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Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Drafting a lecture
本单元的写作任务要求写一篇发言稿,介绍一处世界自然遗产。发言稿一般包含开场问候、开篇点题、内容阐述、结尾总结等。其中,“内容阐述”为写作的重点。时态以一般现在时为主;人称以第一、第三人称为主。
|由教材学写作|
一、学文体架构
根据教材课文总结出该类文体的框架:
二、学精彩导入
本文开头采用了If引导的条件句,在与读者互动的同时,自然导入了文章主题,既拉近了与读者之间的距离,又有助于激发读者的阅读兴趣,展现了作者较高的语言运用技巧。
[提能训练|完成句子]
If_you_ask_me_what_my_favorite_book_is, I will choose this novel without hesitation.
如果你问我最喜欢的书是哪一本,我会毫不犹豫地选择这本小说。
三、学亮点表达
1.第二句中的must在此用作名词,表示“必须做(或看)的事”,同时该词加了引号,进一步突出强调了游览梵净山的必要性。
[提能训练|完成句子]
His_new_novel_is_a_must for all lovers of science fiction.
他的新作是所有科幻小说爱好者的必读书。
2.第二句中的名词短语A “must” for anyone visiting Guizhou Province在句中作Fanjing Mountain的同位语;倒数第二句中的名词短语One of the first national nature reserves in China也是作Fanjing Mountain的同位语。两个同位语简洁明了地补充了梵净山的相关信息,描述更细致、具体,使读者对梵净山的印象更深刻,令他们对梵净山心向往之。
3.文中运用了national, greatest, renowned, breathtaking等形容词描述梵净山,使之在读者心目中的形象更高大、完美,突出了它的独特之处。
|具体写作指导|
How to draft a lecture about a natural heritage——写一篇介绍自然遗产的发言稿
第一步:构思谋篇
Part 1
1.Greeting
2.Introduction to the topic
Part 2
Introduce the natural heritage in detail
Part 3
Conclusion
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 导入主题
1.写作背景:表示欢迎
①It's my great pleasure to introduce_a_fantastic_natural_heritage_to_you in Jinan.
我很高兴向大家介绍济南一处神奇的自然遗产。
②I feel_honoured_that I have the chance to act as your tour guide today.
我很荣幸今天有机会当你们的导游。
③It gives me great pleasure to_welcome_you,_our foreign friends, to the Forbidden City!
外国朋友们,很高兴欢迎你们来到紫禁城!
2.写作目的:做简单的介绍(以泰山为例)
①I am excited to share with you the wonders of Mount Tai, which_is_located_in_the_
province_of_Shandong.
泰山位于山东省。我很高兴与你分享泰山的奇观。
②Have you ever heard of Mount Tai, the highest peak in the region with_a_history_of thousands of years?
你听说过泰山吗?它的主峰有数千年的历史。
③In order to make sure you will have an_enjoyable_and_unforgettable_trip here, I can_hardly_wait_to_give you a brief introduction to it.
为了确保您在这里度过一次愉快而难忘的旅行,我迫不及待地想给您简要介绍一下。
④I am_more_than_happy_to_introduce_to_you_Mount_Tai,_a UNESCO World Heritage Site that embodies the spirit of Chinese civilization.
我非常乐意向各位介绍泰山。泰山承载着中华文明之魂,并已被联合国教科文组织列为世界文化遗产。
第二部分 介绍自然遗产
1.描述性词汇
①places_of_interest 名胜古迹
②at_home_and_abroad 国内外
③be_famous/well-known_for 因……闻名
④admire the architecture/scenery 欣赏建筑/风景
⑤_leave_a_deep_impression_on_sb. 给某人留下深刻印象
⑥enjoy_a_great_reputation_as 享有盛誉
⑦expand_one's_horizons 开拓视野
⑧play_an_important_part_in_... 在……方面起重要作用
⑨cover an area of ...square metres 占地……平方米
⑩be open to the public 对公众开放
⑪be located in 坐落于
⑫be listed as 被列为
⑬one of the most famous places 最著名的地方之一
⑭breathtaking scenery 令人惊叹的风景_
2.介绍名胜古迹
①The mountain attracts_tourists_from_all_over_the_world, boasting breathtaking natural scenery.
这座山吸引了来自世界各地的游客,拥有令人叹为观止的自然风光。
②Yungang Caves in Datong, Shanxi Province, are a world cultural heritage site with a history that_dates_back_to_more_than_1,500_years_ago.
山西大同云冈石窟是世界文化遗产,其历史可以追溯到1 500多年前。
③That is because you can admire_the_unique_architecture and enjoy the delicious food.
这是因为你能在这里欣赏独特的建筑,享受美食。
④_Located_in_the_centre_of_Beijing, China, the Forbidden City was the Chinese imperial palace from the mid-Ming Dynasty to the end of the Qing Dynasty.紫禁城位于中国北京市中心,从明朝中期到清朝末期一直是皇宫。
⑤The Forbidden City, which_covers_an_area_of_over_720,000_square_metres, was listed as one of the World Heritage Sites in 1987.
紫禁城占地72万多平方米,1987年被列为世界文化遗产。
第三部分 总结升华
①I highly recommend visiting Mount Tai to_appreciate_the_magnificent_blend_of_history_
and_nature.
我强烈推荐你参观泰山,去领略历史与自然的壮美交融。
②I hope to have_the_opportunity_to_explore this majestic mountain with you someday.
我希望有一天能有机会和你一起探索这座雄伟的山。
③By visiting the Forbidden City, you will_understand_Chinese_culture_better and you'll be amazed by its design.
通过参观紫禁城,你会更好地了解中国文化,同时你会被它的设计所震撼。
④I regard_it_as_a_significant_act_to_preserve_this great wonder for the well-being of future generations.
为了我们子孙后代的福祉,我把保护这一伟大奇迹看作是一项重大行动。
⑤As a student, I feel proud of this natural heritage and consider_it_my_responsibility_to_
promote_it_worldwide.
作为一名学生,我为这一自然遗产感到骄傲,并把在世界范围内推广这一遗产当作我的责任。
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长城在1987年被联合国教科文组织(UNESCO)列为世界文化遗产,请根据提示以“主题句+支撑句”的模式写一个片段描述其入选原因。
1.长城位于中国北部,全长约6 700公里;
2.长城最初修建于秦朝,目的是抵御外敌入侵;
3.长城是古代劳动人民创造的奇迹,是人类历史上最伟大的工程之一。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考范文:
The Great Wall was listed as a World Heritage Site by UNESCO in 1987.It is located in the northern part of China, the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers. It was originally built in the Qin Dynasty to defend against the attack of the enemies.It is a wonder created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings.
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主题语段
Located in the southeast of China as one of the best-known nature reserves, Mount Wuyi is a fascinating natural wonder that boasts breathtaking scenery, incredible biodiversity and a bunch of old buildings.With both natural and cultural values, it has been a popular tourist attraction for ages and listed as a UNESCO World Heritage Site since 1999.Comprising unique rock formations, clear rivers, and vast forests, Mount Wuyi provides a habitat for a wide variety of wildlife to thrive.
武夷山位于中国东南部,是著名的自然保护区之一,也是一处迷人的自然奇观,拥有令人惊叹的风景、令人难以置信的生物多样性和众多的古建筑。它兼具自然和文化价值,多年来一直是受欢迎的旅游景点,1999年被联合国教科文组织列为世界遗产。武夷山由独特的岩层、清澈的河流和广袤的森林组成,为各种野生动物提供了繁衍的栖息地。
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