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The Checklist of "SCL" Evaluation Criteria
Does the text include a adjective? No Yes
none ☆
Does the text include content:places+sensory details? ≥1 ≥2
☆ ☆☆
Does the text apply any rhetorial device? 1 device >2
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Unit 4 History and Traditions Reading for Writing
Learning objectives:
By the end of the class, you will be able to:
1.understand the structure and the description of scenery with the transitional links;
2.apply useful sentence patterns to describe a place;
3.produce a coherent article about one place.
Lead-in:
What do you think of Xinjiang after watching the short video?
Take notes:
Reading process:
1. Reading for structure
1 Find out one word to describe Ireland?
2 How many places are mentioned(提及)in the text?
2. Reading for content:sensory details
· Sight:
· Hearing:
· Touch &Smell:
· Taste:
Tip 1: Structure=places+sensory details
3. Reading for language: rhetorical device(修辞手法)
A. metaphor(暗喻) B. personification(拟人) C. specific examples(举例子)
1 The peaceful landscape of the "Emerald Isle"(绿宝石) and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle…( )
2 And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. ( )
3 On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. ( )
4 To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. ( )
Summary: How to describe a place?
Introduction
Use a striking image, something surprising…
Body
1. adj. (beautiful…)
2. transitions(places) + sensory details
3. rhetorical device
Ending
Invite the readers to experience the place you describe.
Practice:
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信说他对中国的新疆很感兴趣,请你写一封回信向他介绍新疆。
要点:
1.描写新疆地方的景色(适当选取5感描述大法);
2.适当采用修辞手法(如:拟人、比喻、举例等)
Reference words:
1. adj.
breathtaking(令人屏息的), magnificent(壮丽的), charming(迷人的), beautiful(漂亮的)……
2. transitions(places) + sensory details
Kasshgar Old City(喀什古城),International Grand Bazaar(国际大巴扎), Kuitun(奎屯)……
crystal-clear stream(清澈的溪流), towering mountain(高耸的山脉),winding highway(蜿蜒的公路),breathtaking grass land(青翠的草原),melodious music(悦耳的音乐),fragrant flowers(芳香四溢的鲜花),tender mutton(鲜嫩的羊肉),cool wind(凉风习习)……
3. rhetorical device
greet/welcome (...欢迎), like(...就像...),turn into(化作),whisper(窃窃私语), dance(翩翩起舞)……
Dear Tom,
I’m more than delighted to hear that you are going on a trip to Xinjiang. You've made a wise choice since Xinjiang is abundant in tourist attractions.
I'm sure you'll have a great time. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Lihua
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Unit 4 History and Traditions
Reading for Writing
Learning objectives:
By the end of the class, you will be able to:
1.understand the structure and the description of scenery with the transitional links;
2.apply useful sentence patterns to describe a place;
3.produce a coherent article about Xinjiang.
Lead-in:
Lead-in:
beautiful
peaceful
surprising
exciting
inspiring
……
What do you think of Xinjiang after watching the short video?
1. Reading for structure
Skim the whole text quickly:
1. Find out one word to describe Ireland?
2. How many places are mentioned in the text?
green counties
down by the sea
in the mountains
a village pub
Beautiful
down by the sea
in the mountains
a village pub
green counties
sight
touch & smell
hearing
taste
1. Reading for structure
The peaceful landscape of the "Emerald Isle" and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea , the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast . On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
2. Reading for content:sensory details
With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew . If you're lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
2. Reading for content:sensory details
down by the sea
in the mountains
a village pub
green counties
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.
The peaceful landscape of the "Emerald Isle" and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle,
sight
touch &smell
hearing
taste
Tip 1:
+
places
Content=
sensory details
down by the sea
in the mountains
a village pub
green counties
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.
The peaceful landscape of the "Emerald Isle" and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle…
3. Reading for language: rhetorical device
metaphor(暗喻)
metaphor& personification(拟人)
personification
specific examples
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Use a striking image, something surprising…
adj. (beautiful…) ☆
2. transitions (places) + sensory details ☆ ☆
3. rhetorical device (simile & personification… ) ☆ ☆
Invite the readers to experience the place you describe.
Clear and brief, show the topic
Summary
How to describe a place?
Introduce Xinjiang:
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信说他对中国的新疆很感兴趣,请你写一封回信向他介绍新疆。
要点:
1.描写新疆地方的景色(适当选取5感描述大法);
2.适当采用修辞手法(如:拟人、比喻、举例等)
Work in pairs and evaluate your partner’s text based on the requirements for “SCL”
Homework:
Required:
Correct mistakes in your writing and polish it with more sensory details and rhetorical devices.
Optional:
Try to introduce another place with the knowledge we have learned today.
Thank You !
人教版2019必修第二册
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