Unit 4 How can we make music? 作文提优指导（专项训练）-2025-2026学年沪教版英语四年级下册

Unit 4 How can we make music? 作文提优指导 一、方法指导 描述制作音乐/演奏乐器，核心用现在进行时（be动词+动词-ing形式），也可结合一般现在时介绍乐器。可按「三步四要素法」写作： • 第一步：写开头，引出话题（介绍正在进行的音乐活动/喜欢的乐器） • 第二步：写正文，介绍音乐活动的演奏乐器、演奏动作、相关人物、演奏地点四要素 • 第三步：写结尾，表述自己对音乐的喜爱、感受或总结 二、素材积累 模块 必备词汇 必备句型 开头 music, instrument, play, make music, now, look • Look! We are making music now. • I love music and I can play many instruments. • We are having a music class and making music. • Music makes people happy. 正文 乐器：guitar, piano, violin, drum, flute, triangle, bell 动作（现在进行时）：playing the piano, playing the guitar, playing the drums, singing, dancing, tapping, beating 地点：music room, classroom, stage, home 人物：I, my friends, my classmates, my music teacher • Look! I am playing the piano now. • My friend is playing the guitar. • We are singing and dancing together. • He is beating the drums loudly. • They are playing music in the music room. • We can make music with many instruments. 结尾 happy, wonderful, beautiful, interesting, great • Music is wonderful, and I love it very much. • We have a great time making music. • It's so interesting to make music with friends. • Beautiful music makes us happy. 三、以读促写（阅读范文，完成思维导图，体悟写法） Look! We are making music in the music room now. I am playing the piano. My friend Lily is playing the violin. Tom is beating the drums. Our music teacher is singing with us. We are all very happy. Making music is so interesting. I love music very much. It's a wonderful time for us. 思维导图填空 Making 1.__________ Who & Where What are they doing | | Place: 2.______ I: playing the piano People: I, Lily, Tom, teacher Lily: 3.______ Tom: 4.______ Teacher: singing | How: happy, 5.______ 四、翻译练习 1. 看！我们正在音乐室里制作音乐。 _________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我正在弹钢琴。 _________________________________________________________________________ 3. 我的朋友正在拉小提琴。_________________________________________________________________________ 4. 他正在打鼓。 _________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我们正在一起唱歌跳舞。_________________________________________________________________________ 6. 制作音乐非常有趣。_________________________________________________________________________ 7.我非常喜欢音乐。 _________________________________________________________________________ 8. 它让我们很开心。_________________________________________________________________________ 五、大展身手 假设你正在和同学们上音乐课，给大家介绍一下你们正在如何制作音乐吧！_________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 填空答案 1. music 2. music room 3. playing the violin 4. beating the drums 5. interesting/wonderful 翻译练习 1. Look! We are making music in the music room now. 2. I am playing the piano. 3. My friend is playing the violin. 4. He is beating the drums. 5. We are singing and dancing together. 6. Making music is very interesting. 7. I love music very much. 8. Beautiful music makes us very happy. 大展身手 参考范文（基础款，贴合课本难度） Look! We are making music now. I am playing the piano. My friend is playing the guitar. Another friend is beating the drums. We are singing together. We are very happy. I love making music. 参考范文（进阶款，细节更丰富） Look! We are having a music party in the classroom. Everyone is making music happily. I am playing the violin. My deskmate is playing the guitar. Some boys are beating the drums loudly. Our music teacher is playing the piano and singing with us. We are all smiling and enjoying the beautiful music. Making music with friends is so wonderful. I love music so much! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $