内容正文:
河北
英 语
主题写作册
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第一部分 写作六大微技能
微技能二 写出正确的句子
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技巧1 熟悉句子成分
成分 作用 位置 示例
主语 动作的执行者、事物
或被描述的对象 放在句首,动
词之前 Maria and her
sister go to the
piano class
every week.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
谓语 对主语的行为和状态
加以陈述 主语后 They create
and play
beautiful music.
宾语 动作的对象或承受者 动词或介词后 Maria’s brother
plays the guitar
and the violin.
续表
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成分 作用 位置 示例
宾语补
足语 补充说明宾语的动
作、身份或状态等 宾语后 I find this story
interesting.
表语 说明主语的性质、状
态或特征 系动词之后 She is my
mother.
续表
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成分 作用 位置 示例
定语 对名词或代词进行修
饰或限定的词、词组
或句子 一般放在所修
饰的成分之前;
不定式、短语
或从句放在所
修饰的成分之
后 The woman
with a baby in
her arms is my
mother.
续表
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成分 作用 位置 示例
状语 表示动作的时间、地
点、方式、原因、目
的等,用于修饰动
词、形容词、副词或
句子 1.修饰形容词或
副词时一般放
在其前; I love my
motherdeeply.
We will have a
picnic in the
park.
Lucy sings very
beautifully.
续表
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成分 作用 位置 示例
状语 表示动作的时间、地
点、方式、原因、目
的等,用于修饰动
词、形容词、副词或
句子 2.修饰动词时,
通常放在其后,
如果是不及物
动词,副词可
放在句首或句
末; I love my
motherdeeply.
We will have a
picnic in the
park.
Lucy sings very
beautifully.
续表
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成分 作用 位置 示例
状语 表示动作的时间、地
点、方式、原因、目
的等,用于修饰动
词、形容词、副词或
句子 3.若修饰整个句
子,通常放在
句子的开头或
末尾 I love my
motherdeeply.
We will have a
picnic in the
park.
Lucy sings very
beautifully.
续表
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成分 作用 位置 示例
同位语 一个名词(词组)对
另一个名词或代词进
行解释或补充说明 名词或代词之
后 We students
should study
hard.
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技巧2 排查常见错误
1.检查句子成分是否完整#1
错误
原因 × √
缺主语 John is my brother.
Works at Ames Bank. John is my brother.He
works at Ames Bank.
缺谓语 Many people a white car. Many people have a white
car.
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错误原
因 × √
缺宾语 She always carries in her
pocket. She always carries a pen
in her pocket.
缺宾语
补足语 She found the room very. She found the room very
clean.
续表
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2.检查名词是否正确使用#2
错误原因 × √
可数名词单数形式不
能单独出现 Jill made
sandwich. Jill made a sandwich./Jill
made sandwiches.
可数名词复数形式错
误 I saw some
sheeps. I saw some sheep.
将不可数名词用作可
数名词 I will give you
two advices. I will give you two
pieces of advice.
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错误原因 × √
不可数名词误用不定
冠词/复数形式 Sara has an
information.
Sara has
informations. Sara has information.
集合名词主谓一致错
误 The team are
going to win. The team is going to
win.
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3.检查动词是否正确使用#3
错误原因 × √
易混动词误用 There have a book
on the desk. There is a book on
the desk.
主谓一致错误 He call his parents
every day.
There is ten people
in my office. He calls his parents
every day.
There are ten people
in my office.
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错误原因 × √
be动词形式错误 I is a student. I am a student.
否定形式错误 You not at school
today.
Ella not write a
report for her boss. You are not at school
today.
Ella did not write a
report for her boss.
续表
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错误原因 × √
情态动词使用错
误(情态动词后
跟动词原形) We might to play
football tomorrow. We might play
football tomorrow.
动词搭配错误 She tried to avoid to
meet him. She tried to avoid
meeting him.
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错误原因 × √
时态错误 We call our parents
yesterday.
They will not came
to the party.
The environment in
our school is become
better and better. We called our parents
yesterday.
They will not come
to the party.
The environment in
our school is
becoming better and
better.
续表
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错误原因 × √
语态错误 The book wrote by
Mo Yan. The book was written
by Mo Yan.
续表
4.检查形容词和副词是否正确使用#5
错误原因 × √
形容词位置错误 I have a car red. I have a red car.
多个形容词修饰同
一名词,顺序混乱
(形容词顺序一般
是描绘类/大小/形
状/新旧/颜色/国籍
/材料/用途) I bought a wooden
big table.
He has a blue new
car. I bought a big wooden
table.
He has a new blue
car.
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错误原因 × √
形容词、副词混用 She looks happily
today.
She sings beautiful. She looks happy
today.
She sings beautifully.
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5.检查代词是否正确使用#6
错误原因 × √
主格/宾格
混淆 Her and I are good
friends.
Mom gave he a new
book. She and I are good
friends.
Mom gave him a new
book.
物主代词
误用 Their classroom is big.
Our is small. Their classroom is
big.Ours is small.
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错误原因 × √
some/any
错用 I don’t have some
books. I don’t have any books.
相似词错
用 They are five people in
my family. There are five people in
my family.
续表
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6.检查介词是否正确使用#7
错误原因 × √
介词错用 I was born on 2010.
She is at Beijing now.
He is waiting on the bus. I was born in 2010.
She is in Beijing now.
He is waiting for the
bus.
介词遗漏 He is good playing
basketball. He is good at playing
basketball.
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错误原因 × √
介词多余 I usually go to home at 5
o’clock. I usually go home at 5
o’clock.
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7.检查冠词是否正确使用#8
错误原因 × √
a/an 混用
(看首字母发音音
素,不是首字母) I have an useful
book.
It was raining hard,
but she didn’t have
a umbrella. I have a useful
book.
It was raining hard,
but she didn’t have
an umbrella.
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错误原因 × √
冠词的缺失或多余 I saw elephant in
the zoo.
He plays the
basketball well. I saw an elephant in
the zoo.
He plays basketball
well.
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8.检查数词是否正确使用#9
错误原因 × √
序数词前忘加the/
其他限定词 She is first student to
arrive. She is the first
student to arrive.
基数词当序数词
用 Tomorrow is my ten
birthday. Tomorrow is my
tenthbirthday.
概数词是否加-s There are thousand of
birds in the sky. There are thousandsof
birds in the sky.
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9.检查是否母语干扰导致错误#10
错误
原因 × √
句子结
构顺序
颠倒 I very much like
English. I like English very much.
直译思
维 Because he was
ill, so he didn’t go
to school. Because he was ill, he didn’t go
to school./He was ill, so he didn’t
go to school.
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技巧训练
给下列句子改错。
例: My uncle is play basketball now. play改为playing
1.My father a doctor in the hospital. ___________________
2.There are five child in the classroom. ___________________
3.He bought two tomato just now. ___________________
4.They was late for class yesterday. ____________________
father后加is
child改为children
tomato改为tomatoes
was改为were
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5.We aren’t have a meeting today. _____________________
6.She can sings very well. ______________________
aren’t改为don’t
sings改为sing
7.She apologized for his mistake.
_________________________
She改为He或his改为her
8.He has lunch at 12 o’clock yesterday. ______________________
has改为had
9.Many trees plant in spring.
____________________________
plant改为are/were planted
10.I have a cat black. ______________________
cat black改为black cat
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11.She wants to eat delicious something.
________________________________________
12.This book is real interesting. ______________
13.There are any apples on the table. _______________
delicious something改为something delicious
real改为really
any改为some
14.I’m interesting in English.
______________________________
interesting改为interested
15.He arrived to London last night. _______________
to改为in
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16.We’ll have a party on next Friday. _________________
17.I’ll wait you at the station. __________________
18.He is a honest boy. __________________
19.He plays piano very well. __________________
20.He is one of best students in our class. ____________
删除on
wait后加for
a改为an
piano前加the
best前加the
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