专题13 书面表达（期中专项训练）五年级英语下学期（外研版三起）

专项13 书面表达 01 解题小技巧 02【题型一】书面表达 解题小技巧 书面表达考查词句运用和简单写作能力，掌握以下技巧可快速写出规范小作文： 一、核心解题四步法 （一）审清要求，定方向 · 圈出写作主题、必用信息、字数要求，确定人称（I/He/She/It）和时态（一般现在时）。 · 明确要写的内容：如动物特征、外貌、喜好等。 （二）套用模板，搭框架 · 直接用高频基础句式，不用自创复杂句： · 介绍动物：This is… → It is a/an… → It has got… → It likes… · 介绍外貌：He/She is… → His/Her… is… → He/She has got… · 介绍喜好：I like… → My… likes… （三）结合提示，填内容 · 把图文 / 题目给出的关键词填入模板： · 特征：has got big eyes/long hair · 外形：is tall/cute/brown and white · 喜好：likes bananas/rice （四）检查细节，不出错 · 单词拼写正确，不抄错。 · 主谓一致：He/She/It 后用 likes/has got，I 后用 like/have got。 二、避坑小提醒 · 只用课本学过的词，不写生僻词。 · 一句话只表达一个意思，句子简单通顺即可。 · 严格按题目要求写，不遗漏图文提示的信息。 三、速记口诀 · 先审要求定主题，套用模板搭结构； · 关键词汇填进去，简单通顺最稳妥； · 拼写语法查三遍，规范书写拿高分。 【题型一】书面表达 （一） 书面表达 假如你是Tom，下面的六幅图片是你五年前和五年后生活的变化，请以“Changing”为题目来描述一下这些变化吧。 要求：1.语法正确，书写规范、工整，标点使用正确，条理清楚，语句通顺； 2.开头和结尾已经给出，再根据图片和提示词写出不少于5句话。 提示词：by school bus, write letters on the paper, send emails on the computer, live in a small house, live in a big house Five years ago Now          Changing Hi! My name is Tom. Five years ago, I went to school on foot. Now ____________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My life is changing. What about you? （二） 请参照表格内容，用第一人称写一写20年前到现在的生活都发生了哪些变化。 要求：1. 根据自己对今昔生活的理解，可以选择方框内的提示词汇进行描述，也可以用自己喜欢的语言描述。 2. 注意选择合适的时态。 3. 句意连贯，不少于5句话。 Twenty years ago Now house a small house a big house food enough food delicious food shopping not many shops many supermarkets work worker(工人) nurse going to work by bike by car Life has changed a lot in the past twenty years. Twenty years ago, I lived in a small house, but now I live in a big house. ____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 请以“China is changing”为题，根据下列图片写一写三十年前和现在的生活。 要求：语法正确，语句通顺、流畅，无单词拼写错误，不少于40词。 参考词汇：supermarket, enough food China is changing Life was very different in China thirty years ago. At that time, _________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （四） 请2023年5月30日，神舟十六号发射成功。Daming要给Lingling写信介绍航天员景海鹏四十年前和现在的不同。请根据表格帮他完成信件吧。 Word bank: taikonaut(中国航天员), famous, change forty years ago now identity(身份) student taikonaut age(年龄) 17 years old 57 years old residence(居住地) Yuncheng, Shanxi Beijing Dear Lingling, I’m very glad to receive your email. Last night, I watched a programme about Jing Haipeng. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Your friend, Daming （五） 写作天地。 王玲和丽萨(Lisa)正在谈论他们昨天三餐的情况，请你根据表格提示写一篇短文，不少于30个单词。 参考句型：Wang Ling had... for...; Lisa had... for... Name breakfast lunch dinner Wang Ling Lisa _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 书面表达。 小勇正在英国度假，下表介绍了他昨天三餐所吃的食物。假设你是小勇，请写一篇小短文，介绍一下自己吃了什么。 要求：1. 语句通顺，条理清晰。2. 不少于5句话。 Breakfast milk, two eggs, bread Lunch fish and chips Dinner two hamburgers, sausages ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 书面表达。 为了丰富学生们的课余生活，学校建了一个大型图书馆。假如你是图书馆管理员，请根据下表内容，以“Our school library”为题介绍一下学校的图书馆。要求不少于5句话。 Place Shelf A Shelf B Shelf C Shelf D Shelf E Books sports animals food art computers Our school library _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 作文。 同学们，你们学校的图书馆里有什么书？分别是怎么摆放的？请你以My school library为题，向大家介绍一下吧！ 要求：1. 条理清晰，意思明确，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 2. 不少于5 句话。 My school library _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ （九） 今天同学们来到了一家商店，这里有四款崭新的书包。现在，请你写出四句话，表明你喜欢哪一个书包及理由。首词已给出。              the blue bag       the red bag     the green bag     the yellow bag 参考词汇：big, light, beautiful, easy to carry, wheels I like _____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十） 书面表达。 明天就是Sam的生日了，Ms Smart想要送给他一份礼物。以下三个包，你会给Ms Smart推荐哪一个呢？选择一个，说出你的理由。不少于5句话。 Bags Features (特点) yellow and black, light, small, one pocket blue and brown, nice, big, cool, three pockets blue and red, big, light, four wheels, easy to carry _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案及解析 第 1 页 共 6 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【题型一】 （一）例文： Changing Hi! My name is Tom. Five years ago, I went to school on foot. Now I go to school by school bus. Five years ago, I wrote letters on the paper. But now I can send emails to my friends on the computer. Five years ago, my family lived in a small house. But now we live in a big house. My life is changing. What about you? 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Changing”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述五年前和五年后生活的变化。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：by school bus坐校车，wrote letters on the paper在纸上写信，send emails on the computer在电脑上发送电子邮件，live in a small house住在一个小房子里，live in a big house住在一个大房子里 参考句型：Now I go to school …；Five years ago, I/my family …；But now I/we … （二）范文：     Life has changed a lot in the past twenty years. Twenty years ago, I lived in a small house, but now I live in a big house. Back then, we only had enough food to eat. However, now we can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. There were not many shops twenty years ago. But now there are many supermarkets around. I was a worker twenty years ago, and I went to work by bike. Now, I am a nurse and I go to work by car. I really enjoy my life. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求写一写20年前到现在的生活发生的变化。人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时和一般过去时，同时注意单词和句子数量符合要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：enough food足够的食物，all kinds of各种各样的，delicious food美食，twenty years ago二十年前，supermarkets超市，worker工人，by bike骑自行车，nurse护士，by car开车 参考句型：Back then, we only had…；However, now we can…；There were…；But now, there are…；I was…；Now, I am… （三）示例： China is changing Life was very different in China thirty years ago. At that time, we lived in small and old houses. We didn’t have enough food. There were small shops. There were small schools. Now there are many big and tall buildings. We have lots of delicious food. There are big supermarkets. There are big and beautiful schools. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“China is changing”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述三十年前和现在的生活。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般过去时态并要符合单词字数要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：live in住在(某地)，enough足够的，shop商店，tall buildings高楼，delicious美味的，supermarket超市 参考句型：We didn’t have …； There were/are …；We have … （四）范文： Dear Lingling, I’m very glad to receive your email. Last night, I watched a programme about Jing Haipeng. Life is changing. Forty years ago, he was a student. He was 17 years old. He lived in Yuncheng, Shanxi. He is a famous taikonaut now. He is 57 years old. Now he lives in Beijing. How about you? Your friend, Daming 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求记介绍航天员景海鹏四十年前和现在的不同，注意时态的运用，在描述他四十年前的情况时，时态是一般过去时，描述现在的状况时，时态是一般现在时，描述景海鹏时用第三人描述。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：taikonaut中国航天员，famous著名的，change改变。 参考句型：I’m very glad...；Forty years ago, ...；He was...；He lived...；He is ... now.；He is...等。 （五）范文： Wang Ling had a hamburger and milk for breakfast. She had noodles and sausages for lunch. She had dumplings for dinner. Lisa had eggs for breakfast. She had two sandwiches for lunch. She had fish and chips for dinner. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格提示写一篇短文。然后再阐述一日三餐。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：hamburger汉堡包，milk牛奶，noodles面条，sausage香肠，dumplings饺子，egg鸡蛋，sandwich三明治，fish and chips炸鱼薯条 参考句型：Wang Ling/Lisa had … for ...； She had … for … （六）范文： I’m Xiaoyong. I am in England now. I ate delicious food yesterday. I had two eggs, some bread and milk for breakfast. For lunch, I had fish and chips. I ate two hamburgers and some sausages for dinner. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求假如自己是小勇，根据表格介绍一下昨天自己吃了什么。注意文章主要为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：England英国，ate吃，delicious美味的，bread面包，fish and chips炸鱼薯条，hamburgers汉堡包，sausages香肠 参考句型：I’m/I am …； I …；For …, I ... （七）范文：                                                            Our school library There is a big library in my school. There are many books in it. The books about sports are on Shelf A. The books about animals are on Shelf B. The books about food are about Shelf C. The books about art are on Shelf D. The books about computers are on Shelf E. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Our school library”为题，介绍一下学校的图书馆。然后再阐述书的位置。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：sports运动，animals动物，food食物，art美术，computers电脑 参考句型：There is/are …； The books about … are on ... （八）范文：                                                                                My school library     This is my school library. There are some books about English, Maths, Chinese, art, science, sports, animals and food. The books about English, Maths, Chinese, art and science are on Shelf A. The books about sports are on Shelf B. The books about animals and food are on Shelf C. The librarian is very kind. I like my school library. Will you come to visit it? 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求以My school library为题，向大家介绍一下学校的图书馆里有什么书？分别是怎么摆放的？时态是一般现在时态，人称是第三人称，同时注意句子数量的要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：English英语，Maths数学，Chinese语文，art美术，science科学，sports运动，animals动物，food食物，on在……上面 参考句型：There are some books about...；The books about...are on Shelf... （九）范文：     I like the green bag. It is big. It has wheels. It is easy to carry. 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求写出四句话，表明你喜欢哪一个书包及理由。时态是一般现在时，人称是第三人称和第一人称，同时注意句子数量的要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：big大的，wheels轮子，easy容易的，carry携带 参考句型：I like...；It is...；It is... （十）示例： The yellow and black bag is the best. It’s light and small. It will be easy for Sam to carry. And it has got one pocket. Sam will like it very much. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格提示给Ms Smart推荐一个包，然后说出理由。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：best最好的，light轻的，easy容易的，carry携带，pocket口袋 参考句型：... is the best.； It’s …；It will be …； And it has got …；Sam will ... $