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一.单一情绪深度描写
1. 紧张
句式: Her heart was pounding violently, like a wild drumbeat, and her palms were slick with cold sweat.
练习: 他紧张得心跳如雷,手心全是冷汗。
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2. 兴奋
句式: She was bubbling over with excitement, her laughter ringing out like a chorus of bells.
练习: 他兴奋得笑声像铃铛一样响起,眼睛里闪烁着喜悦。
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3. 恐惧
句式: Fear gripped my heart tightly, squeezing it like a vise.
练习: 恐惧紧紧抓住了她的心,像钳子一样挤压着,她几乎无法呼吸。
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4. 悲伤
句式: A deep sorrow welled up within her, bringing a lump to her throat and a sting to her eyes.
练习: 深深的悲伤在他心中涌起,让他喉咙哽咽,眼睛刺痛。
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二.混合情绪描写
句式:At that very moment, within one‘s heart was a feeling of + 情绪A, mixed with overwhelming + 情绪B, making sb. do...
例句:At that very moment, within his heart was a feeling of excitement, mixed with overwhelming nervousness, making him tremble slightly.
练习: 那一刻,她心中满是自豪,又夹杂着极度的羞涩,让她红了脸,低下了头。
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那一刻,他心中满是失望,又混杂着强烈的懊恼,让他紧紧地攥紧了拳头。
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三.情绪转变描写
句式:情绪A + was erased from one’s face, replaced by a new sense of + 情绪B.
例句:Fear was erased from his face, replaced by a new sense of determination.
练习:她脸上的惊讶消失了,取而代之的是恍然大悟。
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听到好消息后,他们脸上的焦虑消失了,取而代之的是欣慰。
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答案
一.单一情绪深度描写
1. 紧张
句式: Her heart was pounding violently, like a wild drumbeat, and her palms were slick with cold sweat.
练习: 他紧张得心跳如雷,手心全是冷汗。
答案: His heart was pounding violently, like a wild drumbeat, and his palms were slick with cold sweat.
2. 兴奋
句式: She was bubbling over with excitement, her laughter ringing out like a chorus of bells.
练习: 他兴奋得笑声像铃铛一样响起,眼睛里闪烁着喜悦。
答案: He was bubbling over with excitement, his laughter ringing out like a chorus of bells, his eyes sparkling with delight.
3. 恐惧
句式: Fear gripped my heart tightly, squeezing it like a vise.
练习: 恐惧紧紧抓住了她的心,像钳子一样挤压着,她几乎无法呼吸。
答案: Fear gripped her heart tightly, squeezing it like a vise, and she could barely breathe.
4. 悲伤
句式: A deep sorrow welled up within her, bringing a lump to her throat and a sting to her eyes.
练习: 深深的悲伤在他心中涌起,让他喉咙哽咽,眼睛刺痛。
答案: A deep sorrow welled up within him, bringing a lump to his throat and a sting to his eyes.
二.混合情绪描写(“At that very moment”结构)
句式模板:At that very moment, within one‘s heart was a feeling of + 情绪A, mixed with overwhelming + 情绪B, making sb. do...
例句:At that very moment, within his heart was a feeling of excitement, mixed with overwhelming nervousness, making him tremble slightly.
练习:那一刻,她心中满是自豪,又夹杂着极度的羞涩,让她红了脸,低下了头。
答案: At that very moment, within her heart was a feeling of pride, mixed with overwhelming shyness, making her blush and lower her head.
那一刻,他心中满是失望,又混杂着强烈的懊恼,让他紧紧地攥紧了拳头。
答案: At that very moment, within his heart was a feeling of disappointment, mixed with overwhelming frustration, making him clench his fists tightly.
三.情绪转变描写(“was erased from”结构)
句式模板:情绪A + was erased from one’s face, replaced by a new sense of + 情绪B.
例句: Fear was erased from his face, replaced by a new sense of determination.
她脸上的惊讶消失了,取而代之的是恍然大悟。
答案: Surprise was erased from her face, replaced by a new sense of understanding.
听到好消息后,他们脸上的焦虑消失了,取而代之的是欣慰。
答案: Anxiety was erased from their faces, replaced by a new sense of relief after they heard the good news.
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