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Section Ⅵ Writing
[课时跟踪检测] (标题目配有教师讲评课件)
一、写作专项训练
Ⅰ.靓表达升级(6分)
1.There is an ancient tower in the center of the city which dates back to the Ming Dynasty.(现在分词短语作定语)
→There_is_an_ancient_tower_in_the_center_of_the_city_dating_back_to_the_Ming_Dynasty.
2.Vancouver is surrounded by mountains and the Pacific Ocean.It has a mild and pleasant climate.(用定语从句升级)
→Vancouver,_which_is_surrounded_by_mountains_and_the_Pacific_Ocean,_has_a_mild_and_pleasant_climate.
3.Zhongshan is located in the south of the Pearl River Delta.Zhongshan is a beautiful garden city.(过去分词短语作状语)
→Located_in_the_south_of_the_Pearl_River_Delta,_Zhongshan_is_a_beautiful_garden_city.
Ⅱ.微语境写作(共9空,18分)
1.What's_more (此外), I intend to show_you_around (带你参观) my city where you can visit Daming Lake, Baotu Spring and some other places_of_interest (名胜古迹).
2.The new library, situated_in_the_center_of_our_campus (位于我们校园的中心), will greatly benefit all students.
3.Dali is a beautiful place with_pleasant_weather_and_rich_culture (气候宜人,文化丰富), attracting_the_eyes_of_the_world (吸引着全世界的目光).
4.Kunming is among the_most_famous_historical_and_cultural_cities (最著名的历史文化名城) and one of the top tourist cities in China.Due to its pleasant climate, plateau scenery, ageold history, diverse_ethnic_customs (多样化的民族风情), and unique plants and animals, Kunming attracts domestic_and_foreign_tourists (国内外的游客) all year round.
Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分)
假定你是红星中学高三的学生李华。你班交换生Jim将要参加“学在中国”留学生汉语演讲比赛,来信向你咨询。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一个演讲话题;
2.说明推荐的理由;
3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Jim,
I'm glad to know that you'll take part in the “Studying in China” speech contest. I'd like to give you some suggestions.
I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you've attended. The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history. Besides, since you've taken the courses systematically, you're sure to have a deep understanding of them.
To do it well, I think you should choose impressive examples to gain the recognition of the judges. Moreover, you have to practice your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently. Speaking skills are also needed, for they can help maximize the effectiveness of your speech.I really hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写(25分)()
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Rahul was a hardworking and determined individual who believed that success could only be achieved through perseverance and effort.He had big dreams of becoming a renowned musician, and he knew that it would require countless hours of practice and dedication to reach his goal.
Rahul's family was not wealthy, and they couldn't afford to buy him a musical instrument.However, Rahul's unwavering determination pushed him to find a solution.He began working odd jobs in the village, doing chores for neighbors, and saving every penny he earned.He even started waking up early in the morning to help the local farmers with their work.
After months of saving, Rahul finally had enough money to buy a secondhand guitar. It was old and worn, but to Rahul, it was a treasure.He spent hours each day practicing, strumming (弹拨) the strings and experimenting with different melodies.His fingers grew calloused (起茧的), but he never complained.Instead, he saw it as a sign of progress, a proof of his hard work.
Despite his talent, Rahul faced numerous challenges along his journey.People would often discourage him, telling him that he was wasting his time pursuing his dreams.But Rahul remained determined, using their skepticism as fuel to work even harder.
One day, news spread throughout the village about a music competition being held in the nearby city.The competition promised the winner a chance to perform in front of renowned musicians and industry professionals.Rahul saw this as an opportunity to showcase his talent and prove to everyone that hard work pays off.With great anticipation, Rahul prepared for the competition.He practiced day and night, finetuning his skills and perfecting his performance.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Finally, the day of the competition arrived.
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Days went by, and the results of the competition were announced.
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参考范文:
Finally, the day of the competition arrived.He traveled to the city eagerly.As Rahul took the stage, his heart was filled with a mixture of nerves and excitement.The crowd falling silent, he strummed the strings of his guitar with passion, pouring his heart and soul into his music.The audience was fascinated by his performance, and applause erupted as he finished his piece.Rahul had given it his all, and he felt a sense of accomplishment regardless of the outcome.
Days went by, and the results of the competition were announced.Rahul won the first prize.The judges praised his hard work, dedication, and the emotional connection he established through his music.He was awarded a scholarship to a famous music academy, where he could further better his skills and learn from accomplished musicians.Rahul's story spread far and wide, inspiring others with his determination and devotion.He became a symbol of the power of hard work and the belief that dreams can come true with unwavering effort.
二、阅读拓展训练
阅读七选五
First established as a state capital in 229 CE, Nanjing, China, has long been one of the country's most important (and largest) inland river ports and is recognized as one of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China.
Why do people love it?
__1__ Xuanwu Lake provides a peaceful escape right in central Nanjing, with temples, teahouses and restaurants located in nearby Xuanwu Lake Park. Unlike city walls in Beijing or Xi'an, Nanjing's old wall isn't geometric and instead contours the lake and mountain areas. __2__ The sense of surprise delivered by these central natural expanses, like the Yangtze River, Zhongshan Mountain range and Xuanwu Lake, is what new residents love about living here.
What's it like living here?
For those who miss the foods of home, there's no shortage of foreign restaurants and cafes that cater to expats (旅居国外者) and international students. __3__ Nanjing has an efficient and expansive metro system that covers most of the city, but cycling is also an option, with bikefriendly wide and straight roads.
Residents rave about how affordable Nanjing is compared to other Chinese cities, especially when it comes to housing. __4__ That said, the weather can be rough in winter, since most buildings lack central heating. Summers are also very hot and humid.
In general, a certain traditionalism and conservatism can be felt more strongly here than in other Chinese cities, which can make it more of a challenge to make local friends quickly. The language and cultural barrier tends to be high. __5__
A.Getting around the city is easy.
B.The city also has plenty of lowkey and livemusic clubs.
C.As a result, natural sites often appear in unexpected areas of the city.
D.Rent for an 85m2 apartment is more than 50% cheaper than in Beijing and 65% less than in Shanghai.
E.If you want to experience more of Nanjing's past, Lao Men Dong is a mustsee.
F.So learning and speaking Mandarin Chinese can help with integrating into the local community.
G.Though home to 8.3 million people, Nanjing is one of the few big cities left in China to offer easy access to peace.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了南京的历史和受欢迎的原因。
1.选G 根据后文“Xuanwu Lake provides a peaceful escape right in central Nanjing, with temples, teahouses and restaurants located in nearby Xuanwu Lake Park.”可知,G项符合语境。其中peace与后文provides a peaceful escape形成呼应关系。
2.选C 根据后文“The sense of surprise delivered by these central natural expanses, like the Yangtze River, Zhongshan Mountain range and Xuanwu Lake, is what new residents love about living here.”可知,C项符合语境。后文是对C项的具体解释。C项中的unexpected areas与后文中的The sense of surprise delivered by these central natural expanses形成呼应。
3.选A 根据后文“Nanjing has an efficient and expansive metro system that covers most of the city”可知,A项符合语境。后文是对A项的具体解释。A项中的easy与后文Nanjing has an efficient and expansive metro system相呼应。
4.选D 根据前文“Residents rave about how affordable Nanjing is compared to other Chinese cities, especially when it comes to housing.”可知,D项符合语境,具体解释上文。D项中的more than 50% cheaper than in Beijing and 65% less than in Shanghai与前文中的affordable形成呼应关系。
5.选F 根据前文“The language and cultural barrier tends to be high.”可知,F项符合语境,前后句为因果关系。F项中的learning and speaking Mandarin Chinese与前文The language and cultural barrier相呼应。
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