Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册教师用书word（人教版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦“人物介绍类写作”核心知识点，通过“写作架构—写作手法—要点构思—逻辑衔接”的学习支架，系统梳理从人物生平、典型事迹到品质评价的写作脉络，强调借具体事例突出科学家品质，如钱学森的爱国事例、霍金的坚韧事迹等。 该资料以“科学精神”为主题，融合语言能力（逻辑衔接词运用、句式表达）、思维品质（事例与品质关联分析）和文化意识（科学家精神与家国情怀）。通过“学练结合”设计，课中提供结构模板与手法指导辅助教学，课后借助练笔任务和词块积累帮助学生查漏补缺，提升人物介绍写作能力。

Section Ⅴ　Writing 写作项目——Write about what makes a great scientist 本单元的写作任务是介绍科学家的优秀品质，涉及著名科学家的品格和素养以及他们献身科学的精神，属于“人物介绍”类写作。写作时要围绕人物组织材料，做到主题鲜明，详略得当，并注意结构的完整性。 一、学写作架构 阅读课文，总结本课的篇章结构如下： 二、学写作手法 此类文章常借助一些写作手法突出人物的优秀品质，如运用侧面描写、对比、衬托等手法来突出人物的形象。如第一篇课文第一段中借用《钱学森的故事》一书的作者的话从侧面概述了钱学森的成就和地位。第六段叙述了钱学森的兴趣与爱好，丰富了作为科学家的个人魅力，衬托了他的学识渊博。 三、学要点构思 人物介绍类文章通常选取典型事例、重要成就，用以突出人物的个性和品质，即“借事记人”。 离开具体的事例，人物的性格、品质和精神面貌都无从表现出来。因此，选材一定要认真仔细，安排材料时还应分清主次，详略得当。如第一篇介绍钱学森的文章中采用了一些事例来展现他的个性和品质： Qualities Supportive examples patriotic switch his major to aviation; Qian returned to China in 1955 Knowledgeable became a pioneer in American jet and rocket technology； conduct important research into rocket propulsion；founded the Jet Propulsion Laboratory determined did not let that discourage him from taking on the challenge outstanding； creative developed the Dongfeng missiles；contributed to the successful launch of China's first man­made satellite has a wide range of interest his strong interest in other things；his deep appreciation for art 四、学逻辑衔接 “人物介绍”类文章通常使用一些衔接词语介绍人物的生平，以使得文章连贯流畅。如第一篇表示时间和空间关系的衔接词语有born in Shanghai in 1911、 after the Songhu Battle broke out in 1932、 over the course of the 1930s and 1940s等；表示转折关系的衔接词语有however、 nevertheless等；表示因果关系的衔接词语有because等。 Write an essay about the scientific spirit ——写一篇关于科学精神的文章 第一步：构思谋篇 体裁 “人物介绍”类文章 时态 以一般过去时为主 人称 以第三人称为主 写作要点 首先，对此人进行简要的介绍，比如生平、事迹、职业等。其次，挑选出此人一生中比较重要的事迹进行描写，要尽可能详细，因为这影响人们对他的整体评价。 最后，对此人进行客观的评价，包括其人格、贡献以及闪光点的评价。 注意事项 在介绍人物时，尤其是着重于介绍其精神品质的文章，要选取该人物身上最典型的事例，用以突出人物的个性和品质。 第二步：要点表达 第一部分：点明主题：介绍人物　 如何点明要描述的对象？ 1．Gui Haichao, an outstanding professor at Beihang University, is_a_role_model for many young students.桂海潮，北京航空航天大学的杰出教授，是许多年轻学生的榜样。 2．It_is_well­known_that Stephen Hawking is one of the most famous and gifted scientists in physics. 众所周知，斯蒂芬·霍金是物理学领域最著名、最有天赋的科学家之一。 第二部分：具体介绍人物的情况　 1．出生和教育 Born_in_November_1986,_Gui Haichao received his doctor's degree from Beihang University in July 2014.桂海潮出生于1986年11月，于2014年7月获北京航空航天大学博士学位。 2．人物成就 As_a_result_of_his_diligence,_he became a doctoral supervisor in September 2017 and executed the Shenzhou ⅩⅥ manned flight mission in May 2023, becoming the first astronaut with glasses to fly in space. 由于勤奋，他于2017年9月成为博士生导师，并于2023年5月执行了神舟十六号载人飞行任务，成为第一位戴着眼镜在太空飞行的宇航员。 3．借助典型事迹展现个性和品质 ①At the age of 21, Hawking came down with a kind of disease known as ALS, and his doctor believed he would have only two years to live.It_is_a_great_wonder_that_he_has_survived. 21岁时，霍金患上了一种名为ALS的疾病，他的医生认为他只能活两年。他能活下来真是个奇迹。 ②Over the following years, he overcame_great_technical_difficulties.Through his tireless efforts, he successfully developed the first hybrid rice. 在接下来的几年里，他克服了巨大的技术困难。经过他的不懈努力，他成功地培育出第一代杂交水稻。 第三部分：对人物的评价　 1．His story inspires_me_to_work_harder and pursue my dreams.He is truly a_role_model_for_me_and_many_others. 他的故事激励我更加努力地工作，追求梦想。他真的是我和其他许多人的榜样。 2．It_is_from_him_that I realize what I am struggling for is not just for myself, but the happiness of the whole world.(强调句型) 正是从他身上我意识到，我不仅仅是为了自己，也是为了全世界的幸福而奋斗。 [针对练笔]　 假定你是李华，你校英语报正在征稿，要求介绍一位改变世界的物理学家。请你用英语写一篇短文介绍霍金并投稿。 根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文。 Stephen Hawking is one of the greatest physicists with international fame. He ①was_born_on_8_January,_1942_in_the_UK (1942年1月8日出生于英国). Stephen Hawking ②showed_great_interest_in_science (对科学表现出极大的兴趣) as a child. He graduated from the University of Oxford, and got his doctor's degree in the University of Cambridge, ③where_he_worked_as_a_professor_and_did_some_research (在那里他担任教授并做一些研究), making great achievements. He ④published_many_works (出版了许多著作), among which A Brief History of Time, The Universe in a Nutshell and The Grand Design are very famous. Stephen Hawking is an outstanding physicist, ⑤whose_courage,_talent_and_humour_inspire_people_all_over_the_world (他的勇气、才华和幽默激励着全世界的人)． 一、介绍人物的常用词块 1．self­sacrificing adj.　　　　 自我牺牲的 2．knowledgeable adj. 博学的；知识渊博的 3．patriotic adj. 爱国的 4．multiple qualities 多重品质 5．a household name 一个家喻户晓的名字 6．a pioneer in ... ……方面的带头人/先驱/先锋 7．make up one's mind to do/be determined to do 决心做 8．make a difference 有影响；起重要作用 9．have a great impact on 对……有重大影响 10．scientific spirit 科学精神 11．overcome/get over many difficulties 克服许多困难 12．famous/well­known at home and abroad 国内外著名的 13．in high spirits 兴高采烈；情绪高涨 14．have a gift/talent for 有……的天赋 15．set a good example to 为……树立好榜样 16．speak highly of 高度赞扬 17．devote/commit oneself to 致力于 18．devote one's life/time/energy/attention to把某人的生命/时间/精力/注意力投入于…… 19．serve the people heart and soul 全心全意为人民服务 20．be qualified for 适合；胜任 二、介绍人物的常用表达 1．To become a good scientist, you are bound to be creative and hard­working. 2．The most important is that you must love science and be full of curiosity. 3．A real scientist must be good at observation and develop the ability of independent thinking. 4．It's important to be prepared for any challenging failures in your work. 5．A good scientist is someone who always wants to find out answers and asks many questions. 6．He can become an outstanding scientist due to his strong interest in many things. 7．When he was a boy, he showed great interest in science. 8．The reason why he became successful was that he dreamed of what others were afraid to dream about. 9．On the way to becoming a great scientist, he never lost heart when faced with tough difficulties. 10．Gifted and determined, he was able to make great contributions despite his illness. 11．The most important quality a scientist has is perseverance, as many of the experiments will fail. 12．He is honored/regarded/considered as ... 13．He makes great contributions to .../sets an example to ... 14．Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. 三、描述科学精神的精彩语段 1．Isaac Newton (艾萨克·牛顿) Newton totally changed how we see physics with his laws of motion and gravity.Even when things got tough, he kept on learning about optics and math.His way of doing science and always wanting to know more really set the standard for how we study the world today. 2．Marie Curie (玛丽·居里) Curie was super brave and did amazing things studying radioactivity, even though people back then didn't think women should be scientists.She worked really hard and found radium and polonium, which helped a lot in medicine.Her never­give­up attitude shows us what true scientific spirit is all about. 3．Albert Einstein (阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦) Einstein totally changed how we understand the universe with his crazy ideas about relativity and quantum stuff.Even when people doubted him, he didn't stop.He showed us that being curious and thinking hard can unlock all kinds of secrets about the world. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $