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学练优九年级英语(RJ)
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单元主题写作
人与自我·抗挫能力,珍爱生命的意识
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话题分析
本单元以“mnexpected events”为话题,要求学生
能够正确运用一般过去时或过去完成时叙述自己的
亲身经历,并表达自己的感受或从中得到的感悟。
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写作典范
【写作任务】
同学们,还记得曾经令你觉得尴尬、倒霉或诅丧
的一天吗?请你以“What a(n)
Day!”为题,
写一篇英语短文,叙述那段经历以及你当时的感受。
要求:1.将标题补充完整,2.内容丰富、完
整,表达流畅,可适当发挥,3.短文中不得出现真
实的姓名和校名;4.词数100左右。
What a(n)
Day!
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【审题立意】
1.审主题:叙述自己一段糟糕的经历。
2.审体裁:记叙文。
3.审人称:第一人称。
4.审时态:以一般过去时和过去完成时为主。
【写作提纲】
时间和背景
时间:last summer vacation
背景:to visit my grandparents
1.left my ID card and...on the bed
2.arrived at the station two hours
earlier
叙述经历
3.found my mobile phone had been
stolen
4.got to my grandparents'home
with the help of the police
心情感受
-What an unforgettable day it was!
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【范文展示】
What an Unforgettable Day!
Last summer vacation,I decided to visit my
grandparents because I hadn't seen t
them for
many years.
That day when i was about to leave for the
bus station,I found I had left my ID card and
mobile phone on the bed.After I got to the bus
station,I found I had arrived at the station two
hours earlier.While I was reading in the waiting
room,a woman
came to sit beside me and she
kept talking with me.After she left,I found my
mobile phone had been stolen.I called the police
right away with a passenger's phone.They told
me that the woman had stolen my mobile phone.
That made me really upset and worried.Finally,
I got to my grandparents'home with the help of
the police.
What an unforgettable day it was!