内容正文:
中间:要点l:I really want to say,“Thank you for your
hard work and for always supporting me."
要点2:①I will cook a simple but delicious meal for him.
2I plan to make a card for him,writing down all my feelings.
要点3:①I will cook a meal for him because he often makes
delicious food for me.2I'm going to do these things
because I want to show my love and thanks.
结尾:I want to say thanks again to my father.
Step3成语篇,润词句
DAlthough my father is very busy,he often makes delicious
food for me.
②make up my mind to
主题写作演练
There are a great number of unforgettable things
happening in my family.Let me tell you about one of them.
主题8日常体育
主题核心词句
主题情境小练
1.play an important role/part 2.get sick/ill 3.good for
4.stress/pressure 5.In a word/All in all
主题范文阅读
Task 1:Playing sports has made a big difference to my life.
Task 2:(1)ball games (2)a football player (3)on the
football field (4)more colorful and meaningful
Task 3:1.play an important part/role in 2.as well as
3.dream of doing sth.4.make a big difference to
5.release pressure/stress 6.thanks to
7.Thanks to daily morning runs 8.Teamwork is
as important as personal skills in a football match.
Task 4:1.For one thing;For another 2.Training for a
marathon is very hard.However,I never give up.
3.He is not only a great player but also a good
team leader.
主题写作指导
Step1审好题,定方向
2.应用文3.一般现在时4.第三人称;第一人称
5.①Frank喜爱的运动及好处②Cindy喜爱的运动及
好处③“我”喜爱的运动及好处④总结及表达总体
感受
Step2搭框架,写句子
开头:①Here is the result of our group's discussion.
2Let me report our discussion on sports.
中间:要点l:Frank likes bike riding best because it makes
him feel free and full of energy.
要点2:Cindy's favorite sport is volleyball,and she believes
it is the best sport to make her body strong.
要点3:I prefer playing soccer because I think it's not only
good exercise but also teaches me teamwork.
结尾:①We all agree that by doing sports,we become
stronger,healthier and happier.2There is no doubt that
sports make us better in many ways.
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I still remember that day when something unforgettable
happened.On that day,as soon as the class was over,I
hurried home for lunch.I would have an exam in the
afternoon,so I wanted to go back to school early to prepare
for the exam.But when I got home,the lunch was not ready
yet.I felt a little angry,so I ran out of the house.When I
got into the classroom,I saw a lunch box on my desk.One
classmate told me that it was my mother who had brought it to
me.Then my eyes were filled with tears.
I have learned an important lesson from this experience.
It is very important for us to communicate with our family.
Every time we have trouble,we should talk with them in
time.What's more,we must learn to put ourselves in our
family's shoes.
活动,体育精神
Step3成语篇,润词句
DPlaying volleyball makes her become stronger and
stronger.2For one thing,it helps to strengthen my body.
For another,it lets me learn teamwork.3In a word/All in
all/...
主题写作演练
第1篇
As we all know,doing sports can make us strong and
healthy.More and more students take an active part in the
ball games,running and jumping on the playground.
Among all sports,I like playing football best.In my
daily life,I usually play football with my classmates on the
school playground.I also spend a wonderful time playing
football with my friends in the park at weekends.I build up
good friendship and learn to get on well with others.I love
doing sports and enjoy it a lot.
As you can see,doing sports has influenced me a lot.It
has greatly improved my physical health.I have also made a
lot of new friends who share the same interests with me.
Thanks to sports,my life has been so colorful and
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meaningful
第2篇
Nowadays,people pay much more attention to physical
health.For me,I take several steps to keep fit and improve
my physical health.
First,I usually do different kinds of exercise.I enjoy
jogging in the morning because it helps me stay energetic
throughout the day.Sometimes,I play basketball with my
friends,which improves my teamwork and coordination.
Second,I exercise regularly.I set a schedule and stick to
it,such as running three times a week.Besides exercise,I
also pay attention to my diet.I eat more vegetables and fruit
instead of junk food,which provides enough nutrients for my
body.
In conclusion,by exercising regularly and eating
healthily,I can improve my physical health effectively.
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【主题角度探究】①日常体育活动[2025];②体育精神
【教材主题链接】
角度
人教版教材单元&话题
日常体育活动
七上U5与朋友共度时光
主题
核心词句
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The reason why I look up to Ma Long is that he shows me that success comes from years of hard work,not just talent.
I like Pan Zhanle best.To me,he is not only a swimming champion but also a symbol of courage and perseverance
(毅力).
It is his never-give-up spirit that inspires millions of people around the world,including me.
What I admire most about Sun Yang is that he trains hard every day to win medals for our country.
What can you learn from players/sports?
Sports spirit is not about winning every game,but about never giving up even if you lose.
Team sports like football teach us how to work as a team and trust our partners,rather than just thinking about
scoring goals for ourselves.
From sports,I have leamed to face challenges bravely and always believe in myself no matter how difficult the
situation is
What I have learned from this sports star is to accept failure bravely.Only by learning from mistakes can we do
better next time.
w主题情境小练川
章以下句子可连成一篇小作文
1.运动在我的生活里扮演着很重要的角色,给我带来的好处比我想象的还要多。
Sports
in my life and bring me more good things than I thought.
2.首先,做运动使我身体健康,所以我现在很少生病。
First,doing sports keeps my body healthy,so I seldom
now.
3.做运动不仅对我的身体有好处,而且还使我的头脑放松。
Doing sports is not only
my body,but also makes my mind relaxed.
4.经过一整天的学习,和姐姐打羽毛球可以帮助我忘记所有的压力。
After a long day of studying,playing badminton with my sister can help me forget all the
5.总之,运动让我的生活更健康、更有活力,还充满乐趣。
sports make my life healthier,more livelier and full of fun.
主题
范文阅读
Doctor Zhong Nanshan once said,"Exercise is as important for our daily
亮点赏析了
life as eating."In fact,playing sports plays an important part in our school life.
①巧用as.…as.同级比较结构,引
There are many kinds of sports in our school.e can play ball
用钟南山院士的话,生动形象地强
调运动的重要性。
such as basketball,soccer and badminton as well as other popular sports like☑通过such as和as well as分层次
running and long jump.As for me,my favorite sport is football.I always feel
列举多种运动项目,体现出丰富的
excited to play football with my teammates,pecallywhee
词汇和严密的逻辑。
③when引导时间状语从句,补充说
Now I'm on our school football team,and I dream of being a football player when明感受发生的场景。
I grow up.
④巧用并列衔接结构For one thing.
For another..,清晰有条理地说明运
Playing9 ports has made a big diference to my life.For one thing,t动带来的两个好处,增经了文幸的亚
helps to release my pressure when I run on the football field.For another,I have
made many friendsh like pying football mucIdo Thanks to them
⑤who引导定语从句,修饰先行词
friends,丰富了句子结构,使内容
my life has become more colorful and meaningful.
更饱满。
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Task 1:What is the topic sentence of Paragraph 3?
Tsk2:请根据上面的短文完成以下思维导图
Para.1:引用钟南山名言,强调
运动的重要性,并引出主题。
Exercise is as important for our daily life as eating.
Different sports in school:(1)
(basketball.
The
Para.2:分别介绍学校开展
soccer,badminton)and other sports(running,long jump)
Importance
的体育运动种类和“我”最
*My favorite sport:football
of Sports
The reasons why I like football best:feel excited esp-
in My Life
喜欢的一项运动及其原因。
ecially when winning games;dream of being(2)
in the future
Para.3:总结运动给“我”
Release pressure by running(3)
Make many friends who share the same interest
的生活带来的积极影响。
Make my life become (4)
Task3:写作素材积累
1.在…中发挥重要作用
2.以及
3.梦想做某事
4.对…有很大影响
5.释放压力
6.幸亏,由于
7.多亏了每天的晨跑,我现在有更多的精力学习。
I have more energy to study now.
8.在一场足球比赛中,团队合作和个人技术一样重要。[as.as..同级比较]
Task4:写作微技能训练(针对亮,点赏析④)
1.我喜欢看奥运会。一方面,我能看到世界上最优秀的运动员。另一方面,我能了解不同的运动。
I enjoy watching the Olympic Games.
I can see the world's best athletes.
I can learn about different sports.
2.Training for a marathon is very hard.I never give up.[用however升格]
3.He is a great player.He is also a good team leader.not only...but also...]
写作微技能点拨
巧用衔接词
用恰当的衔接词来连接各句,使文章逻辑清晰、结构紧凑、层次分明。常见的连接词有:
作用
衔接词(组)》
first(ly)/first of all/to begin with;second(ly)/then/after that/next;finally/in the end/at last;last
表顺序
but not least
表并列
and;meanwhile;not only...but also...;as well as;For one thing...For another...
表转折
but;however;while;otherwise;instead
表递进
also;besides;moreover;what's more;what's worse
表原因
because;because of;as;for;since;thanks to;for this reason
表结果
so;therefore;as a result;so/such...that...
表目的
so that;in order that/to;so as to
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续表
作用
衔接词(组)
表对比
while;on the one hand...,on the other hand..
表举例
for example;such as;like;take...for example
表观点
in my opinion/view/eyes;as for me;from my point of view;as far as I'm concerned
表总结
in a word;in short;all in all;generally speaking;in general;in conclusion
主题
写作指寻
英语课上,老师要求以“Sports Make Us Better'”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,将代表小
组在全班发言,请根据以下图示信息写一篇英文发言稿。
I like bike riding best
My favorite sport is
It makes me...
volleyball.I often play
it with my friends.
Frank
Cindy
Li Hua
要求:
1.短文内容应包含图示所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥:
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范:
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hello,everyone!I'm Li Hua from Group One.
That's all.Thank you.
Step1审好题,定方向
1.定主题:介绍喜爱的运动及其带来的好处:
2.定文体:根据题干中“英文发言稿”可知,文体属于
3.定时态:根据图示中的对话可知,客观介绍喜爱的运动及好处,应用
4.定人称:介绍小组成员各自喜爱的运动和好处时用
;谈论“我”(李华)喜爱的运动及带
来的好处时用
5.定要点:①
②
③
④
Step2搭框架,写句子
Sports Make Us Better
开头:开篇
Hello,everyone!I'm Li Hua from Group One.(已纶出)
点题,引出
参考句型:①Let me introduce/report...②Here is the result of..③Next,I'd like to share..with.
小组成员各
造句:①
自喜爱的
②
运动
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续表
Sports Make Us Better
表达喜爱的运动:
参考句型:①sb.like(s)/love(s)best.
2sb.enjoy(s)...the most.3One's favorite sport is...
④sb.be crazy about.
5sb.prefer to do sth./doing sth.
运动的好处:
参考词汇:feel relaxed and energetic;keep healthy;become strong;make new friends;learn teamwork
中间:具体
参考句型:①It makes sb.feel
2This sport not only...but also helps sb....
介绍小组成
3This sport teaches sb....
4sb.thinks/believes it is the best sport to make/help...
员各自喜爱
要点①:Frank喜爱的运动及好处
的运动和
造句:
好处
要点②:Cindy喜爱的运动及好处
造句:
要点③:“我”喜爱的运动及好处
造句:
结尾:总结
要点④:总结及表达总体感受
及表达总体
参考句型:①We all agree that by doing sports,we..②There is no doubt that.
造句:①
感受
②
Step 3
成语篇,润词句
组句成篇
润色美文
Hello,everyone!I'm Li Hua from Group One.Next,let me report our
(针对划波浪线的句子)
discussion on sports that each of us enjoys.
①用比较等级升格
There are three members in our team.Frank likes bike riding best
because it makes him feel relaxed and do better in class.So far,he has
travelled to many places with his father by bike.As for Cindy,her favorite
②用衔接词组For one thing.For
sport is volleyball and she often plays it with her friends.She said volleyball is
another..改写
interesting and playing volleyball makes ber beome Speaking of
moi,Iamamgy6iapoyigswe.eudsogenwbot
lets me learn teamwork.
③在▲处添加1个恰当的衔接词
we all agree that by doing sports,we become stronger
healthier and happier.That is how sports make us better.So let's get moving
together!
That's all.Thank you.
A温馨提示:润色完成后,请通篇检查一遍后在练习本上誊写下最终范文。
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主题
写作演练
第1篇
体育运动是现代生活的重要组成部分,不仅能帮助我们强身健体、促进心智发展,也有助于培养我们顽强
拼搏、超越自我的品格。你校英语社团正在开展以“Spos”为主题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文参与投稿。内
容可从以下两个方面任选其一,简要描述一项你最喜欢的体育运动,或者你在体育活动中克服困难的经历。
选择1:
.What's your favorite sport?(play basketball/...,running,swimming,skip rope,...)
.Who do you usually do this sport with?(classmate,friend,father,...)
.What benefits()do sports bring to you?(health,friendship,sports spirit,...)
选择2:
What problem(s)did you face while doing sports?(find it hard to,be unable to,...)
How did you solve it/them?(ask...for help,practice hard,never give up,...)
What changes have you got or how did you feel?(...)
要求:
1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
As we all know,doing sports can make us strong and healthy.More and more students take an active part in the
ball games,running and jumping on the playground.
第2篇
某英文网站正在开展以“运动助力体质健康提升”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈
谈你在体质健康提升方面的做法和理由。
提示:
1.What kind of exercise do you usually do?
2.How do you do exercise?
3.What else can help you to improve your physical health?Give your reasons.
要求:
1.短文应包含要点提示所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Nowadays,people pay much more attention to physical health.For me,
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