专题04 书面表达归纳&专项训练-2025-2026学年八年级下学期期中复习（新人教版）

专题04 书面表达归纳&专项训练 Unit 1 Time to Relax 本单元的主题是“闲暇时间的活动”,要求学生能够运用所学的词汇、语法及句式描述个人在休闲时间的爱好,并探讨放松对生活的重要性。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①休闲活动的类型与内容(如运动、艺术、科技等);②参与活动的体验与感受;③兴趣爱好对个人成长的积极影响。 中考书面表达与此主题相关的命题形式多样,例如在论坛回帖中分享个人爱好、撰写日记记录兴趣培养过程、通过书信向朋友推荐有益的休闲活动等。写作内容通常涵盖以下要点:休闲活动的类型与细节,结合个人经历说明兴趣的起源,强调兴趣爱好对身心健康、技能提升或人际交往的作用等。 1.写作实例 　　在繁忙的学习生活中,你是如何度过宝贵的空闲时间的呢?有没有哪件事能够让你放松身心,给你带来乐趣和自信呢?请以“One thing I always do in my free time”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己在空闲时间总是做的一件事。 要点:(1)你在空闲时间喜欢做什么事? (2)你为什么喜欢做这件事? (3)你从这件事中收获了什么? 要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等);4.词数不少于80。 One thing I always do in my free time 2.审题指导 1.体裁:记叙文    2.时态:以一般现在时为主    3.人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主 4.必备词句: ①balance study and life 平衡学习与生活　 ②discover hidden talents 发现隐藏的才能 ③explore new routes 探索新的路线　 ④I find it fun to explore new routes, and it makes me really happy when I reach the top of a hill after a tough climb. 我发现探索新的路线很有趣,当我经过艰难的攀登到达山顶时,我真的很开心。 ⑤This hobby not only keeps me healthy but also teaches me to embrace challenges bravely.这个爱好不仅使我保持健康,而且教会我勇敢地迎接挑战。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 One thing I always do in my free time Hobbies are like keys to a peaceful mind. They help me balance study and life while I discover hidden talents. My favourite free-time activity is cycling. I started this activity when I was nine, after receiving a blue bicycle as a gift. At first, I wobbled and fell often, but my father taught me to keep trying. Now, I ride through parks and quiet streets every weekend.It lets me feel the wind on my face and enjoy nature’s beauty. Watching cherry blossoms while cycling in spring always lifts my spirits. I find it fun to explore new routes, and it makes me really happy when I reach the top of a hill after a tough climb. Cycling also helps me stay energetic and focused on school tasks. This hobby not only keeps me healthy but also teaches me to embrace challenges bravely. Every ride reminds me that effort leads to rewarding views. 随堂训练 健康的兴趣爱好会给我们的学习和生活带来很大的帮助。假如你是李华，你正在参与校英文报主题为“My Hobby”的征稿活动。请你根据以下导图提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。 注意：1.短文必须包括以下导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear editor, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua Unit 2 Stay Healthy 本单元的主题是“保持健康”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和表达,谈论健康问题、提供建议。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①描述健康问题与身体状况;②针对不适症状给出合理建议;③分析日常生活中的安全隐患,并讨论预防措施。 在中考书面表达中与此主题相关的命题形式较为多样,例如通过撰写建议信、演讲稿等向同龄人发出倡议,内容需列举具体防护措施,并表达共同守护健康的期望,体现实用性与号召力。 1.写作实例 假设你是李华,最近有许多人感染了甲型流感病毒 (influenza A virus)。请你根据以下表格中的提示,以“How to prevent the influenza A virus”为题,谈谈我们应该怎样预防甲 型流感病毒。 How to prevent the influenza A virus wash our hands often do some sports, such as... wear masks (口罩) eat healthy food and drink more water 要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4.词数不少于80。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数) How to prevent the influenza A virus Many people have the influenza A virus these days. What should we do to prevent it? 2.审题指导 1.体裁:说明文    2.时态:一般现在时    3.人称:以第二、三人称为主 4.必备词句: ①wash them often with soap 经常用肥皂洗它们     ②stop the virus from spreading 阻止病毒传播　 ③do sports regularly 定期运动　 ④avoid crowded places 避免去拥挤的地方 ⑤It’s important for us to take steps to stay healthy. 对我们来说, 采取措施保持健康很重要。 ⑥In short, small habits make a big difference. 总之,小习惯会产生大的影响。 3.谋篇布局 优秀范文 How to prevent the influenza A virus Many people have the influenza A virus these days. What should we do to prevent it? It’s important for us to take steps to stay healthy. First, keep hands clean. Wash them often with soap, especially before eating and after touching public things. Second, wear masks in busy places. They can help stop the virus from spreading. Also, do sports regularly, like walking or playing basketball, to make our bodies strong. Eating healthy food like fruits and vegetables, and drinking more water are good too. Try not to stay close to people who are sick, and avoid crowded places when possible. In short, small habits make a big difference. Following these tips can protect us and others. Let's take care of ourselves and stay away from the virus. 随堂训练 安全在我心中，生命在我手中。每年4月15日为全民国家安全教育日。作为中学生的我们，校园安全对我们尤为重要，请你根据以下提示，以“How to keep safe at school”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，并在班会上发言。 ●never fight with others ●never run in the hallways ●go up and down the stairs (楼梯) on the right ●follow the rules when playing games … 注意： (1)发言稿须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； (2)发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； (3)词数70个左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to keep safe at school Safety is very important for everyone. As students, we spend most of the time at school. So we should know how to keep safe at school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 3 Growing Up 本单元的主题是“情绪管理”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和句式,谈论生活中的不同情绪,向情绪低落的朋友提供建议,或向帮助自己的人表示感谢。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①描述让自己产生某种情绪的具体经历;②分析情绪产生的原因;③以感谢信的形式阐述他人帮助自己应对情绪的具体经历并表达感激之情。 在中考书面表达中,与此主题相关的命题形式主要有撰写感谢信、演讲稿等。通常需要涵盖的主要内容包括:清晰描述引发特定情绪的事件,具体说明对方的帮助是如何影响自己的情绪的,并真挚地表达感恩之情。 1.写作实例 　　假如你是外国语学校的学生李华,在外教Mr. Brown的帮助下,你的性格发生了很大变化,你变得积极开朗,并在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛 (English Opera Competition) 中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信,主要内容包括: 1.对Mr. Brown表示感谢; 2.简述自己的变化; 3.简述Mr. Brown对你的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果;4.邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。 要求:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.须包含所有要点提示,可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;3.信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 Dear Mr. Brown, 2.审题指导 1.体裁:应用文    2.时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主     3.人称:以第一人称为主 4.必备词句: ①make a big difference产生重大影响　 ②be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事　 ③smile at sb.对某人微笑　 ④prepare for为……做准备　 ⑤express emotions through...通过……表达情感 ⑥When I was too nervous to answer, you said, “It’s okay to make mistakes!”当我紧张得无法回答时,你说:“犯错没关系!” 3.谋篇布局 优秀范文 Dear Mr. Brown,　 Thank you so much for helping me become a better person! Your care and encouragement have made a big difference in my life. I used to be shy and quiet. I was afraid to speak in front of others and hardly made friends. In your classes, you always smiled at me and asked questions to make me talk. When I was too nervous to answer, you said, “It’s okay to make mistakes!”Once, you stayed with me for an hour to prepare for the English Opera Competition, teaching me how to express emotions through voice and gestures. Bit by bit, I gained confidence and started to enjoy speaking English and making friends. Last week, I won first prize in the competition! None of these would have happened without you. I hope you can come to my home for dinner this weekend. My parents want to thank you too! Looking forward to seeing you. Yours,　 Li Hua　 随堂训练 生活中，每个人都难免会遇到各种各样的压力。作为当代中学生，应该学会正确地应对压力。请你根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，分享你应对压力的一次经历。 要点：1.让你感到压力的事情是什么? 2.你是如何应对的? 3.你的收获是什么? 要求：1.文中须包含要点所提示信息，可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 It’s normal that we suffer from stress in our daily lives. I felt stressed when I ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature 本单元的主题是“自然奇观”,要求学生能够通过列数字、作比较等写作手法,向读者介绍一种自然景观。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍自然奇观的基本信息;②运用数据对比突出其“独特性”;③描述人类与自然奇观的互动;④呼吁敬畏与保护自然。 在中考书面表达中,与此主题相关的命题形式常为“介绍某一自然景观”或“探讨人类与自然的联系”。通常需要涵盖的主要内容包括:明确自然景观的名称及地理位置;用具体数据说明其规模或特征;解释人类游览该景观的原因;列举人类探索该景观的活动;结合生态价值或文化意义,呼吁保护自然景观。 1.写作实例 　　假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人,因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。 提示问题:Which places of interest should I visit? How can I get there? What’s it famous for? 要求:1.内容应包含所有提示,可适当发挥;2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;3.100词左右。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. 2.审题指导 1.体裁:应用文    2.时态:以一般现在时为主    3.人称:以第三人称为主 4.必备词句: ①highly recommend doing sth.强烈推荐做某事     ②be located in位于　 ③cover an area of...占地面积为……     ④migratory birds候鸟　 ⑤gather there聚集在那里 ⑥I highly recommend visiting Qinghai Lake, one of the most stunning places here.我强烈推荐你游览青海湖,这里最令人惊叹的地方之一。 3.谋篇布局 优秀范文 Dear Mary,　 I.m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. I highly recommend visiting Qinghai Lake, one of the most stunning places here. Located in the northeastern part of Qinghai Province, Qinghai Lake covers an area of over 4,500 square kilometers, making it China’s largest inland saltwater lake. Its deepest point reaches around 26 meters, holding a huge amount of water. You can ride a bike along the 360-kilometer-long lakeside road, taste delicious local yogurt, or take a boat trip to Bird Island. Every year, from April to June, over 100,000 migratory birds, like bar-headed geese and brown-headed gulls, gather there. Taking a high-speed train to Xining and then a bus to the lake is a convenient choice. I’m sure this place will bring you unforgettable memories. Looking forward to your arrival! 随堂训练 假如明天下午你将带你的美国朋友去安徽黄山游玩，请根据下列提示写一篇短文，向他们介绍一下黄山的情况。 提示： （1）位于安徽省南部，占地1200平方千米，海拔1864米； （2）有极其美丽的自然景色，包括云海、奇石、温泉和日出等； （3）每年都有大批中外游客来旅游观光。 写作要求： （1）层次清晰，语言流畅； （2）词数在90~100之间，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Welcome to Mount Huangshan. Now I’m going to tell you something about it. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 综合训练 1.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom发来邮件,询问如何与他人建立良好的关系。请你根据以下要点,给他写一封回信。 要点提示: 学会倾听：认真倾听他人,表示尊重 诚实守信：对人诚实,信守承诺 乐于助人：在他人需要时提供帮助 学会沟通：表达自己的想法,也要理解他人 参加活动：通过集体活动增进友谊 要求: 词数:80-100词; 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your email. You asked me how to build good relationships with others. Here are my suggestions. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 2.张赫奕在闲暇时观察昆虫，找到了生活的乐趣。那么你在业余时间培养了什么兴趣爱好呢？请你根据图片和思维导图提示，结合自身情况，以My hobby makes me better为题写一篇英语推文，分享你最喜欢的业余爱好。 要求： 1、文中不出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2、文章需包含思维导图提及的所有信息，并进行适当补充发挥； 3、文章需分段，要合理使用过渡句，确保语意连贯且逻辑清晰； 4、书写工整，全文控制在80词左右。 My hobby makes me better Free-time activities play an important role in our personal growth. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.众所周知，健康的身体是中学生有效学习的保证。但是网络抢走了我们的锻炼时间，垃圾食品危害着我们的健康……请根据下面的思维导图，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要求： (1)层次清晰，语言流畅； (2)词数在80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数； (3)书写规范，卷面整洁； (4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 How to Keep Healthy ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack最近写信告诉你，他进入了新的年级，在成长中遇到了一些烦恼：感到孤独没有新朋友、学习压力大、对未来感到迷茫。请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，分享你的成长经验并给他一些建议。 要点： 1.如何结交新朋友：主动和同学交流、参加学校活动； 2.如何缓解学习压力：每天锻炼、听音乐、和父母朋友沟通； 3.如何面对未来迷茫：了解自己的爱好和优势、设定小目标、努力实现。 要求： 词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 包含所有要点，语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥； 字迹工整，卷面整洁。 Dear Jack, I’m sorry to hear that you have some troubles in your growth. Growing up is never easy, and I have met the same problems before. Here is some advice for you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice can help you. Everything will be better, and you will grow a lot from these troubles. Yours, Li Hua 5.假如你是李华，前不久你结识了一个新朋友 —— 来自澳大利亚的Johnny，你们时常互发邮件。请你根据提示，给Johnny写一封英文邮件，向他介绍你的家乡武汉。 City Wuhan Location Central China Area 8, 569 square kilometres Population (人口) over thirteen million Weather hot in summer Places to visit Yellow Crane Tower (黄鹤楼); Hubu Lane (户部巷); East Lake Food to eat hot dry noodles; bean curd skin rolls with three treasures (三鲜豆皮) 要求：1. 紧扣主题，语言准确，语意连贯； 2. 不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 Dear Johnny, I’m very glad to introduce my hometown to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题04 书面表达归纳&专项训练 Unit 1 Time to Relax 本单元的主题是“闲暇时间的活动”,要求学生能够运用所学的词汇、语法及句式描述个人在休闲时间的爱好,并探讨放松对生活的重要性。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①休闲活动的类型与内容(如运动、艺术、科技等);②参与活动的体验与感受;③兴趣爱好对个人成长的积极影响。 中考书面表达与此主题相关的命题形式多样,例如在论坛回帖中分享个人爱好、撰写日记记录兴趣培养过程、通过书信向朋友推荐有益的休闲活动等。写作内容通常涵盖以下要点:休闲活动的类型与细节,结合个人经历说明兴趣的起源,强调兴趣爱好对身心健康、技能提升或人际交往的作用等。 1.写作实例 　　在繁忙的学习生活中,你是如何度过宝贵的空闲时间的呢?有没有哪件事能够让你放松身心,给你带来乐趣和自信呢?请以“One thing I always do in my free time”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己在空闲时间总是做的一件事。 要点:(1)你在空闲时间喜欢做什么事? (2)你为什么喜欢做这件事? (3)你从这件事中收获了什么? 要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等);4.词数不少于80。 One thing I always do in my free time 2.审题指导 1.体裁:记叙文    2.时态:以一般现在时为主    3.人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主 4.必备词句: ①balance study and life 平衡学习与生活　 ②discover hidden talents 发现隐藏的才能 ③explore new routes 探索新的路线　 ④I find it fun to explore new routes, and it makes me really happy when I reach the top of a hill after a tough climb. 我发现探索新的路线很有趣,当我经过艰难的攀登到达山顶时,我真的很开心。 ⑤This hobby not only keeps me healthy but also teaches me to embrace challenges bravely.这个爱好不仅使我保持健康,而且教会我勇敢地迎接挑战。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 One thing I always do in my free time Hobbies are like keys to a peaceful mind. They help me balance study and life while I discover hidden talents. My favourite free-time activity is cycling. I started this activity when I was nine, after receiving a blue bicycle as a gift. At first, I wobbled and fell often, but my father taught me to keep trying. Now, I ride through parks and quiet streets every weekend.It lets me feel the wind on my face and enjoy nature’s beauty. Watching cherry blossoms while cycling in spring always lifts my spirits. I find it fun to explore new routes, and it makes me really happy when I reach the top of a hill after a tough climb. Cycling also helps me stay energetic and focused on school tasks. This hobby not only keeps me healthy but also teaches me to embrace challenges bravely. Every ride reminds me that effort leads to rewarding views. 随堂训练 健康的兴趣爱好会给我们的学习和生活带来很大的帮助。假如你是李华，你正在参与校英文报主题为“My Hobby”的征稿活动。请你根据以下导图提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。 注意：1.短文必须包括以下导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear editor, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear editor: My hobby is gardening. I started it two years ago. One day, my mum gave me a bag of rose seeds. I was excited and planted them in a big pot in the yard. At first, I forgot to water them sometimes, and the soil got dry. My mum told me to be patient. Now I water them every morning. Last month, the first pink flower bloomed. It was so pretty! Gardening makes me happy and teaches me to be careful.I like watching my flowers grow. It’s a great hobby. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信类征文 时态：一般过去时（叙述爱好起源）、一般现在时（叙述现状与感受）结合 人称：第一人称（李华） 明确要点：明确自己的爱好; 描述爱好产生的1-2件重要事件；说明爱好带来的乐趣、收获等；词数80左右，无真实人名校名 注意事项：涵盖导图所有内容，可适当发挥，语句通顺、语法正确 [第二步：构思布局] 书信格式（开头+正文+结尾） 开头：Dear editor, 直接开篇点题，介绍爱好是什么、何时开始 正文：分两层叙述——爱好的起源事件（妈妈给种子、初期养护的问题）；爱好带来的改变与收获（开花的喜悦、学会耐心细心） 结尾：总结爱好的意义，表达对爱好的喜爱 [第三步：要点展开] 爱好介绍与起源：My hobby is gardening. I started it two years ago. One day, my mum gave me a bag of rose seeds. I was excited and planted them in a big pot in the yard. 爱好发展的重要事件：At first, I forgot to water them sometimes, and the soil got dry. My mum told me to be patient. Now I water them every morning. 爱好带来的收获：Last month, the first pink flower bloomed. It was so pretty! Gardening makes me happy and teaches me to be careful. 结尾总结：I like watching my flowers grow. It’s a great hobby. Unit 2 Stay Healthy 本单元的主题是“保持健康”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和表达,谈论健康问题、提供建议。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①描述健康问题与身体状况;②针对不适症状给出合理建议;③分析日常生活中的安全隐患,并讨论预防措施。 在中考书面表达中与此主题相关的命题形式较为多样,例如通过撰写建议信、演讲稿等向同龄人发出倡议,内容需列举具体防护措施,并表达共同守护健康的期望,体现实用性与号召力。 1.写作实例 假设你是李华,最近有许多人感染了甲型流感病毒 (influenza A virus)。请你根据以下表格中的提示,以“How to prevent the influenza A virus”为题,谈谈我们应该怎样预防甲 型流感病毒。 How to prevent the influenza A virus wash our hands often do some sports, such as... wear masks (口罩) eat healthy food and drink more water 要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4.词数不少于80。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数) How to prevent the influenza A virus Many people have the influenza A virus these days. What should we do to prevent it? 2.审题指导 1.体裁:说明文    2.时态:一般现在时    3.人称:以第二、三人称为主 4.必备词句: ①wash them often with soap 经常用肥皂洗它们     ②stop the virus from spreading 阻止病毒传播　 ③do sports regularly 定期运动　 ④avoid crowded places 避免去拥挤的地方 ⑤It’s important for us to take steps to stay healthy. 对我们来说, 采取措施保持健康很重要。 ⑥In short, small habits make a big difference. 总之,小习惯会产生大的影响。 3.谋篇布局 优秀范文 How to prevent the influenza A virus Many people have the influenza A virus these days. What should we do to prevent it? It’s important for us to take steps to stay healthy. First, keep hands clean. Wash them often with soap, especially before eating and after touching public things. Second, wear masks in busy places. They can help stop the virus from spreading. Also, do sports regularly, like walking or playing basketball, to make our bodies strong. Eating healthy food like fruits and vegetables, and drinking more water are good too. Try not to stay close to people who are sick, and avoid crowded places when possible. In short, small habits make a big difference. Following these tips can protect us and others. Let's take care of ourselves and stay away from the virus. 随堂训练 安全在我心中，生命在我手中。每年4月15日为全民国家安全教育日。作为中学生的我们，校园安全对我们尤为重要，请你根据以下提示，以“How to keep safe at school”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，并在班会上发言。 ●never fight with others ●never run in the hallways ●go up and down the stairs (楼梯) on the right ●follow the rules when playing games … 注意： (1)发言稿须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； (2)发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； (3)词数70个左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to keep safe at school Safety is very important for everyone. As students, we spend most of the time at school. So we should know how to keep safe at school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to keep safe at school Safety is very important for everyone. As students, we spend most of the time at school. So we should know how to keep safe at school. First, be polite and friendly and never fight with others. Keep calm when arguing. Second, don’t run in the hallways—it’s dangerous. Third, walk on the right when going up or downstairs. Never run or push, or you may get hurt. Finally, be careful on the playground. Follow the rules when playing games. If we meet trouble, ask teachers for help. That’s all. Thanks. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：发言稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：不与他人打架、不在走廊奔跑、上下楼梯靠右行、玩游戏时遵守规则 确定人称：第一人称（we/our） 注意事项：不得透露真实人名、校名和地名 [第二步：构思布局] 一段式结构： 开篇：点明校园安全的重要性，引出主题（文中已给出） 主体：分点阐述校园安全的具体要求 收尾：补充求助建议，礼貌收尾 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：和睦相处 礼貌友善：be polite/be friendly/never fight/respect others/get on well/be kind等 冷静处事：keep calm/stay cool/avoid arguments/solve problems/talk nicely/control temper等 要点二：走廊慢行 禁止奔跑：don’t run in the hallways/watch your step/walk slowly/no hurrying等 要点三：靠右通行 楼梯右行：walk on the right/go up and down stairs/hold the handrail/follow the signs/stay in line/keep to the right等 禁止推挤：never run or push/wait in turn/go one by one/keep space/don’t crowd等 要点三：遵守规则 地点场所：playground/gym/football field/track/sports hall等 安全运动：follow the rules/listen to teachers/take turns/no pushing/keep safe distance等 Unit 3 Growing Up 本单元的主题是“情绪管理”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和句式,谈论生活中的不同情绪,向情绪低落的朋友提供建议,或向帮助自己的人表示感谢。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①描述让自己产生某种情绪的具体经历;②分析情绪产生的原因;③以感谢信的形式阐述他人帮助自己应对情绪的具体经历并表达感激之情。 在中考书面表达中,与此主题相关的命题形式主要有撰写感谢信、演讲稿等。通常需要涵盖的主要内容包括:清晰描述引发特定情绪的事件,具体说明对方的帮助是如何影响自己的情绪的,并真挚地表达感恩之情。 1.写作实例 　　假如你是外国语学校的学生李华,在外教Mr. Brown的帮助下,你的性格发生了很大变化,你变得积极开朗,并在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛 (English Opera Competition) 中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信,主要内容包括: 1.对Mr. Brown表示感谢; 2.简述自己的变化; 3.简述Mr. Brown对你的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果;4.邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。 要求:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.须包含所有要点提示,可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;3.信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 Dear Mr. Brown, 2.审题指导 1.体裁:应用文    2.时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主     3.人称:以第一人称为主 4.必备词句: ①make a big difference产生重大影响　 ②be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事　 ③smile at sb.对某人微笑　 ④prepare for为……做准备　 ⑤express emotions through...通过……表达情感 ⑥When I was too nervous to answer, you said, “It’s okay to make mistakes!”当我紧张得无法回答时,你说:“犯错没关系!” 3.谋篇布局 优秀范文 Dear Mr. Brown,　 Thank you so much for helping me become a better person! Your care and encouragement have made a big difference in my life. I used to be shy and quiet. I was afraid to speak in front of others and hardly made friends. In your classes, you always smiled at me and asked questions to make me talk. When I was too nervous to answer, you said, “It’s okay to make mistakes!”Once, you stayed with me for an hour to prepare for the English Opera Competition, teaching me how to express emotions through voice and gestures. Bit by bit, I gained confidence and started to enjoy speaking English and making friends. Last week, I won first prize in the competition! None of these would have happened without you. I hope you can come to my home for dinner this weekend. My parents want to thank you too! Looking forward to seeing you. Yours,　 Li Hua　 随堂训练 生活中，每个人都难免会遇到各种各样的压力。作为当代中学生，应该学会正确地应对压力。请你根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，分享你应对压力的一次经历。 要点：1.让你感到压力的事情是什么? 2.你是如何应对的? 3.你的收获是什么? 要求：1.文中须包含要点所提示信息，可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 It’s normal that we suffer from stress in our daily lives. I felt stressed when I ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 It’s normal that we suffer from stress in our daily lives. I felt stressed when I had a fight with my friend Lucy while working on our group poster project. She thought I didn’t try hard, which made me so upset that I shut myself away for a day. I didn’t want to talk to anyone. Later, I realized I had to deal with it. I told her that we should talk with each other to clear the air. I tried to explain that I just didn’t know how to draw well,and she said she’d help me. We finished the poster soon. This experience taught me that it’s helpful to talk out problems. In future, I’ll never shut out troubles—talking works better. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文 时态：一般过去时为主，结尾可用一般现在时 人称：第一人称 写作要点：说明压力来源、应对方式、收获与感悟 注意事项：词数约80词；内容完整；不得出现真实信息；语句连贯 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明压力来源 主体段：叙述如何应对压力的过程 结尾段：总结收获与感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：压力来源 feel stressed感到压力大 have a fight with与……争吵 group project小组项目 feel upset感到难过 Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature 本单元的主题是“自然奇观”,要求学生能够通过列数字、作比较等写作手法,向读者介绍一种自然景观。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍自然奇观的基本信息;②运用数据对比突出其“独特性”;③描述人类与自然奇观的互动;④呼吁敬畏与保护自然。 在中考书面表达中,与此主题相关的命题形式常为“介绍某一自然景观”或“探讨人类与自然的联系”。通常需要涵盖的主要内容包括:明确自然景观的名称及地理位置;用具体数据说明其规模或特征;解释人类游览该景观的原因;列举人类探索该景观的活动;结合生态价值或文化意义,呼吁保护自然景观。 1.写作实例 　　假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人,因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。 提示问题:Which places of interest should I visit? How can I get there? What’s it famous for? 要求:1.内容应包含所有提示,可适当发挥;2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;3.100词左右。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. 2.审题指导 1.体裁:应用文    2.时态:以一般现在时为主    3.人称:以第三人称为主 4.必备词句: ①highly recommend doing sth.强烈推荐做某事     ②be located in位于　 ③cover an area of...占地面积为……     ④migratory birds候鸟　 ⑤gather there聚集在那里 ⑥I highly recommend visiting Qinghai Lake, one of the most stunning places here.我强烈推荐你游览青海湖,这里最令人惊叹的地方之一。 3.谋篇布局 优秀范文 Dear Mary,　 I.m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. I highly recommend visiting Qinghai Lake, one of the most stunning places here. Located in the northeastern part of Qinghai Province, Qinghai Lake covers an area of over 4,500 square kilometers, making it China’s largest inland saltwater lake. Its deepest point reaches around 26 meters, holding a huge amount of water. You can ride a bike along the 360-kilometer-long lakeside road, taste delicious local yogurt, or take a boat trip to Bird Island. Every year, from April to June, over 100,000 migratory birds, like bar-headed geese and brown-headed gulls, gather there. Taking a high-speed train to Xining and then a bus to the lake is a convenient choice. I’m sure this place will bring you unforgettable memories. Looking forward to your arrival! 随堂训练 假如明天下午你将带你的美国朋友去安徽黄山游玩，请根据下列提示写一篇短文，向他们介绍一下黄山的情况。 提示： （1）位于安徽省南部，占地1200平方千米，海拔1864米； （2）有极其美丽的自然景色，包括云海、奇石、温泉和日出等； （3）每年都有大批中外游客来旅游观光。 写作要求： （1）层次清晰，语言流畅； （2）词数在90~100之间，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Welcome to Mount Huangshan. Now I’m going to tell you something about it. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Welcome to Mount Huangshan. Now I’m going to tell you something about it. Mount Huangshan is in the south of Anhui Province. It is one of the most famous mountains in China. It covers 1,200 square kilometres and rises to 1,864 metres above sea level. Mount Huangshan is famous for its natural scenery, such as the sea of clouds, unique rocks, hot springs, sunrise and so on. If you go to the top of the mountain in the early morning, you can enjoy the sunrise. It’s wonderful. Mount Huangshan is a really nice place to visit. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners come to visit it. Hope you have a wonderful time! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中黄山的位置、面积、海拔、自然景观和游客情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图，介绍黄山的地理位置和基本数据； 第二步：具体阐述写作内容，介绍黄山的基本情况和自然景色； 第三步：书写结语，说明游客情况并表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②such as例如 [高分句型] ①It is one of the most famous mountains in China. (“one of + the + 最高级+复数名词”的固定结构) ②If you go to the top of the mountain in the early morning, you can enjoy the sunrise. (If引导的条件状语从句) 综合训练 1.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom发来邮件,询问如何与他人建立良好的关系。请你根据以下要点,给他写一封回信。 要点提示: 学会倾听：认真倾听他人,表示尊重 诚实守信：对人诚实,信守承诺 乐于助人：在他人需要时提供帮助 学会沟通：表达自己的想法,也要理解他人 参加活动：通过集体活动增进友谊 要求: 词数:80-100词; 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your email. You asked me how to build good relationships with others. Here are my suggestions. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your email. You asked me how to build good relationships with others. Here are my suggestions. First, learn to listen. When others are talking, we should listen carefully. This shows our respect. Second, be honest and keep our promises. Trust is very important in any relationship. Third, be ready to help. When others are in need, we should offer our help. This can bring us closer. Fourth, learn to communicate. We should express our ideas and also try to understand others. Good communication helps solve problems. Finally, take part in group activities. Through activities, we can make more friends and improve our relationships. I hope these suggestions will help you. Good luck! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（书信体），用一般现在时为主 明确要点：回复英国笔友Tom的邮件，针对“如何与他人建立良好的关系”提出5点建议（学会倾听、诚实守信、乐于助人、学会沟通、参加活动） 确定人称：第一人称（I，we）和第二人称（you） 注意事项：不得出现真实信息（李华为题目设定姓名，除外）；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，表明收到邮件并愿意提供建议 主体段：分述5条具体建议，每条建议给出做法与理由 结尾段：已给出，表达希望建议有所帮助并送上祝福 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：学会倾听 内容与目的：“listening shows our respect and makes them feel valued”（倾听表示尊重，让对方感到被重视） 要点二：诚实守信 内容与目的：“Trust is the foundation of any good relationship”（信任是任何良好关系的基础） 要点三：乐于助人 内容与目的：“A small kindness can bring people closer”（小小的善意能拉近人与人之间的距离） 要点四：学会沟通 内容与目的：“Share your thoughts openly, and try to understand others’ feelings. Good communication helps solve problems and avoid misunderstandings”（开放分享想法，同时理解他人感受；良好沟通有助于解决问题、避免误会） 要点五：参加活动 内容与目的：“These activities give you chances to make friends and deepen your relationships”（这些活动提供交友和加深关系的机会） 要点六：总结与祝福 内容：“I hope these suggestions are helpful to you. Best wishes”（希望这些建议对你有帮助，祝好） 2.张赫奕在闲暇时观察昆虫，找到了生活的乐趣。那么你在业余时间培养了什么兴趣爱好呢？请你根据图片和思维导图提示，结合自身情况，以My hobby makes me better为题写一篇英语推文，分享你最喜欢的业余爱好。 要求： 1、文中不出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2、文章需包含思维导图提及的所有信息，并进行适当补充发挥； 3、文章需分段，要合理使用过渡句，确保语意连贯且逻辑清晰； 4、书写工整，全文控制在80词左右。 My hobby makes me better Free-time activities play an important role in our personal growth. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My hobby makes me better Free-time activities play an important role in our personal growth. My hobby is jogging. I started it two years ago because I wanted to keep healthy. Now I often go jogging in the park near my home every weekend. I enjoy jogging because it makes me relaxed and strong. It also helps me stay energetic and forget unhappy things. From jogging, I learn that keeping doing something can make me better. It brings me joy and makes my life colorful.  Let’s do meaningful activities and keep healthy. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①爱好是什么；②爱好如何开始；③现在何时何地进行；④喜欢的原因；⑤从中学到的道理 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，全文80词左右，分段合理，逻辑连贯 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明爱好的意义，介绍自己的爱好、起源与日常开展时间 主体段：说明喜欢该爱好的原因（感受、身体、情绪等） 结尾段：总结从爱好中学到的道理，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：爱好的基本信息 爱好选择：jogging（慢跑） 起源描述：I started it two years ago to keep healthy 时间地点：now I often jog in the nearby park every weekend 要点二：喜欢的原因 感受：It relaxes me 身体：builds my strength, keeps me energetic 情绪：helps me forget  unhappy things 要点三：学到的道理 核心感悟：Let’s do meaningful activities and keep healthy. 3.众所周知，健康的身体是中学生有效学习的保证。但是网络抢走了我们的锻炼时间，垃圾食品危害着我们的健康……请根据下面的思维导图，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要求： (1)层次清晰，语言流畅； (2)词数在80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数； (3)书写规范，卷面整洁； (4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 How to Keep Healthy ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: How to Keep Healthy  It is very important for us to keep healthy. Here are some good ways.  First, we should keep exercising every day to build up our bodies. Second, we need to keep a healthy diet, eating more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Third, getting plenty of sleep is necessary, as it helps us study well. Besides, we should have reasonable screen time and avoid wasting too much time on it. Finally, keeping happy a good mood all the time also plays an important role in our health. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：围绕“如何保持健康”，从坚持锻炼、健康饮食、充足睡眠、合理上网、保持好心情等方面展开介绍 确定人称：第一人称（we/us） 注意事项：层次清晰，语言流畅；词数在80词左右，标题已给出不计入总词数；书写规范；文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称   [第二步：构思布局] 采用三段式结构 开头段：点明保持健康的重要性，引出下文的建议 主体段：分点列举保持健康的具体方法，使用First/Second/Third/Besides/Finally等连接词使层次更清晰 结尾段：总结这些方法对健康的作用   [第三步：要点展开] 开头引入：It is very important for us to keep healthy. Here are some good ways. 具体方法1：First, we should keep exercising every day to build up our bodies. 具体方法2：Second, we need to keep a healthy diet, eating more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Third, getting plenty of sleep is necessary, as it helps us study well. 具体方法3：Besides, we should have reasonable screen time and avoid wasting too much time on it. 总结：Finally, keeping happy a good mood all the time also plays an important role in our health. 4.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack最近写信告诉你，他进入了新的年级，在成长中遇到了一些烦恼：感到孤独没有新朋友、学习压力大、对未来感到迷茫。请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，分享你的成长经验并给他一些建议。 要点： 1.如何结交新朋友：主动和同学交流、参加学校活动； 2.如何缓解学习压力：每天锻炼、听音乐、和父母朋友沟通； 3.如何面对未来迷茫：了解自己的爱好和优势、设定小目标、努力实现。 要求： 词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 包含所有要点，语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥； 字迹工整，卷面整洁。 Dear Jack, I’m sorry to hear that you have some troubles in your growth. Growing up is never easy, and I have met the same problems before. Here is some advice for you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice can help you. Everything will be better, and you will grow a lot from these troubles. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, I’m sorry to hear that you have some troubles in your growth. Growing up is never easy, and I have met the same problems before. Here is some advice for you. To make new friends, you can talk to your classmates actively and take part in school activities and join in after-school clubs. It’s a good way to know more people, just like what I did last term. To reduce study pressure, exercise every day and listen to music when you feel tired. You can also talk with your parents and friends. To deal with confusion about the future, find out your hobbies and strengths, set small goals and try your best to achieve them. I hope my advice can help you. Everything will be better, and you will grow a lot from these troubles. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 ［第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：电子邮件，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：如何结交新朋友、如何缓解学习压力、如何面对未来迷茫 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 ［第二步：构思布局］ 三段式结构： | 开头段：已给出，表达共情并引出建议 主体段：分点阐述结交新朋友、缓解学习压力、面对未来迷茫三大建议，覆盖所有要点 结尾段：已给出，表达祝愿与鼓励 ［第三步：要点展开］ 要点一：结交新朋友 talk to your classmates actively（主动和同学交流）、take part in school activities and join in after-school clubs.（参加学校活动和课后俱乐部） 要点二： 缓解学习压力 exercise every day（每天锻炼）、listen to music（听音乐）、talk with your parents and friends（和父母朋友沟通） 要点三： 面对未来迷茫 find out your hobbies and strengths（了解爱好和优势）、set small goals（设定小目标）、try your best to achieve them（努力实现） 5.假如你是李华，前不久你结识了一个新朋友 —— 来自澳大利亚的Johnny，你们时常互发邮件。请你根据提示，给Johnny写一封英文邮件，向他介绍你的家乡武汉。 City Wuhan Location Central China Area 8, 569 square kilometres Population (人口) over thirteen million Weather hot in summer Places to visit Yellow Crane Tower (黄鹤楼); Hubu Lane (户部巷); East Lake Food to eat hot dry noodles; bean curd skin rolls with three treasures (三鲜豆皮) 要求：1. 紧扣主题，语言准确，语意连贯； 2. 不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 Dear Johnny, I’m very glad to introduce my hometown to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Johnny, I’m very glad to introduce my hometown to you. I come from Wuhan, a beautiful city in Central China. It covers 8,569 square kilometres with a population of over thirteen million. The weather here is very hot in summer, but it’s still a great place for vacation. Wuhan is famous for Yellow Crane Tower and East Lake—you can enjoy beautiful views there. If you love delicious food, Hubu Lane is a must-visit, where you can taste various local snacks, such as hot dry noodles and bean curd skin rolls with three treasures. I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it if you come. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时 ； ③提示：根据表格信息介绍武汉的地理位置、面积、人口、天气、景点和美食。 【写作步骤】 第一步：介绍武汉的基本信息（位置、面积、人口）； 第二步：描述天气和推荐景点； 第三步：推荐美食并表达欢迎。 【亮点词汇】 ①introduce介绍 ②delicious美味的 ③local当地的 【高分句型】 ①Wuhan is famous for Yellow Crane Tower and East Lake—you can enjoy beautiful views there.（运用了be famous for结构） ②I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it if you come.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $