专题04 书面表达归纳&专项训练-2025-2026学年八年级下学期期中复习（新译林版）

专题04 书面表达归纳&专项训练 Unit 1 Past and present 本单元的主题是“过去和现在”,要求学生能够运用所学词汇、语法及句式描述家乡的变化。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①家乡过去的情况;②家乡现在的变化;③家乡变化背后的原因;④对家乡变化的感想。 　　中考书面表达与此主题相关的命题形式多样,例如向网站投稿、写一篇演讲稿等,通常以记叙文或应用文的形式出现。 写作实例 十年来,你的家乡常州空气质量显著提升,居住条件大幅改 善,交通网络日臻完善,城市面貌焕然一新,乃宜居新城。请你根 据以下提示,谈一谈常州十年间的具体变化以及你对这些变 化的看法。 1.What was Changzhou like ten years ago? 2.What is Changzhou like now? 3.What do you think of these changes? 注意:1.短文应包括所有要点,可适当发挥。 2.词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 3.短文不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Great changes in Changzhou 　　Great changes have taken place in Changzhou in the past ten years. 审题指导 1.体裁:记叙文    2.时态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主    3.人称:以第三人称为主 4.必备词句: （1）due to因为　 （2）make sth. a breeze使某事易如反掌　 （3）be proud of 因……而自豪　 （4）do interviews with...对……进行采访　 （5）be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事　 （6）be filled with充满　 （7）live a/an...life 过……的生活　 （8）put sth. to good use有效利用某物　 （9）Now, the sky is blue and the air is fresh as polluting factories are closed.现在,由于污染工厂被关闭,天空是蓝色的,空气是新鲜的。　 （10）They not only make Changzhou more livable but also let me see that my hometown is becoming better and better.它们不仅让常州变得更宜居,也让我看到我的家乡正变得越来越好。 （11）As we know, China has developed quickly these years and it has become one of the most important countries in the world.正如我们所知,中国这些年发展迅速,已经成为世界上最重要的国家之一。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 Great changes in Changzhou Great changes have taken place in Changzhou in the past ten years.　　 Ten years ago, the air was often hazy due to factory pollution. Many people lived in small, old houses. The traffic was a mess with few roads and frequent jams. 　　Now, the sky is blue and the air is fresh as polluting factories are closed. People have moved into big, comfortable apartments. There are more roads, subways and elevated roads, making travel a breeze. 　　In my view, these changes are amazing. They not only make Changzhou more livable but also let me see that my hometown is becoming better and better. I'm proud of my hometown and expect more progress. 随堂训练 过去的几十年里，苏州发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你以“Great Changes in Suzhou”为题, 写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍苏州过去和现在的对比。 Great Changes in Suzhou In the past At present Living conditions 出行主要靠步行或骑自行车…低矮的小房子…采光差… …… Environment 街道狭窄、尘土多…空气质量… …… Entertainment (娱乐) 娱乐项目很少…听广播… …… Technology 通讯方式单一…现金购物… …… Reasons …… Feelings …… 注意事项： (1) 词数：90词左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数) ； (2) 文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息； (3) 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 Great Changes in Suzhou ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Great Changes in Suzhou Suzhou has changed greatly over the years. In the past, people walked or rode bikes. They lived in small houses with poor light. Streets were narrow and dirty, and there was little entertainment. People communicated by letters and paid in cash. Now life is much more convenient. We have tall buildings, wide roads and subways. The environment is better with more parks. We enjoy movies, concerts and online games. We use mobile phones and shop online. These changes come from good policies and technology. I feel happy and proud to live in the new Suzhou. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：本文是一篇记叙文，时态一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：苏州多年来的巨大变化（交通、居住、环境、娱乐、通讯、支付方式……） 确定人称：第一人称（I/we）、第三人称（people） 注意事项：文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，直接点明“苏州多年来发生了巨大变化”的核心主题，总领全文 主体段：通过今昔对比，具体展现苏州的变化 结尾段：总结变化的原因，升华主题，抒发对家乡的热爱与自豪，呼应开头 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：苏州的变化 变化的方面：transportation、living environment、communication、payment methods… 表现（过去）：walking or riding bikes/small houses with poor light/narrow and dusty streets/little entertainment, like listening to the radio/ people used letters to communicate and paid with cash. 表现（现在）：have tall buildings, wide roads and subways./the environment is better with more parks./we can enjoy movies, concerts and online games./technology is advanced./we use mobile phones to talk and shop online. Unit 2 Amazing China 本单元的主题是“令人惊叹的中国”,与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍某个旅游景点的相关信息;②介绍某个旅游城市的相关信息;③介绍一次旅行经历并分享旅行过程中的情感体验与收获。中考书面表达与此相关的命题形式多样,如邮件、给校刊投稿或演讲稿等。 写作实例 无锡,江苏省的璀璨明珠,被选为2025年央视春晚分会场,展现了其独特的自然风光、文化魅力与现代化风貌。作为一名来自无锡的学生,请写一篇演讲稿,号召更多的人来无锡游玩,体验无锡之美。 可参考景点:Taihu Lake, Xihui Park, Yuantouzhu Scenic Area, Nanchan Temple... 注意:1.语句通顺,言之有理;2.不得出现真实的人名和学校名; 3.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear friends, 　　As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world. 　　I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening. 审题指导 1.体裁:应用文(演讲稿)    2.时态:以一般现在时为主    3.人称:以第三人称为主 4.必备词句: （1）breathtaking令人赞叹的　 （2）must-visit必游的地方　 （3）be known for因……而闻名　 （4）feel at home舒适自在 （5）convenient便利的　 （6）take a boat ride乘船游览　 （7）step into history走进历史　 （8）mix nature with culture将自然与文化融为一体　 （9）be deeply attracted by...被……深深吸引　 （10）Wuxi, a shining pearl in Jiangsu Province, has so much to offer.无锡是江苏省的一颗璀璨的明珠,有很多东西可以提供。 （11）In spring, you can see flowers everywhere, making the whole place look like a colourful picture.在春天,你到处都能看见花,使得整个地方看起来就像一幅色彩斑斓的图画。　 （12）The Classical Gardens of Suzhou, which are also called Suzhou Gardens, are a group of beautiful gardens in the city of Suzhou in Jiangsu Province of China.苏州古典园林,又称苏州园林,是中国江苏省苏州市的一批美丽的园林。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 Dear friends, As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world. 　　Wuxi, a shining pearl in Jiangsu Province, has so much to offer. The natural attractions are breathtaking. Taihu Lake, with its vast and clear waters, and Yuantouzhu Scenic Area, where you can enjoy the perfect blend of the lake and mountain views, are must-visits. Xihui Park and Nanchan Temple also have their own allure. When it comes to food, steamed buns with savory fillings and the famous Wuxi spare ribs will delight your taste buds. The people here are known for their friendliness and warmth, making you feel at home. What's more, convenient transport networks, including subways and buses, make getting around a breeze. I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening. 随堂训练 下表是Kitty在春节期间的旅游记录，请根据表中所提供的信息，帮助她写一篇短文，介绍游玩情况。 When   上周 Where   徐州 Who 我和我的父母 How 乘一个半小时火车 What 第一天，参观云龙湖﹣徐州最著名的地方。 上午，在云龙湖上乘船旅行；晚上，沿湖散步，夜景很美，情不自禁拍照。 第二天，去徐州乐园(Xuzhou Amusement Park)，玩得开心，度过一整天。 第三天，去购物，为亲戚朋友们买了许多纪念品(souvenir)。 在这次旅行中，我们品尝了各种美味的徐州地方菜。 感受 非常喜欢这次旅行 想再次参观 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 I went to Xuzhou with my parents last week. We took a train there and it took us one and a half hours. On the first day, we visited the most famous place, the Yunlong Lake. In the morning, we went boating on the lake and in the evening we walked along it. The scenery was so beautiful that we couldn’t help taking many photos there. The next day, we went to Xuzhou Amusement Park, and we had a fun day there! On the third day, we went shopping. We bought many souvenirs there for our relatives and friends. Besides, we tasted various local Xuzhou dishes there. We enjoyed ourselves very much and looked forward to the next visit! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据表格信息，按时间顺序介绍旅行的时间、地点、人物、交通方式、活动及感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，概括旅行基本信息（时间、人物、地点、交通）； 第二步，按三天顺序描述具体活动； 第三步，总结感受，表达喜爱与重游愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①famous著名的 ②couldn’t help doing忍不住做某事 ③enjoy oneself玩得开心 [高分句型] ①In the morning, we went boating on the lake and in the evening we walked along it. (and连接前后表示并列) ②The scenery was so beautiful that we couldn’t help taking many photos there. (运用了so...that...句型) Unit 3 The world at one click 　本单元的主题是“在线旅游”,与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍一次在线旅行的经历并分享感悟;②介绍某个线上旅游景点的相关信息;③对比分析线上旅游和线下旅游。 　　书面表达与此相关的命题形式多样,如邮件、给校刊投稿、演讲稿等。 写作实例 　　阳光中学八(1)班就同学们喜欢的旅游方式进行了调查,并将调查结果形成一张表格。请根据表格内容,向你的美国朋友介绍近年来同学们旅游方式的变化。   In the past At present Main ways Offline(线下的) travel Online travel Reasons ·Touch things with hands; ·Talk with others; ·Smell flowers in spring; ·... ·“Go” anywhere; ·Take less time and cost little money; ·Enjoy digital(电子的) museums; ·... 要求:1.短文应包含表格中所列要点;2.结构完整、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,不少于120词;3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。 审题指导 1.体裁:说明文    2.时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主    3.人称:第三人称 4.必备词句: （1）carry out完成(任务)　 （2）take place发生　 （3）a bird's-eye view of...鸟瞰……　 （4）deepen one's understanding of...加深某人对……的理解 （5）ought to do sth.应该做某事　 （6）be in for a real treat一定会喜欢　 （7）tens of thousands of数以万计的　 （8）on horseback骑着马　 （9）come alive热闹起来　 （10）pay a visit to参观　 （11）compare to与……相比　 （12）become more and more popular变得越来越受欢迎　 （13）in a new and interesting way以一种新颖有趣的方式　 （14）First, it allows students to “go” anywhere they want, which saves a lot of time.首先,它允许学生们“去”他们想去的任何地方,这节省了很多时间。 （15）In recent years, online travel has become popular, allowing people to travel around the world without leaving their homes.近年来,线上旅游变得流行起来,让人们足不出户就能环游世界。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 　　Recently, a survey about students' favourite travel ways was carried out in Class 1, Grade 8 of Yangguang Middle School. Great changes have taken place over the years. 　　In the past, offline travel was the main choice. Students loved it because they could touch things with their hands, have face-to-face talks with others, and smell flowers in spring. It made them feel the real world directly. But now, online travel is becoming more and more popular. There are several reasons. First, it allows students to “go” anywhere they want, which saves a lot of time. Also, it costs little money. What's more, they can enjoy digital museums, getting knowledge in a new and interesting way. 　　These changes show that students' travel ways are adapting to the development of the times. 随堂训练 本单元主要话题是网上旅游，与本单元相关的写作题目可延伸为“我的第一次网上旅游”、“推荐一处适合网上参观的景点”、“网上旅游vs传统旅游”等。命题内容以经历描述为主，要求根据提示或自身体验，有条理地记叙网上旅游的全过程。写作时应注意事件逻辑的连贯性、时态的准确运用以及内容的真实性与细节性。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： 1. Which place did you visit online?（你网上参观了哪个地方？） 2. Why did you choose to visit it online?（你为什么选择网上参观它？） 3. What did you see or learn during the online tour?（网上旅游期间你看到了什么或学到了什么？） 4. What are the advantages of this online tour?（这次网上旅游有哪些优势？） 5. How did you feel about the online travel experience?（你对这次网上旅游体验的感受如何？） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 My Online Tour of the Palace Museum I learnt about the Palace Museum in my history class and was deeply attracted by its long history and rich culture. So I decided to take an online tour of it last weekend. The Palace Museum, located in Beijing, used to be the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties. Now it is one of the most famous museums in China, known for its large collection of ancient relics. During the online tour, I visited many halls, including the Hall of Supreme Harmony and the Palace of Heavenly Purity. I saw beautiful porcelain, exquisite jade carvings and ancient paintings. The online platform offered excellent video tours and detailed introductions to each relic, and I could zoom in to see the fine patterns on the artworks. What I loved most about this online tour was that there were no crowds and it was completely free. I could visit at my own pace without feeling rushed. I felt like I was walking around the palace in person, and it was such an amazing and educational experience. Online travel really brings famous places closer to us! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：需按题目5个问题顺序，描述一次具体的网上旅游经历，包括地点、原因、所见所学、优势及感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山点明参观地点； 第二步：按顺序描述参观所见和学到的知识，并说明优势； 第三步：总结个人感受。 [亮点词汇] ①rich culture丰富的文化 ②ancient relics古代遗迹 ③artworks艺术品 [高分句型] ①So I decided to take an online tour of it last weekend.（decide to do sth） ②The online platform offered excellent video tours and detailed introductions to each relic, and I could zoom in to see the fine patterns on the artworks.（并列句） Unit 4 A good read 本单元的主题是“一本好读物”,要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型写一篇与书籍或阅读有关的书面表达。与此相关的写作维度有:①介绍一本喜欢的书;②谈论自己对阅读的看法。 　　中考书面表达与此相关的命题形式有很多,如给报社投稿、发表演讲和经验分享等。一般要介绍的主要内容有:对某本书或某个故事的看法、对读书的见解等。 写作实例 　　为了响应国家全民阅读的号召,你校将举办以“My Favourite Book”为主题的英语读书日。假如你是李华,请根据下面的通知和要求,并结合自身实际,用英文介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。要求:1.词数不少于100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Notice 　　Our school will hold an English Reading Day. What book  have you read? Who is your favourite character? And why do  you like this book? 　　Share with us! My Favourite Book 　　I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to share my favourite book with you. 审题指导 1.体裁:说明文    2.时态:一般现在时    3.人称:以第三人称为主 4.必备词句: ①one of the... ……之一　 ②get over克服　 ③give up放弃　 ④as long as只要 ⑤It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China.它是中国四大名著之一。 ⑥It is such an interesting book that I lose myself in it.这本书太有趣了,以至于我完全沉浸其中。 ①be popular among... 在……中受欢迎　 ②be aware of 意识到　 ③be crazy about热爱 ④from that day on从那天起　 ⑤an extract from... ……的一段摘录　　 ⑥fall asleep入睡 ⑦Some praise it, while others call it unreadable.有些人称赞它,而另一些人则称其难以理解。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 My Favourite Book I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to share my favourite book with you. My favourite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China. It was written by Wu Cheng'en, who was a great writer in ancient China. The story tells us about four main characters. They are Tang Monk, the Monkey King, Pigsy and Sandy. They get over many difficulties on the way to the West. Finally, they make it. 　　The Monkey King is my favourite character. He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges. 　　It is such an interesting book that I lose myself in it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve everything. 随堂训练 5月5日阳光镇举办首届“书香节”。为响应“书香节”活动，你校校刊英文版正在开展以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动。请根据下表提示内容写一篇短文，介绍你对阅读的看法及个人的阅读情况。 The importance of reading open up one’s mind, get more knowledge My reading habit when to read, where to read, what to read My favourite book(s) … My reading plan … 要求： (1) 必须包含所给提示内容，并适当补充细节; (2) 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名; (3) 不少于80词(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 I Like Reading Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： I Like Reading Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read. In my opinion, reading can open up our minds and help us get more knowledge. I usually read for an hour after finishing my homework every day. My favourite place to read is the school library because it is very quiet. I like reading different kinds of books. But my favourite book is The Little Prince. It is a touching story and it always brings me some new thoughts. In the future, I plan to read more famous books and spend more time sharing my reading experiences with my classmates. Reading is a lifelong journey. Let’s read! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：阅读的重要性、个人阅读习惯、最喜欢的书、未来阅读计划 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：必须包含所有提示内容并补充细节；文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数   [第二步：构思布局] 采用三段式结构 开头段：使用题目给出的开头句，点明阅读的重要性 主体段：依次介绍阅读的意义、个人阅读习惯、最喜欢的书及未来阅读计划 结尾段：使用题目给出的结尾句，升华阅读的意义   [第三步：要点展开] 阅读的重要性：In my opinion, reading can open up our minds and help us get more knowledge. 个人阅读习惯：I usually read for an hour after finishing my homework every day. My favourite place to read is the school library because it is very quiet. I like reading different kinds of books. 最喜欢的书：But my favourite book is The Little Prince. It is a touching story and it always brings me some new thoughts. 未来阅读计划：In the future, I plan to read more famous books and spend more time sharing my reading experiences with my classmates. 结尾升华：Reading is a lifelong journey. Let’s read! 综合训练 （1） 近些年，我们家乡徐州的环境发生了巨大的变化，假设你是李华，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，向你的外国朋友John简要介绍家乡徐州的变化，并邀请他来徐州旅游。 家乡的变化 过去的家乡 又脏又窄的马路；人们到处扔垃圾 现在的家乡 道路宽敞干净；空气清新；高楼大厦矗立 徐州三日游计划 第一天：步行到户部山街区（Hubushan Street），拍照，品尝美食； 第二天：乘公交到森林公园（the Forest Park），放风筝……； 第三天：乘公交到徐州乐园（Xuzhou Amusement Park），观看卡通人物游行，看烟花； 要求: （1）内容包括以上要点，语句通顺，可适当发挥； （2）80词左右。开头结尾已给，不计入总词数。 Dear John, My hometown—Xuzhou has changed a lot over the years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will have a wonderful time in Xuzhou! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear John, My hometown—Xuzhou has changed a lot over the years. The roads were very dirty and narrow because people threw garbage everywhere. But now the roads are wide and clean. The air is fresh, and tall buildings are everywhere. On the first day, you can walk to the Hubushan Street, where you can take photos and taste delicious local food. On the second day, you can go to the Forest Park by bus to fly kites. On the third day, you can take the bus to the Xuzhou Amusement Park. You can watch cartoon character parades and fireworks. I hope you will have a wonderful time in Xuzhou! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，描述家乡过去和现在的变化； 第二步，按表格顺序分三天叙述活动； 第三步，表达希望对方能玩的开心。 [亮点词汇] ①narrow狭窄的 ②fresh清新的 [高分句型] ①On the first day, you can walk to the Hubushan Street, where you can take photos and taste delicious local food.（非限制性定语从句） （2） 五一假期是出游的好时候，你打算邀请你的好友来宿迁游览，请以英语导游的身份，写一篇英语短文向朋友介绍这座城市。 1. 宿迁这些年变化很大，它从一个穷困的小镇发展成一座现代化的城市。现在高楼林立，处处可见宽阔、干净的马路。…… 2. 它蕴含丰富的历史和文化。它是项羽的出生地，参观项王故里（Hometown of Xiang Yu）可以了解他的历史故事。 3. 如果喜欢自然风光，三台山森林公园（Santai Mountain Forest Park）和骆马湖（Luoma Lake）都是不错的选择。在这里不仅可以欣赏美景，还可以泛舟湖上。 4. 每年都有数百万游客来宿迁游览，它确实是让人们放松的好地方。 5. 未来展望：…… Suqian has changed a lot over the years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Suqian has changed a lot over the years. It has developed from a poor town into a modern city. There are many tall buildings and you can see wide and clean roads everywhere. It is rich in history and culture. It is the birthplace of Xiang Yu. You can learn about his history stories by visiting Hometown of Xiang Yu. If you like natural beauty, Santai Mountain Forest Park and Luoma Lake are good choices. You can not only enjoy the beautiful scenery, but also go boating on the lake. Millions of visitors come to Suqian every year. It is really a good place for people to relax. I believe our hometown will be more and more beautiful. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：宿迁的变化、历史文化、自然风光、游客情况、未来展望 确定人称：第三人称（it/Suqian） 注意事项：以英语导游身份介绍，语言要具有吸引力和介绍性 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：总起句，概括宿迁多年来的变化 主体段：分别介绍宿迁的历史文化、自然风光、游客情况 结尾段：总结感受，对未来进行展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：宿迁的变化 变化描述：changed a lot/transformed dramatically/made great progress等 发展情况：developed from a poor town into a modern city/evolved from a small village to a bustling metropolis等 具体景象：many tall buildings/skyscrapers/high-rise buildings等；wide and clean roads everywhere/broad and tidy streets all around等 要点二：历史文化 文化底蕴：rich in history and culture/abundant in historical and cultural heritage等 历史人物：the birthplace of Xiang Yu/the hometown of a famous historical figure等 了解途径：learn about his history stories by visiting Hometown of Xiang Yu/get to know his historical tales by exploring Hometown of Xiang Yu等 要点三：自然风光 自然美景：natural beauty/scenic landscapes等 推荐地点：Santai Mountain Forest Park and Luoma Lake are good choices/Santai Mountain Forest Park and Luoma Lake are ideal destinations等 活动内容：enjoy the beautiful scenery/admire the picturesque views等；go boating on the lake/take a boat ride on the lake等 要点四：游客情况 游客数量：Millions of visitors come to Suqian every year/A large number of tourists visit Suqian annually等 适合放松：a good place for people to relax/an ideal spot for people to unwind等 要点五：未来展望 未来描述：I believe our hometown will be more and more beautiful/I’m confident that our hometown will become increasingly charming等 （3） 假设你上周参加了 “线上中国传统工艺博物馆” 的参观活动，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的参观经历和感受。 提示： 1.参观的原因（如：对传统工艺感兴趣、学校布置的任务等）； 2.参观的过程（如：浏览不同展厅、观看工艺制作视频、了解工艺历史等）； 3.你的感受和收获（如：学到了知识、感受到了中国文化的魅力、希望更多人了解传统工艺等）。 要求： 1.词数 80-100； 2.语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Last week, I took part in an online visit to the Museum of Traditional Chinese Crafts. Our school asked us to learn about traditional culture, so I joined it. I visited different exhibition halls and watched videos of craftsmen making clay figurines and paper-cutting. I also learned about the long history of these skills. Some crafts have been passed down for centuries. This experience opened my eyes. I learned a lot and felt the beauty of Chinese culture. I hope more young people can learn about traditional crafts and help keep them alive. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，并突出重点，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，交代参观活动的时间、方式及原因； 第二步，描述参观过程中的具体内容（浏览展厅、观看视频、了解历史）； 第三步，表达感受与收获，并提出希望。 [亮点词汇] ①took part in参加 ②online visit线上参观 ③exhibition halls展厅 ④making clay figurines and paper-cutting制作泥人和剪纸 ⑤passed down for centuries传承了几个世纪 ⑥opened my eyes开阔了我的眼界 [高分句型] ①Our school asked us to learn about traditional culture, so I joined it. (so连接结果状语从句) ②I also learned about the long history of these skills. (一般过去时陈述事实) ③I hope more young people can learn about traditional crafts and help keep them alive. (省略that的宾语从句，and连接并列谓语) （4） 阅读点亮人生。暑期将至，同学们都准备利用假期的时间广泛地阅读，开阔视野，提高阅读能力，养成阅读习惯，做个阅读小达人。假如你是李华，请根据下面提示，给你的好朋友Jake写封邮件，向他推荐你最喜欢的一本书。 推荐书目 Journey to the West、Little Women、Treasure Island、Oliver Twist... 写作要求 (1) 写作内容需包含思维导图的提示信息，内容可适当发挥； (2) 表达清晰，语法正确，逻辑合理，上下文连贯； (3) 字迹工整，书写规范； (4) 不得出现真实的姓名、校名； (5) 词数 100 左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Jake, Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jake, Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. My favourite book is Journey to the West. My uncle gave it to me as a special birthday gift two years ago. It tells the exciting story of the Monkey King and his three companions on a long, dangerous journey to get sacred scriptures. I like it best because the Monkey King is brave, clever and always tries his best to solve difficult problems. It also teaches me to keep trying and never give up when facing difficulties in our study and life. I really hope you will love this great book and learn a lot from it. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：主要为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕推荐书籍展开，包含书籍来源、内容、喜欢原因及感悟，要点完整，语言流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出话题，说明暑假是读书的好时间； 第二步，介绍最喜欢的书《西游记》，包括书籍来源、主要内容； 第三步，说明喜欢的原因，阐述从中得到的启示并表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①favourite book 最喜欢的书 ②as a special birthday gift 作为一份特别的生日礼物 ③face difficulties 面对困难 [高分句型] ①It tells the exciting story of the Monkey King and his three companions. (of构成名词所有格，表所属) ②It also teaches me to keep trying and never give up when facing difficulties. (when引导时间状语从句的省略结构) （5） 社会快速发展让人民的生活不断变化。你的生活发生了哪些变化呢？假设你是李华，学校社团举办主题为“Changes in Our Lives”的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容写一篇90词左右的英语文章投稿，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in Our Lives With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Changes in Our Lives     With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives.     First of all, shopping becomes much easier than before. We needn’t go to physical shops all the time, we can buy almost everything online at home any time we want. Second, transportation is more convenient than before. We can take shared bikes or high-speed trains to almost everywhere, and long trips don’t cost too much time anymore. What’s more, we can communicate with others through WeChat or video calls now, instead of writing slow letters in the past.     I believe our life will become better and better in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英语征文书，介绍生活变化，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：从购物、交通、交流方式等维度介绍我们生活发生的变化 确定人称：第一人称结合第三人称 注意事项：词数90词左右，开头不计入总词数，不得透露真实个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 结构安排： 开头段：题目已经给出总起句，点明社会发展带来生活变化 主体段：分别从购物、交通、交流三个方面介绍具体变化 结尾段：总结变化，展望未来美好生活 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：购物方面 变化对比:过去需要去实体店购物，现在可以在家在线购物 常用表达： needn’t go to physical shops all the time, buy everything online at home any time 要点二：交通方面 变化对比:过去出行方式少耗时久，现在新的出行方式更便捷 常用表达: shared bikes or high-speed trains, trips don’t take a long time any more 要点三：交流方面 变化对比:过去靠写信联系速度慢，现在可以通过软件随时联系 常用表达：communicate with others through WeChat or video calls, instead of writing slow letters （6） 假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假期间前往北京旅行。请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封80～100词的邮件，分享你的旅行计划。 Dear David， _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】 Dear David, How are you doing? I’m excited to tell you about my travel plan for this summer holiday. I’m going to visit Beijing in early July with my parents by high-speed train. We will stay there for about five days. During the trip, we plan to visit the Great Wall. I really want to walk on the Great Wall because it is a symbol of China’s long history. We will also try some local food like Peking duck. I hope to learn more about Chinese culture and take lots of photos. What about your summer plan? Write back soon! Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要使用一般将来时和一般现在时； ③提示：需包含旅行的时间、同伴、交通方式、停留时长、主要活动及原因，结构清晰，语言友好，体现交流意图。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候并引出旅行计划主题； 第二步，说明旅行的基本安排：时间（七月初）、同伴（父母）、交通方式（高铁）、停留时长（五天）； 第三步，列举核心活动（游览长城、品尝北京烤鸭）并说明原因（感受历史、了解文化）； 第四步，表达对旅行的期待（学习文化、拍照留念）； 第五步，询问对方计划，表达期待回信，保持互动。 [亮点词汇] ①travel plan旅行计划 ②high-speed train高铁 ③the Great Wall长城 ④a symbol of……的象征 ⑤Peking duck北京烤鸭 ⑥learn about了解 [高分句型] ①I really want to walk on the Great Wall because it is a symbol of China’s long history. (because引导原因状语从句，解释行为动机) ②I hope to learn more about Chinese culture and take lots of photos. (hope to do表达意愿，and连接并列目的) ③What about your summer plan? (What about…?句型自然询问对方情况，保持对话的开放性) （7） 假设你参加“科技与旅行”征文比赛，请根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇题目为“Online Travel: A New Way to Explore”的短文，词数80左右，开头已给出。 线上旅行：一种新的探索方式 1. 优势（便捷、省钱、安全、不受地域限制） 2. 可探索内容（世界名胜、博物馆、城市风光） 3. 不足（缺乏实地体验、感官体验有限） 4. 看法（是实地旅行的补充，丰富视野） Online Travel: A New Way to Explore    With the development of technology, online travel has become a popular way to explore the world. It brings many benefits to us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Online Travel: A New Way to Explore With the development of technology, online travel has become a popular way to explore the world. It brings many benefits to us. Online travel is convenient and cheap—you don’t need to book tickets or hotels. You can visit world-famous attractions like the Eiffel Tower or the Great Wall at home safely. Museums like the British Museum also offer online tours, letting you learn about history easily. However, it can’t replace real travel—you can’t feel the fresh air or taste local food. In my opinion, online travel is a great supplement to on-site trips. It helps us broaden our horizons without leaving home. It’s truly a wonderful invention! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，以一般现在时为主（阐述在线旅行的现状、优缺点及观点） 明确要点：在线旅行的流行背景、优势（便捷/便宜/安全/易学习）、局限性（无法替代实地旅行的感官体验）、个人观点（作为实地旅行的补充） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）与第三人称（it/you）结合 注意事项：围绕“在线旅行”主题展开，逻辑清晰，观点明确   [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明在线旅行因科技发展成为流行的探索方式，引出其带来的益处 主体段：分两部分——先讲在线旅行的优势（便捷、便宜、安全、可在线游览景点/博物馆），再讲其局限性（无法替代实地旅行的感官体验） 结尾段：表达个人观点（在线旅行是实地旅行的好补充，能拓宽视野），总结其价值   [要点展开] 要点一：在线旅行的流行背景   驱动因素：development of technology 现状：become a popular way to explore the world 要点二：在线旅行的优势   核心特点：convenient and cheap（无需订票/订酒店） 体验内容：visit world-famous attractions (Eiffel Tower, Great Wall) at home safely；online tours of museums (British Museum) to learn history easily 要点三：在线旅行的局限性   不足：can’t replace real travel；can’t feel fresh air or taste local food 要点四：个人观点与总结   定位：great supplement to on-site trips 作用：broaden horizons without leaving home 评价：truly a wonderful invention （8） 初中生活即将过半，阅读一定陪伴你度过了很多难忘的时光。请你以Reading makes me grow为题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的阅读经历和感受。 要点： 1.你什么时候开始喜欢上阅读的; 2.你最喜欢的书是什么，它给你带来了什么; 3.你对阅读的看法，以及未来的阅读计划。 注意： (1)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息; (2)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺; (3)词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Reading makes me grow Reading is an important part of my life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Reading makes me grow Reading is an important part of my life. I fell in love with reading when I was 8 years old, after my mother gave me the first picture book. My favourite book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It tells the funny and exciting adventures of a brave boy. It teaches me to be brave when I face difficulties, and to cherish friendship. Reading not only brings me joy, but also opens up a new world to me. I plan to read one classic book every month in the future. I will keep reading, and grow with every book I read. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文 时态：一般现在时为主，适当使用一般过去时 人称：第一人称 写作要点：介绍喜欢阅读的时间、最喜欢的书及收获、对阅读的看法和未来计划 注意事项：词数约100词；内容包含全部要点；语句连贯；不得出现真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明阅读的重要性并说明何时开始喜欢阅读 主体段：介绍最喜欢的书及其带来的收获 结尾段：表达对阅读的看法并说明未来阅读计划 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：开始阅读的时间 fall in love with爱上…… when I was … years old当我……岁时 picture book图画书 要点二：最喜欢的书及收获 my favourite book我最喜欢的书 tell the story of讲述……的故事 teach me to do sth.教会我做某事 be brave勇敢的 cherish friendship珍惜友谊 要点三：看法与计划 bring me joy带给我快乐 open up a new world打开新世界 plan to do sth.计划做某事 read one book every month每月读一本书 grow with reading在阅读中成长 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题04 书面表达归纳&专项训练 Unit 1 Past and present 本单元的主题是“过去和现在”,要求学生能够运用所学词汇、语法及句式描述家乡的变化。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①家乡过去的情况;②家乡现在的变化;③家乡变化背后的原因;④对家乡变化的感想。 　　中考书面表达与此主题相关的命题形式多样,例如向网站投稿、写一篇演讲稿等,通常以记叙文或应用文的形式出现。 写作实例 十年来,你的家乡常州空气质量显著提升,居住条件大幅改 善,交通网络日臻完善,城市面貌焕然一新,乃宜居新城。请你根 据以下提示,谈一谈常州十年间的具体变化以及你对这些变 化的看法。 1.What was Changzhou like ten years ago? 2.What is Changzhou like now? 3.What do you think of these changes? 注意:1.短文应包括所有要点,可适当发挥。 2.词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 3.短文不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Great changes in Changzhou 　　Great changes have taken place in Changzhou in the past ten years. 审题指导 1.体裁:记叙文    2.时态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主    3.人称:以第三人称为主 4.必备词句: （1）due to因为　 （2）make sth. a breeze使某事易如反掌　 （3）be proud of 因……而自豪　 （4）do interviews with...对……进行采访　 （5）be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事　 （6）be filled with充满　 （7）live a/an...life 过……的生活　 （8）put sth. to good use有效利用某物　 （9）Now, the sky is blue and the air is fresh as polluting factories are closed.现在,由于污染工厂被关闭,天空是蓝色的,空气是新鲜的。　 （10）They not only make Changzhou more livable but also let me see that my hometown is becoming better and better.它们不仅让常州变得更宜居,也让我看到我的家乡正变得越来越好。 （11）As we know, China has developed quickly these years and it has become one of the most important countries in the world.正如我们所知,中国这些年发展迅速,已经成为世界上最重要的国家之一。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 Great changes in Changzhou Great changes have taken place in Changzhou in the past ten years.　　 Ten years ago, the air was often hazy due to factory pollution. Many people lived in small, old houses. The traffic was a mess with few roads and frequent jams. 　　Now, the sky is blue and the air is fresh as polluting factories are closed. People have moved into big, comfortable apartments. There are more roads, subways and elevated roads, making travel a breeze. 　　In my view, these changes are amazing. They not only make Changzhou more livable but also let me see that my hometown is becoming better and better. I'm proud of my hometown and expect more progress. 随堂训练 过去的几十年里，苏州发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你以“Great Changes in Suzhou”为题, 写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍苏州过去和现在的对比。 Great Changes in Suzhou In the past At present Living conditions 出行主要靠步行或骑自行车…低矮的小房子…采光差… …… Environment 街道狭窄、尘土多…空气质量… …… Entertainment (娱乐) 娱乐项目很少…听广播… …… Technology 通讯方式单一…现金购物… …… Reasons …… Feelings …… 注意事项： (1) 词数：90词左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数) ； (2) 文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息； (3) 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 Great Changes in Suzhou ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 2 Amazing China 本单元的主题是“令人惊叹的中国”,与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍某个旅游景点的相关信息;②介绍某个旅游城市的相关信息;③介绍一次旅行经历并分享旅行过程中的情感体验与收获。中考书面表达与此相关的命题形式多样,如邮件、给校刊投稿或演讲稿等。 写作实例 无锡,江苏省的璀璨明珠,被选为2025年央视春晚分会场,展现了其独特的自然风光、文化魅力与现代化风貌。作为一名来自无锡的学生,请写一篇演讲稿,号召更多的人来无锡游玩,体验无锡之美。 可参考景点:Taihu Lake, Xihui Park, Yuantouzhu Scenic Area, Nanchan Temple... 注意:1.语句通顺,言之有理;2.不得出现真实的人名和学校名; 3.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear friends, 　　As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world. 　　I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening. 审题指导 1.体裁:应用文(演讲稿)    2.时态:以一般现在时为主    3.人称:以第三人称为主 4.必备词句: （1）breathtaking令人赞叹的　 （2）must-visit必游的地方　 （3）be known for因……而闻名　 （4）feel at home舒适自在 （5）convenient便利的　 （6）take a boat ride乘船游览　 （7）step into history走进历史　 （8）mix nature with culture将自然与文化融为一体　 （9）be deeply attracted by...被……深深吸引　 （10）Wuxi, a shining pearl in Jiangsu Province, has so much to offer.无锡是江苏省的一颗璀璨的明珠,有很多东西可以提供。 （11）In spring, you can see flowers everywhere, making the whole place look like a colourful picture.在春天,你到处都能看见花,使得整个地方看起来就像一幅色彩斑斓的图画。　 （12）The Classical Gardens of Suzhou, which are also called Suzhou Gardens, are a group of beautiful gardens in the city of Suzhou in Jiangsu Province of China.苏州古典园林,又称苏州园林,是中国江苏省苏州市的一批美丽的园林。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 Dear friends, As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world. 　　Wuxi, a shining pearl in Jiangsu Province, has so much to offer. The natural attractions are breathtaking. Taihu Lake, with its vast and clear waters, and Yuantouzhu Scenic Area, where you can enjoy the perfect blend of the lake and mountain views, are must-visits. Xihui Park and Nanchan Temple also have their own allure. When it comes to food, steamed buns with savory fillings and the famous Wuxi spare ribs will delight your taste buds. The people here are known for their friendliness and warmth, making you feel at home. What's more, convenient transport networks, including subways and buses, make getting around a breeze. I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening. 随堂训练 下表是Kitty在春节期间的旅游记录，请根据表中所提供的信息，帮助她写一篇短文，介绍游玩情况。 When   上周 Where   徐州 Who 我和我的父母 How 乘一个半小时火车 What 第一天，参观云龙湖﹣徐州最著名的地方。 上午，在云龙湖上乘船旅行；晚上，沿湖散步，夜景很美，情不自禁拍照。 第二天，去徐州乐园(Xuzhou Amusement Park)，玩得开心，度过一整天。 第三天，去购物，为亲戚朋友们买了许多纪念品(souvenir)。 在这次旅行中，我们品尝了各种美味的徐州地方菜。 感受 非常喜欢这次旅行 想再次参观 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 3 The world at one click 　本单元的主题是“在线旅游”,与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍一次在线旅行的经历并分享感悟;②介绍某个线上旅游景点的相关信息;③对比分析线上旅游和线下旅游。 　　书面表达与此相关的命题形式多样,如邮件、给校刊投稿、演讲稿等。 写作实例 　　阳光中学八(1)班就同学们喜欢的旅游方式进行了调查,并将调查结果形成一张表格。请根据表格内容,向你的美国朋友介绍近年来同学们旅游方式的变化。   In the past At present Main ways Offline(线下的) travel Online travel Reasons ·Touch things with hands; ·Talk with others; ·Smell flowers in spring; ·... ·“Go” anywhere; ·Take less time and cost little money; ·Enjoy digital(电子的) museums; ·... 要求:1.短文应包含表格中所列要点;2.结构完整、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,不少于120词;3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。 审题指导 1.体裁:说明文    2.时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主    3.人称:第三人称 4.必备词句: （1）carry out完成(任务)　 （2）take place发生　 （3）a bird's-eye view of...鸟瞰……　 （4）deepen one's understanding of...加深某人对……的理解 （5）ought to do sth.应该做某事　 （6）be in for a real treat一定会喜欢　 （7）tens of thousands of数以万计的　 （8）on horseback骑着马　 （9）come alive热闹起来　 （10）pay a visit to参观　 （11）compare to与……相比　 （12）become more and more popular变得越来越受欢迎　 （13）in a new and interesting way以一种新颖有趣的方式　 （14）First, it allows students to “go” anywhere they want, which saves a lot of time.首先,它允许学生们“去”他们想去的任何地方,这节省了很多时间。 （15）In recent years, online travel has become popular, allowing people to travel around the world without leaving their homes.近年来,线上旅游变得流行起来,让人们足不出户就能环游世界。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 　　Recently, a survey about students' favourite travel ways was carried out in Class 1, Grade 8 of Yangguang Middle School. Great changes have taken place over the years. 　　In the past, offline travel was the main choice. Students loved it because they could touch things with their hands, have face-to-face talks with others, and smell flowers in spring. It made them feel the real world directly. But now, online travel is becoming more and more popular. There are several reasons. First, it allows students to “go” anywhere they want, which saves a lot of time. Also, it costs little money. What's more, they can enjoy digital museums, getting knowledge in a new and interesting way. 　　These changes show that students' travel ways are adapting to the development of the times. 随堂训练 本单元主要话题是网上旅游，与本单元相关的写作题目可延伸为“我的第一次网上旅游”、“推荐一处适合网上参观的景点”、“网上旅游vs传统旅游”等。命题内容以经历描述为主，要求根据提示或自身体验，有条理地记叙网上旅游的全过程。写作时应注意事件逻辑的连贯性、时态的准确运用以及内容的真实性与细节性。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： 1. Which place did you visit online?（你网上参观了哪个地方？） 2. Why did you choose to visit it online?（你为什么选择网上参观它？） 3. What did you see or learn during the online tour?（网上旅游期间你看到了什么或学到了什么？） 4. What are the advantages of this online tour?（这次网上旅游有哪些优势？） 5. How did you feel about the online travel experience?（你对这次网上旅游体验的感受如何？） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 4 A good read 本单元的主题是“一本好读物”,要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型写一篇与书籍或阅读有关的书面表达。与此相关的写作维度有:①介绍一本喜欢的书;②谈论自己对阅读的看法。 　　中考书面表达与此相关的命题形式有很多,如给报社投稿、发表演讲和经验分享等。一般要介绍的主要内容有:对某本书或某个故事的看法、对读书的见解等。 写作实例 　　为了响应国家全民阅读的号召,你校将举办以“My Favourite Book”为主题的英语读书日。假如你是李华,请根据下面的通知和要求,并结合自身实际,用英文介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。要求:1.词数不少于100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Notice 　　Our school will hold an English Reading Day. What book  have you read? Who is your favourite character? And why do  you like this book? 　　Share with us! My Favourite Book 　　I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to share my favourite book with you. 审题指导 1.体裁:说明文    2.时态:一般现在时    3.人称:以第三人称为主 4.必备词句: ①one of the... ……之一　 ②get over克服　 ③give up放弃　 ④as long as只要 ⑤It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China.它是中国四大名著之一。 ⑥It is such an interesting book that I lose myself in it.这本书太有趣了,以至于我完全沉浸其中。 ①be popular among... 在……中受欢迎　 ②be aware of 意识到　 ③be crazy about热爱 ④from that day on从那天起　 ⑤an extract from... ……的一段摘录　　 ⑥fall asleep入睡 ⑦Some praise it, while others call it unreadable.有些人称赞它,而另一些人则称其难以理解。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 My Favourite Book I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to share my favourite book with you. My favourite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China. It was written by Wu Cheng'en, who was a great writer in ancient China. The story tells us about four main characters. They are Tang Monk, the Monkey King, Pigsy and Sandy. They get over many difficulties on the way to the West. Finally, they make it. 　　The Monkey King is my favourite character. He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges. 　　It is such an interesting book that I lose myself in it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve everything. 随堂训练 5月5日阳光镇举办首届“书香节”。为响应“书香节”活动，你校校刊英文版正在开展以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动。请根据下表提示内容写一篇短文，介绍你对阅读的看法及个人的阅读情况。 The importance of reading open up one’s mind, get more knowledge My reading habit when to read, where to read, what to read My favourite book(s) … My reading plan … 要求： (1) 必须包含所给提示内容，并适当补充细节; (2) 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名; (3) 不少于80词(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 I Like Reading Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 综合训练 （1） 近些年，我们家乡徐州的环境发生了巨大的变化，假设你是李华，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，向你的外国朋友John简要介绍家乡徐州的变化，并邀请他来徐州旅游。 家乡的变化 过去的家乡 又脏又窄的马路；人们到处扔垃圾 现在的家乡 道路宽敞干净；空气清新；高楼大厦矗立 徐州三日游计划 第一天：步行到户部山街区（Hubushan Street），拍照，品尝美食； 第二天：乘公交到森林公园（the Forest Park），放风筝……； 第三天：乘公交到徐州乐园（Xuzhou Amusement Park），观看卡通人物游行，看烟花； 要求: （1）内容包括以上要点，语句通顺，可适当发挥； （2）80词左右。开头结尾已给，不计入总词数。 Dear John, My hometown—Xuzhou has changed a lot over the years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will have a wonderful time in Xuzhou! Yours sincerely, Li Hua （2） 五一假期是出游的好时候，你打算邀请你的好友来宿迁游览，请以英语导游的身份，写一篇英语短文向朋友介绍这座城市。 1. 宿迁这些年变化很大，它从一个穷困的小镇发展成一座现代化的城市。现在高楼林立，处处可见宽阔、干净的马路。…… 2. 它蕴含丰富的历史和文化。它是项羽的出生地，参观项王故里（Hometown of Xiang Yu）可以了解他的历史故事。 3. 如果喜欢自然风光，三台山森林公园（Santai Mountain Forest Park）和骆马湖（Luoma Lake）都是不错的选择。在这里不仅可以欣赏美景，还可以泛舟湖上。 4. 每年都有数百万游客来宿迁游览，它确实是让人们放松的好地方。 5. 未来展望：…… Suqian has changed a lot over the years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 假设你上周参加了 “线上中国传统工艺博物馆” 的参观活动，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的参观经历和感受。 提示： 1.参观的原因（如：对传统工艺感兴趣、学校布置的任务等）； 2.参观的过程（如：浏览不同展厅、观看工艺制作视频、了解工艺历史等）； 3.你的感受和收获（如：学到了知识、感受到了中国文化的魅力、希望更多人了解传统工艺等）。 要求： 1.词数 80-100； 2.语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 阅读点亮人生。暑期将至，同学们都准备利用假期的时间广泛地阅读，开阔视野，提高阅读能力，养成阅读习惯，做个阅读小达人。假如你是李华，请根据下面提示，给你的好朋友Jake写封邮件，向他推荐你最喜欢的一本书。 推荐书目 Journey to the West、Little Women、Treasure Island、Oliver Twist... 写作要求 (1) 写作内容需包含思维导图的提示信息，内容可适当发挥； (2) 表达清晰，语法正确，逻辑合理，上下文连贯； (3) 字迹工整，书写规范； (4) 不得出现真实的姓名、校名； (5) 词数 100 左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Jake, Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （5） 社会快速发展让人民的生活不断变化。你的生活发生了哪些变化呢？假设你是李华，学校社团举办主题为“Changes in Our Lives”的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容写一篇90词左右的英语文章投稿，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in Our Lives With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） 假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假期间前往北京旅行。请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封80～100词的邮件，分享你的旅行计划。 Dear David， _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua （7） 假设你参加“科技与旅行”征文比赛，请根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇题目为“Online Travel: A New Way to Explore”的短文，词数80左右，开头已给出。 线上旅行：一种新的探索方式 1. 优势（便捷、省钱、安全、不受地域限制） 2. 可探索内容（世界名胜、博物馆、城市风光） 3. 不足（缺乏实地体验、感官体验有限） 4. 看法（是实地旅行的补充，丰富视野） Online Travel: A New Way to Explore    With the development of technology, online travel has become a popular way to explore the world. It brings many benefits to us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （8） 初中生活即将过半，阅读一定陪伴你度过了很多难忘的时光。请你以Reading makes me grow为题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的阅读经历和感受。 要点： 1.你什么时候开始喜欢上阅读的; 2.你最喜欢的书是什么，它给你带来了什么; 3.你对阅读的看法，以及未来的阅读计划。 注意： (1)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息; (2)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺; (3)词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Reading makes me grow Reading is an important part of my life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $