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专题09 书面表达
主题01 建议信(给出健康、学习等方面的建议)
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津市河西区·期中)
假设你是李虹,你的英国笔友杰西最近身体不适,医生建议她多做运动,但她不知道该选择什么样的运动,想听听你的建议。请你根据提示要点给她回一封不少于80词的邮件,谈谈你自己所做的运动,并提出你的建议。
提示要点:
(1)你曾经做过哪些运动?
(2)你做运动的频率是怎样的?
(3)你推荐的运动对杰西有什么好处?
Dear Jessie,
I am sorry to hear that you don’t feel very well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your reply.
Regards,
Li Hong
【答案】例文
Dear Jessie,
I am sorry to hear that you don’t feel very well. I think your doctor’s advice is great. You should do some sports to keep healthy.
Since I love doing sports very much, I think my experience can help you. Among all kinds of interesting sports, I like swimming best. I have swum for 8 years since I learned it when I was a kid. Now I swim every weekend and it brings me a lot of fun.
I believe swimming is suitable for you for several reasons. First, it is well-known that swimming can strengthen our bodies, so it can improve your health. Second, it is relaxing and fun, especially when you do it with your families or friends. You can start to swim for 20 minutes every day. I’m sure you will like it in a few weeks.
Look forward to your reply.
Regards,
Li Hong
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封建议信(电子邮件);
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示要点进行写作,可适当增添细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,建议对方做一些运动来保持健康;
第二步,介绍自己做过的运动及运动频率;
第三步,介绍自己推荐的运动对杰西的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy 保持健康
②all kinds of 各种各样的
③be suitable for 适合
[高分句型]
①Since I love doing sports very much, I think my experience can help you.(since引导原因状语从句)
②I believe swimming is suitable for you for several reasons.(宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津市英语东丽共同体·期中)
保持健康很重要。当今,越来越多的人不重视他们的健康。他们总是熬夜,少运动,还有吃太多垃圾食品等等。所以这些坏习惯让他们生病、不健康。你想知道如何保持健康吗?如果你不知道,就让我来告诉你怎么做吧。
要点如下:
1. 首先每天喝至少八杯水;
2. 然后做做运动例如跑跑步,打打各类球,散散步等等;
3. 最好多吃菜少吃垃圾食品;
4. 最后,睡觉前喝杯牛奶且要有至少8个小时的睡眠;
5. 可以补充一两点个人想法。
参考词汇:熬夜 stay up;垃圾食品 junk food;至少 at least
注意:
1. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称
2. 词数:70-80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
It’s important to keep healthy
Nowadays, more and more people don’t value their health. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
It’s important to keep healthy
Nowadays, more and more people don’t value their health. They always stay up late, do less exercise and eat much junk food and so on. So these bad habits make them ill and unhealthy. Do you know how to keep in good health? If you don’t know, then let me show you how to do. Firstly, you’d better drink at least eight glasses of water every day. Secondly, you’d better exercise very often such as running, playing all kinds of ball sports, taking walks and so on. Thirdly, you’d better eat more vegetables and eat less junk food. Finally, you’d better have at least eight hours sleep and drink a glass of milk before you go to bed.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇建议信/说明文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍如何保持健康,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍不健康的生活习惯;
第二步,逐条给出健康建议。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late 熬夜
②make them ill and unhealthy 让他们生病和不健康
③you’d better 你最好
[高分句型]
Finally, you’d better have at least eight hours sleep and drink a glass of milk before you go to bed.(before引导时间状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·天津市西青区杨柳青第三中学·期中)
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:健康饮食,多吃水果蔬菜;早睡早起,不熬夜,保证充足睡眠;参加运动,强身健体。
参考词汇:熬夜 stay up;增进,加强 build up
要求:
(1)条理清晰,把握要点,适当发挥;
(2)书写工整,卷面整洁;
(3)80词左右。
I think healthy habits are very important for us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of foods. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇建议信/说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出健康习惯的重要性;
第二步,从睡眠、饮食、运动、卫生等方面给出具体建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be very important for us 对我们很重要
②be bad for our health 对我们的健康有害
③build up our bodies 强身健体
[高分句型]
①Staying up late is bad for our health.(动名词作主语)
②If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.(if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·天津市华新共同体·期中)
健康的生活方式对于我们的成长和学习至关重要。拥有健康的生活,我们才能更好地面对学习和生活中的挑战。请以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题,写一篇英语短文。
写作提示:
1. 介绍健康生活方式包含的几个方面,如饮食、运动、作息等。
2. 针对每个方面,具体阐述我们应该怎么做。
3. 总结健康生活方式对我们的积极影响。
参考词汇:healthy lifestyle, balanced diet, exercise, get enough sleep, keep fit, energetic
写作要求:
1. 词数70左右。
2. 涵盖所有提示要点,可适当拓展细节。
3. 语法正确,书写规范,卷面整洁。
How to Live a Healthy Life
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【答案】例文
How to Live a Healthy Life
Living a healthy lifestyle is important for everyone. Here are three key ways to stay healthy.
First, eat a balanced diet with vegetables, fruits, and less junk food. This gives our body needed nutrients. Second, exercise regularly. We can walk, run or play sports for 30 minutes daily to keep fit. Third, get enough sleep. Going to bed early helps our brain and body rest well.
By doing these things, we’ll have more energy for study and feel happier every day. Remember, small healthy habits make a big difference!
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇建议信/说明文;
②时态:全文采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题目要求,需涵盖饮食、运动、作息三方面内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,说明健康生活的重要性;
第二步:分三点说明健康生活方式;
第三步:总结健康生活带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①balanced diet 均衡饮食
②exercise regularly 定期锻炼
③get enough sleep 充足睡眠
④make a difference 产生影响
[高分句型]
First, eat a balanced diet with vegetables, fruits, and less junk food.(祈使句)
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·天津市北京师范大学静海附属学校·期中)
假如你是红光中学的李明,你听说你的好朋友Tony最近感到疲倦,对此你非常难过。请根据以下提示给Tony提一些建议。
1. 首先早晨吃早餐对你来说非常重要;
2. 每天花费半小时锻炼身体,如跑步,做操……
3. 早睡早起保证充足的睡眠;
4. 放松心情多听音乐等;
5. ......
注意:
①词数:80~100词,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
②短文需包括以上所有要点,内容可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear you always feel tired recently. Let me give you some advice.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear you always feel tired recently. Let me give you some advice.
First of all, it’s very important for you to have breakfast in the morning. Secondly, try spending half an hour exercising, such as running, doing exercise and so on, which are good for your health. At the same time, as the proverb says, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” so you’d better go to sleep before ten at night to make sure you can have enough energy. Finally, you should listen to music to relax yourself.
I hope the above suggestions can do good to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封建议信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对Tony的近况表示难过并表明自己要给出建议;
第二步,逐条给出内容提示中的建议;
第三步,期望自己的建议能够帮助到Tony。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②be good for 对……有好处
③do good to 对……有好处
[高分句型]
①First of all, it’s very important for you to have breakfast in the morning.(it作形式主语)
②I hope the above suggestions can do good to you.(省略that的宾语从句)
主题02 邀请信(邀请参加活动、文化节等)
Passage 1
(原创·根据Unit 1话题)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你写一封邮件,邀请他来中国参加你所在学校举办的“中国文化节”活动。
要点:
(1) 活动时间:下个月15日;
(2) 活动地点:学校体育馆;
(3) 活动内容:学习书法、剪纸、品尝中国茶;
(4) 你可以带他参观当地的博物馆;
(5) 期待他的到来。
要求:80词左右,开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Chris,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to our school’s Chinese Culture Festival.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to our school’s Chinese Culture Festival.
It will be held in our school gym on the 15th of next month. You can learn calligraphy and paper-cutting from our students. There will also be a tea-tasting activity where you can enjoy different kinds of Chinese tea. After the festival, I can show you around the city museum to learn more about Chinese history.
I’m sure you will have a wonderful time. I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邀请信;
②时态:一般将来时和一般现在时;
③提示:根据要点写作,注意格式正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写信目的——邀请参加文化节;
第二步,介绍活动时间、地点和内容;
第三步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be held 被举办
②show sb around 带某人参观
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
There will also be a tea-tasting activity where you can enjoy different kinds of Chinese tea.(where引导定语从句)
Passage 2
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津师范大学南开附属中学·期中)
李华对太空非常感兴趣,他将要参加学校的太空俱乐部。假如你是李华,给你的笔友Peter写一封信,邀请他一起参加俱乐部的活动。
要点:
(1) 活动内容:了解月亮和行星,制作模型空间站;
(2) 科学老师邀请了一位著名科学家来做讲座;
(3) 讲座时间和地点:周四下午五点,科技楼一楼实验室;
(4) 你感到非常兴奋,希望他能来。
要求:80词左右。
Dear Peter,
I am going to join in the school Space Club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I am going to join in the school Space Club. Would you like to come with me?
In the first class, we’ll learn about the moon and planets and make a model space station. Mr. Lu, our science teacher, has invited a famous scientist. The lecture will be in the science lab on the first floor of the Science Building at 5 p.m. on Thursday. I’m really excited and looking forward to it.
I think we can learn a lot from the activities. I hope you can join me.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邀请信;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”和“现在完成时”为主;
③提示:根据要点写作,注意邀请语气。
[写作步骤]
第一步,提出邀请;
第二步,介绍活动内容和时间地点;
第三步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①join in 参加
②learn about 了解
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
I think we can learn a lot from the activities.(宾语从句)
Passage 3
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市宁河区·期中)
假设你是李华,你的朋友David对北京文化感兴趣。请你写一封邮件,邀请他暑假来北京旅游。
要点:
(1) 你将带他游览中国国家博物馆和故宫;
(2) 一起观看京剧;
(3) 品尝北京烤鸭等美食;
(4) 期待他的到来。
要求:80词左右。
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to invite you to visit Beijing this summer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to invite you to visit Beijing this summer.
We can visit the National Museum of China and the Palace Museum. You will see many ancient treasures and grand buildings. In the evening, we can watch a Peking Opera performance. It is really fascinating! Also, we will taste local food like crispy Beijing Duck. It’s very delicious.
I’m sure you will have a wonderful time. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邀请信;
②时态:一般将来时;
③提示:根据要点写作,注意邀请语气。
[写作步骤]
第一步,提出邀请;
第二步,介绍旅游计划;
第三步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①visit 参观
②fascinating 迷人的
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
I’m sure you will have a wonderful time.(宾语从句)
Passage 4
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市南开区·期末)
李华在假期中去甘肃参加了文化交流活动。假设你是李华,请你写一封邮件,邀请你的朋友李明下次一起去参加类似活动。
要点:
(1) 活动内容:向当地学生介绍天津的历史和名胜古迹;
(2) 介绍学习方法,演奏钢琴;
(3) 可以交到很多朋友;
(4) 希望李明加入。
要求:80词左右。
Dear Li Ming,
I had a great time in Gansu last holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Li Ming,
I had a great time in Gansu last holiday. I took part in a cultural exchange activity there. I introduced the history and places of interest of Tianjin to the local students. I also shared my learning methods and played the piano for them. I made many friends and kept in touch with them.
I think it is a wonderful experience. Why not join me next time? I’m sure you will enjoy it. I hope you can come.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邀请信;
②时态:一般过去时和一般将来时;
③提示:根据要点写作,注意邀请语气。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的经历;
第二步,发出邀请;
第三步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②places of interest 名胜古迹
③keep in touch with 与……保持联系
[高分句型]
I think it is a wonderful experience.(宾语从句)
Passage 5
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
假设你是李华,你打算组织一次志愿者活动,帮助社区里的老人。请你写一封邮件,邀请你的朋友Tom一起参加。
要点:
(1) 活动时间:本周六上午9点;
(2) 活动地点:社区老年活动中心;
(3) 活动内容:打扫房间、陪老人聊天、表演节目;
(4) 希望他能加入。
要求:80词左右。
Dear Tom,
I’m going to organize a volunteer activity this weekend. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m going to organize a volunteer activity this weekend. Would you like to join me?
We will go to the community senior center at 9 a.m. this Saturday. We can help clean the rooms, talk with the old people, and put on some shows for them. I think it will be meaningful and fun.
I hope you can come and join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邀请信;
②时态:一般将来时;
③提示:根据要点写作,注意邀请语气。
[写作步骤]
第一步,提出邀请;
第二步,介绍活动时间、地点和内容;
第三步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①organize 组织
②volunteer activity 志愿者活动
③senior center 老年活动中心
④put on shows 表演节目
[高分句型]
I think it will be meaningful and fun.(宾语从句)
主题03 申请/自荐信(应聘记者、志愿者等)
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
假如你是李华,你校英语校刊要招聘学生记者,你想要加入。请你用英语给校报的负责人王老师写一封电子邮件推荐自己。
内容要点:
(1)你和师生相处融洽,在学校交了很多朋友。
(2)你擅长英语,在伦敦参加过暑期英语课程。
(3)你还喜欢英语写作,写作给你带来快乐和成功。
(4)你多次参加英语比赛,并获得过一等奖。
(5)你希望……
要求:
(1)词数:70~90词。
(2)邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to know that you’re looking for the student reporters. I think ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to know that you’re looking for the student reporters. I think I’m the right person. I get along well with teachers and students and I make many friends in school. I am good at English and took a summer English course in London. I also like English writing, which brings me happiness and success. I have taken part in many English contests and won the first prize. I hope to be a student reporter for the English school newspaper.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封申请/自荐信(电子邮件);
②时态:时态主要为一般现在时;
③提示:写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己的意愿——想成为学生记者;
第二步,介绍自己的优势:人际关系、英语能力、写作和比赛经历;
第三步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with 与……相处融洽
②be good at 擅长……
③take part in 参加
[高分句型]
I also like English writing, which brings me happiness and success.(which引导的定语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津市西青区富力中学·期中)
学校英语报正在招聘记者,假如你是Mike,请根据表格中的信息给编辑社Diana写email,介绍你的情况:
Hobby
1.play guitar (2 years) 2.watch cartoons; favourite cartoon hero...
Experience
1.study English (5 years) 2.travel a lot; have been to... 3.enter many competitions...
Healthy life
...
要求:
(1)词数:100词左右,短文标题和开头已给出,不计入总数。
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Diana,
I’m Mike, a fourteen-year-old boy. I want to be a reporter for our school newspaper.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Mike
【答案】例文
Dear Diana,
I’m Mike, a fourteen-year-old boy. I want to be a reporter for our school newspaper. Now, please allow me to introduce myself.
I am good at playing the guitar. I have learnt it for two years. I also love watching cartoons. My favourite cartoon hero is Sun Wukong who is brave to fight against bad people. I have studied English for five years. I entered many English competitions and got good grades. I like traveling very much. I have been to Lijiang, Sanya, Xi’an and so on. I have many healthy living habits. I get up early so that I can do sports every day. I never eat junk food, so I am in good health.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封申请/自荐信(电子邮件);
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“Healthy life”一项。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,提出想要成为学校英语报的记者并进行自我介绍;
第二步,具体进行自我介绍;
第三步,书写结语,期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce oneself 自我介绍
②get good grades 取得好的成绩
③be in good health 健康的
[高分句型]
①My favourite cartoon hero is Sun Wukong who is brave to fight against bad people.(who引导定语从句)
②I get up early so that I can do sports every day.(so that引导目的状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·天津市南开区·期末)
假如你是红星中学的一名学生——王红,暑假期间你校将迎来一批英国学生。为了向外国友人介绍中国传统文化并展示你校学生风采,现开展竞选英语讲解员的活动。请根据以下信息写一封英文自荐信。
要点提示:
1. 你乐于助人,待人友善;
2. 擅长英语,去年英语演讲比赛获得一等奖,去过两次英国;
3. 爱好读书,喜欢看历史和科技等方面的书籍;
4. 希望与外国友人建立友谊,交流中国传统文化。
要求:
1. 词数:60~80个。
2. 短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear sir,
I’m a student from Hongxing Middle School. I’d like to become one of the guides. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance.
Thank you!
Yours,
Wang Hong
【答案】例文
Dear sir,
I’m a student from Hongxing Middle School. I’d like to become one of the guides. I am helpful and friendly. No matter who is in trouble, I will help him. I am good at English and won the first prize in the English speech contest last year. I have been to England twice. I like reading books, such as history and science and technology. I hope to establish friendship with foreign friends and exchange Chinese traditional culture.
I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance.
Thank you!
Yours,
Wang Hong
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封自荐信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍,表明意愿——想要成为讲解员;
第二步,根据提示具体介绍自己的品质、特长、爱好、想法等;
第三步,表达希望能得到这个机会。
[亮点词汇]
①be in trouble 处于困境中
②be good at 擅长
③have been to 去过某地
④establish friendship 建立友谊
[高分句型]
①No matter who is in trouble, I will help him.(No matter who引导的让步状语从句)
②I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance.(if引导的条件状语从句)
主题04 经历分享信(讲述旅行、助人、成长故事)
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津市河北区·期中)
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件,向他讲述你班同学周健的感人故事。
(1) 周健的长发留了两年多。
(2) 人们常常在背后议论他的长发,有时候还会嘲笑他。不过他从来不觉得丢脸。
(3) 上周,周健去了一家理发店。理发师剪短了他的头发,并把头发给他。
(4) 周健把头发寄给了市儿童医院。
(5) 周健帮助了患癌儿童。他的头发足够做二顶假发。
(6) 你认为……
提示词:the City Children’s Hospital 市儿童医院
要求:
(1) 词数:80词左右。
(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Zhou Jian.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Zhou Jian.
Zhou Jian kept his long hair for over two years, even though many people gossiped or laughed at him. He never felt ashamed. Last week, he finally went to a barber. After cutting his hair, the barber gave it to him. Surprisingly, Zhou mailed his hair to the City Children’s Hospital to help cancer patients. His donation could make two wigs!
I think his act teaches us that true kindness often requires courage. Instead of judging appearances, we should appreciate people’s hearts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封经历分享信(电子邮件);
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示写作。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接给出的开头,另起一段;
第二步:详细介绍周建的感人事迹;
第三步:介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①even though 尽管
②laughed at him 嘲笑他
③Instead of 代替,而不是
[高分句型]
①Zhou Jian kept his long hair for over two years, even though many people gossiped or laughed at him.(even though引导的让步状语从句)
②I think his act teaches us that true kindness often requires courage.(that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津市宁河区·期中)
假如你是李华,请你用英语给笔友约翰写一封邮件,向他讲述你寒假去北京游玩的所见所闻。
1.你和同学大明一起乘火车去北京旅游。
2.你们去了中国国家博物馆和故宫。
3.你们观看了京剧。
4.你们品尝了北京许多的美食,例如:北京烤鸭。
5.你认为……
参考词汇:the National Museum of China 中国国家博物馆;the Palace Museum 故宫;Beijing Duck 北京烤鸭
要求:
1.词数:70~80个;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear John,
How are you? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience in Beijing.
Last winter holiday, I went to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear John,
How are you? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience in Beijing.
Last winter holiday, I went to Beijing with my classmate Daming by train. We visited the National Museum of China, where we saw ancient treasures, and the Palace Museum, whose grand architecture amazed us. In the evening, we watched a fascinating Peking Opera performance with colorful costumes. The highlight was tasting local food like crispy Beijing Duck—it was delicious! We also tried dumplings and sweet tanghulu.
I think Beijing is a perfect combination of history and modern life. The trip deepened my love for Chinese culture.
Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇经历分享信(电子邮件);
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示信息写作,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示信息讲述你和大明在北京的旅游经历;
第三步,分享你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①ancient treasures 古代珍宝
②grand architecture 宏伟建筑
③crispy 酥脆的
④deepen one’s love for 加深对……的爱
[高分句型]
I think Beijing is a perfect combination of history and modern life.(省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·天津市实验中学滨海学校·期中)
假如你是Tony,请你用英文写一封信给你的朋友Tom,告诉他去年你在中国的经历。
1.去年你跟随父母来到天津。
2.游览了天津的许多景点,如天津之眼。
3.品尝了许多食物,它们尝起来很美味。
4.在天津一中学习汉语5个月了,已经了解了许多中国的历史。
5.同学们很友好,你交了许多好朋友。
6.这段经历使你……
参考词汇:了解 learn about;天津之眼 the Tianjin Eye;天津一中 Tianjin No.1 Middle School
要求:
(1)词数:80-100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Tom,
I had a good time in China.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Tony
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I had a good time in China.
Last year, I came to Tianjin with my parents. We visited many interesting places, like the Tianjin Eye. I also tasted a lot of local food there, which was very delicious! I studied Chinese at Tianjin No.1 Middle School for five months. During this time, I learned about Chinese history and culture. My classmates were very friendly and I made many good friends.
I really enjoyed every minute of my time there. It was an unforgettable experience! It also made me more confident.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Tony
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文为一封经历分享信(书信);
②时态:一般过去时;
③提示:应包含提示内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍自己跟父母来到中国;
第二步:介绍自己在中国的经历;
第三步:书写结语,介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of 很多
②learn about 了解
③make friends 交朋友
[高分句型]
I also tasted a lot of local food there, which was very delicious!(which引导定语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
假如你是李华,你校英语校刊进行题为“助人的难忘经历”的征稿活动,要求投稿人讲述自己一次难忘的助人经历。请你根据以下提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点:
(1)我曾有过助人的经历,去年暑假我帮助一个小男孩学习英语。
(2)这个男孩是我的邻居,他的父母忙于工作无暇帮助孩子学习。
(3)暑假期间我与小男孩分享英语图书,教他一起阅读,经常练习说英语。
(4)他很努力并取得了进步。
(5)我的感受……
要求:
(1)词数:70~90词。
(2)题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:邻居 neighbor;取得进步 make progress
An experience of helping others
I have ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
An experience of helping others
I have had an experience of helping others. Last summer vacation, I helped a little boy learn English.
The boy is my neighbour. His parents were busy with their work and had no time to help him with his studies. During the summer vacation, I shared English books with him and taught him to read together. We often practiced speaking English. He worked very hard and made great progress.
I felt very happy to see his progress. Helping others not only brings joy to others but also makes myself feel fulfilled. I will continue to help others in the future.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇经历分享信/记叙文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍自己一次难忘的助人经历;
第二步、介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with 忙于
②share...with... 与……分享……
③not only...but also 不仅……而且
[高分句型]
Helping others not only brings joy to others but also makes myself feel fulfilled.(动名词作主语)
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·天津市部分区·期中)
假如你是Tony,请你用英文写一封信给你的朋友Tom,告诉他去年你在中国的经历。(注:此篇与Passage 3类似,选用不同范文)
Dear Tom,
I had a good time in China.
Last year, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Tony
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I had a good time in China.
Last year, I went to Tianjin with my parents to study. I was glad that I made a lot of friends and my classmates were all friendly to me. Following my parents, I visited many places of interest of Tianjin, such as Tianjin Eye, which is the most famous place there. Most importantly, I started to learn Chinese, which attracted me since I was a pupil. And thanks to this special experience, I learned about the history of China. Deeped in 5,000 years, China is very charming and attractive. If you have a chance to go to China, you will like it.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Tony
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封经历分享信;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章给予的要点记得描写完整,提示词也注意使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己跟父母来到中国;
第二步,介绍自己在中国的经历;
第三步,表达自己对中国的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest 名胜古迹
②have a chance to do sth 有机会做某事
[高分句型]
①Following my parents, I visited many places of interest of Tianjin, such as Tianjin Eye, which is the most famous place there.(定语从句)
②If you have a chance to go to China, you will like it.(条件状语从句)
主题05 观点表达/倡议书(读书月、健康生活等)
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津市崇化中学·期中)
亲爱的同学,你喜欢阅读吗?在全民阅读活动中,我校设定5月份为全校读书月。请你为我校拟定一则倡议书,宣传读书月。
字数:80-100,文章开头已给出,不记入总词数。
短文包含以下要点:
1.阅读很容易,不受时间、地点限制。
2.阅读能给我们带来快乐,例如:男生读航天旅行,女生读最喜欢的卡通。
3.阅读有助于开阔思想,例如:读名人的经历,与他们交流。
4.阅读使人增长知识,例如:读有关看病的书,保持健康。
5.有关阅读的倡议和计划 (1-2点即可)。
参考词汇:开阔思想 open up one’s mind;增长知识 increase one’s knowledge
要求:
1.书写规范、工整,条理清晰。
2.不逐字翻译,可适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等。
Dear students,
Reading is not only a good habit but also an enjoyable thing.
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【答案】例文
Dear students,
Reading is not only a good habit but also an enjoyable thing.
First of all, it’s very easy to keep on reading. We can read anywhere and anytime if we want. What’s more, reading may bring happiness. For example, boys find it much fun to read about space travel. Girls may choose their favourite cartoons to read. In addition, it helps to open up our mind, because we can communicate with famous people by reading about their experiences. We can increase much knowledge such as reading some books on seeing the doctor in order to keep healthy.
Since reading is so important, I’m going to read more on weekends or during the vacations. Let’s take an active part in the reading activity of our school.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇倡议书;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明观点——阅读不仅是一种好习惯,而且是一件令人愉快的事情;
第二步,谈谈阅读给人们带来的好处;
第三步,介绍有关阅读的倡议和计划。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②what’s more 此外
③for example 例如
④take an active part in 积极参与
[高分句型]
What’s more, reading may bring happiness.(动名词作主语)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津市第一中学滨海学校·期中)
我们的生活中处处充满着幸福,有父母的爱,有老师的爱,有同学的爱,有朋友的爱……请以“Happiness Around Me(我身边的幸福)”为题,写一篇短文。
内容要点如下:
爱你的人
爱的表现
父母
为你做早餐;送你上学;照顾你……
老师
教你知识;传授学习方法;提供支持……
同学
一起学习;一起运动;和睦相处;分享快乐与烦恼……
字数:80-100词
Happiness Around Me
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【答案】例文
Happiness Around Me
There is lots of happiness around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive happiness from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and worries. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇观点表达/记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据表格内容进行写作,可适当增添细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己身边有很多“爱”;
第二步,分别具体介绍爱自己的人以及爱的表现;
第三步,书写结语,表达感恩。
[亮点词汇]
①look after 照顾
②get on well with 和……友好相处
③not only...but also... 不但……而且……
④in one’s spare time 在某人的空闲时间
[高分句型]
①There is lots of happiness around me in my everyday life.(There be句型)
②I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 3
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市西青区杨柳青第三中学·期中)
请以“My Healthy Lifestyle”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你自己的健康生活方式。
要求:80词左右。
My Healthy Lifestyle
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【答案】例文
My Healthy Lifestyle
I think a healthy lifestyle is very important. I have some good habits. First, I eat three meals on time every day. I have a good breakfast and I eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I don’t eat too much junk food. Second, I run for half an hour every morning. I also play basketball with my friends on weekends. Third, I go to bed early and get up early. I never stay up late. Finally, I wash my hands before meals and open the windows to keep the air fresh. These habits keep me healthy and energetic.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇观点表达/说明文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:介绍自己的健康生活方式,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明健康生活方式的重要性;
第二步,从饮食、运动、作息、卫生等方面介绍自己的习惯;
第三步,总结这些习惯带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①on time 准时
②junk food 垃圾食品
③stay up late 熬夜
[高分句型]
I don’t eat too much junk food.(否定句)
Passage 4
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市河北区·期中)
请以“The Importance of Friendship”为题,写一篇短文,谈谈友谊的重要性。
要点:
(1) 朋友可以分享快乐和烦恼;
(2) 朋友在你遇到困难时会帮助你;
(3) 朋友让你不再孤单;
(4) 你认为如何维系友谊。
要求:80词左右。
The Importance of Friendship
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【答案】例文
The Importance of Friendship
Friends are very important in our lives. True friends can share our happiness and sorrow. When we are in trouble, they will come to help us. With friends, we never feel lonely. Good friends also encourage us to become better.
To keep friendship, we should be honest and kind. We need to trust each other and help each other. Also, we should spend time together and communicate often. Friendship makes our life more colorful and meaningful.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇观点表达;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:根据要点写作,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明朋友的重要性;
第二步,介绍朋友的作用;
第三步,给出维系友谊的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①share happiness and sorrow 分享快乐和烦恼
②in trouble 处于困境中
③communicate 沟通
[高分句型]
When we are in trouble, they will come to help us.(when引导时间状语从句)
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
《哪吒2》2025年春节期间上映,迄今全球总票房(含预售)突破155亿。该片打破了迪士尼、环球对动画榜的垄断。
要点如下:
(1)寒假期间,你和爸爸妈妈一起去电影院看了《哪吒2》;
(2)哪吒有明亮的红色的头发,穿着红色的衣服,他很勇敢,但有时很淘气;
(3)他和好朋友敖丙相互帮助,一起抗争,他们教会我们坚强与善良;
(4)这部电影受到各个年龄段人们的喜爱。迄今为止,3亿多人已经看过它;
(5)你认为,中国电影的未来……
要求:(1)词数:80~100个。(2)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:《哪吒2》 Ne Zha 2
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【答案】例文
During the winter vacation, I watched Ne Zha 2 with my parents, and it left a deep impression on me.
Ne Zha, who has bright red hair and wears red clothes, is a brave yet occasionally naughty hero. What impressed me most was his friendship with Ao Bing. Although they face countless challenges, they help each other and fight side by side, which teaches us to be strong and kind.
The film has won the hearts of people of all ages. So far, more than 300 million people have watched it, making it a huge success.
I believe that the future of Chinese films is bright because they combine traditional culture with modern technology, just like Ne Zha 2 does so that people around the world will know more good Chinese stories.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇观点表达/影评;
②时态:一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:根据写作要点完成写作,注意不要遗漏。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己看了《哪吒2》;
第二步,描述哪吒的外貌、性格、与敖丙的友谊和带来的启示;
第三步,总结这部电影的成就;
第四步,表达对中国电影未来的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①leave a deep impression on sb 给某人留下深刻印象
②fight side by side 并肩战斗
③win the hearts of sb 赢得某人的心
[高分句型]
①Ne Zha, who has bright red hair and wears red clothes, is a brave yet occasionally naughty hero.(who引导非限制性定语从句)
②What impressed me most was his friendship with Ao Bing.(what引导主语从句)
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专题09 书面表达
主题01 建议信(给出健康、学习等方面的建议)
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津市河西区·期中)
假设你是李虹,你的英国笔友杰西最近身体不适,医生建议她多做运动,但她不知道该选择什么样的运动,想听听你的建议。请你根据提示要点给她回一封不少于80词的邮件,谈谈你自己所做的运动,并提出你的建议。
提示要点:
(1)你曾经做过哪些运动?
(2)你做运动的频率是怎样的?
(3)你推荐的运动对杰西有什么好处?
Dear Jessie,
I am sorry to hear that you don’t feel very well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your reply.
Regards,
Li Hong
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津市英语东丽共同体·期中)
保持健康很重要。当今,越来越多的人不重视他们的健康。他们总是熬夜,少运动,还有吃太多垃圾食品等等。所以这些坏习惯让他们生病、不健康。你想知道如何保持健康吗?如果你不知道,就让我来告诉你怎么做吧。
要点如下:
1. 首先每天喝至少八杯水;
2. 然后做做运动例如跑跑步,打打各类球,散散步等等;
3. 最好多吃菜少吃垃圾食品;
4. 最后,睡觉前喝杯牛奶且要有至少8个小时的睡眠;
5. 可以补充一两点个人想法。
参考词汇:熬夜 stay up;垃圾食品 junk food;至少 at least
注意:
1. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称
2. 词数:70-80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
It’s important to keep healthy
Nowadays, more and more people don’t value their health. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·天津市西青区杨柳青第三中学·期中)
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:健康饮食,多吃水果蔬菜;早睡早起,不熬夜,保证充足睡眠;参加运动,强身健体。
参考词汇:熬夜 stay up;增进,加强 build up
要求:
(1)条理清晰,把握要点,适当发挥;
(2)书写工整,卷面整洁;
(3)80词左右。
I think healthy habits are very important for us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·天津市华新共同体·期中)
健康的生活方式对于我们的成长和学习至关重要。拥有健康的生活,我们才能更好地面对学习和生活中的挑战。请以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题,写一篇英语短文。
写作提示:
1. 介绍健康生活方式包含的几个方面,如饮食、运动、作息等。
2. 针对每个方面,具体阐述我们应该怎么做。
3. 总结健康生活方式对我们的积极影响。
参考词汇:healthy lifestyle, balanced diet, exercise, get enough sleep, keep fit, energetic
写作要求:
1. 词数70左右。
2. 涵盖所有提示要点,可适当拓展细节。
3. 语法正确,书写规范,卷面整洁。
How to Live a Healthy Life
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Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·天津市北京师范大学静海附属学校·期中)
假如你是红光中学的李明,你听说你的好朋友Tony最近感到疲倦,对此你非常难过。请根据以下提示给Tony提一些建议。
1. 首先早晨吃早餐对你来说非常重要;
2. 每天花费半小时锻炼身体,如跑步,做操……
3. 早睡早起保证充足的睡眠;
4. 放松心情多听音乐等;
5. ......
注意:
①词数:80~100词,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
②短文需包括以上所有要点,内容可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear you always feel tired recently. Let me give you some advice.
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Best wishes,
Li Ming
主题02 邀请信(邀请参加活动、文化节等)
Passage 1
(原创·根据Unit 1话题)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你写一封邮件,邀请他来中国参加你所在学校举办的“中国文化节”活动。
要点:
(1) 活动时间:下个月15日;
(2) 活动地点:学校体育馆;
(3) 活动内容:学习书法、剪纸、品尝中国茶;
(4) 你可以带他参观当地的博物馆;
(5) 期待他的到来。
要求:80词左右,开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Chris,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to our school’s Chinese Culture Festival.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津师范大学南开附属中学·期中)
李华对太空非常感兴趣,他将要参加学校的太空俱乐部。假如你是李华,给你的笔友Peter写一封信,邀请他一起参加俱乐部的活动。
要点:
(1) 活动内容:了解月亮和行星,制作模型空间站;
(2) 科学老师邀请了一位著名科学家来做讲座;
(3) 讲座时间和地点:周四下午五点,科技楼一楼实验室;
(4) 你感到非常兴奋,希望他能来。
要求:80词左右。
Dear Peter,
I am going to join in the school Space Club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市宁河区·期中)
假设你是李华,你的朋友David对北京文化感兴趣。请你写一封邮件,邀请他暑假来北京旅游。
要点:
(1) 你将带他游览中国国家博物馆和故宫;
(2) 一起观看京剧;
(3) 品尝北京烤鸭等美食;
(4) 期待他的到来。
要求:80词左右。
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to invite you to visit Beijing this summer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市南开区·期末)
李华在假期中去甘肃参加了文化交流活动。假设你是李华,请你写一封邮件,邀请你的朋友李明下次一起去参加类似活动。
要点:
(1) 活动内容:向当地学生介绍天津的历史和名胜古迹;
(2) 介绍学习方法,演奏钢琴;
(3) 可以交到很多朋友;
(4) 希望李明加入。
要求:80词左右。
Dear Li Ming,
I had a great time in Gansu last holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
假设你是李华,你打算组织一次志愿者活动,帮助社区里的老人。请你写一封邮件,邀请你的朋友Tom一起参加。
要点:
(1) 活动时间:本周六上午9点;
(2) 活动地点:社区老年活动中心;
(3) 活动内容:打扫房间、陪老人聊天、表演节目;
(4) 希望他能加入。
要求:80词左右。
Dear Tom,
I’m going to organize a volunteer activity this weekend. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
主题03 申请/自荐信(应聘记者、志愿者等)
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
假如你是李华,你校英语校刊要招聘学生记者,你想要加入。请你用英语给校报的负责人王老师写一封电子邮件推荐自己。
内容要点:
(1)你和师生相处融洽,在学校交了很多朋友。
(2)你擅长英语,在伦敦参加过暑期英语课程。
(3)你还喜欢英语写作,写作给你带来快乐和成功。
(4)你多次参加英语比赛,并获得过一等奖。
(5)你希望……
要求:
(1)词数:70~90词。
(2)邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to know that you’re looking for the student reporters. I think ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津市西青区富力中学·期中)
学校英语报正在招聘记者,假如你是Mike,请根据表格中的信息给编辑社Diana写email,介绍你的情况:
Hobby
1.play guitar (2 years) 2.watch cartoons; favourite cartoon hero...
Experience
1.study English (5 years) 2.travel a lot; have been to... 3.enter many competitions...
Healthy life
...
要求:
(1)词数:100词左右,短文标题和开头已给出,不计入总数。
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Diana,
I’m Mike, a fourteen-year-old boy. I want to be a reporter for our school newspaper.
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Yours,
Mike
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·天津市南开区·期末)
假如你是红星中学的一名学生——王红,暑假期间你校将迎来一批英国学生。为了向外国友人介绍中国传统文化并展示你校学生风采,现开展竞选英语讲解员的活动。请根据以下信息写一封英文自荐信。
要点提示:
1. 你乐于助人,待人友善;
2. 擅长英语,去年英语演讲比赛获得一等奖,去过两次英国;
3. 爱好读书,喜欢看历史和科技等方面的书籍;
4. 希望与外国友人建立友谊,交流中国传统文化。
要求:
1. 词数:60~80个。
2. 短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear sir,
I’m a student from Hongxing Middle School. I’d like to become one of the guides. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance.
Thank you!
Yours,
Wang Hong
主题04 经历分享信(讲述旅行、助人、成长故事)
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津市河北区·期中)
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件,向他讲述你班同学周健的感人故事。
(1) 周健的长发留了两年多。
(2) 人们常常在背后议论他的长发,有时候还会嘲笑他。不过他从来不觉得丢脸。
(3) 上周,周健去了一家理发店。理发师剪短了他的头发,并把头发给他。
(4) 周健把头发寄给了市儿童医院。
(5) 周健帮助了患癌儿童。他的头发足够做二顶假发。
(6) 你认为……
提示词:the City Children’s Hospital 市儿童医院
要求:
(1) 词数:80词左右。
(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Zhou Jian.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津市宁河区·期中)
假如你是李华,请你用英语给笔友约翰写一封邮件,向他讲述你寒假去北京游玩的所见所闻。
1.你和同学大明一起乘火车去北京旅游。
2.你们去了中国国家博物馆和故宫。
3.你们观看了京剧。
4.你们品尝了北京许多的美食,例如:北京烤鸭。
5.你认为……
参考词汇:the National Museum of China 中国国家博物馆;the Palace Museum 故宫;Beijing Duck 北京烤鸭
要求:
1.词数:70~80个;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear John,
How are you? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience in Beijing.
Last winter holiday, I went to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·天津市实验中学滨海学校·期中)
假如你是Tony,请你用英文写一封信给你的朋友Tom,告诉他去年你在中国的经历。
1.去年你跟随父母来到天津。
2.游览了天津的许多景点,如天津之眼。
3.品尝了许多食物,它们尝起来很美味。
4.在天津一中学习汉语5个月了,已经了解了许多中国的历史。
5.同学们很友好,你交了许多好朋友。
6.这段经历使你……
参考词汇:了解 learn about;天津之眼 the Tianjin Eye;天津一中 Tianjin No.1 Middle School
要求:
(1)词数:80-100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Tom,
I had a good time in China.
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I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Tony
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
假如你是李华,你校英语校刊进行题为“助人的难忘经历”的征稿活动,要求投稿人讲述自己一次难忘的助人经历。请你根据以下提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点:
(1)我曾有过助人的经历,去年暑假我帮助一个小男孩学习英语。
(2)这个男孩是我的邻居,他的父母忙于工作无暇帮助孩子学习。
(3)暑假期间我与小男孩分享英语图书,教他一起阅读,经常练习说英语。
(4)他很努力并取得了进步。
(5)我的感受……
要求:
(1)词数:70~90词。
(2)题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:邻居 neighbor;取得进步 make progress
An experience of helping others
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Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·天津市部分区·期中)
假如你是Tony,请你用英文写一封信给你的朋友Tom,告诉他去年你在中国的经历。(注:此篇与Passage 3类似,选用不同范文)
Dear Tom,
I had a good time in China.
Last year, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Tony
主题05 观点表达/倡议书(读书月、健康生活等)
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津市崇化中学·期中)
亲爱的同学,你喜欢阅读吗?在全民阅读活动中,我校设定5月份为全校读书月。请你为我校拟定一则倡议书,宣传读书月。
字数:80-100,文章开头已给出,不记入总词数。
短文包含以下要点:
1.阅读很容易,不受时间、地点限制。
2.阅读能给我们带来快乐,例如:男生读航天旅行,女生读最喜欢的卡通。
3.阅读有助于开阔思想,例如:读名人的经历,与他们交流。
4.阅读使人增长知识,例如:读有关看病的书,保持健康。
5.有关阅读的倡议和计划 (1-2点即可)。
参考词汇:开阔思想 open up one’s mind;增长知识 increase one’s knowledge
要求:
1.书写规范、工整,条理清晰。
2.不逐字翻译,可适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等。
Dear students,
Reading is not only a good habit but also an enjoyable thing.
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Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津市第一中学滨海学校·期中)
我们的生活中处处充满着幸福,有父母的爱,有老师的爱,有同学的爱,有朋友的爱……请以“Happiness Around Me(我身边的幸福)”为题,写一篇短文。
内容要点如下:
爱你的人
爱的表现
父母
为你做早餐;送你上学;照顾你……
老师
教你知识;传授学习方法;提供支持……
同学
一起学习;一起运动;和睦相处;分享快乐与烦恼……
字数:80-100词
Happiness Around Me
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Passage 3
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市西青区杨柳青第三中学·期中)
请以“My Healthy Lifestyle”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你自己的健康生活方式。
要求:80词左右。
My Healthy Lifestyle
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Passage 4
(改编自24-25八年级下·天津市河北区·期中)
请以“The Importance of Friendship”为题,写一篇短文,谈谈友谊的重要性。
要点:
(1) 朋友可以分享快乐和烦恼;
(2) 朋友在你遇到困难时会帮助你;
(3) 朋友让你不再孤单;
(4) 你认为如何维系友谊。
要求:80词左右。
The Importance of Friendship
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Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
《哪吒2》2025年春节期间上映,迄今全球总票房(含预售)突破155亿。该片打破了迪士尼、环球对动画榜的垄断。
要点如下:
(1)寒假期间,你和爸爸妈妈一起去电影院看了《哪吒2》;
(2)哪吒有明亮的红色的头发,穿着红色的衣服,他很勇敢,但有时很淘气;
(3)他和好朋友敖丙相互帮助,一起抗争,他们教会我们坚强与善良;
(4)这部电影受到各个年龄段人们的喜爱。迄今为止,3亿多人已经看过它;
(5)你认为,中国电影的未来……
要求:(1)词数:80~100个。(2)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:《哪吒2》 Ne Zha 2
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