摘要:
该高中英语课件聚焦写作规范训练,涵盖应用文写作与读后续写两大模块。通过“A Moving Experience”征文活动导入应用文写作,结合范文展示叙事结构与情感表达,再以故事续写任务衔接,搭建从基础表达到综合逻辑构建的学习支架。
其亮点在于融合真实情境任务与文本续写实践,通过范文示范与任务驱动,培养学生语言能力(如应用文的情感传达、读后续写的逻辑连贯)和思维品质(分析故事线索、创造合理情节)。例如应用文范文以“老人吃剩饺后捐款”的细节传递主题,读后续写引导学生根据前文“雨夜路滑”“卡车司机出现”等线索推断合理发展。这既帮助学生提升写作实践能力,也为教师提供可直接应用的教学范例,提高课堂效率。
内容正文:
写作规范练(二)
(建议用时:40分钟)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,你校英文报正在举办主题为“A Moving Experience”的征文活动,你有意参加。请你用英语写一篇短文,讲述一次让你感动的经历,并谈谈你的感悟。
注意: 写作词数应为80个左右。
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One possible version:
Last Sunday, while eating in a restaurant, I noticed a bowl full of dumplings on the table next to ours.They must have been left by someone.Just then, an old man entered.Judging from his clothes, I believed he was poor.He saw the dumplings left on the table.Looking shy, he sat down and started eating.The others around looked at him, puzzled, and some even laughed.However, after finishing the dumplings, he went up to the donation box on the counter, put one hundred yuan in it and left, which left us all shocked and ashamed.
We shouldn't judge a person just from his or her appearance.A person with a loving heart is the richest in the world.
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Having just graduated from high school, I was 18 and living with my parents in Denver, Colorado. That summer I decided to take my most daring trip ever. I wanted to go to Utah to visit a dear friend I'd known for four years. My father had given me a small street motorcycle as a graduation present, and I worked out a plan to ride it to Utah.
I was to get an early start, ride all day, and arrive at my destination (Paradise, Utah) that evening. Arriving in Ogden, Utah in the late afternoon, I looked at my map for another route to save time. A small line on the map indicated an unimproved road heading northeast—straight to the little town of Paradise!
Of course I headed for it. The road quickly became a single, dirty lane, winding through fields. As long as it was dry, surely I'd be OK. Suddenly, I lost control of the motorcycle and it fell over. I didn't get hurt because I wasn't going fast, but I was puzzled and couldn't figure out what had happened.
It was dark. While my headlight showed me where the road was, I couldn't tell its condition, only that it was smooth. I started again, and once more fell over after a few feet. I looked around and found myself alone in a high mountain field. For the first time during the trip I started to get worried. A few minutes later I couldn't believe what I saw—a pair of headlights bouncing along the road toward me, coming from the direction I was heading for!
The man driving the small truck stopped and asked if I needed any help. Not the type to bother others with my problems, I said I thought I could get where I was going on my own, but I thanked him for the offer.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
He explained the problem—a rain had fallen during the day._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I asked him why he was out there in the field at such a late hour.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
He explained the problem—a rain had fallen during the day. I then realized why the road was so slippery and muddy. After another unsuccessful attempt I finally accepted his help, and we loaded the motorcycle into the back of his truck. He turned around and took me back in the direction he came from. He asked me where I was going and I told him I was going to visit a friend in Paradise. It happened that he had planned to go back to Paradise that evening.
I asked him why he was out there in the field at such a late hour. He told me he was a roadman. He had a feeling that he needed to go down the road, but wasn't sure why. Then he found me. It took us the better part of an hour to make it to the next paved road. All the while I was amazed that he was able and willing to be there. He was so kind that he drove me to my friend's home, which made me less worried. I will always be grateful to him for going out of his way on a dark night in the middle of nowhere to help me.
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