Unit 5 8 夯基赋能·直击高考之读后续写（课件PPT）-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册（人教版）

该高中英语课件聚焦高考读后续写，系统讲解高分结尾的三种类型、四个句型及不同主题语境的应用，通过首尾呼应、主题升华等实例导入，搭建从理论到实践的学习支架，帮助学生掌握结尾升华主题的方法。 其亮点在于融合语言能力、思维品质与文化意识，通过高分句型训练语言表达，用QA模式（如分析Maxwell告知真相、分配报酬）培养逻辑思维，结合“橙香间的情谊”案例凸显诚信价值观。采用“理论+案例+步骤”教学法，学生能提升续写能力与思维深度，教师可直接用于课堂，提高教学效率。

夯基赋能 直击高考之读后续写 橙香间的情谊与诚挚抉择   在记叙文中，结尾起到至关重要的作用。读后续写的主题往往是积极向上的，因此可以通过表达人生感悟、生活真谛、人生观或价值观来升华主题。结尾除了点明故事结局以外，也会和原文相互照应，点明主旨，深化主题。 因此，一个好的结尾，往往起到画龙点睛的作用，既能够展现学生的视野和见识， 又能够有效地总结全文，从而提升续写文章的档次。 1．常用的三种结尾类型 (1)首尾呼应式结尾：关注标题和开头所表达的主题 原文开头： *I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, yet absent­minded and forgetful. 我拥有一个有趣的童年。它充满了惊喜和乐趣，这一切都是因为我的充满爱意、温柔，却又心不在焉且健忘的母亲。 续写结尾： *Despite Mom's being absent-­minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice Mom, offering a great deal of happiness and unforgettable memories. 尽管妈妈心不在焉且健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈，给了我很多快乐和难忘的回忆。 (2)主题升华式结尾：也称哲理式结尾，即在结尾用富含哲理的语句总结全文，升华主旨，并给人以启发。学生在日常学习中，可以积累一些富含哲理的段落或句子，如果引用得当，不但能深化主题，而且能引人深思，给读者以有益的启迪。 *It turned out that a simple act of kindness not only helped a person in need but also made a difference to the suffering community. 事实证明，一个小小的善举不仅帮助了有需要的人，而且为有困难的社区带来了改变。 (3)自然而然的结尾：顺应文章发展的自然趋势结束全文。自然式结尾简单、自然，使文章结构完整。 *Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. When the sun went down, we returned home happily. 钓鱼累了，我们躺在河岸边，沐浴在阳光下。当太阳落山的时候，我们高兴地回家了。 2．四个高分结尾句型 (1)It turned out to be...；not only...but (also)... *It turned out to be a rewarding experience, where Mary not only harvested friendship, but also became a better version of herself. 事实证明这是一次有益的经历，在这次经历中，玛丽不仅收获了友谊，而且成了更好的自己。 (2)One thing is for certain—主句；which引导非限制性定语从句 *One thing is for certain—Mary benefited greatly from this experience, which gave her the sweet taste of friendship and happiness. 有一件事是肯定的——玛丽从这次经历中受益匪浅，这让她尝到了友谊和幸福的甜蜜滋味。 (3)强调句型 *It is through this painful experience that Mary learned the value of friendship and enjoyed genuine happiness in life. 正是通过这次痛苦的经历，玛丽才认识到友谊的价值并享受到生活中真正的幸福。 (4)含蓄虚拟句 *But for this valuable experience, Mary wouldn't have learned the importance of friendship. 要不是这次宝贵的经历，玛丽就不会了解到友谊的重要性。 3．不同主题语境的高分结尾 人与自我：往往归结到个人的积极改变和成长。 *But for this unforgettable experience, I would never have realized the importance of helping others in times of hardship. 要不是这次难忘的经历，我永远不会意识到在困难时帮助别人的重要性。 *Only then did I realize that it was bravery and determination that could conquer all the difficulties. 那时我才意识到，正是勇敢和决心可以战胜一切困难。 *Hard work paid off eventually. 努力工作最终会有回报。 人与社会：往往归结到人与人之间的和谐相处或者互帮互助。 (1)亲情 *One thing is for certain—what matters most in the world is family. 有一件事是肯定的——世界上最重要的是家庭。 (2)友情、师生情 *As the famous saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” 正如那句名言所说，“患难见真情。” *It is through this unforgettable experience that I have realized that my teacher is the person who offers me unconditioned support. 正是通过这次难忘的经历，我意识到我的老师是无条件支持我的人。 (3)社会温情 *From then on, I was determined to try my best to help more people in the future to make our world a better place. 从那时起，我决心尽我最大的努力在未来帮助更多的人，使我们的世界变成一个更加美好的地方。 *One thing is for certain—any act of kindness, however small, can make a difference. 有一件事是肯定的——任何善举，无论多么渺小，都能产生影响。 *Love is one thing that really deserves to be passed on from one to another. 爱是一件真正值得传递的东西。 (4)救援脱困 *What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any trouble as long as we stay calm. 多么难忘的一次经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困难都是有办法解决的。 *From the experience, we can learn that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference. 从这次经历中，我们可以了解到，良好的急救知识可以起到真正的作用。 人与自然：往往归结到人与自然和谐共生、相互依存。 *From then on, I realized that only in this way can we live in harmony with nature. 从那时起，我意识到只有这样我们才能与自然和谐相处。 *Humans and nature depend on each other. Let's live in harmony with the natural world and protect nature, for it is our home and future. 人与自然相互依存。让我们与自然世界和谐相处，保护自然，因为它是我们的家园和未来。 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 [1]Maxwell stared at the huge pile (堆) of oranges. His neighbor, Mr. Foy, had hired him to move them all into the storage room. He had been working for an hour, yet the pile seemed hardly any smaller. [2]Just then, his friend Jon showed up. Jon saw the situation and quickly realized the job would take quite a while. He suggested Maxwell use a wheelbarrow (手推车) to transport the oranges, which would speed things up. Maxwell's eyes lit up as he heard the idea. [3]They found a wheelbarrow behind the storage room. Right away, they started loading the oranges into the wheelbarrow, pushed it into the storage room, and piled the oranges inside. With their joint efforts, the seemingly tough task was completed in a short time. [4]Maxwell looked at Jon, whose face was red and sweaty from all the work. Maxwell was glad Jon came to help him today. He felt really thankful. Jon had given him a great idea and then helped with the job. Maxwell thought he was so lucky to have a friend like Jon. He decided that if Jon ever needed help, he would be there right away. [5]Then, Maxwell rushed to tell Mr. Foy that he had finished. “Maxwell, I can't believe you've managed to finish all this work on your own in such a short time！” Mr. Foy said in surprise. Appreciating the boy's nice work, he gave Maxwell a $20 bill happily. [6]Maxwell looked at the generous payment Mr. Foy had handed him. He felt a bit uneasy about taking all the money. He pictured Jon's red sweaty face and his brilliant wheelbarrow idea. He knew that Jon had played an important role in getting the job done quickly. Although Jon hadn't mentioned anything about payment, Maxwell felt he couldn't keep it a secret. 注意：续写词数应为150个左右。 After some hesitation, Maxwell decided to tell Mr. Foy the truth.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Taking the money, Maxwell went directly to Jon's house._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一审——审要素 【When & Where】 [1]Maxwell stared at the huge pile of oranges. His neighbor, Mr. Foy, had hired him to move them all into the _____________． 【Who】 Maxwell, Mr. Foy (his neighbor)，Jon (Maxwell's _________) storage room friend 【What & Why】 [1]His neighbor, Mr. Foy, had hired him to move them all into the __________________. He had been working __________________, yet the pile seemed hardly any _________． [2]Just then, his friend Jon _________． [2]He suggested Maxwell use a wheelbarrow to ___________________, which would speed things up. storage room for an hour smaller showed up transport the oranges [3]With their joint efforts, the seemingly tough task was completed __________________． [5] __________________ the boy's nice work, he gave Maxwell a $20 bill happily. [6]He knew that Jon had played an important role in ___________________________ quickly. Although Jon hadn't mentioned anything about __________________, Maxwell felt he couldn't keep it a _________． in a short time Appreciating getting the job done payment secret 【How】 [2]Maxwell's eyes _________ as he heard the idea. [4]Maxwell was _________ Jon came to help him today.He felt really _________． [4]Maxwell thought he was so _________ to have a friend like Jon. [6]Maxwell looked at the _________ payment Mr. Foy had handed him. He felt a bit _________ about taking all the money. lit up glad thankful lucky generous uneasy 二定——定主题：正能量原则 It turned out that, through this experience, their ______________ deepened with ___________and ___________． friendship honesty fairness 三构思——QA模式：构思每段三个微情节 根据第一段段首句可知，下文续写内容为： [Question 1] What did Maxwell do? [Answer] ___________________________________________________ Maxwell told Mr. Foy that Jon helped him. [Question 2] How did Mr. Foy feel? [Answer] _________________________________________________ _______________ [Question 3] What did Mr. Foy do then？(和第二段段首句衔接) [Answer] _________________________________ He was impressed by Maxwell's honesty and Jon's effort and wisdom. He offered another $20 for Jon. 根据第二段段首句可知，下文续写内容为： [Question 1] How did Maxwell feel? [Answer] ______________________ He felt very excited. [Question 2] What did Maxwell do? [Answer] ______________________ [Question 3] What moral would the story express? [Answer] ____________________________________________________ _______________________________ He gave Jon the $20. It turned out that, through this experience, their friendship deepened with honesty and fairness. 四成文——梳理思路，完成正文 特别关注语言协同： 模仿原文的亮点词汇、语法结构和亮点句型。 After some hesitation, Maxwell decided to tell Mr. Foy the truth.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Taking the money, Maxwell went directly to Jon's house.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： After some hesitation, Maxwell decided to tell Mr. Foy the truth. Gathering his courage, Maxwell approached Mr. Foy. “Mr. Foy，” Maxwell began, his voice filled with nervousness. “My friend Jon actually helped me, and it was his idea to use the wheelbarrow, which allowed us to finish the work so fast.”(微情节一：麦克斯韦鼓足勇气说出事情经过) Mr. Foy nodded in approval of Maxwell's honesty. He was also impressed by Jon's effort and wisdom.(微情节二：福伊先生被麦克斯韦的诚实和乔恩的机智打动) “It seems that Jon deserves part of the payment too.” Mr. Foy then kindly offered another $20 so that Maxwell could give to Jon as a sign of gratitude.(微情节三：福伊先生额外给了20美元) Taking the money, Maxwell went directly to Jon's house. Upon arriving, Maxwell could hardly contain his excitement. Maxwell handed Jon the $20, explaining it was his fair share.(微情节一：麦克斯韦将报酬交给乔恩) Surprised, Jon initially refused, saying he hadn't helped for money. Maxwell insisted, emphasizing Jon's idea and hard work deserved recognition. Ultimately, Jon had no choice but to accept the money.(微情节二：盛情难却，乔恩最终收下报酬) He was deeply moved by Mr. Foy's recognition and Maxwell's honesty. “You're a good friend，” Jon said, smiling. Maxwell felt proud, knowing he'd done the right thing. It turned out that, through this experience, their friendship deepened with honesty and fairness.(微情节三：两人友谊更加深厚) $