Unit 2 Healthy lifestyle 读后续写作课件-2025-2026学年高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第三册

Unit 2 HEALTHY LIFESTYLE 人教版2019选择性必修第三册 读后续写 读话题写作文高二下 Learning objectives At the end of class, you will be able to： 1.指导学生准确确定文本、时空、人物和事由； 2.指导学生谋篇布局，故事情节衔接自然，叙事完整； 3.指导学生遣词造句，言语得体。 1 2 3 活用课文 技法点拨 目 录 CONTENTS 写作实践 3 活用课文： 跟着课文学词汇 01 4 1.With grateful tears hanging in his eyes, he insisted on ________________________________________________. 他眼中满是感激的泪水，坚持给我们大笔钱酬谢我们的帮助。(reward) (读后续写情感描写) 2.Bernard made up his mind to follow their examples to be a reliable person whom others can ________________.伯纳德决心以他们为榜样，成为一个别人可以依靠的人。(rely)(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写) 3. I ___________________________________________________ to support the family. 我决心肩负起养家的责任。(make up one’s mind)(2021浙江卷读后续写) 活用写作词汇 rewarding us with a lot of money for helping him rely on for help made up my mind to shoulder my own responsibility 4.Many of us try to change bad habits quickly, and if we are not successful straight away, we often _____________________ and give up. 我们中很多人试图迅速改变不良习惯，一旦没有立刻成功，我们往往变得悲观，继而放弃。(pessimistic)(读后续写情感描写) 5. It was not polite to ___________________________________________at night. 晚上用吵闹音乐打扰邻居是不礼貌的。(disturb) 6. I decided to _____________________ my life and find other ways to relax. 我决心要掌控自己的生活，寻找其他放松方式。(control) 活用写作词汇 become pessimistic disturb your neighbours with loud music take control of 活用课文： 跟着课文学佳句 01 7 细节描写 1.每当我感到压力和疲惫的时候，我热心的朋友总是激励我坚持我最初的目标。 _______________________________________, my warm­hearted friend always stimulates me to insist on my initial goal. 2.养成良好的学习习惯，就能提高学习效率。 _________________________ and you will improve your learning efficiency. 原：Whenever I went out with friends, I brought snacks from home, things that didn’t have any added sugar: fruit, nuts, dried meat, etc. 无论何时我和朋友出去，我都会从家里带一些零食，一些没有添加任何糖分的东西：水果、坚果、肉干等。 原：Make small changes each day and your lifestyle will become healthier. 每天做一些小的改变，你的生活方式会变得更健康。 Whenever I am stressed out and worn out Form good habits of learning 细节描写 3.面对这样一个充满压力的挑战，我感到身心俱疲。 Faced with such a stressful challenge, I _______________________________. 4.汤姆专心于他的工作，所以他忘了告诉我开会的时间。 _________________________ , Tom forgot to inform me of the time of the meeting. 原：Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! 玩起来很开心，但玩完之后我觉得更累了！ 原：Absorbing stress effectively, however, you must be sure to do something that completely takes your mind off everything else. 然而，要有效地吸收压力，你必须确保做一些能让你完全忘却一切的事情。 felt worn out physically and mentally Absorbing himself in his work 活用课文： 跟着课文学细节 01 10 描写类型 描 写 典 例 心理描写 1.For example, we could try to replace a negative routine with something more positive. 2.Many of us try to change bad habits quickly, and if we not successful straight away, we often become pessimistic and give up. 3.I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. I sleep soundly at night now. 4.After starting high school, I felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games. 健康生活 方式 1.I made up my mind to change two things in my life: to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly. 2.After that I stopped buying all the sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks that I used to have every day. 3.Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. 描写类型 描 写 典 例 不良生活方式 1.For example, some of them become involved in tobacco or alcohol abuse, which can lead to physical and mental health problems. 2.I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. 3.Most worrying, though, I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches, too. 4.Shortly after that, I began to skip meals and play through the night. 5.It was affecting my schoolwork and my health, and I felt quite depressed. 改变和反思 1.To change bad habits is never easy, even with many attempts. 2.To facilitate a positive change in our bad habits, we must first examine our bad habit cycles and then try to adapt them. 3.To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline and repeatedly take many small steps. 4.However, there is no “magic pill” or “delete button” that will help you. 5.At the end of the camp I heard, “Change the world by changing yourself.” This stimulated my motivation. 6.So after the camp, I realised that it was very, very important to adjust my lifestyle. 7.I decided to take control of my life and find other ways to relax. 8.So remember, to free yourself from stress, try and find something positive to replace it with. 技法点拨： 无灵主语让文章更加细腻 02 13 例1：刚想到这个主意的时候，他的脸上露出了笑容。 普通句：He smiled when he first came up with the idea. 无灵主语句：A smile took hold of him when the idea first came to him. 【评析】同样是表达“他笑了”，比起普通句式中的常见句子，无灵主语句中这种“笑容抓住了他”的拟人化表达，瞬间提升了句子的高级感。 1.无灵主语和有灵谓语 （1）时间/地点/场景类名词+有灵谓语 无灵主语：silence安静；hush沉默；dusk黄昏；dawn黎明，破晓；morning早上；afternoon下午；night晚上等。 有灵动词：see看见；witness见证；find发现；fall降临，进入等。 例2：Then came the big day. 然后盛大的一天来到了。 例3：Last Friday witnessed a heated discussion in our school hall with the theme of “environmental protection”. 上周五在我们学校大厅进行了一场激烈的讨论，主题是“保护环境”。 (2）自然现象类名词+有灵谓语 无灵主语：sun太阳；sunshine阳光；moon月亮；moonlight月光；fog雾，mist薄雾，水气；rain雨；earthquake地震等。 有灵动词：blanket覆盖；come来；bring带来；prevent妨碍，阻止；strike打击，侵袭；threaten威胁等。 例4：An earthquake comes like a thief in the night, without warning. 地震到来，犹如夜贼，毫无征兆。 例5：In the severe winter, another snowstorm attacked the whole world. 寒冬，又一场暴风雪侵袭了整个世界。 2.无灵主语的运用 （3）表示情感状态的抽象名词+有灵谓语 无灵情绪名词：happiness/joy/delight开心快乐；excitement兴奋；surprise/astonishment惊奇，惊讶；shame羞耻，羞愧；anger愤怒；despair绝望；regret遗憾，后悔；sorrow悲伤；horror惊恐；anxiety焦虑；disappointment失望，沮丧；satisfaction满意，满足；puzzlement 困惑，不解；eagerness渴望，cheer欢呼，nervousness紧张等。 有灵动词：erupt爆发；seize侵袭；choke噎住，堵住；flood充满；creep渐渐出现；grip紧抓；give way to让位；wash over洗涤，侵袭；desert丢弃，遗弃；well up涌出等。 例6：Loud cheers erupted from the crowd. 人群中爆发出热烈的欢呼声。 例7：A wave of nervousness washed over him. 一阵紧张的情绪涌上他的心头。 （4）身体部位/音容笑貌类名词+谓语 无灵主语：face脸；laughter笑声；smile微笑；tear眼泪；words话语等。 有灵动词：light up/brighten照亮；linger继续存留；flash闪烁；crumple弄皱等。 例8： Her face brightened when I gave her the present. 我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。 例9：Tears welled up in Lily’s eyes. 泪水从Lily的眼中涌出。 2.无灵主语的运用 (5）表示行为动作的名词+谓语 无灵主语：thought想法；glance一瞥；look表情；idea想法；feeling感受；walk步行；sight视野等。 有灵动词：overwhelm压倒；strike打击，侵袭；arouse 唤起；remind想起；fill...with (使)充满……；change改变；bring带来等。 例10：The story reminds me of a saying that “Never judge a person by his appearance”. 这个故事使我想起来一句谚语“不能以貌取人”。 例11：The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness. 想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中充满了巨大的幸福。 （6）事物类名词+有灵谓语 无灵主语：house房屋；watch手表；car小车；pet宠物等具体事物。 例12：Newly-built wooden cottages line the street, turning the old town into a dreamland. 街道两边分布着新建的小木屋，把旧城镇变成了一个仙境。 例13：The out-of-town shopping centre killed local trade. 城外的购物中心令本地商业难以为继。 2.无灵主语的运用 1.我看着初学走路的女儿,心中充满了无比的喜悦。 ____________________________ as I watched my daughter take her first steps. 2.当我登上飞往欧洲的飞机时,兴奋和期待涌上心头。 ____________________________ inside me as I boarded the plane to Europe. 3.渴望环游世界的愿望促使他辞掉工作，在欧洲背包旅行六个月。 ____________________________him to quit his job and backpack through Europe for six months. 4.盲目的愤怒和沮丧使他无法正常思考。 __________________________________it impossible for him to think straight. 5.当她发现自己独自一人在黑暗和陌生的树林里时，恐惧使她无法动弹了。 __________________ as she found herself alone in the dark and unfamiliar woods. 6.对健康的持续不安让他夜不能寐。 ______________________________________________ him up at night. 7.他的鼓励之言鼓舞了我的精神，给了我继续前进的力量。 ________________________ my spirits and gave me the strength to keep going. 举一反三 Whenever I am stressed out and worn out A feeling of excitement and anticipation bubbled up His desire to travel the world led Blinding anger and frustration made Fear paralyzed her The constant unease about his health keeps His words of encouragement lifted 写作实践： 触类旁通 03 19 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 For years, I visited different social media sites and posted pictures of my grandson, lovely animals and delicious dishes on Facebook. Moreover, I played farm games online. I thought the social media was for fun, but I never expected a post I saw on it could have an important effect on my life. On November 12th, 2018, I was on my way to a conference by plane when I suffered a heart attack. Luckily, there were three doctors on board. Pretty soon, I was given first aid. I survived, but months later, I was still trying to accept what had happened. So I began to record how I survived this incident and my ideas about life on Facebook daily, and started to care about the posts that were not related to fun. One morning in 2019, I saw a friend’s post. She wrote, “Let’s quit anything unrealistic and all activities that do not show your brightest sides for yourself.” The words touched me greatly. That night, I copied them onto a clean piece of paper and taped(粘贴) it to my computer. Actually, I, along with many of my friends, was crazy about farm games then. I thought I needed more-more farms, more crops, and more animals. All were in virtual(虚拟的) form, of course. I had five different farms in five different games. And I spent hours on my farms daily. While taking care of my farms one day, I looked out of the window and noticed the empty land in our backyard. 典例赏析 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para.1: Then I looked at the words on the piece of paper tapped to my computer, lost in thought. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2: Farming the real land was only the beginning, and I started to do more to enrich my real life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 22 第一步：读透文本 22 1.主题分析 本文是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”主题。作者是一位网络游戏爱好者，偶尔在社交媒体上看到的一个帖子，让他的人生发生了改变。作者决定不再玩虚拟农场游戏，而是通过耕种现实农场来丰富自己的生活。 2. 情节梳理：故事要素 即故事的人物、时间、地点、事件的起因、经过和结果，也就是我们常说的“5W1H”。 要 素 内 容 when one day in 2019 where at writer’s home who I(the writer); friends What farm the real land Why A friend’s post touched me and then I noticed the empty land in our backyard. How ? 22 第二步：构建情节 25 1.构思续写两段情节 ①根据续写第一段首句“Then I looked at the words on the piece of paper tapped to my laptop, lost in thought（然后，我看着贴在笔记本电脑上的纸条上的字，陷入了沉思）.”可知，其情节发展可为：思考能否管好真的农场→看到纸条上的话，决定采取行动→开始劳动→照料农场→收获。 ②根据续写第二段首句“Farming the real land was only the beginning, and I started to do more to enrich my real life（在真正的土地上耕种只是一个开始，我开始做更多的事情来丰富我的现实生活）.”可知，其情节发展可为：分享快乐帖子→[高潮]成功帮助朋友放弃虚拟游戏，指导邻居享受真实生活→[结局]纸条被移除→[感悟]生活于现实世界，才能展现生活中光明的一面。 2.续写线索：内心怀疑→受到鼓励→开始劳动→收获→分享→感悟。 思路点拨 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 27 27 Then I looked at the words on the piece of paper tapped to my laptop, lost in thought. Overwhelming puzzle filled my heart(无灵主语) as I said to myself, “Was I able to run the real farm well?” After all, I hadn’t farmed the real land for many years. But staring at the words for a few minutes, I determined to take action. Without any hesitation(心理描写), I unloaded the farm games, stepped into the backyard and began to work(动作链描写). In the next few months, I took care of the farm for hours every day just like what I had done in games. Seeing my crops growing so well, I felt relieved and a big smile spread over my faces(心理描写). Farming the real land was only the beginning, and I started to do more to enrich my real life. Sometimes, I posted some articles and photos about my real farming life on Facebook to share fun with my friends. With time going on, not only did I succeed in helping my friends quit their unrealistic games and turn to the real world, but I guided my neighbours to love their real life(倒装句). After about half a year, the words on the piece of paper tapped to my laptop were removed. However, the words left a deep impression on me(无灵主语). Only by living in the real world could one show and achieve his or her brightest side in life(感悟升华). 佳作展现 At the end of the lesson, I am able to： 1 2 3 4 5 plan the layout of the story( the plot is natural, and the narrative is good) use appropriate words and sentences to express what I want to write an continuation writing properly. 自我评价 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “You signed us up for what?” Lucinda’s eyes widened as Jamie grinned at her. “A charity bike ride. It’d be fun!” She stared at him open-mouthed. “Fun? But I haven’t ridden a bike for years, Jamie. And I hate exercise! How long is this ride?” Lucinda could feel her muscle shrinking at the mere thought of it. “Only 20 kilometres.” Lucinda swiped the brightly coloured leaflet advertising the bike ride from her husband’s hand. “Twenty kilometres? That’s a half marathon, Jamie!” She tossed the leaflet back at him. “Well you can count me out. I’m not fit enough to run five minutes round the block, let alone hours on a bike.” “But you will be in a couple of months. I thought we could train for it together.” Jamie patted his beer belly. “I’m not exactly in great shape at the moment. And you’ re always saying we don’t get to spend enough time together!” He gave her his best winning grin. A smile fell across Lucinda’s lips. It was true, she was always saying that lately. Though spending her weekends cycling was not exactly what she’d had in mind. A wave of sadness spun through her heart. The past few months had been...difficult. She had lost her job and was struggling to find a new one. Being at home, scrolling through job adverts and waiting for interview replies, had left her feeling stuck. Jamie had been working extra hours to support financially, but that only added to her guilt. Despite trying to stay positive, life had somehow skidded to a stop. “I’m not sure,” Lucinda sighed. “It’s not a race, but a joy ride, Lucinda.” Jamie reassured her, nudging her playfully. “Plus, I’ve already rented us a tandem bike(双人自行车)!” “A tandem?” Lucinda’s eyes flashed with horror. “Are you mad?” She stared at him. “You’re not even joking, are you?” Doubts crept into her mind as she imagined the challenges of coordinating their movements on a shared bike. 实战演练 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para1: Actually, the first training session did not go well. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para2: It seemed cycling had truly got their lives moving forward again. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 实战演练 Actually, the first training session did not go well. The moment they picked up the bicycle, the sky filled with drizzle and Lucinda’s mood turned dark. “This is stupid, Jamie,” she scowled, “What on earth are we doing here?” Jamie, however, beamed brightly and held the bicycle steady for her to climb on. Along the track, they were greeted with friendly greetings and cheers from Sunday morning walkers. And there was Jamie, always by her side, softly encouraging and cheering her. As the hours passed, they were both sweating buckets. Gone with the sweat were Lucinda’s groans and concerns. Weeks slipping by, Lucinda found herself actually looking forward to their weekend rides. Her muscles grew stronger and their progress became evident, instilling a newfound sense of hope and optimism. It seemed cycling had truly got their lives moving forward again. Jamie was in quite good shape, his belly tight now. Last week Lucinda received happy news out of the blue—a job offer from one of her many applications and interviews! Finally, the big day came. Lucinda was surprised by the bustling scene: friends, families, spectators and a crazy collection of cyclists—some in fancy dress, others in serious cycle gear. As they waited, Jamie glanced over his shoulder, “I’m really proud of you, you know.” Lucinda grinned, “For the job offer, or this?” Jamie smiled, “Both. You never gave up, even when things seemed impossible.” “And you never gave up on me. Now look at us!” she laughed. With the whistle buzzing and horns blaring, they joined the stream of enthusiastic cyclists and flew along amid the thunderous cheers of the crowd. At that moment, Lucinda felt her heart spinning with happiness. 佳作展现 Thank you for your listening $