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专题08 书面表达
话题1 个人经历(常考点)
话题4 身心健康
话题2 旅行
话题5 健康运动(常考点)
话题3 方法策略
话题6 中华文化(常考点)
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话题1 学校生活
Passage 1
假如你是李辉,最近校刊杂志《湖畔》正筹备“Changes in My Life”主题特辑,现向同学们征集稿件。请根据以下要点,用英文写篇文章进行投稿,分享你的成长经历。
要点:
1. 外貌和性格;
2. 生活和学习;
3. ……
注意:
1. 80—100词左右;
2. 请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
4. 文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Changes in My Life
Looking back at the past few years, I have changed a lot.
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Passage 2
假如你是李明,刚收到美国叔叔Kevin的电子邮件, 请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。
To: Liming@netease.com
From: Kevin@hotmail.com
Subject: changes
Dear Li Ming,
Haven’t seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast. Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you have a new computer. What do you usually use it for? What do you often do in your free time?
And the May Day holiday is coming, do you have any plans for it?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Kevin
注意事项:
1.英文回信须涉及邮件中的内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息;
3.词数在90个左右,信的首尾已给出,不计入总次数。
Dear Kevin,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—GaoYou has changed a lot over the years.
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I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
Passage 3
学校英语报正在招聘记者,假如你是Mike,请根据表格中的信息给编辑社Diana写email,介绍你的情况:
Hobby
1. play the guitar...
2. watch cartoons; favourite cartoon hero...
Experience
1. study English...(5 years)
2. travel a lot; have been to...
3. enter many...competitions...
Healthy life
1. take exercise
2. eat healthily
Hope
...
要求:
(1)词数:100词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总数。
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Diana,
I’m Mike, a fourteen-year-old boy. I want to be a reporter (记者) for our school newspaper.
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Looking forward to your reply!
Love,
Mike
话题2 旅行
Passage 1
寒假期间,你的家人带你去游览了首都北京。请你根据以下提示内容,以“My holiday in Beijing”为题,介绍一下你游览北京的经历。
提示:
1. 北京在中国的北部,是中国的首都,每年有数百万人来这里旅游;
2. 你已经来过北京很多次了,认为这个假期更有趣;
3. 爬过长城,去过颐和园(the Summer Palace)和故宫博物院(the Palace Museum),吃过北京烤鸭(Beijing Duck);
4. 拍了许多照片,与外国人用英语交谈过。
要求:
1.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
2.不少于80词。
3.字迹清晰、工整。
My holiday in Beijing
During this winter vacation, I visited Beijing with my family. It has been one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life so far.
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Passage 2
在漫长的人生旅途中,总有一些经历让人难以忘怀。假如你是李华,你们学校下个月要举办以“My travel experience”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点和要求写一篇演讲稿,参加此次比赛。
1. Where have you been?
2. What did you do during the journey?
3. What impressed (给以深刻印象) you most?
4. Why is it impressive to you?
Good afternoon, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about my travel experience. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
你校正在开展主题为“What makes you happier, travelling or reading?”的大讨论。假如你是Jenny,你和你的同学讨论后画了如下思维导图。请根据思维导图用英文写一篇短文给校刊投稿。(字数80左右,开头已给出不计入总字数。)
What makes you happier, travelling or reading?
What is it?
Why does it make you happy?
How does it make you happy? (give one or two examples)
Our lives are full of fun. We can find a lot of interesting things in our daily life, like travelling and reading. In your opinion, which one can make you happier?
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话题3 方法策略
Passage 1
亲爱的同学,你生活中有烦恼,学习有压力吗?请根据提示以“How to solve our stress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,依据提示,可适当发挥。
提示:1. 积极参加体育锻炼,有一个健康的身体。
2. 多与老师、家长和朋友交谈,说出自己的烦恼。
3. 多听听音乐,多看看书。
4. 尽自己最大努力学习,勇敢面对自己的成绩。
How to solve our stress
Now, more and more students have too much stress, in order to have a happy life, we should learn to solve our stress. Let me tell you my ideas.
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Passage 2
为了方便同学们就英语学习进行交流,学校校报新开设了English Zone专栏。请你根据下列提示,写一篇题为“My Ways to Learn English”的短文,与大家一起分享。
坚持写日记能帮我复习学过的词汇、语法和句型。
阅读英文小说帮助我认识新的单词和句型;有趣的故事情节让我对英语学习充满兴趣。
角色扮演游戏我在享受游戏乐趣的同时锻炼口语。
要求:
1.包含所给提示,可适当发挥;
2.语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
3.80-100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:句型sentence pattern;角色扮演游戏role-playing game
My Ways to Learn English
I’d like to share my ways of learning English with all of you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
每个人在生活中都会有一些压力,学习如何缓解压力是人生的一堂必修课。当面对各方面的压力时,你是如何放松的呢?请以“How to Relax”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的想法。
提示:
1. 你关于压力的看法;
2. 你放松的方式 (至少3点)。
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥,80词左右;
2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名等)。
How to Relax
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话题4 身心健康
Passage 1
健康是人生第一财富。你校英语俱乐部将开展以“Ways of Keeping Fit”为主题的演讲活动。假设你是李华,请根据下面的提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿参加此次活动。
要点提示:
1.身体健康(合理饮食、运动锻炼、充足的睡眠);
2.心理健康(学会减压);
3.你的看法。
参考词汇:physical health (身体健康),balanced diet (合理饮食),mental health (心理健康)
写作要求:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone. Today I would like to talk about ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
Passage 2
初中生在日常生活和学习中往往需要面对各种压力。为了帮助同学们缓解压力,英语老师决定在下周的课堂上组织一次交流会。请你根据以下提示,以“Ways to keep active”为题写一篇英语发言稿。
要求:
1.文中需包含所给信息,并补充说明,可作适当发挥;
2.根据所学知识或个人经验,增加一条有效的方法;
3.词数100词左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
Ways to keep active
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share some of my ideas on how to keep active. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
生活中我们总是会遇到各种烦恼,如果处理不好,会影响我们的学习和生活。学校广播站正在征稿讨论青少年如何解决生活中的烦恼。假设你叫李华,请你从以下几个方面,用英语写出你的处理方法,向广播站投稿。
要求:(1)需包括提示的全部内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
As a teenager, we often have a lot of worries. It is very normal in our life. There are many ways to solve them.
As for me
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话题5 健康与运动
Passage 1
假设你最喜欢的爱好是游泳、阅读、跑步、打篮球、听音乐…… (可自选),请根据下面提示,写一篇70~90词的英语短文,可自由发挥,紧扣主题。
内容提示:
·Your hobby是什么爱好
·How often多久做一次
·When you feel unhealthy感冒、发烧、头痛、很累时会怎样
·How your hobby helps you爱好如何帮你放松、保持健康、恢复身体
写作要求:
题目:My Hobby and My Health
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Passage 2
假如你校英文报正在举办“健康少年”主题征文活动,请你结合自己的经历,写一篇文章分享你的爱好,并说明它如何帮助你保持健康。
提示:
1. What do you often do when you are free?
2. How does this activity improve your health?
3. What’s your suggestion for busy students?
play ball games go hiking go swimming go bike riding play music paint
要求:
1.包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,语法正确,行文连贯,书写工整;
3.80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I find the best way to stay healthy is to do what I love. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
假如你是李明,你的英国朋友Jack想了解你最喜欢的运动以及你通常如何进行这项运动。请你根据以下要点,给Jack写一封电子邮件。要点:
1. 你最喜欢的运动是什么;
2. 你进行这项运动的频率和方式;
3. 这项运动给你带来的好处。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于60词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Ming
话题6 中华文化
Passage 1
假设有一批外国学生来贵校交流学习,贵校计划举办一项中国传统文化的主题活动,以下表格是学校的活动方案。请你根据下表中的信息,用英文写一篇短文,向外国学生介绍本次活动。
Project
Chinese tea culture festival
Time
2: 00 p.m., this Friday, June 12
Place
the school hall
Activities
watch a tea art performance, learn to make tea, learn about the history…
Purposes
experience Chinese tea culture, build friendships…
注意:
(1)短文必须包含表格中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实性姓名和学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, friends. We’ve got a plan for you, which may help you learn more about traditional Chinese culture.
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Passage 2
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tony下周将到杭州参加为期一周的寒假研学活动,了解中国文化。请根据他的邮件,给他回信。
Dear Li Hua,
I am coming to Hangzhou soon! I will stay for one week with my host family. I want to know more about Chinese culture. Where should I visit? What can I do and learn there? By the way, are there any Chinese customs that I should pay special attention to?
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Tony
1.邮件需包含所有要点的相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数要求80-100词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Tony,
I am glad to hear that you will attend the winter camp in Hangzhou.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tony下周将到杭州参加为期一周的寒假研学活动,了解中国文化。请根据他的邮件,给他回信。
Dear Li Hua,
I am coming to Hangzhou soon! I will stay for one week with my host family. I want to know more about Chinese culture. Where should I visit? What can I do and learn there? By the way, are there any Chinese customs that I should pay special attention to?
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Tony
1.邮件需包含所有要点的相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数要求80-100词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Tony,
I am glad to hear that you will attend the winter camp in Hangzhou.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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话题1 学校生活
Passage 1
【答案】例文
Changes in My Life
Looking back at the past few years, I have changed a lot.
I used to be short and shy, and I was afraid of speaking in class. Now I am taller and more outgoing. I enjoy sharing ideas with classmates, which makes me confident.
My study habits have also changed. I used to play games after school, but now I often study in the library because I want to improve my grades. I also help with housework when I am free.
These changes have made me happier and more confident. I believe I will continue to improve in the future.
Passage 2
【答案】例文
Dear Kevin,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Caoyou has changed a lot over the years. Many new parks and tall buildings have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner.
I’ve changed too. I’m taller and more outgoing. I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music. In my free time, I like playing basketball with friends.
For the May Day holiday, I plan to visit the new science museum in the city.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
Passage 3
【答案】例文
Dear Diana,
I’m Mike, a fourteen-year-old boy. I want to be a reporter (记者) for our school newspaper. Now, please allow me to introduce myself.
First, I have many hobbies. I like playing the guitar in my free time. Also, I enjoy watching cartoons, and my favourite cartoon hero is Superman because he is brave and helps people. Second, I have good experience. I have studied English for five years, so I can write well. I travel a lot and have been to Beijing and Shanghai. I also enter many competitions, like English speech contests. Third, I live a healthy life. I take exercise every day, such as running. I eat healthily.
I hope I can join your team to write fun stories for students.
Looking forward to your reply!
Love,
Mike
话题2 旅行
Passage 1
【答案】例文
My holiday in Beijing
During this winter vacation, I visited Beijing with my family. It has been one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life so far.
Beijing is in the north of China and it is the capital of China. Every year, millions of tourists come to visit Beijing. I have been to Beijing many times, but this holiday was more interesting. First, we climbed the Great Wall. It was very long and magnificent. Then we visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. I learned a lot about Chinese history there. We also ate delicious Beijing Duck. During the trip, I took many photos. What’s more, I talked with some foreigners in English. It helped me practice my speaking skills.
I really enjoyed this trip and learned so much!
Passage 2
【答案】
Good afternoon, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about my travel experience. I have ever been to many places, such as Beijing, the capital of China, Hangzhou in Zhejiang and Tai’an in Shandong. I’ve visited many places of interest, taken lots of wonderful photos and tried all kinds of delicious food all over China. But I miss the trip to Tai’an the most. Climbing Mount Tai has always been one of my dreams. So I went there with my family last summer holiday. We started climbing at 2:00 am and got to the top of the mountain at 5:00 a.m. After an hour the sun rose slowly. I was really tired during the trip. But when I saw the beautiful sun, I felt very excited.
This is my travel experience. Thank you all.
Passage 3
【答案】例文
Our lives are full of fun. We can find a lot of interesting things in our daily life, like travelling and reading. In your opinion, which one can make you happier? In my opinion, travelling makes me happier.
Travelling means going to new places and experiencing different cultures. It makes me happy because I can see beautiful scenery and meet new people. For example, when I visited the Great Wall last summer, I was amazed by its magnificence and learned about Chinese history. In addition, I made friends with local children in a village, which brought me great joy.
In a word, travelling makes me happier.
话题3 方法策略
Passage 1
【答案】例文
How to solve our stress Now, more and more students have too much stress, in order to have a happy life, we should learn to solve our stress. Let me tell you my ideas.
First, we should do sports like running or playing basketball. It keeps us healthy and helps us study better. Second, talk with teachers, parents or friends about your worries. They can give us helpful advice. Third, listening to music or reading books can make you feel calm. Finally, try our best to study hard and face our grades bravely. If we have too much stress, we’d better go to see a doctor. If we do these things, stress won’t be a big problem!
Passage 2
【答案】例文
My Ways to Learn English
I’d like to share my ways of learning English with all of you. First, I keep a diary in English every day. This helps me review the words, grammar, and sentence patterns I’ve learned. Second, I enjoy reading English novels. They help me learn new words and sentence patterns, and the interesting stories make me more interested in learning English. Third, I sometimes play role-playing games with my friends. While I enjoy the fun of the game, I also practice my spoken English a lot.
These ways really help me improve my English. They make learning interesting and useful. I hope you can try them too!
Passage 3
【答案】例文
How to Relax
Everyone has stress in their life, but we can’t just let it be there. We have to do something about it. One way to relax is through exercise. You can take part in outdoor activities, such as running, swimming or playing football.
Another way to relax is through music. Listening to your favorite songs is actually a good way to make you happy.
The last way is through sleep. If you have had a long day at work and need to relax, go to sleep. You can rest a long time and when you wake up, you’ll probably feel much better.
话题4 身心健康
Passage 1
【答案】例文
Ways of Keeping Fit
Good morning, everyone. Today I would like to talk about ways of keeping fit.
For physical health, we should have a balanced diet. Eat more fruits, vegetables, and less junk food. Also, doing exercise regularly is necessary. We can run or play ball games. And getting enough sleep is important, too. It can make us energetic.
When it comes to mental health, we need to learn to reduce stress. We can listen to music or talk to our friends when we feel stressed.
In my opinion, both physical and mental health are important. Only when we keep both of them in good condition can we live a happy life. So let’s take action to keep fit from now on.
Thank you for listening.
Passage 2
【答案】One possible version
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share some of my ideas on how to keep active.
First, taking physical exercise is a great way to lower stress. Whether it’s playing basketball or doing morning exercises, being active boosts your mood. I love swimming because it relaxes me. Next, having proper communication with friends is helpful. Sharing your feelings can lighten your load and bring you closer together. It’s nice knowing they support you. What’s more, volunteering is also beneficial. Helping others not only serves the community but also makes you feel happy. I enjoyed volunteering at a food bank. Lastly, taking up a new hobby like painting can be very relaxing. It allows you to express yourself creatively and distracts you from daily pressures.
I hope you find these tips helpful and be happy every day!
Passage 3
【答案】例文
As a teenager, we often have a lot of worries, it is very normal in our life. There are many ways to solve them.
As for me, when I feel worried, l usually communicate with my friends, parents or teachers. Sometimes I will do sports with my classmates, such as riding bikes, going swimming and so on. Besides, watching a movie or TV show I like is useful. What’s more, having a big meal is another way to make me relaxed.
I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we live. We will be healthy and learn better.
话题5 健康与运动
Passage 1
【答案】
例文
My Hobby and My Health
My favorite hobby is swimming. I go swimming twice a week. It is really relaxing and interesting.
When I have a cold, a headache or feel tired, I will have a good rest first. After I feel better, I often swim for a while.
Swimming helps me stay strong and healthy. It makes me relaxed and takes my stress away. It also helps me recover quickly when I’m not feeling well. I love swimming because it keeps both my body and mind healthy.
Passage 2
【答案】例文
I find the best way to stay healthy is to do what I love. I usually play basketball with my friends after school. Playing basketball makes me strong and healthy. It also helps me relax and feel happy.
For busy students, I think you should take exercise every day. Even a short walk after class is good. Don’t study all the time. Health is the most important thing. So start with a small step today, and you will feel the difference tomorrow. Remember, a healthy body is the real treasure for every student.
Passage 3
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
My favourite sport is basketball. I think it’s very exciting and interesting. I usually play basketball twice a week. After school, I often play it with my classmates in the playground. Sometimes we have matches with other classes. It makes me strong and happy. Also, playing basketball helps me learn teamwork and make more friends. I love basketball very much. How about you? What’s your favourite sport?
Yours,
Li Ming
话题6 中华文化
Passage 1
【答案】
例文
Hello, friends. We’ve got a plan for you, which may help you learn more about traditional Chinese culture.
We will hold a Chinese tea culture festival in the school hall at 2:00 p.m. this Friday, June 12. You can watch a wonderful tea art performance and learn how to make tea by yourselves. Also, you will learn about the long history of Chinese tea. Through these activities, we hope you can experience the beauty of our tea culture and build new friendships with Chinese students.
We are sure you will have a great time. Welcome to join us!
Passage 2
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear that you will attend the winter camp in Hangzhou.
Hangzhou is full of traditional culture. You can visit West Lake to enjoy its beauty and learn about classic Chinese poems. You can also go to local cultural centers to experience paper‑cutting and tea art, which are great parts of Chinese culture. Besides, you can try some local snacks to know about Chinese food culture.
There are some customs to follow. Be polite when talking with others. Don’t give clocks as gifts, and avoid sticking chopsticks upright in rice. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful and meaningful week.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear that you will attend the winter camp in Hangzhou.
Hangzhou is full of traditional culture. You can visit West Lake to enjoy its beauty and learn about classic Chinese poems. You can also go to local cultural centers to experience paper‑cutting and tea art, which are great parts of Chinese culture. Besides, you can try some local snacks to know about Chinese food culture.
There are some customs to follow. Be polite when talking with others. Don’t give clocks as gifts, and avoid sticking chopsticks upright in rice. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful and meaningful week.
Yours,
Li Hua
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话题1 个人经历(常考点)
话题4 身心健康
话题2 旅行
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话题3 方法策略
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话题1 学校生活
Passage 1
假如你是李辉,最近校刊杂志《湖畔》正筹备“Changes in My Life”主题特辑,现向同学们征集稿件。请根据以下要点,用英文写篇文章进行投稿,分享你的成长经历。
要点:
1. 外貌和性格;
2. 生活和学习;
3. ……
注意:
1. 80—100词左右;
2. 请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
4. 文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Changes in My Life
Looking back at the past few years, I have changed a lot.
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【答案】例文
Changes in My Life
Looking back at the past few years, I have changed a lot.
I used to be short and shy, and I was afraid of speaking in class. Now I am taller and more outgoing. I enjoy sharing ideas with classmates, which makes me confident.
My study habits have also changed. I used to play games after school, but now I often study in the library because I want to improve my grades. I also help with housework when I am free.
These changes have made me happier and more confident. I believe I will continue to improve in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包含所有提示要点,可适当补充细节,使文章内容充实;行文时多使用第一人称,适当运用短语和多样句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述过去几年自己发生了很大变化;
第二步,描述自己在外形和性格上的变化;
第三步,说明自己在学习习惯和生活方面的变化;
第四步,总结这些变化带来的积极影响,并表达未来会继续进步的信念。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②be afraid of doing sth. 害怕做某事
[高分句型]
①I enjoy sharing ideas with classmates, which makes me confident. (which引导定语从句)
②I believe I will continue to improve in the future. (宾语从句)
Passage 2
假如你是李明,刚收到美国叔叔Kevin的电子邮件, 请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。
To: Liming@netease.com
From: Kevin@hotmail.com
Subject: changes
Dear Li Ming,
Haven’t seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast. Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you have a new computer. What do you usually use it for? What do you often do in your free time?
And the May Day holiday is coming, do you have any plans for it?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Kevin
注意事项:
1.英文回信须涉及邮件中的内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息;
3.词数在90个左右,信的首尾已给出,不计入总次数。
Dear Kevin,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—GaoYou has changed a lot over the years.
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I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Kevin,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Caoyou has changed a lot over the years. Many new parks and tall buildings have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner.
I’ve changed too. I’m taller and more outgoing. I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music. In my free time, I like playing basketball with friends.
For the May Day holiday, I plan to visit the new science museum in the city.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据对方来信总结写作要点有:家乡的变化;自己的变化、新买电脑的用途、空闲时间的活动;假期计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描写家乡的变化;
第二步,描述自己的变化、新买电脑的用途、空闲时间的活动;
第三步,描写五一假期计划。
[亮点词汇]
①study online在网上学习
②listen to music听音乐
③plan to do sth计划做某事
[高分句型]
I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music.(动词不定式作状语)
Passage 3
学校英语报正在招聘记者,假如你是Mike,请根据表格中的信息给编辑社Diana写email,介绍你的情况:
Hobby
1. play the guitar...
2. watch cartoons; favourite cartoon hero...
Experience
1. study English...(5 years)
2. travel a lot; have been to...
3. enter many...competitions...
Healthy life
1. take exercise
2. eat healthily
Hope
...
要求:
(1)词数:100词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总数。
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Diana,
I’m Mike, a fourteen-year-old boy. I want to be a reporter (记者) for our school newspaper.
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Looking forward to your reply!
Love,
Mike
【答案】例文
Dear Diana,
I’m Mike, a fourteen-year-old boy. I want to be a reporter (记者) for our school newspaper. Now, please allow me to introduce myself.
First, I have many hobbies. I like playing the guitar in my free time. Also, I enjoy watching cartoons, and my favourite cartoon hero is Superman because he is brave and helps people. Second, I have good experience. I have studied English for five years, so I can write well. I travel a lot and have been to Beijing and Shanghai. I also enter many competitions, like English speech contests. Third, I live a healthy life. I take exercise every day, such as running. I eat healthily.
I hope I can join your team to write fun stories for students.
Looking forward to your reply!
Love,
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示,从爱好、经历以及健康生活这三个方面介绍自己的情况;
第三步,表达希望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce myself自我介绍
②play the guitar弹吉他
③such as例如
[高分句型]
Also, I enjoy watching cartoons, and my favourite cartoon hero is Superman because he is brave and helps people.(because引导原因状语从句)
话题2 旅行
Passage 1
寒假期间,你的家人带你去游览了首都北京。请你根据以下提示内容,以“My holiday in Beijing”为题,介绍一下你游览北京的经历。
提示:
1. 北京在中国的北部,是中国的首都,每年有数百万人来这里旅游;
2. 你已经来过北京很多次了,认为这个假期更有趣;
3. 爬过长城,去过颐和园(the Summer Palace)和故宫博物院(the Palace Museum),吃过北京烤鸭(Beijing Duck);
4. 拍了许多照片,与外国人用英语交谈过。
要求:
1.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
2.不少于80词。
3.字迹清晰、工整。
My holiday in Beijing
During this winter vacation, I visited Beijing with my family. It has been one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life so far.
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【答案】例文
My holiday in Beijing
During this winter vacation, I visited Beijing with my family. It has been one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life so far.
Beijing is in the north of China and it is the capital of China. Every year, millions of tourists come to visit Beijing. I have been to Beijing many times, but this holiday was more interesting. First, we climbed the Great Wall. It was very long and magnificent. Then we visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. I learned a lot about Chinese history there. We also ate delicious Beijing Duck. During the trip, I took many photos. What’s more, I talked with some foreigners in English. It helped me practice my speaking skills.
I really enjoyed this trip and learned so much!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,由于短文开头已给出,故接下来具体描述你游览北京的经历;
第二步,描述你游览北京的经历;
第三步,谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①millions of数百万的
②magnificent宏伟的
③delicious美味的
[高分句型]
①It has been one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life so far.(“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词的复数形式”结构)
Passage 2
在漫长的人生旅途中,总有一些经历让人难以忘怀。假如你是李华,你们学校下个月要举办以“My travel experience”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点和要求写一篇演讲稿,参加此次比赛。
1. Where have you been?
2. What did you do during the journey?
3. What impressed (给以深刻印象) you most?
4. Why is it impressive to you?
Good afternoon, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about my travel experience. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Good afternoon, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about my travel experience. I have ever been to many places, such as Beijing, the capital of China, Hangzhou in Zhejiang and Tai’an in Shandong. I’ve visited many places of interest, taken lots of wonderful photos and tried all kinds of delicious food all over China. But I miss the trip to Tai’an the most. Climbing Mount Tai has always been one of my dreams. So I went there with my family last summer holiday. We started climbing at 2:00 am and got to the top of the mountain at 5:00 a.m. After an hour the sun rose slowly. I was really tired during the trip. But when I saw the beautiful sun, I felt very excited.
This is my travel experience. Thank you all.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别从你去过哪些地方,在旅行中做了些什么,令你印象最深刻的地方是哪里以及它为什么令你印象深刻等方面介绍自己的旅行经历。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜古迹
②have been to到过
③take photos拍照片
④feel excited感到兴奋
[高分句型]
①But when I saw the beautiful sun, I felt very excited. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Climbing Mount Tai has always been one of my dreams. (动名词作主语)
Passage 3
你校正在开展主题为“What makes you happier, travelling or reading?”的大讨论。假如你是Jenny,你和你的同学讨论后画了如下思维导图。请根据思维导图用英文写一篇短文给校刊投稿。(字数80左右,开头已给出不计入总字数。)
What makes you happier, travelling or reading?
What is it?
Why does it make you happy?
How does it make you happy? (give one or two examples)
Our lives are full of fun. We can find a lot of interesting things in our daily life, like travelling and reading. In your opinion, which one can make you happier?
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【答案】例文
Our lives are full of fun. We can find a lot of interesting things in our daily life, like travelling and reading. In your opinion, which one can make you happier? In my opinion, travelling makes me happier.
Travelling means going to new places and experiencing different cultures. It makes me happy because I can see beautiful scenery and meet new people. For example, when I visited the Great Wall last summer, I was amazed by its magnificence and learned about Chinese history. In addition, I made friends with local children in a village, which brought me great joy.
In a word, travelling makes me happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态:主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③ 提示:根据思维导图写作,注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接给出的开头,点明旅行让自己更快乐;
第二步,说明旅行让自己快乐的原因及方式,并举出两个例子;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion在我看来
②For example例如
③made friends with和……交朋友
④In a word总之
[高分句型]
①It makes me happy because I can see beautiful scenery and meet new people. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②For example, when I visited the Great Wall last summer, I was amazed by its magnificence and learned about Chinese history. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③In addition, I made friends with local children in a village, which brought me great joy. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
话题3 方法策略
Passage 1
亲爱的同学,你生活中有烦恼,学习有压力吗?请根据提示以“How to solve our stress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,依据提示,可适当发挥。
提示:1. 积极参加体育锻炼,有一个健康的身体。
2. 多与老师、家长和朋友交谈,说出自己的烦恼。
3. 多听听音乐,多看看书。
4. 尽自己最大努力学习,勇敢面对自己的成绩。
How to solve our stress
Now, more and more students have too much stress, in order to have a happy life, we should learn to solve our stress. Let me tell you my ideas.
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【答案】例文
How to solve our stress Now, more and more students have too much stress, in order to have a happy life, we should learn to solve our stress. Let me tell you my ideas.
First, we should do sports like running or playing basketball. It keeps us healthy and helps us study better. Second, talk with teachers, parents or friends about your worries. They can give us helpful advice. Third, listening to music or reading books can make you feel calm. Finally, try our best to study hard and face our grades bravely. If we have too much stress, we’d better go to see a doctor. If we do these things, stress won’t be a big problem!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、根据提示,介绍解决压力的方法;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②feel calm感到平静
③try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
④too much太多
[高分句型]
If we do these things, stress won’t be a big problem! (if引导条件状语从句)
Passage 2
为了方便同学们就英语学习进行交流,学校校报新开设了English Zone专栏。请你根据下列提示,写一篇题为“My Ways to Learn English”的短文,与大家一起分享。
坚持写日记能帮我复习学过的词汇、语法和句型。
阅读英文小说帮助我认识新的单词和句型;有趣的故事情节让我对英语学习充满兴趣。
角色扮演游戏我在享受游戏乐趣的同时锻炼口语。
要求:
1.包含所给提示,可适当发挥;
2.语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
3.80-100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:句型sentence pattern;角色扮演游戏role-playing game
My Ways to Learn English
I’d like to share my ways of learning English with all of you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Ways to Learn English
I’d like to share my ways of learning English with all of you. First, I keep a diary in English every day. This helps me review the words, grammar, and sentence patterns I’ve learned. Second, I enjoy reading English novels. They help me learn new words and sentence patterns, and the interesting stories make me more interested in learning English. Third, I sometimes play role-playing games with my friends. While I enjoy the fun of the game, I also practice my spoken English a lot.
These ways really help me improve my English. They make learning interesting and useful. I hope you can try them too!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干表格的要点,介绍自己学习英语的方法;
第三步,给出鼓励,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①keep a diary写日记
②enjoy doing喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①While I enjoy the fun of the game, I also practice my spoken English a lot.(时间状语从句)
②I hope you can try them too!(宾语从句)
Passage 3
每个人在生活中都会有一些压力,学习如何缓解压力是人生的一堂必修课。当面对各方面的压力时,你是如何放松的呢?请以“How to Relax”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的想法。
提示:
1. 你关于压力的看法;
2. 你放松的方式 (至少3点)。
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥,80词左右;
2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名等)。
How to Relax
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【答案】例文
How to Relax
Everyone has stress in their life, but we can’t just let it be there. We have to do something about it. One way to relax is through exercise. You can take part in outdoor activities, such as running, swimming or playing football.
Another way to relax is through music. Listening to your favorite songs is actually a good way to make you happy.
The last way is through sleep. If you have had a long day at work and need to relax, go to sleep. You can rest a long time and when you wake up, you’ll probably feel much better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:题目与写作要点已给出,考生写作时应注意按材料要求写,需涵盖对压力的看法及至少3种放松方式,按要求组织内容,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明生活中人人有压力,需采取行动应对;
第二步,分别阐述锻炼、听音乐、睡眠这三种放松方式及作用;
第三步,通过介绍放松方式自然收尾,让读者了解缓解压力的办法。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②such as例如
③wake up醒来
[高分句型]
If you have had a long day at work and need to relax, go to sleep. (if引导的条件状语从句)
话题4 身心健康
Passage 1
健康是人生第一财富。你校英语俱乐部将开展以“Ways of Keeping Fit”为主题的演讲活动。假设你是李华,请根据下面的提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿参加此次活动。
要点提示:
1.身体健康(合理饮食、运动锻炼、充足的睡眠);
2.心理健康(学会减压);
3.你的看法。
参考词汇:physical health (身体健康),balanced diet (合理饮食),mental health (心理健康)
写作要求:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone. Today I would like to talk about ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文
Ways of Keeping Fit
Good morning, everyone. Today I would like to talk about ways of keeping fit.
For physical health, we should have a balanced diet. Eat more fruits, vegetables, and less junk food. Also, doing exercise regularly is necessary. We can run or play ball games. And getting enough sleep is important, too. It can make us energetic.
When it comes to mental health, we need to learn to reduce stress. We can listen to music or talk to our friends when we feel stressed.
In my opinion, both physical and mental health are important. Only when we keep both of them in good condition can we live a happy life. So let’s take action to keep fit from now on.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示要点进行写作,可适当增添细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,从身体健康和心理健康两方面介绍保持健康的方法;
第三步,表达自己的观点并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to music听音乐
②in my opinion在我看来
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①We can listen to music or talk to our friends when we feel stressed. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Only when we keep both of them in good condition can we live a happy life. (倒装句)
Passage 2
初中生在日常生活和学习中往往需要面对各种压力。为了帮助同学们缓解压力,英语老师决定在下周的课堂上组织一次交流会。请你根据以下提示,以“Ways to keep active”为题写一篇英语发言稿。
要求:
1.文中需包含所给信息,并补充说明,可作适当发挥;
2.根据所学知识或个人经验,增加一条有效的方法;
3.词数100词左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
Ways to keep active
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share some of my ideas on how to keep active. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share some of my ideas on how to keep active.
First, taking physical exercise is a great way to lower stress. Whether it’s playing basketball or doing morning exercises, being active boosts your mood. I love swimming because it relaxes me. Next, having proper communication with friends is helpful. Sharing your feelings can lighten your load and bring you closer together. It’s nice knowing they support you. What’s more, volunteering is also beneficial. Helping others not only serves the community but also makes you feel happy. I enjoyed volunteering at a food bank. Lastly, taking up a new hobby like painting can be very relaxing. It allows you to express yourself creatively and distracts you from daily pressures.
I hope you find these tips helpful and be happy every day!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生写作时应注意按材料要求写,不要遗漏“写作要求”中的缓解压力的方法等要点,根据实际情况可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,表明要分享缓解压力的方法;
第二步,具体阐述每种缓解压力的方法及相关情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达对大家能缓解压力、开心生活的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① physical exercise 体育锻炼
② proper communication 适当的交流
③ not only... but also... 不但……而且……
④ take up 开始从事
⑤ distract... from... 使从……分心
[高分句型]
① Whether it’s playing basketball or doing morning exercises, being active boosts your mood. (含有让步状语从句的复合句)
② I hope you find these tips helpful and be happy every day! (含有宾语从句的复合句)
Passage 3
生活中我们总是会遇到各种烦恼,如果处理不好,会影响我们的学习和生活。学校广播站正在征稿讨论青少年如何解决生活中的烦恼。假设你叫李华,请你从以下几个方面,用英语写出你的处理方法,向广播站投稿。
要求:(1)需包括提示的全部内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
As a teenager, we often have a lot of worries. It is very normal in our life. There are many ways to solve them.
As for me
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【答案】例文
As a teenager, we often have a lot of worries, it is very normal in our life. There are many ways to solve them.
As for me, when I feel worried, l usually communicate with my friends, parents or teachers. Sometimes I will do sports with my classmates, such as riding bikes, going swimming and so on. Besides, watching a movie or TV show I like is useful. What’s more, having a big meal is another way to make me relaxed.
I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we live. We will be healthy and learn better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章为第一人称,阐述如何解决自己生活中的烦恼,内容要点描述完整,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题(开头已给出);
第二步,从自身角度出发,具体从四个方面来阐述青少年如何解决自己的烦恼;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with与……交流
②such as比如
[高分句型]
①As for me, when I feel worried, l usually communicate with my friends, parents or teachers.(时间状语从句)
②What’s more, having a big meal is another way to make me relaxed.(动名词作主语)
③I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we live.(the+比较级,the+比较级)
话题5 健康与运动
Passage 1
假设你最喜欢的爱好是游泳、阅读、跑步、打篮球、听音乐…… (可自选),请根据下面提示,写一篇70~90词的英语短文,可自由发挥,紧扣主题。
内容提示:
·Your hobby是什么爱好
·How often多久做一次
·When you feel unhealthy感冒、发烧、头痛、很累时会怎样
·How your hobby helps you爱好如何帮你放松、保持健康、恢复身体
写作要求:
题目:My Hobby and My Health
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【答案】
例文
My Hobby and My Health
My favorite hobby is swimming. I go swimming twice a week. It is really relaxing and interesting.
When I have a cold, a headache or feel tired, I will have a good rest first. After I feel better, I often swim for a while.
Swimming helps me stay strong and healthy. It makes me relaxed and takes my stress away. It also helps me recover quickly when I’m not feeling well. I love swimming because it keeps both my body and mind healthy.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文(结合爱好与健康的关系),以一般现在时为主(介绍爱好及健康影响)
明确要点:最爱爱好(游泳的频率、感受)、身体不适时的处理方式(先休息,好转后游泳)、游泳对健康的益处(强身体、减压力、助恢复)、爱好的核心意义(兼顾身心)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:聚焦“爱好与健康”的关联,内容真实具体
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明最爱爱好是游泳,说明频率及主观感受
主体段1:描述身体不适时的做法(先休息,好转后游泳)
主体段2:阐述游泳对健康的具体益处(强身体、减压力、助恢复)
结尾段:总结游泳的核心价值(兼顾身心)
[要点展开]
要点一:核心爱好介绍
爱好:swimming
频率:go swimming twice a week
感受:relaxing and interesting
要点二:身体不适时的处理
不适情况:cold, headache, feel tired
做法:have a good rest first; swim for a while after feeling better
要点三:游泳对健康的益处
身体层面:stay strong and healthy, recover quickly when unwell
心理层面:relaxed, takes stress away
要点四:爱好的意义
总结:keeps both body and mind healthy,点明爱好与健康的深度关联
Passage 2
假如你校英文报正在举办“健康少年”主题征文活动,请你结合自己的经历,写一篇文章分享你的爱好,并说明它如何帮助你保持健康。
提示:
1. What do you often do when you are free?
2. How does this activity improve your health?
3. What’s your suggestion for busy students?
play ball games go hiking go swimming go bike riding play music paint
要求:
1.包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,语法正确,行文连贯,书写工整;
3.80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I find the best way to stay healthy is to do what I love. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I find the best way to stay healthy is to do what I love. I usually play basketball with my friends after school. Playing basketball makes me strong and healthy. It also helps me relax and feel happy.
For busy students, I think you should take exercise every day. Even a short walk after class is good. Don’t study all the time. Health is the most important thing. So start with a small step today, and you will feel the difference tomorrow. Remember, a healthy body is the real treasure for every student.
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:议论文(材料作文),以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍保持健康的方式,结合自身运动经历,给学生提出健康建议
确定人称:第一人称/第二人称
注意事项:要点完整不遗漏;语法拼写正确,句式通顺。
【第二步:构思布局】
三段式结构:
开头段:先讲自己的健康方式;
中间段:给同学建议;
结尾段:强调健康的重要性,提出倡议。
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:健康方式
stay healthy/play basketball/after school/make me strong and healthy/relax and feel happy
要点二:给学生建议
take exercise every day/a short walk/don’t study all the time
要点三:重要性总结
health is the most important/start with a small step/a healthy body/real treasure
Passage 3
假如你是李明,你的英国朋友Jack想了解你最喜欢的运动以及你通常如何进行这项运动。请你根据以下要点,给Jack写一封电子邮件。要点:
1. 你最喜欢的运动是什么;
2. 你进行这项运动的频率和方式;
3. 这项运动给你带来的好处。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于60词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
My favourite sport is basketball. I think it’s very exciting and interesting. I usually play basketball twice a week. After school, I often play it with my classmates in the playground. Sometimes we have matches with other classes. It makes me strong and happy. Also, playing basketball helps me learn teamwork and make more friends. I love basketball very much. How about you? What’s your favourite sport?
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(电子邮件),以一般现在时为主要时态
明确要点:说明最喜欢的运动;介绍运动的频率和方式;阐述运动带来的好处
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:词数不少于60词,开头和结尾不计入总词数,不得透露真实个人信息
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:开门见山,直接点明自己最喜欢的运动,总起全文
主体:详细介绍进行这项运动的频率、方式,补充相关细节
结尾:总结这项运动带来的好处,升华主题,同时反问对方的爱好,呼应邮件的交流属性
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:最喜欢的运动
运动选择:basketball/running/swimming/table tennis/badminton/football等
运动评价:exciting and interesting/relaxing/fun/good for health/full of energy等
开篇句型:My favourite sport is basketball./ I like…best /Among all the sports, I like…most.等
要点二:运动的频率和方式
频率表达:twice a week/every day/three times a week/on weekends/after school等
进行方式:play it with my classmates in the playground/play with friends/family/teammates/in the gym/on the playground等
补充细节:Sometimes we have matches with other classes./We often practice together. / I join the school team. / I watch games to improve my skills.等
要点三:运动带来的好处
身体层面:It makes me strong and happy./keep healthy/fit/build up my body/relieve stress等
精神/社交层面:playing basketball helps me learn teamwork and make more friends/improve my confidence/learn to never give up/make friends with people who share the same hobby等
话题6 中华文化
Passage 1
假设有一批外国学生来贵校交流学习,贵校计划举办一项中国传统文化的主题活动,以下表格是学校的活动方案。请你根据下表中的信息,用英文写一篇短文,向外国学生介绍本次活动。
Project
Chinese tea culture festival
Time
2: 00 p.m., this Friday, June 12
Place
the school hall
Activities
watch a tea art performance, learn to make tea, learn about the history…
Purposes
experience Chinese tea culture, build friendships…
注意:
(1)短文必须包含表格中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实性姓名和学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, friends. We’ve got a plan for you, which may help you learn more about traditional Chinese culture.
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【答案】
例文
Hello, friends. We’ve got a plan for you, which may help you learn more about traditional Chinese culture.
We will hold a Chinese tea culture festival in the school hall at 2:00 p.m. this Friday, June 12. You can watch a wonderful tea art performance and learn how to make tea by yourselves. Also, you will learn about the long history of Chinese tea. Through these activities, we hope you can experience the beauty of our tea culture and build new friendships with Chinese students.
We are sure you will have a great time. Welcome to join us!
【详解】写作步骤
第一步:审题立意
确定文体:通知类应用文,用一般将来时为主
明确要点:活动基础信息(主题、时间、地点)、具体活动内容及目的
确定人称:第一人称(We)、第二人称(You)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
第二步:构思布局
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,引出活动主题
主体段:详细介绍活动核心信息
结尾段:表达活动期望,发出参与邀请
第三步:要点展开
要点一:活动基础信息
主题选择:Chinese tea culture festival/Chinese paper-cutting workshop/Chinese dumpling-making activity…
时间说明:this Friday/next Monday/at the weekend…
位置描述:the school hall/the school garden/the school library…
要点二:具体活动内容
活动内容:watch a tea art performance/cut red paper into patterns/learn to make and cook Chinese dumplings…
活动目的:experience Chinese tea culture/learn about folk art/experience Chinese food culture…
Passage 2
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tony下周将到杭州参加为期一周的寒假研学活动,了解中国文化。请根据他的邮件,给他回信。
Dear Li Hua,
I am coming to Hangzhou soon! I will stay for one week with my host family. I want to know more about Chinese culture. Where should I visit? What can I do and learn there? By the way, are there any Chinese customs that I should pay special attention to?
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Tony
1.邮件需包含所有要点的相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数要求80-100词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Tony,
I am glad to hear that you will attend the winter camp in Hangzhou.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear that you will attend the winter camp in Hangzhou.
Hangzhou is full of traditional culture. You can visit West Lake to enjoy its beauty and learn about classic Chinese poems. You can also go to local cultural centers to experience paper‑cutting and tea art, which are great parts of Chinese culture. Besides, you can try some local snacks to know about Chinese food culture.
There are some customs to follow. Be polite when talking with others. Don’t give clocks as gifts, and avoid sticking chopsticks upright in rice. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful and meaningful week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(电子邮件),用一般现在时和一般将来时
明确要点:推荐参观地点、可做的事情和学习内容、需注意的中国习俗
确定人称:第二人称(you)和第一人称(I)
注意事项:需包含邮件中所有要点,开头结尾已给出,注意书信格式和语言得体
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,表达高兴并回应对方来信
主体段:分两部分介绍杭州的文化体验推荐和需注意的中国习俗
结尾段:表达祝愿
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:推荐参观地点
地点推荐:visit West Lake to enjoy its beauty/go to West Lake/visit the lake等
文化学习:learn about classic Chinese poems/enjoy the poems/know about the poems等
要点二:可做的事情和学习内容
活动一:go to local cultural centers to experience paper‑cutting and tea art/try paper-cutting/learn tea art等
活动二:try some local snacks to know about Chinese food culture/taste local food/eat local snacks等
文化意义:great parts of Chinese culture/important parts of Chinese culture等
要点三:需注意的中国习俗
礼貌习惯:Be polite when talking with others/be polite/say hello politely等
送礼禁忌:Don’t give clocks as gifts/avoid giving clocks/not a good gift等
餐桌礼仪:avoid sticking chopsticks upright in rice/don’t stick chopsticks in rice等
要点四:结尾祝愿
祝愿表达:I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful and meaningful week/have a great time/enjoy your stay等
Passage 3
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tony下周将到杭州参加为期一周的寒假研学活动,了解中国文化。请根据他的邮件,给他回信。
Dear Li Hua,
I am coming to Hangzhou soon! I will stay for one week with my host family. I want to know more about Chinese culture. Where should I visit? What can I do and learn there? By the way, are there any Chinese customs that I should pay special attention to?
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Tony
1.邮件需包含所有要点的相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数要求80-100词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Tony,
I am glad to hear that you will attend the winter camp in Hangzhou.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear that you will attend the winter camp in Hangzhou.
Hangzhou is full of traditional culture. You can visit West Lake to enjoy its beauty and learn about classic Chinese poems. You can also go to local cultural centers to experience paper‑cutting and tea art, which are great parts of Chinese culture. Besides, you can try some local snacks to know about Chinese food culture.
There are some customs to follow. Be polite when talking with others. Don’t give clocks as gifts, and avoid sticking chopsticks upright in rice. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful and meaningful week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(电子邮件),用一般现在时和一般将来时
明确要点:推荐参观地点、可做的事情和学习内容、需注意的中国习俗
确定人称:第二人称(you)和第一人称(I)
注意事项:需包含邮件中所有要点,开头结尾已给出,注意书信格式和语言得体
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,表达高兴并回应对方来信
主体段:分两部分介绍杭州的文化体验推荐和需注意的中国习俗
结尾段:表达祝愿
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:推荐参观地点
地点推荐:visit West Lake to enjoy its beauty/go to West Lake/visit the lake等
文化学习:learn about classic Chinese poems/enjoy the poems/know about the poems等
要点二:可做的事情和学习内容
活动一:go to local cultural centers to experience paper‑cutting and tea art/try paper-cutting/learn tea art等
活动二:try some local snacks to know about Chinese food culture/taste local food/eat local snacks等
文化意义:great parts of Chinese culture/important parts of Chinese culture等
要点三:需注意的中国习俗
礼貌习惯:Be polite when talking with others/be polite/say hello politely等
送礼禁忌:Don’t give clocks as gifts/avoid giving clocks/not a good gift等
餐桌礼仪:avoid sticking chopsticks upright in rice/don’t stick chopsticks in rice等
要点四:结尾祝愿
祝愿表达:I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful and meaningful week/have a great time/enjoy your stay等
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