内容正文:
digestion.
To improve my eating habits,I plan to cut
down on snacks and set a fixed time for dinner.I
will also try to add more whole grains and less
processed food to my meals.Additionally,I'll
practice eating slowly to enjoy each bite and help
my body digest better.I believe these changes
will make my diet healthier and keep me in good
shape.
主题二人与社会
子主题一
典例分析
第三步
(1)among them
(2)to collect/pick up rubbish
(3)wanted to give up
(4)finish my job
(5)a sense of achievement
(6)make a difference;lead to
第五步
①More and more
②that/which
③How
实战演练
One possible version:
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community
as a volunteer.
Before the event began,we gathered at the
entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o'clock.We
volunteers were then divided into groups.Some
made eco-friendly products.Others gave out
reusable water bottles and the bags we made.I
went all out to work at the learning stalls,
teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and
how to reduce trash here in town.
I shared what I know with others through
the activity.Sharing is caring.Wish everyone
could care about our community and earth.
子主题二
典例分析
第三步
(1)develop a good relationship
(2)suggestions/advice on
(3)enjoy a rich and colorful
第五步
①it's a good way for
②what
③with the help of
实战演练
One possible version:
There are many ways of improving the
relationship with your parents.As for me,I
always listen to my parents and talk with them to
help understand each other.
I always ask my parents for advice when I
have trouble doing something.I always listen
carefully to their suggestions.I know my parents
have more experience in dealing with things.
What's more,they're the people who love me
best in the world.Through asking,we
understand each other better and we have really
good relationship.
Talking with parents is also important.
Sometimes we want to hang out with our friends
late,but it's normal for our parents to worry
about our safety.Then talk with our parents.Tell
them who we'll be with,where we'll go and when
we'll be back.Our parents will think we can
arrange our own lives well.We won't have
arguments about things like this.We'll have a
better understanding of each other.
Different students have different ways of
improving the relationship with their parents.
There is always a best one for you.
子主题三
典例分析
第三步
(1)family/last namesM,
第三部分|重难题型攻略
中考冲刺英语
主题二人与社会
子主题一志愿服务与公共服务
【考情分析】
分析河北近5年中考书面表达可知,针对“志愿服务与公共服务”这一子主题未考查,但2020
年以看图作文的形式考查了此主题。
分析全国中考书面表达可知,全国关于此子主题的命题角度还有:自己的经历及感受。
【主题词句背记】
l.graduation party毕业聚会
6.share problems分担困难
2.give/make a speech做演讲
7.learn.from…从…当中学到…
词汇
短语
3.take a trip去旅行
8.make a difference有影响,起作用
4.prepare for为…做准备
9.be deeply moved by.被…深深地感动
5.take an active part in积极参加
l0.make sb.feel…让某人感觉…
1.I had a very unforgettable experience when I was...years old.
2.Last Friday,we had a basketball competition against the team from the senior class in
介绍
our school.
经历
3.As a volunteer,you can not only help people in need,but also learn a lot from your
experience.That is why I enjoy being a volunteer.
佳句
积累
1.All of us are supposed to keep doing what we like and never give up no matter how
many difficulties we meet.
介绍
2.I feel proud of being a volunteer,which means I am able to offer help.What's more,I
感受
am also thankful for the people who have helped me.
3.Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.
4.From this,I've learned that it's important to believe in ourselves.
【典例分析】
注意:
奉献、友爱、互助、进步,是新时代的中国
1.短文须包括提示所有信息,可适当
志愿服务精神,也是新时代雷锋精神的一个重
发挥;
要表征。作为新时代的青少年,应培养自己回
2.词数80左右。
馈社会、服务社会的意识。请结合你参加志愿
服务的一次亲身经历,谈谈你对志愿服务的
看法。
提示:
1.your opinion about volunteering;
2.one of your experiences of volunteering;
3.your understanding of volunteering...
日积月累:If you sell the cow,you sell her milk too,杀鸡取卵。
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中考冲刺英语
第一步审清题意
续表
文体:夹叙夹议
内容
内容规划
人称:第一人称
结构
时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
(6)我们的行为可以带来影响,带来更
写作要点:
收获和
美好的未来。
1.自己对志愿服务的看法;
感受
Our actions can
and
2.讲述一次做志愿者的经历;
a better future.
3.总结收获和感受。
第四步
组句成篇
第二步
列好提纲
Volunteering is important.Nowadays,
对志愿工
Volunteering is...
作的看法
Da lot of people begin to do volunteer work.
I'm among them,too.Last summer vacation,
框
Time:Last...
一次做志愿
者的经历
Activity:I joined in...
2I joined in an activity.It was to volunteer to
构
Finally:I got a sense of...
collect the rubbish in the park.When we went
收获和感受
The spirit of volunteering is...
there,we found the rubbish was everywhere.
3That was very dirty.So I wanted to give
第三步
组织句子
up.But I continued to finish my job.In the
内容
内容规划
结构
end,I got a sense of achievement.Our actions
直接给出观点:Volunteering is important..
can make a difference and lead to a better
(1)现在很多人开始做志愿工作。我也
future.
对志愿
是他们中的一员。
第五步精雕细琢
工作的
Nowadays,a lot of people begin to do
看法
volunteer work.I'm
①用比较级句式来改写句子:
too.(点明自己开始做志愿工作,同时引
越来越多的人开始做志愿工作。
出下文)
people begin to do volunteer
(2)去年著假,我参加志愿活动,去公园
work.
捡垃圾。
②用定语从句转换,使句子升格:
Last summer vacation,I joined in an
I joined an activity
was to volunteer
activity.It was to volunteer
to collect the rubbish in the park.
in the park.
(3)当我们到达那里时,发现垃圾到处
③改为感叹句使句子升格
一次做
都是,非常脏。所以我想放弃。
志愿者
dirty it was!
的经历
When we went there,we found the
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rubbish was everywhere.That was very
dirty.So I
Volunteering is important.Nowadays,
(4)但是,我坚持下来并完成了工作。
more and more people begin to do volunteer
But I continued to
work.I'm among them,too.Last summer
(5)最终我获得了成就感。
vacation,I joined in an activity which was to
In the end,I got
volunteer to collect the rubbish in the park.
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第三部分重难题型攻略
中考冲刺英语
When we went there,we found the rubbish
注意:
was everywhere.How dirty it was!So I
1.词数80左右;
wanted to give up.But I continued to finish
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
my job.In the end,I got a sense of
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
achievement.
Our actions can make a
4.短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总
difference and lead to a better future.
词数。
【实战演练】
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing
区进行志愿活动的经历,请你根据以下提示写
Community as a volunteer.
一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.简要描述;
2.体验和感受。
Volunteer
Work
in
Hongxing
Topic
Community
Time
last sunday
made eco-friendly(环保的)products
gave out
reusable water bottles
Activities
and bags
worked at the learning stalls(摊位)
子主题二
良好的人际关系与人际交往(2022)
【考情分析】
分析河北近5年中考书面表达可知,针对“良好的人际关系与人际交往”这一子主题,河北在
2022年考查了“谈论设立Dialogue with Teachers专栏的目的”。
分析全国中考书面表达可知,此子主题在中考中出现频率较高,常见的命题角度有:①谈论
与他人沟通时遇到的问题并给出建议;②个人与他人之间的合作与交流、建议等。
【主题词句背记】
◆存在的问题
◆给出的建议
1.fight with和…打架
l.get on well with与…友好相处
词汇
2.argue with与…争吵
2.communicate with与…交流
短语
3.be angry/mad with生…的气
3.say sorry to向…道歉
4.worry about.…担心…
4.be friendly to对…友好
5.talk back顶嘴
5.keep in touch with与…保持联系
日积月累:Better to best.精益求精。
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