内容正文:
Unit 3 ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION
人教版2019选择性必修第三册
Write a proposal on environmental issues
应用文:写一则环境问题倡议书
读话题写作文高二下
Learning objectives
At the end of class, you will be able to:
1. Learn the causes and effects of water pollution in the Li River and solutions to it;
2. Learn to determine the organization of a proposal on environmental issues and cause-effect relationship;
3. Learn some language features of a proposal on environmental issues.
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新课导入
语言输入
活用课文
目 录
CONTENTS
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实战演练
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技巧点拨
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新课导入:
引出话题
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⑴Nature, to be commanded, must be obeyed.—Francis Bacon
欲驾驭自然必先顺之。——弗朗西斯·培根
⑵We won’t have a society if we destroy the environment.—Margaret
如果我们毁坏了环境,社会也就不复存在。——玛格丽特
⑶Only to obey nature in order to overcome nature. —Charles Darwin
要征服自然只能遵从自然。——查尔斯·达尔文
⑷Nature is kind of a loving mother, but also a butcher in cold blood.—Victor Hugo
自然不仅是位慈爱的母亲,还是个冷血的屠夫。——维克多·雨果
名言潮语
The greenhouse effect is the rise in temperature that the Earth experiences because certain gases in the atmosphere trap energy from the sun. Without these gases, heat would escape back into space and Earth’s average temperature would be about 60°F colder. Most greenhouses look like a small glass house. Greenhouses are used to grow plants, especially in the winter. Greenhouses work by trapping heat from the sun. The glass panes(面板) of the greenhouse let in(让……进来) light but keep heat from escaping. This causes the greenhouse to heat up(变热), much like the inside of a car parked in sunlight, and keeps the plants warm enough to live in the winter. The Earth’s atmosphere is all around us. It is the air that we breathe. Greenhouse gases in the atmosphere behave much like the glass panes in a greenhouse. Sunlight enters the Earth’s atmosphere, passing through the blanket of greenhouse gases. As it reaches the Earth’s surface, land, water, and biosphere(生物圈) absorb the sunlight’s energy. Once absorbed, this energy is sent back into the atmosphere. Some of the energy passes back into space, but much of it remains trapped in the atmosphere by the greenhouse gases, causing our world to heat up. The greenhouse effect is important. Without the greenhouse effect, the Earth would not be warm enough for humans to live. But if the greenhouse effect becomes stronger, it could make the Earth warmer than usual. Even a little extra warming may cause problems for humans, plants, and animals.
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[探索发现]
1.What is the greenhouse effect?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
2.Why is the greenhouse effect important?
______________________________________________________________________________________________.
Global warming refers to an average increase in the earth’s temperature which leads to climate change
Such as increased industry, agriculture, the cutting down of forests, the increase in transport and the burning of fuels
语言输入:
跟着课文练布局
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Introducing the Topic
Describing the
________________
Presenting some
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Presenting further sollutions(result)
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
Para. 4
Reading for the structure and main idea of each para.
problem(causes)
actions(measures)
Detailed reading
Para1 Introducing the topic
What:
Water pollution
Where:
The beautiful Li River in China’s Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region
Purpose:
Looking at the problem of water pollution and some actions that have been taken to deal with it.
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Para. 2 Describing the problem
Draw a mind map to show the factors that caused the pollution.
Causes
Increasing number of tourists
Tourists throwing rubbish in water
Tour boats throwing cooking oil in water
More chemicals for crop production going into water
Local population rose to meet tourism demand =more household waste
The number of commercial and industrial enterprises rose= more waste
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Measures
Read para.3 and draw a mind map to show the measures taken to
deal with it.
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construction of waste water treatment facilities
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collection and transport of household waste
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closing or moving the polluting enterprises
setting up strict regulations
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new rules
media
carrying out regular inspections and fines for abuses
Para3 Presenting some measures
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Para4 Presenting further solutions
What are the further solutions?
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活用课文:
跟着课文学词汇
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1.As we cannot ________________________________________, a campaign is to be launched to appeal to people to protect the surroundings. 由于无法容忍人们乱扔垃圾,我们将发起一场活动呼吁人们保护环境。(tolerate) (倡议书)
2.We had fun in the beach, picking up ________________shells. 我们在沙滩上玩得很开心,捡了许多贝壳。(dozen)(日记)
3.______________________________________________, our life is becoming more colourful. 因为互联网越来越普及,我们的生活变得更加丰富多彩。(now that) (投稿短文)
4. The “natural” greenhouse effect __________ the fact that heat from the sun enters the atmosphere and warms Earth’s surface as shortwave radiation. “自然”温室效应是指太阳的热量进入大气层,并以短波辐射的形式使地球表面变暖。(refer)
活用写作词汇
tolerate people throwing garbage around
dozens of
Now that the Internet is increasingly popular
refers to
5. The concert _________________ to a worldwide television audience estimated at one billion tomorrow morning. 明天上午这场音乐会将向全世界大约十亿电视观众转播。(broadcast) (活动介绍)
6. (2022·全国乙改编) The more regularly they can _________________, the more railway safety, reliability and ontime performance will be improved. 检查次数越多,铁路的安全性、可靠性和准时性就越提高。(inspect)
7. ___________________ the Students’ Union, I’m writing to invite you to give us a speech on Chinese history. 我代表学生会写信邀请您给我们做一个关于中国历史的演讲。(behalf)(邀请信)
活用写作词汇
will be broadcast
be inspected
On behalf of
活用课文:
跟着课文学佳句
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细节描写
1.毫无疑问,这次活动不仅使我们掌握了一些实用的技能而且
增强了我们的环保意识。(doubt) (报道)
_______________________________ the activity not only equipped us with some practical skills but also raised our awareness of environmental protection.
2.总之,我们有责任使我们的地球更美丽。
In a word, _____________________ make our Earth more beautiful.
原:There is little doubt that Earth is getting warmer and warmer(see the graph).毫无疑问,地球是在变得越来越暖(见图表)。
原:It is our responsibility to seize every opportunity to educate everyone about global warming, along with its causes and impacts, because this is the most serious issue affecting all of us on this planet. 抓住每一个机会,对所有人进行全球变暖及其成因和影响的教育,这是我们的责任,因为这是影响我们地球上所有人最严重的问题。
There is no doubt that
it is our responsibility to
细节描写
3.正如你所知道的,世界地球日正在被全世界庆祝,使之成为最受欢迎的节日之一。
As you know, The World Earth Day is celebrated by people all over the world, ______________________________________.
4.因此可以认为,室内环境中的大气悬浮颗粒物是空气环境对人类健康影响的最重要因素之一。
Therefore, ______________________ ambient PM indoors has significant effects on human health.
原:There is strong and comprehensive evidence that the rise in temperature has led to an increase in extreme weather and natural disasters worldwide, not only causing serious damage, but also costing human lives. 有充分而全面的证据表明,温度升高导致全世界范围内极端天气和自然灾害增加,不仅造成了严重的破坏,而且还造成了人员伤亡。
原:With these measures, it is believed that the beauty of the Li River will be preserved for generations to come. 相信通过这些措施,漓江之美将得以世代相传。
making it one of the most popular festivals
It is believed that
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技法点拨:
如何写倡议书
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①Many beautiful rivers and lakes have been polluted by the waste water from factories, and the polluted water even does harm to people as well as other living things. 许多美丽的河流和湖泊已经被工厂的废水污染,被污染的水甚至对人和其他的生物有害。
②The water of Qingjiang River in the past was clear to the bottom, calm without waves. 过去的清江水清澈见底,平静无浪。
③I’m appealing to you to pay attention to proper and frequent hand washing. 我呼吁大家注意正确洗手且经常洗手。
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①And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution. 我们应该回收、减少和重复使用一些东西,因为这样能节省钱,也能减少污染。
②Sadly, there are still some people who pay no attention to the outcome. 悲哀的是,仍旧有一些人无视这个结果。
③If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the Earth will become much more beautiful. 如果每个人都为保护环境作出贡献,地球将变得更加美丽。
2.亮点出彩篇中句
①I believe in the near future, the Earth will become more beautiful! 我相信在不久的将来,地球会变得更加美好!
②We need to work together to protect the Earth and its ecological environment. 我们要共同努力一起保护地球和地球上的生态环境。
③In a word, it is our responsibility to make our Earth more beautiful. 总之,我们有责任使我们的地球更美丽。
④Let’s join hands and take action immediately. 让我们携起手来,立即采取行动。
⑤Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment. I’m convinced our efforts will eventually pay off. 让我们共同努力创建一个绿色和谐的环境,我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。
3.韵味无穷结尾句
Dear__________(倡议对象),
Have you noticed that__________________(现象)? To_______________________(倡议的目的), I’d like to call on everyone to_________________________(内容). First of all, we should____________________________(具体做法1). Besides, we are supposed to___________(具体做法2). What’s more, it would be a good idea______________________________(具体做法3).
If everyone makes a contribution to________________________________(再次倡议), it will become__________(美好展望). Let’s join hands and take action immediately.
(发起组织/人)
(发倡议的日期)
4.写作模板
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写作实践:
触类旁通
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你校将以六月八日世界海洋日(the World Oceans Day)为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.海洋的重要性;
2.保护海洋的倡议和措施。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
典例赏析
1、审题定调
本写作要求以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,写一篇短文。内容包括海洋的重要性以及保护海洋的倡议和措施。此类短文一般用第三人称,时态为一般将来时,但有时要根据实际情况有所变化。
2、谋篇布局
针对本篇写作任务,我们可以列出以下提纲:
第一部分:开门见山,引出话题:关注海洋保护;
第二部分:具体介绍海洋的重要性以及保护海洋的倡议和措施;
第三部分:恰当结尾(呼吁)。
第一步:明确要求、布局谋篇
1. 被称为
2.(节日等)恰逢(某日)
3. 重视
4. 不可否认,毋庸置疑……
5. 对……有深远的影响
6.是某人做/应该做……的时候了。
第二部:搜索话题词汇
be referred to as
fall on+日期
attach importance to(介词) doing sth/sth.
there is no denying that+句子
have a profound impact on
It is high time that sb did/should+do...
7.采取有效的措施做某事
8. 提高……的意识
9. 共同努力
10. 和谐生存
11. 对某事承担责任
第二部:搜索话题词汇
take effective measures to do sth
raise one’s awareness of sth
collective efforts
live in harmony with
shoulder one’s responsibility for sth
(一)完成句子
1. 海洋被生态学家称为地球的肺,在生物圈中发挥着至关重要的作用。
The oceans _________________by ecologists as the lungs of our planet, and they have played a crucial role in the biosphere(生物圈).
2.随着6月8日世界海洋日的临近,我们应高度重视海洋保护。
With the World Oceans Day falling on 8 June approaching, ______________________________________ ocean conservation.
3. 不可否认,海洋对我们的生活有着深远的影响。
__________________________________ oceans have a profound impact on our life.
4.首先,海洋不仅为我们提供了充足的食物,而且维持了自然的平衡,从而确保了人类的生存和发展。更重要的是,海洋无疑提供了我们呼吸的大部分氧气。
First and foremost, oceans offer not only us sufficient food, but also they maintain the balance of nature, _____________________________________ humanity. What’s more, oceans undoubtedly provide most of the oxygen we breathe.
第三步:巧用话题词汇句式
are referred to
great importance should be attached to
There is no denying that
thus ensuring the survival and development of
(一)完成句子
5.随着污染日益严重,现在是采取有效措施保护海洋的时候了。
_____________________ effective measures should be taken to protect the oceans with the pollution becoming increasingly serious.
6. 只有通过集体努力,我们人类才能与大自然和谐相处。我呼吁大家承担起保护海洋的责任。
We humans can live in harmony with our mother nature only with collective efforts. I _______________________________________________ the protection of oceans.
第三步:巧用话题词汇句式
It is high time that
call on everyone to shoulder their responsibility for
(二)斟酌词句,靓化表达
7. 把句①升级为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句
___________________________________________________________________________________________________.
8. 把句④升级为含有“not only ... but also ...”的倒装句
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
9. 把句⑥升级为only放句首的倒装句。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
第三步:巧用话题词汇句式
The oceans, which are referred to by ecologists as the lungs of our planet, have played a crucial role in the biosphere(生物圈).
8.First and foremost, not only do oceans offer us sufficient food, but also they maintain the balance of nature, thus ensuring the survival and development of humanity. What’s more, oceans undoubtedly provide most of the oxygen we breathe.
Only with collective efforts can we humans live in harmony with our mother nature. I call on everyone to shoulder their responsibility for the protection of oceans
The oceans, which are referred to by ecologists as the lungs of our planet, have played a crucial role in the biosphere(生物圈). With the World Oceans Day falling on 8 June approaching, great importance should be attached to ocean conservation.
There is no denying that oceans have a profound impact on our life. First and foremost, not only do oceans offer us sufficient food, but also they maintain the balance of nature, thus ensuring the survival and development of humanity. What’s more, oceans undoubtedly provide most of the oxygen we breathe. It is high time that effective measures should be taken to protect the oceans with the pollution becoming increasingly serious. To begin with, raising people’s awareness of protecting oceans is a top priority. In addition, strict laws are supposed to be passed to prevent the oceans from being polluted.
Only with collective efforts can we humans live in harmony with our mother nature. I call on everyone to shoulder their responsibility for the protection of oceans.
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