习中 灵活运用所学知识，用文字书写更多精彩篇章。 $