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Unit 5 Fun Clubs
Section B(2a-2b)
Writing
1. He often acts _____ stories with his classmates.
2. He is such a well-known ______(act) and director that many people like him.
3. Let’s take ______(act) to protect the environment.
4. English is more ______ a language; it’s also a window to a bigger world.
5. Keep ____ mind that a small deed makes a big difference.
6. Peter loves reading because it can help him ______(open) his mind.
7. My hobby is ________(collect) stamps.
8. Only a small part of _________(collect) in the musuem is on display.
9. It is exciting __________(discover) wildlife _____ your nose.
10. Edison is one of the greatest ________ (invent) in the world.
out
actor
action
than
in
open
collecting
collection
to discover
under
inventors
Self-check
Let’s watch and think.
What club do you like? Why?
We Want You
Xu Cong also wants to join a club.
Let’s help him to finish his email.
How
Write an email
2a
Complete the email with the words in the box.
I love I’d love to I’m really interested in Can I I can I can’t
Dear Bill:
____________________ your club. _____ reading all kinds of books. __________ read fast, but ____________ find many good books
to read. __________ read more and share what I think with others. _______ join your club?
I’m really interested in
Best,
Xu cong
I love
I can
I can’t
I’d love to
Can I
5
Think deeper:
How will Bill reply? Can Xu Cong join the club successfully? Why?
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Dear Bill,
I’m really interested in your club.
I love reading all kinds of books. I can read fast, but I can’t find many good books to read. I’d love to read more and share what I think with others. Can I join your club?
Best,
Xu Cong
greeting 称呼/问候
purpose 写作目的
reasons
想加入俱乐部的理由
request 发出请求
signature 落款
end 结束语/祝福
How to write an email to the club you want to join?
Beginning
Ending
Body
爱好
能力
希望
体裁:_____________ 时态:______________ 人称:______________
应用文→邮件
一般现在时态
第一人称
2b
Choose one club from 1b. Write an email to the organizer and say why you’d like to join the club.
Dear Ma Xiaohui:
I am Liu Xiaonuo and I’m 13 years old. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. I would like to join the cooking club.
I am really interested in cooking and I love Chinese food. I can cook dumplings. But I can’t cook beef noodles well. I want to learn to cook for my family. I’m free on Wednesdays. I’m sure I can do well in the club. Can I join your club?
Best,
Liu Xiaonuo.
maxh.food@happymail.com
liuxiaonuo@student.com
How can we make it better?
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假如你是李华,学校的读书社(the Book Club)正在招纳新成员。你很喜欢阅读,有很多想法,希望能加入这个社团。请写一封申请邮件给社团负责人Bill,申请加入社团。
我对你的俱乐部感兴趣。
I’m interested in your club.
1. 我写信来申请加入...社。
________________________________________ 2. 我写信来表达我加入______俱乐部的浓厚兴趣。
_______________________________________________________
3. 听说...社在招募新社员,我想报名参加。
_________________________________________________________
I’m writing to apply to join the ...ok Club.
I am writing to express my keen interest in joining the ______ Club.
Learning that students are wanted for the... Club, I’d love to sign up for it.
我想加入....社的原因如下。
___________________________________________________________________
我喜欢阅读各种各样的书籍
___________________________________________________________________
阅读的时候,我会感到很放松和平静,
加入社也是结交新朋友的一种好方式.
The reasons why I want to join the ... club are as follows.
I really enjoy reading all kinds of books.
I am deeply fascinated by all kinds of books.
我不仅阅读速度快,而且擅长讲故事。
I can not only read fast, but I am also good at telling stories.
When reading, I feel pretty relaxed and peaceful.
Being a member is also a good way to make new friends.
如果能加入读书社,我会组织丰富多彩的活动来让更多的同学爱上...。
If I can join the --- club, I will organize many colorful activities to make more students
fall in love with...
I sincerely hope that you will consider my application favorably. I look forward to the opportunity to contribute my skills and enthusiasm to the club.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am eagerly waiting for your response.
结尾常用语
我真诚地希望您能考虑我的申请。
我期待着有机会为俱乐部贡献我的技能和热情。
感谢您的时间和考虑。我热切地等待着您的回复。
我可以参加你的俱乐部吗?
Can I join your club?
Dear Bill,
I'm Li Hua. a student from Class 2, Grade 7. I am writing1._________ (apply) to join the Book Club.
The reasons why I want to join the Book Club are as follows. Firstly, I really enjoy 2._______(read)all kinds of books. When reading, I feel pretty 3._______ (relax) and peaceful, and the reading corner is a perfect place for me. I can not only read fast but also share what I read with others. In addition, it's also 4._____ good way to make new friends, which develops my 5.________(able) of communicating with others and makes me 6._____(feel) a sense of belonging. Moreover, if I am honored to join the club, I will organize many colorful 7.__________(activity) for the members to make more students fall in love 8.______ reading. Lastly,
I believe "Books are the ladder of human progress." 9._____I can join in the club, I will be pretty honored.
Thanks for your time. I’m 10.________(eager) looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua
to apply
reading
relaxed
a
ability
feel
activities
with
If
eagerly
Join a club and enjoy what you like!
Remember: It's our likes that make us special. Our interests make us interesting.
Assessment checklist
1.Content --- all key points included; detailed
reasons and facts;
2.Language --- correct; rich expressions;
3.Structure --- clear levels; transition words;
Excellent
Good
To be improved
feel relaxed/calm/satisfied/ peaceful, be interested in, be curious about, fall in love with...
quiet reading corner
help each other, belong to the club, enjoy the friendship
can read fast/act out stories, be good at telling stories, be gifted in organizing activities
gain various kinds of knowledge,
achieve my dream of being...
Keys
(1)我写信来申请加入读书社。
I’m writing to apply to join the Book Club. (2)听说读书社在招募新社员,我想报名参加。
Learning that students are wanted for the Book Club, I’d love to sign up for it. (3)我想加入读书社的原因如下。
The reasons why I want to join the Book Club are as follows. (4)我喜欢阅读各种各样的书籍。
I really fall in love with reading all kinds of books.
(5)我不仅阅读速度快,而且擅长讲故事。
I can not only read fast, but I am also good at telling stories. (6)阅读的时候,我会感到很放松和平静,读书角能给我提供一个绝佳的地方。
When reading, I feel pretty relaxed and peaceful, and the reading corner is a perfect
place for me. (7)加入读书社也是结交新朋友的一种好方式,这能让我有一种归属感。
Being a member is a good way to make new friends, which gives me a sense of
belonging.
(9)如果能加入读书社,我会组织丰富多彩的活动来让更多的同学爱上阅读。
If I can join the Book Club, I will organize many colorful activities to make more
students fall in love with books.
(10)我梦想成为一名科学家,而阅读正是浇灌我梦想种子的甘露。
I dream of being a scientist, and reading is like the drops nourishing the seed of my
dream.
How to write
Part 2
General
Detailed
reasons
Summary
How can we organize the application?
Sample Analysis
Part 3
Analyze the sample from the aspects.
1
2
3
content
structure
language
Aim of writing
Reasons:
*feelings;
*abilities;
*benefits;
*dream job;
Comments & summary
Outline
Reasons from various angles
Summary
丰富短语表达
句式多样
过渡自然
比喻修辞
谚语增彩
Writing
Part 4
假如你是李华,学校的社团正在招纳新成员。请写一封申请邮件给其中一个社团,申请加入该社团。
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