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专题09 书面表达
主题01 电子邮件
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市河北区·期中)
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件,向他讲述你班同学周健的感人故事。
(1) 周健的长发留了两年多。
(2) 人们常常在背后议论他的长发,有时候还会嘲笑他。不过他从来不觉得丢脸。
(3) 上周,周健去了一家理发店。理发师剪短了他的头发,并把头发给他。
(4) 周健把头发寄给了市儿童医院。
(5) 周健帮助了患癌儿童。他的头发足够做二顶假发。
(6) 你认为……
提示词:the City Children’s Hospital市儿童医院
要求:
(1) 词数:80词左右。
(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Zhou Jian.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市第二十八中学·期中)
假期即将来临,你打算如何度过一个有意义的假期呢?假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Linda想要了解你的假期安排,请根据内容要点,给她写一封电子邮件,告诉她你的假期计划。内容要点:
(1)学习方面:多读书提高英语 (2)运动方面:打篮球、游泳等保持健康
(3)娱乐方面:看电影,拜访朋友 (4)你的期待……
注意:
(1)内容必须包含所有要点信息;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不得透露个人信息。
(4)70词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Linda,
How is everything going? The holiday is coming. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
主题02 演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市英语红桥区第一学区·期中)
假如你上周参加了学校的运动会,在长跑比赛中发生了一件使你难忘的事情。在运动会总结会上,你讲述了事情的经过并表达了自己的感受。请你根据以下提示,用英文写一篇发言稿。
1. 一开始紧张,感到不舒服;
2. 跑步时胃痛,摔倒在地;
3. 同学加油,老师鼓励,不放弃;
4. 最后冲过终点线,尽管没有获奖,但为自己感到骄傲;
5. 表达自己的感受。
要求:(1) 词数:70词左右;
(2) 短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:不舒服的awful
Hello, everyone,
I’m very pleased to speak here and I’d like to talk about what happened in the school sports meeting last week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市南开区天津市五十中学·期中)
“我运动我快乐,我运动我健康”。假设你是Li Hua,你所在的学校将举行以“My Favourite Sport”为题的演讲比赛,请你根据以下问题撰写一篇演讲稿,介绍自己最喜欢的运动。
(1). What’s your favourite sport?
(2). How do you like this sport?
(3). How often do you do this sport?
(4). What did you do to be good at this sport?
(5). What benefits can you get from this sport?
提示:
… makes me feel...
I believe that...
要求:
1.词数:80词左右(文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
2.文章要点齐全且使用提示信息,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
My Favourite Sport
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to give a talk here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
Passage 3
(24-25七年级下·天津市部分区·期中)
假设你叫王林,你将参加一个题为“My Best Friend”的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下提示写出你的演讲稿。要点如下:
(1) 你的朋友叫Mike,来自澳大利亚,个子很高,金色的头发。
(2) 两年前他来到你们学校,没有朋友。
(3) 后来你们俩经常一起玩,互相帮助。
(4) ……参考词汇:金色的blonde
要求:
(1) 字数为70词左右。
(2) 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,条理清楚,语句通顺,书写规范。
My Best Friend
I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them.
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主题03 人与自我——健康
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市实验中学滨海学校·期中)
1.保持健康对于我们每个人来说都非常重要,我们应该意识到健康的生活方式的重要性。请你以“How to Keep Healthy”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈初中生要如何保持健康。
写作要点:
(1)多吃水果和蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品;
(2)我们应该多做运动,比如:跑步、游泳;
(3)早睡早起,确保有足够的睡眠;
(4)每天保持快乐,这可以帮助我们好好学习;
(5) 我认为……
要求:1.词数80—100词;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数;3.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:确保make sure;充足的enough
How to Keep Healthy
It’s very important for us to stay healthy. In order to keep fit, I’d like to share some ideas._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市红桥区第二学区部分校·期中)
新一期的校园杂志正在面向广大学生进行征稿,请你根据下面的要点提示,以“How to eat healthily”为题,写一篇短文,要求条理清晰,语句通顺。要点提示:
1.饮食均衡,少吃垃圾食品;
2.多喝水,少喝软饮料;
3.一日三餐,按时吃饭。
4.你认为……
要求:1.把所给的信息表达完整,意思连贯,语法正确。
2.可适当发挥,词数60词左右。
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:软饮料 soft drinks 饮食均衡 balanced diet
How to eat healthily
Nowadays, many middle school students have bad eating habits. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题 04 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津大学附属中学·期中)
我们的生活中处处充满着爱,有父母的爱,有老师的爱,有同学的爱,有朋友的爱……请以“Love Around Me(我身边的爱)”为题,写一篇短文。内容要点如下:
爱你的人
爱的表现
父母
为你做早餐;送你上学……
老师
传授知识;照顾你……
同学
一起学习;和睦相处……
朋友
在网上交流;分享快乐与烦恼……
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Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
请根据以下内容完成一篇书面表达,文章要包含以下所有要点,词数在60—80词之间 (不包含文章开头内容)。
上周六下午,你去家附近的公园散步,在欣赏美景时,你突然看到一个小男孩正在哭泣。经过询问,你了解到:
1. 小男孩名叫李华,在公园迷路了,找不到妈妈了;
2. 他因为太难过,无法清楚地说话;
3. 你和他交谈,并讲笑话让他放松;
4. 然后,你带他去了公园的服务台,向工作人员寻求帮助;
5. 工作人员发布了通知,很快,他的妈妈找到了他;
6. 你感到很开心,你认为帮助别人是……
参考词汇:information desk工作台; staff 工作人员
Make an Announcement
Last Saturday afternoon, I took a walk in the park near my home. While enjoying the beautiful views, I suddenly noticed a little boy crying.
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Passage 3
(24-25七年级下·天津河东区四十五中学·期中)
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏,征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示,为该专栏投稿。
(1)上周学校举办艺术节,李明参加了歌唱比赛。
(2)起初,他感到不舒服,太紧张;甚至失去信心。
(3)老师鼓励他不放弃,同学们给他加油打气。
(4)最终李明成功地完成比赛。虽然没有得奖牌,但为自己感到骄傲。
(5)你觉得……(写出两点感受)
参考词汇:
singing competition歌唱比赛
要求:
(1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
(2)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节。
(3)词数60-80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
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主题01 电子邮件
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市和平区·期中)
假如你是李华,最近你的英国笔友Mike经常情绪低落,他向你求助,询问如何保持心情愉悦。请你根据以下要点提示,给他回复一封邮件。
要点提示:(1) 享受美食,美食给予人幸福与美好回忆;多吃蔬果,有益健康;
(2) 坚持运动,运动给予人们快乐与勇气;重要的是不放弃;
(3) 帮助他人,参加志愿者活动;助人使人心灵富足。
要求:(1) 词数:70词左右(邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
(2) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:志愿者活动volunteer activities
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in low spirits these days. I’d like to share some good ways to help you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these ways will be useful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市宁河区·期中)
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友David用英文写一封邮件,介绍一下自己的生活。
(1)每天妈妈起得很早,准备早餐。
(2)中午奶奶做午饭,很可口。
(3)中午休息一小时,爷爷会准时叫醒你。
(4)晚上父母做的菜多一些,全家人很开心。
(5)你认为……
要求:
(1)词数:60-70个。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How is everything going?
I have a happy life.
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Do you have something to share? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
主题02 演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市南开区 南开中学·期中)
假如你是李华,你所在的学校将进行一次主题为“‘健’证美好,活力开讲”的演讲比赛,请同学们分享对健康生活各方面的建议,引导大家构建自己的健康生活愿景。请就此活动准备一篇演讲稿,要点如下:
(1)很多学生经常吃快餐,并且缺乏锻炼;
(2)有的学生沉迷于游戏,学习的时候注意力不集中,情绪也不好;
(3)同学们应该均衡饮食,多参加体育活动,并保持积极向上的心态;
(4)补充一点你的看法。
参考词汇:缺乏 lack (v.)
参考句型: I believe that...
要求:
(1)词数80—100个;
(2) 开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(4) 书写规范、工整。
Dear Friends,
I am Li Hua. I notice that many students ________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Let’s start living a healthy life now!
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市西青区中北中学·期中)
假如你是红星中学的李华,你们学校在上星期举行了篮球比赛,其中一班和二班的比赛非常精彩,让你印象深刻,请你以“A sports moment”为题写一篇英语演讲稿介绍此次比赛,请根据提示内容以及你的补充完成这份发言稿,词数80-100单词,不要写出学校、班级等个人信息。
要点:1、上星期你们学校举行了篮球比赛,你看到一班和二班的比赛。
2、上半场一班20比28输给了二班。更糟糕的是一班主力队员的脚受伤严重。
3、这个主力队员并没有关注他的疼痛,而是继续比赛。
4、他的勇敢的行为激励着一班所有参赛运动员,他们没有一个人失去信心而是继续战斗。
5、在下半场一班又得了25分,最终一班赢了这场比赛。
6、你的补充…… (至少两点)
A Sports Moment
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. As a basketball lover, I will introduce a basketball match ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
(24-25七年级下·天津市西青区富力中学·期中)
假如你是李华,你校正在开展以“我的健康生活”为主题的英文演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,描述你心目中健康的生活方式。
1. 我们要多吃水果和蔬菜,保持均衡的饮食结构,这是健康生活的关键。
2. 多做运动,比如打篮球或跑步。运动能让我们更健壮。
3. 我们应该保持乐观的态度,因为这能够帮助我们更好地应对生活中的挑战。
4. 心中有爱。如果生活中没有爱,就像没有阳光的花园。
5. ……
要求:1. 词数:80词。
2. 题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
My Healthy Lifestyle
Dear teachers and friends,
My name is Li Hua. I am excited to share my ideas about my healthy lifestyle. As junior high students, we _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s live healthily and happily together! Thank you!
主题03 人与自我——健康
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市河西区·期中)
目前,中学生饮食健康问题已经引起社会关注,很多学生因为饮食不当导致营养不良,我们该如何保持饮食健康成了大家普遍探讨的问题。请你谈谈你对如何保持饮食健康的看法。
提示:(1)吃新鲜的蔬菜,水果;
(2) 多喝水;
(3)吃不同种类的食物;
(4) 不吃太多垃圾食物(junk food);
(5) 不喝太多可乐(cola).
要求:(1)条理清楚,行文连贯,要包含上述所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)70个词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep a Healthy Diet
Eating habits are greatly related to our health. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市南开区第二十五中学·期中)
良好的饮食习惯是身体健康的保证。你的饮食习惯是怎样的?请你根据以下要点和要求,以“My Eating Habits”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的饮食习惯。
要点:
(1)你一日三餐吃什么;
(2)你最喜欢的食物和饮料;
(3)你对自己的饮食习惯的评价及后续做法。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数80左右。
My Eating Habits
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主题 04 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市东丽区华新共同体·期中)
学校即将举办春季运动会,为了鼓励同学们积极参加体育锻炼,你校英文杂志“Sports World”专栏开展以“My Favorite Sport”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你根据下列提示内容,按要求介绍一下你最喜欢的体育运动。
要求:
1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.词数70词左右。
My Favorite Sport
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Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市滨海新区塘沽第一中学&塘沽第二中学·期中)
假如你是刘佳,请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文,介绍在过去的一年里你生活中发生的一些事情。不少于60词,可适当发挥。
要点:1.去年春天,爸爸和妈妈给我买了一辆新自行车,我每天都骑着它去上学;
2.去年暑假,爷爷送给我一台电脑,有时候我会用它玩游戏;
3.去年冬天,我经常和朋友一起去滑冰,感到身材匀称;
4.我认为这就是幸福的生活,因为……
提示词:去年春天last spring 去滑冰go skating 感到身体匀称feel fit
要求:(1)词数:60—80词;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,内容可以适当拓展。
Hi, my name is Liu Jia. I want to tell you my life in the past year. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
(24-25七年级下·天津美达菲学校·期中)
假定你是李华,在校学生会工作。即将来你校的交换生David对中国文化非常感兴趣,他向你询问关于学校象棋俱乐部的情况及学习象棋的技巧,请你根据下列提示用英语给他回一封信。
Δ可以于每周五下午在象棋俱乐部上课;
Δ需要学习游戏规则,并多多练习;
Δ从输掉的棋局中汲取经验,提高能力。
参考词汇:strategies(n.策略) chess pieces (n.棋子)
注意:
1. 词数80 ~ 100;
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;
4.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
You asked about our Chinese Chess Club and how to play chess in your letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about these.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you’ll love the game and we can play it later at school.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题09 书面表达
主题01 电子邮件
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市河北区·期中)
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件,向他讲述你班同学周健的感人故事。
(1) 周健的长发留了两年多。
(2) 人们常常在背后议论他的长发,有时候还会嘲笑他。不过他从来不觉得丢脸。
(3) 上周,周健去了一家理发店。理发师剪短了他的头发,并把头发给他。
(4) 周健把头发寄给了市儿童医院。
(5) 周健帮助了患癌儿童。他的头发足够做二顶假发。
(6) 你认为……
提示词:the City Children’s Hospital市儿童医院
要求:
(1) 词数:80词左右。
(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Zhou Jian.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Zhou Jian.
Zhou Jian kept his long hair for over two years, even though many people gossiped or laughed at him. He never felt ashamed. Last week, he finally went to a barber. After cutting his hair, the barber gave it to him. Surprisingly, Zhou mailed his hair to the City Children’s Hospital to help cancer patients. His donation could make two wigs!
I think his act teaches us that true kindness often requires courage. Instead of judging appearances, we should appreciate people’s hearts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示:根据提示写作。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接给出的开头,另起一段;
第二步:详细介绍周建的感人事迹;
第三步:介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①even though尽管
②laughed at him嘲笑他
③Instead of代替,而不是
[高分句型]
①Zhou Jian kept his long hair for over two years, even though many people gossiped or laughed at him. (even though引导的让步状语从句)
②I think his act teaches us that true kindness often requires courage. (that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市第二十八中学·期中)
假期即将来临,你打算如何度过一个有意义的假期呢?假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Linda想要了解你的假期安排,请根据内容要点,给她写一封电子邮件,告诉她你的假期计划。内容要点:
(1)学习方面:多读书提高英语 (2)运动方面:打篮球、游泳等保持健康
(3)娱乐方面:看电影,拜访朋友 (4)你的期待……
注意:
(1)内容必须包含所有要点信息;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不得透露个人信息。
(4)70词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Linda,
How is everything going? The holiday is coming. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Linda,
How is everything going? The holiday is coming. I have some plans to make it meaningful.
First, I will read more English books because I want to improve my English. Besides, I plan to do exercise to stay healthy, like playing basketball and swimming. Also, I will watch some movies and meet my friends for fun. I hope I can relax well and learn something new.
I look forward to sharing more with you next time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给出的开头,直入主题,表明有一些计划以度过一个有意义的假期;
第二步,结合内容要点,详述假期计划;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① want to do 想要做某事
② plan to do 计划做某事
③ look forward to doing 期待做某事
[高分句型]
① First, I will read more English books because I want to improve my English. (because引导原因状语从句)
② I hope I can relax well and learn something new. (省略that的宾语从句)
主题02 演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市英语红桥区第一学区·期中)
假如你上周参加了学校的运动会,在长跑比赛中发生了一件使你难忘的事情。在运动会总结会上,你讲述了事情的经过并表达了自己的感受。请你根据以下提示,用英文写一篇发言稿。
1. 一开始紧张,感到不舒服;
2. 跑步时胃痛,摔倒在地;
3. 同学加油,老师鼓励,不放弃;
4. 最后冲过终点线,尽管没有获奖,但为自己感到骄傲;
5. 表达自己的感受。
要求:(1) 词数:70词左右;
(2) 短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:不舒服的awful
Hello, everyone,
I’m very pleased to speak here and I’d like to talk about what happened in the school sports meeting last week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone,
I’m very pleased to speak here and I’d like to talk about what happened in the school sports meeting last week.
At first, I felt nervous and awful before the long-distance race. During the race, I had a stomachache and fell down. But my classmates cheered for me, and my teacher encouraged me not to give up. With their support, I stood up and kept running. Finally, I crossed the finish line. Though I didn’t win a prize, I felt proud of myself.
This experience taught me that perseverance and kindness are more important than winning.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示:根据提示写作。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接给出的开头,另起一段;
第二步:详细介绍自己参加长跑比赛的经过;
第三步:介绍自己的感受并承接给出的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①cheered for me为我欢呼
②give up放弃
③With their support在他们的支持下
[高分句型]
①Though I didn’t win a prize, I felt proud of myself. (Though引导的让步状语从句)
②This experience taught me that perseverance and kindness are more important than winning. (that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市南开区天津市五十中学·期中)
“我运动我快乐,我运动我健康”。假设你是Li Hua,你所在的学校将举行以“My Favourite Sport”为题的演讲比赛,请你根据以下问题撰写一篇演讲稿,介绍自己最喜欢的运动。
(1). What’s your favourite sport?
(2). How do you like this sport?
(3). How often do you do this sport?
(4). What did you do to be good at this sport?
(5). What benefits can you get from this sport?
提示:
… makes me feel...
I believe that...
要求:
1.词数:80词左右(文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
2.文章要点齐全且使用提示信息,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
My Favourite Sport
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to give a talk here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文:
My Favourite Sport
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to give a talk here. I’d like to talk about my favourite sport.
My favourite sport is basketball. Basketball is not only exciting but also helps me stay healthy. I play it three times a week with my friends after school. To be good at it, I often watched basketball games and practiced hard. When I play basketball, I forget all my worries and feel full of energy. I also learn teamwork because we need to pass the ball and cooperate. I believe that basketball can make me healthy and help me make friends.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山说明最喜欢的运动(篮球);
第二步,描述参与频率、对篮球的看法以及为打好篮球所做的努力;
第三步,阐述打篮球的益处(健康、释放压力、团队合作)。
[亮点词汇]
①three times a week一周三次
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③full of充满
[高分句型]
①When I play basketball, I forget all my worries and feel full of energy.(when引导时间状语从句)
②I also learn teamwork because we need to pass the ball and cooperate.(because引导原因状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25七年级下·天津市部分区·期中)
假设你叫王林,你将参加一个题为“My Best Friend”的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下提示写出你的演讲稿。要点如下:
(1) 你的朋友叫Mike,来自澳大利亚,个子很高,金色的头发。
(2) 两年前他来到你们学校,没有朋友。
(3) 后来你们俩经常一起玩,互相帮助。
(4) ……参考词汇:金色的blonde
要求:
(1) 字数为70词左右。
(2) 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,条理清楚,语句通顺,书写规范。
My Best Friend
I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them.
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【答案】例文:
My Best Friend
I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them. He comes from Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
Two years ago, he came to our school without any friends. Later on, after we got to know each other, we often played together and helped each other. He is good at English and always helps me with it. I teach him Chinese. After school we play tennis. Both of us think it’s good for us to do sports.
This is my best friend. Do you want to make friends with him?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Mike的个人信息;
第二步,介绍Mike过去的情况(没有朋友、互相帮助);
第三步,介绍我和Mike现在的状况(学习、运动);
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①without any friends没有朋友
②help each other互相帮助
③helps sb with sth在某方面帮助某人
④both of us我们俩
[高分句型]
Both of us think it’s good for us to do sports.(it作形式主语)
主题03 人与自我——健康
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市实验中学滨海学校·期中)
1.保持健康对于我们每个人来说都非常重要,我们应该意识到健康的生活方式的重要性。请你以“How to Keep Healthy”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈初中生要如何保持健康。
写作要点:
(1)多吃水果和蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品;
(2)我们应该多做运动,比如:跑步、游泳;
(3)早睡早起,确保有足够的睡眠;
(4)每天保持快乐,这可以帮助我们好好学习;
(5) 我认为……
要求:1.词数80—100词;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数;3.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:确保make sure;充足的enough
How to Keep Healthy
It’s very important for us to stay healthy. In order to keep fit, I’d like to share some ideas._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to stay healthy. In order to keep fit, I’d like to share some ideas.
First of all, we should eat more fruit and vegetables. Don’t eat too much junk food. Then, we should take more exercise, such as running and swimming. It can keep us active and strong. Besides, we should have a good healthy living habit. We’d better go to bed early and get up early every day. Last but not least, try to be happy. I believe that a good mood is a good way to help us study well.
In a word, remember that health is the most important thing in the world. We should take good care of ourselves and pay much attention to our health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,说明健康很重要;
第二步,具体阐述保持健康的方法;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②take care of照顾
③pay attention to关注
[高分句型]
①I believe that a good mood is a good way to help us study well.(that引导的宾语从句)
②In a word, remember that health is the most important thing in the world. (形容词的最高级)
③We should take good care of ourselves and pay much attention to our health.(and连接并列短语)
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市红桥区第二学区部分校·期中)
新一期的校园杂志正在面向广大学生进行征稿,请你根据下面的要点提示,以“How to eat healthily”为题,写一篇短文,要求条理清晰,语句通顺。要点提示:
1.饮食均衡,少吃垃圾食品;
2.多喝水,少喝软饮料;
3.一日三餐,按时吃饭。
4.你认为……
要求:1.把所给的信息表达完整,意思连贯,语法正确。
2.可适当发挥,词数60词左右。
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:软饮料 soft drinks 饮食均衡 balanced diet
How to eat healthily
Nowadays, many middle school students have bad eating habits. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to eat healthily
Nowadays, many middle school students have bad eating habits. If you want to keep healthy, here is some advice. First, it’s important to have a balanced diet and avoid junk food. You should eat as many fruit and vegetables as possible so that you can get enough nutrients. Second, drinking too many soft drinks can cause tooth problems. You should drink more water. Third, you need to have three meals a day and eat on time. Make sure that you have breakfast every morning and don’t eat too many snacks between meals.
In a word, healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind. Let’s keep a healthy diet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,主题为健康饮食;
②时态:全文以“一般现在时”为主,用于陈述事实和提出建议;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括均衡饮食、多喝水少喝软饮料、按时三餐,并允许适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接开头,引出建议;
第二步:具体阐述健康饮食的建议,分点说明均衡饮食、饮水习惯、三餐规律等内容;
第三步:发表观点,强调健康饮食的重要性,并呼吁大家保持健康饮食习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy 保持健康
②balanced diet 均衡饮食
③avoid junk food 避免垃圾食品
④as many...as possible 尽可能多的……
⑤cause tooth problems 导致牙齿问题
⑥in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①If you want to keep healthy, here is some advice. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②You should eat as many fruit and vegetables as possible so that you can get enough nutrients. (so that引导目的状语从句)
主题 04 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津大学附属中学·期中)
我们的生活中处处充满着爱,有父母的爱,有老师的爱,有同学的爱,有朋友的爱……请以“Love Around Me(我身边的爱)”为题,写一篇短文。内容要点如下:
爱你的人
爱的表现
父母
为你做早餐;送你上学……
老师
传授知识;照顾你……
同学
一起学习;和睦相处……
朋友
在网上交流;分享快乐与烦恼……
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【答案】范文:
Love around me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据表格内容进行写作,可适当增添细节,以使行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己身边有很多“爱”;
第二步,分别具体介绍爱自己的人以及爱的表现;
第三步,书写结语,表达对这些人的感恩。
[亮点词汇]
①look after照顾
②get on well with和……友好相处
③not only…but also…不但……而且……
④in one’s spare time在某人的空闲时间
⑤make great progress取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
①There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. (There be句型)
②I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市北辰区·期中)
请根据以下内容完成一篇书面表达,文章要包含以下所有要点,词数在60—80词之间 (不包含文章开头内容)。
上周六下午,你去家附近的公园散步,在欣赏美景时,你突然看到一个小男孩正在哭泣。经过询问,你了解到:
1. 小男孩名叫李华,在公园迷路了,找不到妈妈了;
2. 他因为太难过,无法清楚地说话;
3. 你和他交谈,并讲笑话让他放松;
4. 然后,你带他去了公园的服务台,向工作人员寻求帮助;
5. 工作人员发布了通知,很快,他的妈妈找到了他;
6. 你感到很开心,你认为帮助别人是……
参考词汇:information desk工作台; staff 工作人员
Make an Announcement
Last Saturday afternoon, I took a walk in the park near my home. While enjoying the beautiful views, I suddenly noticed a little boy crying.
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【答案】例文:
Make an Announcement
Last Saturday afternoon, I took a walk in the park near my home. While enjoying the beautiful views, I suddenly noticed a little boy crying.
The boy’s name was Li Hua, he was lost in the park and he couldn’t find his mom. He was too sad to speak clearly. I talked to him and told him some jokes to make him relax. Then, I took him to the park’s information desk and asked the staff for help. The staff made an announcement, and very soon, his mom came to find him.
I felt so happy. I think helping others is the key to happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为 “一般过去时”。
③提示:根据要点进行写作。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接给出的开头,另起一段;
第二步:介绍事情的起因、经过和结果等;
第三步:描述自己帮助别人后的感觉。
[亮点词汇]
①too sad to speak clearly 太悲伤了而说不清楚话
②asked the staff for help寻求工作人员的帮助
[高分句型]
① I think helping others is the key to happiness. (省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25七年级下·天津河东区四十五中学·期中)
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏,征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示,为该专栏投稿。
(1)上周学校举办艺术节,李明参加了歌唱比赛。
(2)起初,他感到不舒服,太紧张;甚至失去信心。
(3)老师鼓励他不放弃,同学们给他加油打气。
(4)最终李明成功地完成比赛。虽然没有得奖牌,但为自己感到骄傲。
(5)你觉得……(写出两点感受)
参考词汇:
singing competition歌唱比赛
要求:
(1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
(2)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节。
(3)词数60-80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Our school held an art festival last week and Li Ming took part in the singing competition. At first, he felt awful and he became so nervous that he couldn’t say a word before performing on the stage. At that time, his teachers encouraged him not to give up and his classmates cheered him up. Finally, he finished the competition successfully. Although he didn’t win a prize, he felt proud of himself.
Seeing that, I felt moved and I believed we are supposed to learn from Li Ming who didn’t give up when facing difficulties. Meanwhile, I would like to be the one who can help and support the people around me, giving them courage and confidence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要交代李明上周参加比赛的背景;
第二步,具体阐述比赛中老师和同学对李明的鼓励;
第三步,总结对这个比赛自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②encourage sb to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③feel proud of感到自豪
[高分句型]
Meanwhile, I would like to be the one who can help and support the people around me, giving them courage and confidence.(who引导的定语从句)
主题01 电子邮件
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市和平区·期中)
假如你是李华,最近你的英国笔友Mike经常情绪低落,他向你求助,询问如何保持心情愉悦。请你根据以下要点提示,给他回复一封邮件。
要点提示:(1) 享受美食,美食给予人幸福与美好回忆;多吃蔬果,有益健康;
(2) 坚持运动,运动给予人们快乐与勇气;重要的是不放弃;
(3) 帮助他人,参加志愿者活动;助人使人心灵富足。
要求:(1) 词数:70词左右(邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
(2) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:志愿者活动volunteer activities
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in low spirits these days. I’d like to share some good ways to help you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these ways will be useful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in low spirits these days. I’d like to share some good ways to help you.
First, enjoy delicious food. It brings happiness and sweet memories. Also, eating more fruits and vegetables keeps you healthy. Second, do exercise every day. Find out your favourite sport and keep doing it. Sports give people joy and courage. But remember not to do too much at one time. Third, try to help others. You can join volunteer activities. Helping people makes your heart full.
I hope these ways will be useful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的关键信息,回复电子邮件,就如何保持健康给出自己的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出电子邮件的主题;
第二步,给出具体建议包括享受美食、坚持运动、帮助他人;
第三步,表达希望这些建议对你有用。
[亮点词汇]
①in low spirits情绪低落
②keep doing sth.保持做某事
③joy and courage快乐和勇气
[高分句型]
①Also, eating more fruits and vegetables keeps you healthy. (动名词作主语)
②But remember not to do too much at one time. (祈使句)
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市宁河区·期中)
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友David用英文写一封邮件,介绍一下自己的生活。
(1)每天妈妈起得很早,准备早餐。
(2)中午奶奶做午饭,很可口。
(3)中午休息一小时,爷爷会准时叫醒你。
(4)晚上父母做的菜多一些,全家人很开心。
(5)你认为……
要求:
(1)词数:60-70个。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How is everything going?
I have a happy life.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have something to share? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How is everything going?
I have a happy life. Every morning, my mom gets up early to prepare breakfast. At noon, my grandma cooks delicious lunch for us. After lunch, I take a one-hour nap, and my grandpa always wakes me up on time. In the evening, my parents cook more dishes, and we enjoy a happy family time together. I think family love makes my life warm and wonderful.
Do you have something to share? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作开头以及要点已给出,考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息,并适当添加内容,使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,以问候语开篇,接着表明自己生活幸福,引出下文对日常生活的描述,点明写作目的;
第二步,按照时间顺序,分别描述家庭成员的活动;
第三步,书写结尾,询问对方的生活情况并表达期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare breakfast准备早饭
②take a one-hour nap睡一个小时午觉
[高分句型]
①I think family love makes my life warm and wonderful.(宾语从句)
主题02 演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市南开区 南开中学·期中)
假如你是李华,你所在的学校将进行一次主题为“‘健’证美好,活力开讲”的演讲比赛,请同学们分享对健康生活各方面的建议,引导大家构建自己的健康生活愿景。请就此活动准备一篇演讲稿,要点如下:
(1)很多学生经常吃快餐,并且缺乏锻炼;
(2)有的学生沉迷于游戏,学习的时候注意力不集中,情绪也不好;
(3)同学们应该均衡饮食,多参加体育活动,并保持积极向上的心态;
(4)补充一点你的看法。
参考词汇:缺乏 lack (v.)
参考句型: I believe that...
要求:
(1)词数80—100个;
(2) 开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(4) 书写规范、工整。
Dear Friends,
I am Li Hua. I notice that many students ________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s start living a healthy life now!
【答案】例文
Dear Friends,
I am Li Hua. I notice that many students often eat fast food and lack regular exercise, which harms both physical health and study efficiency. Moreover, some classmates are addicted to games, causing poor concentration in class and frequent mood swings. To improve this, we should balance our diet with nutritious meals, exercise daily, and maintain a positive attitude.
I believe that getting enough sleep is equally vital, as it boosts energy and mental clarity. Small changes, like walking to school or joining sports clubs, can make a big difference.
Let’s start living a healthy life now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,根据提示,介绍许多同学的现状;
第二步、根据提示,给出自己的建议;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be addicted to沉迷于
②balance our diet平衡我们的饮食
③make a big difference产生很大影响
[高分句型]
I notice that many students often eat fast food and lack regular exercise, which harms both physical health and study efficiency.(that引导的宾语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市西青区中北中学·期中)
假如你是红星中学的李华,你们学校在上星期举行了篮球比赛,其中一班和二班的比赛非常精彩,让你印象深刻,请你以“A sports moment”为题写一篇英语演讲稿介绍此次比赛,请根据提示内容以及你的补充完成这份发言稿,词数80-100单词,不要写出学校、班级等个人信息。
要点:1、上星期你们学校举行了篮球比赛,你看到一班和二班的比赛。
2、上半场一班20比28输给了二班。更糟糕的是一班主力队员的脚受伤严重。
3、这个主力队员并没有关注他的疼痛,而是继续比赛。
4、他的勇敢的行为激励着一班所有参赛运动员,他们没有一个人失去信心而是继续战斗。
5、在下半场一班又得了25分,最终一班赢了这场比赛。
6、你的补充…… (至少两点)
A Sports Moment
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. As a basketball lover, I will introduce a basketball match ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
A Sports Moment
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. As a basketball lover, I will introduce a basketball match that impressed me deeply.
Last week, our school held a basketball competition. The game between Class 1 and Class 2 was truly amazing. In the first half, Class 1 lost to Class 2 with a score of 20 to 28. What was worse, the star player of Class 1 hurt his foot badly.
However, he didn’t care about his pain and kept playing. His brave act inspired all his teammates. None of them lost heart and they continued to fight hard.
In the second half, Class 1 scored another 25 points. Their excellent teamwork and strong will led them to victory. The audience cheered loudly. This match taught me that with courage and unity, we can overcome any difficulty.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于篮球比赛的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。通过“作为篮球爱好者,我将介绍一场篮球比赛”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“比赛双方、比分情况、主力队员受伤及表现、其他队员的反应、比赛结果”等方面重点介绍此次篮球比赛的具体情况,并进行适当补充;
第三步,书写结语。表达“这场比赛带来的启示”作为结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①truly amazing 相当惊人
②lost to 输给
③What was worse 更糟糕的是
④hurt his foot badly 脚严重受伤
⑤care about 关心,在意
[高分句型]
①Their excellent teamwork and strong will led them to victory.(“lead sb to sth”结构,表示“带领某人达到某种状态或取得某种结果”)
Passage 3
(24-25七年级下·天津市西青区富力中学·期中)
假如你是李华,你校正在开展以“我的健康生活”为主题的英文演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,描述你心目中健康的生活方式。
1. 我们要多吃水果和蔬菜,保持均衡的饮食结构,这是健康生活的关键。
2. 多做运动,比如打篮球或跑步。运动能让我们更健壮。
3. 我们应该保持乐观的态度,因为这能够帮助我们更好地应对生活中的挑战。
4. 心中有爱。如果生活中没有爱,就像没有阳光的花园。
5. ……
要求:1. 词数:80词。
2. 题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
My Healthy Lifestyle
Dear teachers and friends,
My name is Li Hua. I am excited to share my ideas about my healthy lifestyle. As junior high students, we _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s live healthily and happily together! Thank you!
【答案】
My Healthy Lifestyle Dear teachers and friends,
My name is Li Hua. I am excited to share my ideas about my healthy lifestyle. As junior high students, we need to eat more fruits and vegetables to keep a balanced diet. This is the key to staying healthy. We should also exercise regularly, like playing basketball or running, because it makes us stronger.
Besides, staying positive helps us face challenges in life better. Most importantly, we need love in our hearts. Life without love is like a garden without sunshine. Finally, it’s good to get enough sleep every day so we can feel energetic! I hope all of us have a healthy life.
Let’s live healthily and happily together! Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,内容提示的要点要全部表达到位,不要漏掉,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,点明本文主题:介绍健康生活方式。
第二步,从饮食、锻炼、心态及睡眠等方面分条阐述如何保持健康;
第三步,总结,表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①the key to doing sth.做某事的关键
②make sb. adj.让某人怎么样
③stay positive保持乐观
[高分句型]
①We should also exercise regularly, like playing basketball or running, because it makes us stronger. (because引导原因状语从句)
②Besides, staying positive helps us face challenges in life better. (动名词作主语)
主题03 人与自我——健康
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市河西区·期中)
目前,中学生饮食健康问题已经引起社会关注,很多学生因为饮食不当导致营养不良,我们该如何保持饮食健康成了大家普遍探讨的问题。请你谈谈你对如何保持饮食健康的看法。
提示:(1)吃新鲜的蔬菜,水果;
(2) 多喝水;
(3)吃不同种类的食物;
(4) 不吃太多垃圾食物(junk food);
(5) 不喝太多可乐(cola).
要求:(1)条理清楚,行文连贯,要包含上述所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)70个词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep a Healthy Diet
Eating habits are greatly related to our health. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Keep a Healthy Diet
Eating habits are greatly related to our health. A healthy eating habit makes a big difference to build a strong body. But what can we do to keep a healthy diet?
On one hand, we’d better eat fruit and vegetables. Drinking more water is a good habit. Eating different kinds of food is good to your health as well. On the other hand, we should not have junk food or drink cola. They are bad habits and they will lead to bad health.
All in all, it’s very important to keep a healthy diet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总起全文,表达健康饮食对我们很重要;
第二步,从多吃健康饮食,少吃垃圾食品两个方面介绍保持健康的方法;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①makes a big difference有很大的不同
②build a strong body塑造强健体魄
③had better do sth最好做某事
④all in all总之
[高分句型]
①Drinking more water is a good habit.(动名词作主语)
②They are bad habits and they will lead to bad health.(and连接并列句)
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市南开区第二十五中学·期中)
良好的饮食习惯是身体健康的保证。你的饮食习惯是怎样的?请你根据以下要点和要求,以“My Eating Habits”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的饮食习惯。
要点:
(1)你一日三餐吃什么;
(2)你最喜欢的食物和饮料;
(3)你对自己的饮食习惯的评价及后续做法。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数80左右。
My Eating Habits
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【答案】例文
My Eating Habits
I have healthy eating habits. For breakfast, I usually have bread, milk and an egg. They give me enough energy to start the day. At noon, I have rice, different kinds of vegetables and some meat. These foods are rich in vitamins and protein. For dinner, I prefer light food like noodles or porridge.
My favorite food is fish because it’s delicious and good for my brain. I also love drinking fruit juice, which is full of vitamins.
I think my eating habits are quite good as they provide me with balanced nutrition. In the future, I’ll keep these good habits and try more kinds of healthy food.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:向他人介绍自己的饮食习惯、喜爱的食物以及对自身饮食习惯的看法和未来打算。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接表明自己有健康的饮食习惯。
第二步,分别阐述早、中、晚餐常吃的食物,接着说明自己喜欢的食物及原因。
第三步,表达对自身饮食习惯的肯定,以及未来会继续保持并尝试更多健康食物的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①enough足够的
②rich in富含
③prefer更喜欢
④balanced均衡的
[高分句型]
①My favorite food is fish because it’s delicious and good for my brain.(原因状语从句)
②I also love drinking fruit juice, which is full of vitamins.(运用“which”引导的非限定性定语从句,补充说明果汁富含维生素。)
主题 04 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25七年级下·天津市东丽区华新共同体·期中)
学校即将举办春季运动会,为了鼓励同学们积极参加体育锻炼,你校英文杂志“Sports World”专栏开展以“My Favorite Sport”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你根据下列提示内容,按要求介绍一下你最喜欢的体育运动。
要求:
1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.词数70词左右。
My Favorite Sport
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Sport
My favorite sport is basketball. I fell in love with it when I first watched a basketball game on TV. It’s exciting and challenging.
I often play basketball with my friends after school. We run and jump. Playing basketball makes me stronger and helps me make many friends. Also, it teaches me the importance of teamwork.
I always look forward to every chance to play basketball. It really brings me a lot of fun and I hope more people will love this great sport.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示信息写作,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示信息讲述你最喜欢的运动以及什么时候、为什么喜欢这项运动;
第三步,这项运动带给你的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①fell in love with爱上
②challenging充满挑战的
③play basketball打篮球
④look forward to盼望
[高分句型]
①I fell in love with it when I first watched a basketball game on TV. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Playing basketball makes me stronger and helps me make many friends. (动名词作主语)
Passage 2
(24-25七年级下·天津市滨海新区塘沽第一中学&塘沽第二中学·期中)
假如你是刘佳,请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文,介绍在过去的一年里你生活中发生的一些事情。不少于60词,可适当发挥。
要点:1.去年春天,爸爸和妈妈给我买了一辆新自行车,我每天都骑着它去上学;
2.去年暑假,爷爷送给我一台电脑,有时候我会用它玩游戏;
3.去年冬天,我经常和朋友一起去滑冰,感到身材匀称;
4.我认为这就是幸福的生活,因为……
提示词:去年春天last spring 去滑冰go skating 感到身体匀称feel fit
要求:(1)词数:60—80词;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,内容可以适当拓展。
Hi, my name is Liu Jia. I want to tell you my life in the past year. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hi, my name is Liu Jia. I want to tell you my life in the past year. Last spring, my parents bought me a new bike. I rode it to school every day and it saved me a lot of time. During the summer vacation, my grandfather gave me a computer. I used it to study and sometimes played games. Last winter, I often went skating with my friends. It was so exciting and helped me feel fit. I think this is a happy life because I have love from my family, fun with friends, and healthy activities. What a wonderful year!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时与一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍过去的一年里你生活中发生的一些事情;
第二步,书写总结,表达感想。
[亮点词汇]
①summer vacation暑假
②exciting令人兴奋的
③healthy健康的
[高分句型]
I think this is a happy life because I have love from my family, fun with friends, and healthy activities.(宾语从句和原因状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25七年级下·天津美达菲学校·期中)
假定你是李华,在校学生会工作。即将来你校的交换生David对中国文化非常感兴趣,他向你询问关于学校象棋俱乐部的情况及学习象棋的技巧,请你根据下列提示用英语给他回一封信。
Δ可以于每周五下午在象棋俱乐部上课;
Δ需要学习游戏规则,并多多练习;
Δ从输掉的棋局中汲取经验,提高能力。
参考词汇:strategies(n.策略) chess pieces (n.棋子)
注意:
1. 词数80 ~ 100;
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;
4.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
You asked about our Chinese Chess Club and how to play chess in your letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about these.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you’ll love the game and we can play it later at school.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
You asked about our Chinese Chess Club and how to play chess in your letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about these.
Firstly, you can go to Chinese Chess Club on Friday afternoon. There are many experienced teachers there, who can help you learn about the rules of how to move the chess pieces and how to win a game. Then, you need to learn some basic chess strategies. The most important thing you can do is to get better at chess. It doesn’t matter if you play it at home with your friends or play online, you have to play the game a lot to improve. Last but not least, don’t get discouraged if you don’t win all of your games right away. As long as you continue to have fun and learn from the game you lost, then you can enjoy chess forever.
I hope you’ll love the game and we can play it later at school.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文。内容是给来校的交换生David介绍一下学校象棋俱乐部的情况及学习象棋的技巧,并根据下列提示用英语给他回一封信。我们可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:1. 可以于每周五下午在象棋俱乐部上课;2. 需要学习游戏规则,并多多练习;3. 从输掉的棋局中汲取经验,提高能力。
2.例文点评:例文采用四段式;时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第二人称。第一段直接引入话题。第二段详细地介绍了象棋俱乐部上课时间和需要学习的游戏规则,应该从输掉的棋局中汲取经验,提高能力。后两段是愿望和祝福。
3.高分亮点:
短语:learn about ;need to do sth.;right away;as long as;learn from。
句型:1. There are many experienced teachers there, who can help you learn about the rules of how to move the chess pieces and how to win a game. 那里有许多经验丰富的老师,他们可以帮助你学习如何移动棋子和如何赢得比赛的规则。
这句话是由who引导的非限制性定语从句。
2. As long as you continue to have fun and learn from the game you lost, then you can enjoy chess forever. 只要你继续有兴趣,从你输掉的棋局中汲取经验,你就可以永远享受象棋的乐趣。
这句话是由As long as引导的条件状语从句。
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